Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor by Veronica Cline Barton

7/4/2020

(My American Almost-Royal Cousin Series Book 5)

Multi-volume, award-winning author, Veronica Cline Barton introduces us to her newest volume in the series, “Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor”:
American Marchioness and mummy-to-be Lady Gemma Lancaster Williams is up to her maternity toes with the soon to be completed renovations at Cherrywood Hall and the planning for the Prince of Kingwood Ball, a royal, society event. The startling find of a skeleton in the construction zone brings renovations to a grinding halt. History is about to get a big royal wake-up call with this ghoulish find, as scandals from the past are revealed.

Gemma’s college friend, interior designer extraordinaire, Rikkhe St. Claire has an eye for clues and a nose for trouble, helping Gemma uncover deadly details from years gone by. A new nanny’s in the halls of Cherrywood—will Figgy McEwen’s psychic conversations with the ghost whisperers from the past lead Scotland Yard to discover fiends most foul? Chaos on the film set of the Castlewood Manor movie lead to more than one deadly demise—are they accidents? Or pre-meditated?

Royal diaries, international intrigue, a film’s future, and meddling friends and family bring these scandalous happenings to a head. Gemma, hunky-dunky, hubby Kyle, and new doggie of the manor, Teddy are definitely in for double trouble in this almost-royal who dun nit like no other.

I love this book and the entire series! I feel right at home with all the characters. Veronica has such a wonderful, deft touch with dialogue and action in her books. She keeps the pace flowing so smoothly. Her description of the foods makes my mouth water at times. The dialogue is so witty at times, I chuckle or laugh on almost every page. With an account of the apparel of the characters is sterling and helps me to see the characters in my mind. My favorite new character is a certain Scottish nanny, Figgy; she nearly charmed the socks off me. Sorry, Pippa. No hard feelings, I hope.
With nothing but praise for this book, I award an easy five stars to “Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor”! Thank you so much for the hours of reading pleasure!

You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/Double-Trouble-Showtime-Castlewood-Almost-Royal
https://www.goodreads.com/-double-trouble
https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/double-trouble-showtime-at-castlewood-manor
https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/double-trouble-veronica-cline-barton/1137291338
https://books.apple.com/us/book/id1522093241

You can follow Veronica Cline Barton:
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https://www.goodreads.com/author/Veronica_Cline_Barton
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Tags: mystery, suspense, traditional detective, cozy, castle, dog, cuisine, culinary, pregnancy, twins

Here is the interview with the author and the review of the first book: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-crown-for-castlewood-manor-by-veronica-cline-barton
Here is the interview with the author and the review of the second book: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/cast-crew-and-carnage-the-filming-of-castlewood-manor-my-american-almost-royal-cousin-series-by-veronica-cline-barton
Here is the interview with the author and the review of the third book: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/deadly-receptions-the-debut-of-castlewood-manor-by-veronica-cline-barton
Here is the review of the fourth book:
https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/mistletoe-and-mayhem-yuletide-at-castlewood-manor

Copyright © 2020 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction

53 Comments

Veronica link

7/7/2020 08:37:23 am

Thank you for the lovely review and comments for Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor, Mark! This has been quite the pandemic writing experience adventure---loads of fun and laughs, a few tears, and some great new characters I'm excited for readers to meet.

Mark

7/7/2020 10:33:04 am

You are welcome. I have enjoyed the entire series so much.
We have decided to continue our conversation from the last interview in the promotion of Deadly Receptions. The link is just above. If I put the link in the comment box it would no longer be live.
Like so many others, I have a new favorite character, as I have already mentioned in my review.
First questions.
Who designed the cover of your book? Feel free to drop a link if appropriate.
What do the elements on the cover represent?
Was it hard to come up with the title? What was the process?

7/7/2020 10:52:27 am

Lovely to be back, Mark! The cover design for all the books in my series have been done by my step-daughter, Danielle Gregorio. She really does outstanding work and I'm so grateful to have such a talented family member! She doesn't have a link, but if anyone is interested, just drop me a comment. :)

For the Double Trouble cover, I think the two Union Jack prams with the crowns let readers know that there may be the pitter patter of little feet soon in the halls of Cherrywood. The picture in the middle represents Aunt Pippa, the ancestral auntie whose spirit still pops in every now and then to help with clues. The storyline in this book deals with a royal scandal from the past that emerges as renovations are being completed at Cherrywood Hall. Queen Annelyce is putting a bit of royal pressure on Gemma to get things resolved--but being pregnant with twins, she's going to need a little help...

For the title, I couldn't think of any words more appropriate when thinking of Gemma having twins than 'Double Trouble', LOL. But, there are two mysteries that need to be solved in the storyline too--one from the past, and one in the present. For My American Almost-Royal Cousin Series, I always include a subtitle featuring the fictional period drama TV show and feature film being filmed at the estate, 'Castlewood Manor'. Showtime seemed to be a good draw for the upcoming events in the stories. Thus, the origin of the title, Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor!

Wendy E. Slater link

7/7/2020 11:17:55 am

Beautiful cover! I love your explanation about the cover meaning. How did you get into writing mysteries Veronica? Do you write in other genres, as well?

7/7/2020 11:57:39 am

Thank you so much, Wendy! I started my series when the final show of Downton Abbey aired--I asked myself, 'What am I going to do on Sunday nights now?' LOL. Their last show pushed me over the edge and I started my first book. I've always loved British cozy mysteries--can't get enough of them! Once I got started writing, the stories have flowed and flowed--to date I've published 2 books in the series each year.

I have ventured out into the paranormal genre recently--I'm writing a short story anthology with author Bibiana Krall, Hearth Fires, that will be published this fall. It was great fun and stretched me out of my cozy comfort writing zone. I'd recommend to any writer to give it a try, who knows?

Thanks for chatting, Wendy!

Wendy E. Slater

7/7/2020 01:05:11 pm

Great answers Veronica! I bought one of your books today--I am in the mood for a good mystery..mystery series!

7/7/2020 12:56:29 pm

Hello Wendy. Thanks for dropping in. Those are good questions.
What are you writing these days?

7/7/2020 01:07:37 pm

I loved Veronica's answer(s) to my question. What am I writing..a little poetry. I keep trying to edit 2 more books of poetry and I am too busy with Social Media. Learning YouTube..reading individual poems with music and gorgeous videos.

7/7/2020 11:20:15 am

That all makes perfect sense. Thank you.
I think Danielle is quite talented. She should put her shingle out and develop another income stream.
New questions.
I noticed that you didn’t put your book in Kindle Unlimited. Why is that?
Have you ever gone through the query process, seeking an agent or submitting directly to publishers or did you go straight to indie publishing or self-publishing, and why?
What are the main advantages of being self-published as opposed to getting a book deal?

7/7/2020 12:13:45 pm

I haven't gone the #KU route primarily because of intellectual property (IP) concerns. I want to market my series to other media and didn't want any IP rights constrained. It's a personal choice that a writer needs to consider.

When I published the first three books in my series, I went with self-publishing just because I knew nothing about the publishing industry at the time and wanted to learn more before I committed. I did try querying the 4th book in the series--the agents that replied were concerned because the book was tied to a previously published series. I decided to keep all the books in My American Almost-Royal Cousin Series self-published. I recently started Boots & Crowns Publishing LLC for my books. I utilize technical services offered by Bibiana Krall to have the books featured on the different seller platforms.

I'm not sure of the advantages of self-publishing vs a book deal since I haven't had one (yet) :) . From what I've read, unless you're one of the book lotto winners that gets a multi-million/multi-year deal you still have to do much of the same work to promote your books as a self published writer. I like the creative freedom to publish what I write, when I want to--something you might not have control of with a traditional publishing route.

It will be interesting to see how things change with agents/publishers with the #pandemic new world--all the submission processes will likely change I think since everyone is now forced to work/operate in electronic mode, something an indie writer might have a leg up on. To me, that spells O-P-P-O-R-T-U-N-I-T-Y! :)

7/7/2020 12:53:25 pm

Intellectual Property rights should be the most important issue on writer's mind when it comes to a contract, because it is key to future wealth with all of the many licensing possibilities worldwide. There are many scammy publishers who will do almost anything to steal the IP rights from a writer.
I think establishing your own imprint or publishing company is a great idea. It gives you more control and you can help other writers if the need arises.
You are correct, unless you have one of the really big names in the industry, the advance is likely to be very small to non-existent and the burden of marketing and promotion remains on the writer's shoulders.
I believe a shift is coming that will place the writer at the top of the heap. With the proliferation of streaming services unabated, the demand for good content will increase. These streamers or agents will start seeking out the writers who have proven they can produce quality content.
New questions.
Have you thought about doing an audio book?
Who would you pick to do the audio book?
Have you thought about offering a large-print edition of your books?

7/7/2020 01:48:39 pm

Great questions! I have thought about doing an audio book but have taken no action yet. I have a few writer friends who are putting out audio editions now--I'm following their experiences. I may give it a try soon!

Large print is a great idea as well--I have had requests from readers who need a visual assist. That's why I stick to eBooks, lol--I need the backlighting to see!

Bibiana link

7/14/2020 06:43:11 am

Love this chat! I think an audio series would so well with this, but it is a different market and I will be excited to see what you choose in the future. Really enjoying this thread. What a great way to connect.

7/14/2020 10:23:11 am

Thanks for dropping in, Bibiana, I am glad you enjoy this format.
I agree, I think audio books would do well also.

7/7/2020 07:57:40 pm

Large print and audio are just two of many options. Your stories could easily transition into a graphic novel or a screenplay for a TV or streaming series. I can see that easily in my mind's eye.
New questions.
Which of your books is your favorite, and why?
Do you ever read a book more than once? If so, which one?

7/7/2020 09:41:58 pm

Tough question, Mark! I like different aspects of each book. In The Crown for Castlewood Manor, Gemma comes into her own and re-discovers her family ancestry. Romance blooms in Cast, Crew & Carnage: the Filming of Castlewood Manor. The royal wedding like no other and cross country train trek in Deadly Receptions: the Debut of Castlewood Manor have a special place in my scene hall of fame. Mistletoe and Mayhem: Yuletide at Castlewood Manor sets a new course for Gemma and the series with some bittersweet moments that still make be cry to this day. With the latest, Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor, the new characters and the suspense of Gemma having twins while solving old murders and new kept me glued to the pages. So, no one favorite book--but definitely fav scenes and events with each one!

Do I re-read books? Absolutely! I can't tell you how many times I've read Miss Marple and Poirot stories. Same goes with Rhys Bowen's Her Royal Spyness series. Sometimes it just makes me feel good to visit with old literary friends again--I usually catch things I missed with the first reads too. :)

7/7/2020 10:02:42 pm

You got me. I thought you would have a favorite book. I should have asked you this question, if you could take only one of your books on a long trip, which one would it be? But, I asked the wrong question, rats.
I remember that feeling from my teen years, the wonderful warmth of picking up a favorite story to read again. There were a number of books and stories that captivated me over and over.
New questions.
What else are you writing these days? Are you writing anything for yourself or only for readers?
Do you have a classical author or poet, you admire?

7/8/2020 08:43:29 am

Okay, LOL--if I had to take one book with me--today it would be Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor--I do love this story :)

These days I'm finalizing the scary tale anthology, Hearth Fires with Bibiana Krall. I'm so excited to have you do the Wordrefining proofing for this book--can't wait to see what you come up with, Mark! This book has been loads of fun to write--and boy do we have some behind the scene stories that have happened! #UhOh

I have started book 6 in the series as well, I couldn't wait to get back to Figgy and the twins, LOL. This next story is set in London (with a holiday beginning in Bermuda :) ). Gemma and Kyle are on the hunt for a London 2nd home and Mama will be starring in a play....what can possibly go wrong?

When I was writing my Hearth Fires stories, I started re-reading some poems and short stories by Edgar Allan Poe--a true master of the bizarre. Excellent reading, IMHO.

7/8/2020 10:25:27 am

Double Trouble is a great choice. Thanks for sharing that with us.
I hope to start on Hearth Fires soon. I am looking forward to it.
You have made my day, and the day for all of your fans. Book 6 is started! Do you have a working title? Inquiring minds want to know. To adjust an old advertisement.
New questions.
Are there any authors that influenced the writing of this book?
If you could meet your favorite author, what would you ask them?

7/8/2020 11:52:22 am

Book 6 is Twins in the City....to-be-revealed soon!

I love the royal aspects of Rhys Bowen's Her Royal Spyness series; the cheeky humor in M.C. Beaton's Agatha Raisin series; and the focus of human nature in Agatha Christie's Miss Marple books to name a few. I try and combine the traits/style I 've grown to love while reading different books into my stories for a unique combination/writing style.

I would love to ask Agatha Christie which love interest did Lucy Eyelesbarrow choose in her 4:50 to Paddington story? Enquiring minds want to know! :)

7/8/2020 12:33:38 pm

I like the title. I bet Figgy will have many interesting experiences in the city.
I think every good writer takes in concepts and ideas from many different sources and personal experiences, then synthesizes a personal style. We all have been influenced in so many ways, some of which we are cognizant of and some we are not.
New questions.
What software do you use to write and publish your books, and why do you use those?
How do you keep track of all the characters and events in your books?
Are you a plotter, a pantster, or a hybrid?

7/8/2020 01:13:15 pm

My travels have a huge influence--I'm always using details from the places I visit in my books--great way to keep those memories alive!

I write using MS Word for my stories. I have published previously with Createspace, BookBaby and currently with Bibiana Krall technical services. They all use software for final formatting etc. I leave that part to the experts!

I do use MS Excel for tracking characters, events etc in my stories. I couldn't keep track without it. It's a great tool and especially useful for series writers IMO.

Which leads to yes, I am a hybrid--I plot/track on excel to keep details straight, but in every single story things do change. It's uncanny how often my characters stop me in my tracks and whisper (or shout), 'Um no, we're not going to do it this way' LOL. But, usually they are spot on with the changes! Thank goodness excel is easy to update. :)

7/8/2020 02:16:58 pm

A lot of writers use Microsoft Word, it's everywhere, it seems. Using a spreadsheet to track details makes a lot of sense also.
With the characters providing direction it certainly keeps the story interesting for you, as well as your fans. We do love the final product.
New questions.
Do you have defined space for writing at home, or are you a coffee-shop writer?
Do you listen to music or have the TV on when writing at home, or do you need quiet?

7/8/2020 03:33:11 pm

I've been in #lockdown since March so no coffee shops to hang in these days unfortunately. I do have my writer room, decorated with all things I love. For this last book though, I was in our family room most of the time. It was on the cool side here in CA so I had the fire in the fireplace burning much of the time as I wrote. It's right next to the kitchen too making it easy to grab a spicy cornbread muffin w/jalapeno jelly or some candied kumquats when the cravings hit, LOL. These were Gemma's fav snacks too in the book. :)

I generally keep the TV on when I write. For Mistletoe and Mayhem, I had Hallmark Christmas movies on most of the time I was writing. For Double Trouble, it was a mix of The Great British Baking Show and Game of Thrones---obviously I was suffering from some of Gemma's hormonal swings, LOL!

Bibiana Krall

7/14/2020 06:45:47 am

I love that you include travel in your stories. Thank you so much for the kind mentions of my tech and publishing as well. It’s fabulous to be here growing with you As a creative and seeing your book series shine.

7/8/2020 06:28:18 pm

A writing room sounds lovely. I exist in my proofreading cave. There is something so nice about a fire, it's easy to get lost in one.
While I have never had a candied kumquat, the idea of the spicy cornbread and jalapeno jelly sounds delicious. I do enjoy food that has its own heat. The gift that keeps on giving.
Those are great choices for background noise. Except the roaring dragon parts. That can be disconcerting. There is more than one kind of heat also.
New questions.
Action, dialogue, or narration; which is easiest to write?
Of the five senses which is the easiest to write and which is the hardest?
Have you ever participated in theater in some way, acted, behind the scenes or written a play?

7/8/2020 07:01:07 pm

Hhhmmm..I would say for me it's the dialogue with a dash of narrative that's the easiest. I always try to incorporate what's happening through Gemma's eyes and ears to keep things moving along. Because I am writing in a 'cozy' mode, most of the grisly scenes are just stumbled upon--I don't do too much violence or CSI level details in my stories.

My characters (read Gemma) love to eat, LOL. I describe the food (and cocktails) in a pretty detailed fashion to get those taste buds (and smells) going! My readers have told me they never read one of my books without snacks and drinks nearby, LOL! I would say that I have accomplished taste and smell senses. :)

I also try to describe the scenes/decor and fashion in detail visually. For anyone who is interested, I have a board on Pinterest titled "Set the Scene' where I file all sorts of photos for fashion, interior design, recipes etc for my series. I believe the more details you can give to the reader gives the scene more credence.

I have not participated in theater in any mode, but I love it! Unfortunately with #lockdown there won't be too many plays this year I'm afraid. In my upcoming book 6, Twins in the City, I'm having Mama/Jillian participate in a play. My husband Bruce and I were lucky enough to attend an Agatha Christie play, The Mousetrap (one of the longest running plays BTW) during a trip to London. I'll try and weave some of that experience in the story I think. :) And who knows? Maybe I will bring Mama's play to life at some point!

7/8/2020 07:49:40 pm

I love how you balance dialogue and narrative. So many writers short the former and enlarge the latter, I know narration is easy to write, we are born story tellers and consumers of stories. But, stories that are heavily weighted on the narration side can get boring. The pace can really slow down. You keep it going so well.
It's good to know I am not the only one who snacks when reading your stories, I am not a big drinker of spirits, but I have learned more than I knew before from the series. Without a doubt, you have mastered the senses of taste and smell.
The Pintrest board is a great idea, I should have known you were doing something like that.
Seeing 'The Mousetrap' had to be an amazing experience. I am jealous.
New questions.
Do you have a newsletter you send out to fans? Why or why not?
If you do have a newsletter, which mailing service do you use? Is it the same one you started with or not? Why?
In your experience, which marketing avenues have been the most rewarding or profitable?

7/9/2020 09:04:59 am

I don't have a newsletter, but I post a new entry on my blog each Wednesday ( myaericanalmostroyalcousinseries.com ), detailing my writing journey; featuring a new book each week w/ a book review; travel pics, #BOOKEM info, and sometimes cats and cocktails. :) I'm getting ready to host my new website--it may include a weekly newsletter--details are still being worked out.

From a marketing perspective, I have placed ads on Facebook but found little benefit. I always try and tweet/post each day to give my books some visibility--readers and the #WritingCommunity have been very supportive. I also write articles and am featured on other blog sites as a guest--it's a great way to gain extra visibility. I am looking into getting a book publicist to help with marketing as well.

My biggest benefit to date (thanks to the technical services of Bibiana Krall) was to clean up my Amazon and Goodreads pages. Because I used different publishers with the first 4 books, my series was not shown cohesively on the pages--readers wouldn't necessarily know I had a 5 book series. It took a ton of work to get this straightened out, but it's done! Can't stress enough how important it is to clean up the pages and keep them current!

7/9/2020 10:54:41 am

I know that you are not trying to get an agent or a traditional publishing contract at this time. I think that is a smart move on your part. I believe that most traditional publishing is not to the benefit of the author. For those authors still seeking entry into this venue, they should have a website and a newsletter. The email list is looked at as guaranteed sales by some publishers, some of those won't even consider a book unless the author has an email list several thousand strong.
I have not heard very many glowing reports about ads on Facebook or Google. I am not surprised that your experience is similar.
You are doing many of the right things to promote your writing. I am certain you realize that process is an ultra-marathon instead of a sprint.
The author pages are important on Amazon and Goodreads, they cost nothing except some time. I think every author should take advantage of that resource and include a good bio and social media and website links. Well done!
New questions.
How long did it take you to write the first draft of Double Trouble?
How many drafts did you go through to have a ready-to-publish manuscript?

7/9/2020 11:22:52 am

I wrote Double Trouble in 20 days while in #lockdown. All of my books have 20 chapters and I stick to a strict schedule of 1 chapter each day (4500-5500 words). It's a fast pace but I make myself 'git 'er dun' LOL. Some days go better than others for sure, but if you don't commit to the writing time your book isn't going to be completed.

I go through multiple drafts--first by myself checking content for spelling/grammar/plot holes etc. MS Word has some new features for editing that I found quite useful--it had a tough time with Figgy's Scottish accent, LOL.

Once I feel comfortable with the manuscript it goes through professional editing. I have worked with Theresa Snyder for the last 3 books--her guidance has been incredible! She goes through 2 rounds of edits, start to finish.

And lastly, I utilize your wordrefining services for final proofing. You always amaze me with the things you catch, Mark!

To me, editing is the one area where you can't afford to take shortcuts. It's worth every penny to get the manuscript in tip top shape before you publish. I can't do it myself and I know that, LOL. It's an invaluable investment!

7/9/2020 12:08:56 pm

A first draft in less than three weeks! I find that quite amazing, well done.
Theresa is very talented, she is quite the accomplished author in her own right. I think that is part of what makes her such a good editor.
Thank you, it's been an honor to work with you polishing your stories. Those little things add up quickly.
Self-editing is pretty hard, it takes a particular mental rigor to accomplish it well. There are a lot of tricks an author can use to work on their book, but it still takes fresh eyes to complete the process.
New questions.
Do you get ideas for future books while writing a book?
When does inspiration strike for you?
What do you do to preserve these ideas?

7/9/2020 12:43:03 pm

I have to add that the planning and plotting the story takes another month or two before I start writing. The details, characters, events etc take some time to work out. It's worth it to me though, and makes the writing process much easier, IMO.

I do get ideas for future stories when writing--I planted a few seeds in Double Trouble for the next book, Twins in the City (but you'll have to read both books to find out, LOL). Much of my story inspiration comes from my travels. If I visit a castle or palace, I take time to close my eyes and reflect on ideas or scenes and how they might be described. Hampton Court Palace is one of my favorite places to visit and has been featured in my stories. Afternoon tea at the Savoy (my fictional Beauchamp Hotel) has also found its place on my pages. :)

When I'm writing, my sleep schedule goes haywire---it never fails just as I'm getting ready to turn in, BOOM! an ideas pops up. I've learned to get up and write it down, because I will not remember it in the morning.

I have folders for each book and often write myself emails or texts when an idea pops up. Helps me to keep track of ideas/thoughts to add to the story excel sheet. I keep a little notebook and pen handy too if there's no wifi. As I mentioned yesterday, I have a Pinterest folder, 'Set the Scene' to archive pictures that give me ideas for locations, fashion, foods...it's helpful for me to have visuals to take inspiration from.

7/9/2020 12:59:27 pm

Okay, that makes more sense with the advance plotting. That is what a lot of writers do for NaNoWriMo. The writing sure flows with the planning done, when you know where the story is going.
Traveling would be very important for the writing you do. Google Earth is nice in many ways, but it's not a substitute for in-person visits. Being able to absorb all the intangible details has to make a big difference in the writing.
A lot of writers mention their muse seems to be on a different sleep schedule than they are. You are wise to keep some means of capturing those thoughts close at all times. One writer I know is woken at 2:30 a.m. almost every night. She writes the ideas down and goes back to sleep. Another keeps a waterproof pad and Space pen in the shower, because that is when her muse visits her.
New questions.
You didn't mention using beta readers before. A lot of new authors struggle with finding beta readers. Because, after the first draft is done, fresh eyes and feedback become very important.
Do you have alpha-readers and/or beta-readers to help you smooth out some of the wrinkles before publishing? If you don’t, why?
If you do, how did you find them?

7/9/2020 04:03:50 pm

I do have beta readers and what a blessing they are! All are avid readers who volunteer their precious time reading. Two of mine are actually high school friends that I reconnected with on Facebook, I have 2 family members who read, 2 neighbors who read (they contacted me during the #lockdown asking if I had Double Trouble completed--they had read the other books in the series and needed more Gemma and friends, lol) and lastly there are a number of writers/bloggers I've found via Twitter that have read my books as well.

For anyone starting out I'd recommend networking with folks to take on this task--it's a great way to test the water with your books. And by the way, I am a beta reader myself!

7/9/2020 05:58:20 pm

Very good, I was hoping you had this resource available to you. The more fresh eyes the better.
More questions about beta readers.
Do you ask the beta readers to read through more than one draft of the manuscript?
At what stage in your writing process do you bring in the readers?
Do you give them an e-version like a PDF or a hard copy you printed?

7/9/2020 07:26:24 pm

I usually just have the beat readers read once. For Double Trouble, I had the beta readers begin after the first edit was completed by Theresa. I wanted to see what they thought and bring in any changes before the next round began.

Some of my beta readers prefer print copies and some like PDFs--I usually try and accommodate whatever version works best for them.
For me personally, I prefer an electronic version--easier for me to read these day! :)

7/9/2020 08:04:32 pm

Very nice. Your beta readers are serving you well.
I know what you mean about the e-readers. it is easier to read.
Last questions about beta readers.
What kind of questions did you ask them to get the feedback you wanted or do you let them provide feedback without particular questions?
Do you reward the alpha/beta readers in any way particular?

7/10/2020 06:59:45 am

I don't give beta readers questions beforehand--I'm looking for their reactions as to what works (or doesn't) and get their changes and inputs. They're serious readers and don't hold back, LOL.

My 'reward' is a signed copy of the print book and perhaps a little something from the Cherrywood Hall vault that fits the storyline. :) For those readers I'm fortunate enough to visit in person, we have been known to celebrate with a cocktail (or two). :)

7/10/2020 10:31:55 am

You hint at a very good point, the author must have trust that the readers will be honest with their thoughts about the manuscript. All parties must have the shared goal of an improved manuscript. Stroking the author's ego is not appropriate at this stage.
A signed copy of the book is a wonderful gift. An adult beverage is nice also.
No more questions about beta readers.
New questions.
Do you have other writers you connect with, as in a critique group or support group? In this Covid age I am assuming meetings are virtual.
How many critique group members show up for the meetings usually?

7/10/2020 11:09:25 am

I don't have a critique group I participate in--I do belong to Sisters In Crime and watch some of their video sessions.

Most recently, authors Bibiana Krall, Amy Reade and myself started a weekly YouTube chat on our #BOOKEM channel. Each week one of us is featured talking about what's going on in our writing journey, interesting this and that's about what's going on in #QuarantineLife, and finally we end featuring a book we've read and how it impacted us, including a few words about the author.

This past session we taped a #ZOOM session with all three of us chatting--it's very fun and we hope to do more of these sessions--including inviting another writer in for a chat!

With the #pandemic impacting everyone, we wanted to have a fun session that lets folks tune in for some positive news and giggles--you're not alone and we appreciate our viewers and their questions! On a personal note, our #BOOKEM exchanges have brought me out of my comfort zone, I was never into taped sessions, but now I look forward to it. Plus it's a great excuse to wear a crown, an opportunity I'll never pass up, LOL.

7/10/2020 12:03:50 pm

The #BOOKEM channel sounds like fun. I like the format. I tried to start a channel also, but it aggravated my stammer so much that I gave it up.
Speaking in public is a different story, the energy of the audience helps me and the stammer is fairly quiet. I think it helps people focus on my words, so counter intuitive.
Having guests will be fun.
New questions.
What is the most important thing you learned from publishing your latest book?
What are three things, that you wish you knew before you wrote your first book?
Do you have a hero, real or fictional?

7/10/2020 01:34:07 pm

I think the biggest lesson I've learned is the importance of publishing directly with KDP and to other seller platforms with Draft2Digital for the remainder of the books in my series. Going through business partners made it extremely hard to get changes and synchs for the series on Amazon. If you don't have the skills--find a technical services partner to work with. My issues were series specific--standalone books may not have the issues.

Three things I wish I'd known before I wrote the first book...
1. How satisfying and gratifying it is to be a part of the #WritingCommunity and interacting with #Readers.
2. My life changed for the better when I started the series--new friends, new perspectives and a a whole new way of life these days.
3. Take the risk--don't worry about all the perceived obstacles. You have a voice and talent--use it!

My hero? Well I think my hubby gets top spot for this award--having to put up with a cozy mystery writer is a big job, LOL! He's been a tremendous source of support for me and he runs the business aspects for the writing for me. My book series has changed both our lives and made our retirement years all the better!

7/10/2020 03:21:58 pm

I think that is an important lesson. To maintain control of your intellectual property a writer must do it themselves or find a person who can handle some of the technical aspects and will be responsive to your needs.
So many authors strive for an agent and a contract, they don't stop and think that this can easily delay publication of their book by a year or more. They can also lose control of their IP in some ways or all ways for several years or forever, depending upon how ethical the publisher is. We know there are lots of dishonest publishers and agents out there.
I certainly agree with you about #WritingCommunity, they have embraced me as one of their own and I love being associated with all of these talented folks, including you among them.
We have both taken a leap into a new phase of our lives as retirees. We are both loving it also. For myself, it was so hard to find writers to offer my services to in the pre-internet days. It has only been the last 10 years that I have been able to leverage the power of the internet and social media for my business.
Good job, Bruce!
New questions.
What are some challenges to writing Cozy Mysteries?
What is the most valuable piece of advice you have ever received from another writer?

7/10/2020 03:58:18 pm

Ooh, challenges of writing a cozy mystery...the first thing is to come up with fresh ways for people to meet their demise--EEK! Poison is certainly still an option and I have used guns and knives. I've even gone airborne and had a fateful fall from a sabotaged hot air balloon and a drone dispense dehydrated fugu flakes (I think that is a cozy mystery first--never have seen this method before!). more importantly than the method, I think determining who the, ahem, victims will be is the hardest. For Double Trouble, I thought I had things planned out, but as I wrote the story, dun-dun-dun, those pesky characters jumped in and said, "Uh, no. Here's how it's going to go...". I ended up with a very unexpected plot twist but in the end, I kind of loved how it turned out!

I think the most valuable piece of advice I've received is to just get started. Sounds so simple but until you get that pen or pencil in hand, or the fingers typing on the keyboard, you aren't writing. I think many people get freaked out a bit, thinking they have to write a novel right off the bat and have it perfect. Until you get started, you may not know what is going to work best for you. It may be short stories, poems, or novels (and don't forget the genre). The good news is that there's plenty of room for whatever you choose to create.

7/10/2020 05:42:32 pm

I love it! New and interesting ways to kill people. The drone attack was quite novel. Using the puffer fish poison was great.
I think your fans loved how it turned out also.
Getting started is tough. You nailed it, our human tendency is to look at someone's finished product and compare it to our first effort. Our efforts always come up short. Starting with short stories is a genius idea. That will help any writer learn or polish their skills.
There is plenty of room, as you say; given the same writing prompt a dozen writers will come up with a dozen different stories.
As the famous retail philosopher said, 'Just do it'.
New questions.
Do you think a strong ego is an asset or liability for a writer and why?
Can you describe the demographic of your ideal reader? Who is the person most likely to buy your book?

7/10/2020 06:11:01 pm

A strong ego can help and hinder a writer. You need to have fairly tough skin to put your product out in the marketplace. Some people just may not like it. That's okay though--everyone has different tastes and in literature it's no different. The main thing I've found in this instance is to move on--don't respond and get into 'tit for tat' social media wars etc--that does no one any good IMO.

The writer whose ego is unreceptive to suggestions or changes will have a problem I think. An editor will point out scenes etc that need revision--ignoring their inputs (or the comments of readers) is likely going to cause problems with the end product. No one knows it all in any profession--writing is no different. I gladly accept inputs and changes offered.

I think the majority of my readers are women, age 35-100+ :) Most are in the U.S., Canada and the UK. My books actually cross a number of genres and include women's literature (ie #ChicLit); romance; historical lit; and a dash of the paranormal in addition to the cozy mystery angles. I cater to folks who want a bit of escapism into the glitz and glam world most of us will never experience first hand. I try and keep the tone of the books very hospitable--everyone is welcome in Gemma's world at Cherrywood Hall.

It will be interesting to analyze the stats during the #pandemic---it seemed very quiet for a while--I think people were just trying to process what was happening in the world. Uncertain times don't necessarily foster reading or buying books. Things have picked up a bit this past month--so we shall see!

7/11/2020 10:17:24 am

You divided that answer very neatly. A writer does need to be resilient. Every book has an audience, big or small. The reverse is also true, every book has a non-audience, the people who will not care for the book no matter how well it's written.
It seems that there are some people who aren't happy unless they can stand on top of other people. They will always find some fault. You are correct, there is nothing to be gained by arguing with that sort of person. Most people will see what that trollish person is up to.
Nice analysis of the different genres your book includes. I do feel like I am getting an inside peek at bits of the royal life in the series.
We are living through a season that is without precedent, in our lifetimes, in more ways than one. We all struggle with the effects of decisions that have to be made quickly by others. I am glad to hear that sales are increasing.
New questions.
Do you have anything you consider to be your writing lucky charm?
What is the biggest obstacle you face in writing?

7/11/2020 10:26:53 am

Well, for me my lucky charms are anything crown related, LOL. I have quite the collection in the 'vault' here at California Cherrywood Hall. :) I also have been collecting ornaments that remind me of characters, events or locations in my books. I have a metal display tree that spins and is covered with lights (Hubby's lucky charm). We keep it up all year--it makes me happy. :)

My biggest obstacle I'm facing is the ticking of the clock, LOL. I'm hoping 62 is the new 42---maybe I'll have quite a few years left to write!

7/11/2020 01:03:35 pm

I think I knew that, but I still wanted to ask. I bet you have a wonderful collection of tiaras and crowns. That sounds like a lovely tree. Our youngest daughter keeps a tree up year round also. The decorations change at lest monthly to reflect the season, holiday or a special family event.
Your fans are in agreement, 62 is the new 42.
New questions.
Do you struggle with writer's block, if so, how do you overcome it?
Do you see an advantage of writing under a pseudonym, why or why not?
If you branch out into a different genre, will you use a pen name, why or why not?

7/11/2020 01:24:48 pm

I do suffer with writer's block at times--it's usually a short duration but for one book it lasted months. I'm kind with my muse--if the spirit's not there--we go onto other things. I'll do more research, travel (pre-#pandemic), or crafting. I do know from experience the answers and inspiration will come--sometimes things just need a little time to gel.

I personally use my own name and didn't consider a pen or pseudonym. I guess if someone really doesn't want their true identity known for whatever reason (personal or professional) it's a good thing.

For a genre switch, I see pros and cons for using one. Pros might be that too many readers might be let down if they see you going to another genre, disappointed when they read your new stories because they were expecting something different. Cons would be if I want to read a particular author's works--how would I know if they publish under another name--it's often not disclosed.

7/11/2020 04:16:47 pm

Writer's block is a tricky thing. I have heard from more than one author that working on a different book, short stories or entirely different projects, can cause the muse to flow again. Sometimes, it is simply a matter of temporal or spatial distance.
Many authors use different pen names for different genres, some solve the identity problem by lumping the names and genres in a newsletter or website. A separate landing page for each type and they all lead into the main website.
I have really enjoyed our conversation, thank you for sharing your time and attention.
Until next time, keep writing.

7/11/2020 05:50:27 pm

Mark, thank you so much for this opportunity! Your questions and opportunities give a reader an inside chance to know an author like no where else! Thank you so much--until the next mystery! XO, V!

Double Trouble: Showtime at Castlewood Manor by Veronica Cline Barton

(My American Almost-Royal Cousin Series Book 5)

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