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The Crown for Castlewood Manor My American Almost-Royal Cousin Series By Veronica Cline Barton9/22/2018 Multi-volume author, Veronica Cline Barton, introduces us to the first book in her cozy murder series, The Crown for Castlewood Manor: The English ancestral manor of Cherrywood Hall is ready to compete for selection in an upcoming British TV period drama series: the grounds are manicured, the mansion is polished, and the servants are poised. American heiress Gemma Lancaster Phillips has crossed the pond to help her cousin defeat the three other stately homes vying for the prize. What Gemma doesn’t realize is that this competition is life or death, and someone is taking that challenge literally. The occupants of one home are killed in an automobile accident, and murder becomes a frequent occurrence at the other locations. Who is behind the mayhem? Selection would be a major coup for both the estate and the community. At first the other contestants seem to be likely suspects, but no one is quite certain as the tragedies continue. Could it even be Emma’s beloved cousin Evan, the surviving heir to the Lancaster fortune, or Kyle, his best friend and estate manager? With the Royal family in attendance at each event, the puzzle becomes a crucial one for Scotland Yard, and they enlist Gemma’s help to solve the mystery. When the competition’s winner is announced on New Year’s Eve, will Gemma’s future be forever tied to her ancestral past? It has been quite a while since I have had the pleasure of reading a well-written cozy murder. I confess to being a little squeamish in the presence of a lot of blood and gore. I enjoyed this story so much, there was nothing to make me uncomfortable in this wonderful story about the behind the scenes selection process for an estate to be showcased in a British period drama, similar to Downton Abbey. I can’t say much more without giving a spoiler, so let me say this about Barton’s writing. Her writing is marvelous! She handles the intricacies of first person POV so well. The story is told from the point of view of Dr. Gemma Phillips. This thoroughly American woman has studied the family history for her PhD. and has an eye for so much of the many decades of culture of British manors and estates. The scene-setting leaves little to be desired, the dialogue, action, and characterizations are simply wonderful in the small village and the stately manor, known as Cherrywood Hall. The clothing and foods of the past get some interesting exposure in this story. I was in suspense most of the time, and quite shocked at some of the plot twists! I have never been very good at guessing who the perp is, in a well-written story. You are going to get a great deal of reading pleasure from this book. I award The Crown for Castlewood Manor a score of 4.9 stars; the score would have been higher, except for the small handful of spelling errors, I stumbled upon. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Crown-Castlewood-Manor-American-Almost-Royal-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/38731986-the-crown-for-castlewood-manor https://www.barnesandnoble.com/w/the-crown-for-castlewood-manor-veronica-cline-barton You can follow Veronica Cline Barton: https://twitter.com/VClinebarton https://myamericanalmostroyalcousinseries.com https://www.facebook.com/myamericanalmostroyalcousinseries https://www.amazon.com/Veronica-Cline-Barton https://www.goodreads.com/author/Veronica_Cline_Barton Here is the review of the second book: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/cast-crew-and-carnage-the-filming-of-castlewood-manor-my-american-almost-royal-cousin-series-by-veronica-cline-barton Here is the review of the third book: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/deadly-receptions-the-debut-of-castlewood-manor-by-veronica-cline-barton Here is the review of the fourth book: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/mistletoe-and-mayhem-yuletide-at-castlewood-manor Here is the review of the fifth book: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/double-trouble-showtime-at-castlewood-manor-by-veronica-cline-barton Tags: mystery, suspense, traditional detective, cozy, castle Copyright © 2018 Mark L Schultz except for the author's introduction
61 Comments
9/23/2018 05:07:07 pm
Hi Mark, thank you for the great review, it's much appreciated!
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Mark
9/23/2018 05:25:24 pm
Thank you, Veronica, I am pleased that you like my review. I really enjoyed reading your book as my score reflected.
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Veronica Cline Barton
9/23/2018 10:00:06 pm
I've never lived across the pond but travel there as much as I can. My ancestry has English-Scottish-Irish roots so the areas always had an appeal for me. Growing up I read Agatha Christie faithfully and was always tuning in to watch British mysteries.
Mark
9/23/2018 05:46:22 pm
That is pretty amazing. I have quite a bit of the UK in my bloodline also, as does my wife. We both enjoyed DA quite a bit. Some excellent writing. and acting!
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9/23/2018 06:04:47 pm
I think there are bits of me in Gemma's character (definitely her ma-ma's too). We do both hold doctorate degrees, I thought it would be fun to have a character with a strong academic background, to handle all the challenges and mysteries thrown at her, both socially and in the business sense.
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Mark
9/23/2018 06:21:48 pm
I love Gemma's academic background. The fact that her historical research into Cherrywood and everything proved to be most beneficial in the competition.
Mark
9/23/2018 07:39:16 pm
The Earl and Lady Carnarvon were certainly fortunate to snag the series. Did your story in any way reflect the reality of what they and other landholders went through in the process of the competition? How long did that process take?
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9/23/2018 08:15:13 pm
The set location evaluations can vary from taking several months to a year+. As I understand, the manor house interior rooms are assessed for filming viability (ie how much footage can be filmed at the house vs. how many sets will have to be recreated), as well as the exterior grounds to support outdoor events and scenes. My contest events in the story for the formal tea, breakfast hunt, and dinner gala were fictional, but I think they'd be a good way to evaluate how such events would look on film at the estate. (Hopefully without the, ahem, mur-dah's that tend to occur in cozy mysteries)
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Mark
9/23/2018 08:39:52 pm
You have done a lot of research. You have traveled extensively, it sounds like. 9/23/2018 11:15:11 pm
We have made several trips to England and Scotland, and over to Ireland which included a stop in Northern Ireland. There's so much beautiful countryside to explore, we really enjoy our travels there---and I do love those castles!
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Mark
9/24/2018 12:20:32 pm
I have been to England twice, but have not ventured into the other countries.
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9/24/2018 01:16:33 pm
Teas are the best and I am so going to the Scottish castle link! (another excuse to wear my crowns)
Mark
9/24/2018 01:31:34 pm
How about the next-in-line royal, Edward. He consorted with and finally married the American divorcee, Wallis Simpson. He renounced his claim to the throne, did he retain any titles? Did he and Wallis stay married?
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9/24/2018 05:07:59 pm
Well you brought up a royal scandal that rocked the world with that one! Edward did retain the title of Duke of Windsor after the abdication, and his wife Wallis was Duchess, however she did not receive the HRH status, a slight that wasn't well received by them I'm sure. They did stay married however until their deaths, I assume the abdication was worth it (I hope so anyway).
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Mark
9/24/2018 05:26:00 pm
That must have been far more than a tempest in a teapot for the Duke. What an phenomenal choice the man made. I hope his marriage was a happy one. 9/25/2018 01:20:28 pm
The hidden passages were also used as escape routes, there seemed to be a lot of attacks in earlier days!
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Mark
9/25/2018 02:41:49 pm
Thank you, neighbor Nancy, for saying yes.
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9/25/2018 03:39:22 pm
Querying and marketing are tough areas for anyone. I've been in the sales and marketing business for over 30 years selling enterprise software. You do need thick skin, and you need to adjust your approaches if you're not getting the results you want. There's always a buyer out there that wants your product, it's up to you to figure out who your audience is, and what's its going to take to get them to buy your product. Challenging yes, but I love it.
Mark
9/25/2018 04:03:23 pm
Congratulations on being such a disciplined person. A lot of your life-skills are serving you well, it sounds like.
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9/25/2018 05:04:06 pm
I will say this, as much as you plan, and outline, and research---things can change as you write your story, sometimes I don't even know how a scene will end till the very end. I am always amazed when this happens, but 9 times out of 10, it works!
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Mark
9/25/2018 05:40:56 pm
Just as life has many ways to surprise us, I am not surprised that you experience a similar thing when you are writing. I have heard many authors say that sometimes a scene turns out differently than they planned. It's important to be flexible most of the time. 9/25/2018 06:11:36 pm
Wow, that's a tough question, I adore Gemma and Ma-ma for their attitudes and the activities they get involved in. Kyle would be fun to be with as well to understand some of the architectural preservation work that he does (as well as perhaps getting a tour of the Cherrywood Hall winery, that may include getting some free samples..). I think if I had to choose I would like to go back in time a bit and spend an afternoon with Aunt Pippa at Cherrywood Hall. It would be interesting to get her American perspective of this new environment and the efforts she involves herself in, and also understand what drove her to leave her country of birth (really--I think there's a story there). I'm writing a give-away short story of Pippa's first Christmas at Cherrywood Hall that I hope to make available to readers very soon. Mysteries didn't just start occurring at Cherrywood Hall when Gemma came over...
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Mark
9/26/2018 11:31:38 am
I can certainly see you, and me, hanging out with Kyle, sipping wine. I would love to talk with him also, I studied architecture in college and worked in construction for over 20 years.
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9/26/2018 02:04:37 pm
I think a glass of Cherrywood wine with Kyle sounds amazing too, just have to watch for those pesky bodies...LOL
Mark
9/26/2018 03:03:21 pm
That new idea sounds pretty cute! What could possibly go wrong! :-O
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9/26/2018 03:45:05 pm
My main interaction with the writing community today is through my social media contacts, primarily on Twitter. I've only been active since February this year, but I've been able to 'twitter meet' some amazing writers, bloggers, reviewers and readers! The information shared has been so useful, I've learned a lot through my interactions (including you, Mark!). They are very supportive too, I'm very honored to be part of the community.
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Mark
9/26/2018 04:39:46 pm
I, for one, am glad you are part of this community. I think there is a great group of people who share and support one another. I feel honored to be part of it also. 9/26/2018 05:24:16 pm
I never considered a pseudonym myself, but can appreciate why people might feel the need if they want to try and separate their private life with their writing life. The problem is with today's technology I'm not sure how long the 'secret' could be kept, it seems that privacy has pretty much been diminished these days.
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Mark
9/26/2018 11:28:06 pm
I once thought about a pen name, but Bic was already taken.
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9/27/2018 10:22:39 am
I'm sure Mrs. Wordrefiner and I would get along just fine! I'll send her a pair of my crown gloves if she'd like a pair...I have a few spares :)
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Mark
9/27/2018 12:57:32 pm
Thank you for the offer of the gloves, I will ask her and let you know.
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9/27/2018 01:41:36 pm
I'll definitely check out your writers block post! I'll take any piece of advice there I can get :)
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Mark
9/27/2018 04:32:04 pm
Mrs. Word Refiner thinks your finger-less gloves are so cute! She would love to accept a pair of them.
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9/27/2018 05:31:14 pm
Gloves will be sent, and I will definitely check out the Dunan's Castle video!
Mark
9/27/2018 05:47:20 pm
I heard that about pigs also, a long time ago. It's an interesting idea.
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9/27/2018 06:35:44 pm
3 things I wish I knew before writing book 1: 1)I wish I had established myself on social media years before. I really had no presence before February of this year, well after my first book was written. 2)You don't make your writer's reputation from the writing of 1 book. 3)Remember this is a journey, enjoy it.
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Mark
9/27/2018 07:59:27 pm
The old author brand thing tripped you up. I think it has messed with a lot of people, I found it confusing at first. I had to figure out what a brand was first. Then how to present my brand to the world. I have been through more than one, I will say. 9/28/2018 11:48:02 am
Dream trip for me is any where cold with some snow and rain (it's pretty hot and dry in southern California). I'd do a river cruise around the great cities of Europe and Russia in fall or winter. I'd love seeing the sites and experiencing the cultures (pretty good eats too I bet). I'm pretty sure some of the visits might just end up in a future story too...
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Mark
9/28/2018 12:03:36 pm
The river cruise sounds very nice. I have backpacked around Western Europe in my college days. There are definitely good eats.
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9/28/2018 12:26:37 pm
Not a book, but every single time I watch the last episode of Downton Abbey season 6, I cry, and I have seen that episode a ga-jillion times :)
Mark
9/28/2018 04:09:59 pm
You are having so much fun!
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9/28/2018 04:43:03 pm
Well I do know I was born to read, a gift I started as a young girl. I never seriously thought about becoming a fiction writer until I was an adult though. I did do a lot of technical writing in my jobs and getting my degrees, so I think that helped me to hone my skills to be precise and thorough in my writings.
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Mark
9/28/2018 05:49:26 pm
I learned to read at the age of five. A retired school teacher lived behind us and taught me how to read with the Dick and Jane books. I loved it! I have been reading ever since. 9/28/2018 08:08:55 pm
Well I think my obsession over boots may have spilled over to my MC Gemma, LOL #JustSayin! If you ever come to our house, you will see I have a bit of a passion for pigs and pubs too---we have a small area near the front porch that is 'The Rusty Pig' hangout in the neighborhood. There are a few items from The Rusty Pig that may have found their way into the décor at The Howling Pig Pub in fictional Maidenford…
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Mark
9/28/2018 08:50:45 pm
No surprise about the boot thing! That was a shoe-in!
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9/29/2018 09:18:36 am
I think age and experience helps with writing about characters of the opposite sex---I've been very fortunate to have met a lot of great people so far. You pick up attributes, mannerisms, societal norms---all of which can be woven into your characters. My main challenge with my series to date is the majority of my characters are British written through the eyes of an American. I could never hope to do a 100% translation, but I hope I've put in enough British nuances to make a character credible (an hopefully haven't made too many translation faux pas'!)
Mark
9/29/2018 10:25:29 am
Life experience does make a difference, without a doubt. As a person with a lot of experience, I think I would find it easier to write from the perspective of a teenage, since I was a teen once, than for a teenage writer to write from the perspective of a person entering retirement.
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9/29/2018 11:14:57 am
I have struggled with killing off a darling (or two) quite recently in fact---a not so nice character and a loved one. It's a very tough call, especially in a series where references may be made to a doomed character for some time. I still haven't quite made up my mind for one of them...
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Mark
9/29/2018 06:17:20 pm
It seems wise to keep an open mind when a fan wants to share an idea. At least the fan will feel quite pleased, even if the idea won't last more than a few pages. 9/29/2018 07:25:12 pm
Sometimes a great idea just isn't going to work with the story and you have to be ready to revise or cut it all together. I can particularly tell when something's not working when I read my story out loud---if you get stuck saying what you've written, something is not right.
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Mark
9/29/2018 09:34:39 pm
I was going to ask you about reading difficult sections aloud. I think it's a valuable tool and use it sometimes when proofreading and editing.
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9/29/2018 10:29:06 pm
Ideas usually come to me just as I'm about to drift off, which can be a little frustrating, LOL, especially when it happens 2-3 times back to back. But I've learned to roll with it :)
Mark
9/30/2018 11:27:54 am
That is really nice, reading books written by your twitter friends. I am sure they appreciate it. Are you putting reviews up on your website also?
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9/30/2018 01:47:46 pm
I edit and proofread myself, and I also use professionals for proofing and content editing. I can go through a document many times and catch something. I think it's very important to get a professional view (or 2 or 3) and well worth the investment. I want to offer a high quality product to my readers if they're making the financial and time investment in me to buy and read my books. This is one area I will invest the big bucks...
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Mark
9/30/2018 02:46:31 pm
Every deal is different in some way, no doubt. 9/30/2018 07:40:10 pm
The biggest assist for book sales is just establishing your presence on social media, participating in local events, my blog...I haven't offered promo's or freebies to date on Amazon, I expect to do some things for the holidays---we'll see what impact that has. I don't think there's any one thing that drives sales (unless you're a celebrity or famous author gets massive press coverage when a new book is released), it's old fashioned, day-to-day plugging, IMO :)
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Mark
9/30/2018 09:10:21 pm
That first Christmas story is a likely candidate for a give-away. You are right, time for marketing has to be allotted just as time for writing. Many writers struggle with that, I think because marketing isn't nearly as fun as writing.
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9/30/2018 09:32:36 pm
Well I will try and get the Christmas story to you to review if you can squeeze it in---I'd love to get a review from you!
Mark
10/1/2018 11:36:40 am
I would love to see that story! Maybe I could squeeze it in.
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10/1/2018 11:49:32 am
Mark, thank you so much for your time and questions! It's been a very fun process---you and Grizz are the best! I will definitely be checking out your resource page too, to follow upon some other items on the check list!
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