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Multi-volume author, Lars D. H. Hedbor, introduces us to the 9th volume in his series about the fictional history of America before the revolutionary war: What Does Liberty Mean for a Freedman? Calabar was brought from Africa to North-Carolina as a boy and sold on the docks as chattel property to a plantation owner. On the plantation, he learned the intricacies of indigo production, fell in love, and started a family. Abruptly released from bondage, he must find his way in a society that has no place for him, but which is itself struggling with the threat of British domination. Reeling from personal griefs, and drawn into the chaos of the Revolution, Calabar knows that the wrong moves could cost him his freedom—and that of the nation. The Freedman is Hedbor’s standalone novel set in North-Carolina from his Tales From a Revolution Series, in which he examines the American War of Independence as it unfolded in each of the colonies. If you like enthralling stories of familiar events from unfamiliar viewpoints, you’ll love The Freedman. Grab your copy of The Freedman today, and experience the American Revolution as a personal journey of discovery. This historical-fiction story was so good! Lars must have done an amazing amount of research. I think he has done a marvelous job of capturing the milieu of slaves, freedmen, and residents of North Carolina in the days before the American Revolutionary War. His scene-setting, plotting, and descriptions come across quite authentic. Dialog and action keep the story moving along perfectly. We are brought into the life of a slave turned freedman in a first-rate fashion. His struggles, hopes, and fears are eloquently portrayed. The incidents of racism and discrimination Calabar experiences at the hands of white and black are far more than entertainment. They are a reminder of how inhumane one person can be to another even to this day. I award 4.6 stars to The Freedman: Tales From a Revolution - North-Carolina. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Freedman-Tales-Revolution-North-Carolina-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/the-freedman https://www.kobo.com/us/en/ebook/the-freedman You can follow Lars: https://twitter.com/LarsDHHedbor http://larsdhhedbor.com http://facebook.com/LarsD.H.Hedbor https://www.pinterest.com/larsdhhedbor Tags: African, Africa, sailing ships, tea, Boston, patriots Copyright © 2018 Mark L Schultz except for the author's introduction
55 Comments
8/13/2018 04:15:30 pm
Thank you very kindly for your comments -- I'm happy that my work hit the mark so well for you.
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Mark
8/13/2018 04:34:17 pm
I agree with you very much. Freedmen were expected to fight for the freedoms of others, but they knew they would not enjoy those benefits themselves. Perhaps they had a vision of the future where all people lived in freedom and enjoyed the fruits of their labor.
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8/13/2018 04:49:19 pm
Thanks for the questions, Mark!
Mark
8/13/2018 05:01:29 pm
That is a great way to start writing! Or were you writing before that epiphany?
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8/13/2018 05:18:01 pm
I had written a few shorter pieces before I started these, but The Declaration was the first novel I sat down and wrote.
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Mark
8/13/2018 05:53:42 pm
So the writing of Dinosaur Ghost was concurrent with writing the Tales series. Was DG an exploration of another genre? What age group was DG written for? 8/13/2018 06:09:23 pm
DG sprang out of a conversation with one of my daughters about the success of the "Sharknado" franchise. Again, those famous last words were uttered, and I set out to write something even more ridiculous myself. :) I think that the tagline -- "They were trying to make oil better, but instead they just made it *hungry*" reflects how well I succeeded pretty accurately.
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Mark
8/13/2018 06:20:18 pm
Sharknado was a movie I could sink my funny teeth into! I love slapstick, or perhaps I should call it bitestick! ;-)
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8/13/2018 07:09:14 pm
I don't have a lot of insight into the motivations of traditional publishers. I have a few friends who are pretty successful traditionally-published authors, and even they get very little marketing support. The publishers seem to be of the mindset that they will only invest marketing dollars in a "sure thing," despite the fact that they've typically already invested substantially in editing, cover design, and interior layout. It doesn't make much sense to me.
Mark
8/13/2018 07:14:16 pm
It doesn't make much sense to me either. But it must to them or they wouldn't operate that way.
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Lars D. H. Hedbor
8/13/2018 07:52:38 pm
When I finished writing The Declaration, I shopped it around to agents and publishers, with no particular success.
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Mark
8/14/2018 12:17:00 pm
I have seen a lot of authors travel that same road and start an independent publishing business. With six authors and 20 titles, has your perspective on publishing changed since shopping your first book around?
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8/14/2018 01:02:17 pm
My understanding of the publishing industry has evolved significantly since I first started shopping a manuscript around, yes.
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Mark
8/14/2018 01:23:09 pm
You have learned a great deal about publishing. Thank you for that perspective.
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8/14/2018 01:41:27 pm
I am a constant observer of people around me, but I don't usually tend to try to write them into my books. There was a passenger on a plane who insisted on reclining his seat into my lap while I was trying to write who may have made it into the sequel to Dinosaur Ghost...
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Mark
8/14/2018 02:01:27 pm
Thank you, for those insights. I feel safer already. ;-) Pretty funny about the exchange students, someone has a sense of humor.
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8/14/2018 02:12:04 pm
While I have a pretty extensive print research library in my writing office, I do the majority of my research online, and I try to add links to materials that I find useful in my Pinterest page, both as a means of keeping them organized and accessible for myself, and as a place to share them with readers.
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Mark
8/14/2018 04:23:57 pm
Thank you for sharing about the tools of your trade.
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8/14/2018 05:02:03 pm
I don't have any original documents in my own library, no, but I did grow up with a few documents and books from that era around my house. Among these are a family bible, a multi-volume history of England, and even a 17th-century indenture (which just so happens to have been witnessed by an ancestor of my wife's -- we were relieved when the Ancestry DNA did *not* reveal us to be distant cousins!).
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Mark
8/14/2018 06:40:47 pm
I have to agree, that was dynamite advice! You can't edit what you haven't written. I share the equivalent with authors as needed.
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8/14/2018 07:17:06 pm
I typically write from the third person POV, although there have been a couple of places where I've strayed from that briefly -- letters in The Break are written from the POV of their writers, of course, and the framing story in my current work in progress is first-person.
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Mark
8/14/2018 10:30:43 pm
You sound like you are busier than a long-tailed cat in room full of people in rocking chairs! Time is pretty precious, but we do find time for the things that are high priority!
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8/15/2018 02:17:11 am
I can't think offhand of any authors whose writing I initially disliked, but whose work I stuck with long enough to determine that I liked it. As with most readers, the first impression is hard to overcome, and I have a large enough "to be read" pile that I don't have a lot of patience to go digging for something worthwhile in a work that fails to impress initially.
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Mark
8/15/2018 10:50:03 am
Your writing "movie-like" works pretty well for me. Many of the scenes were easy to picture in my head.
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8/15/2018 01:12:06 pm
I really wish that I could remember the title -- it was part of a series of books that I found around the house, probably published in the 1950s, and it detailed the experience of travelling the Oregon Trail, strangely enough. I think that I have to credit that book with opening me to the possibility of living in Oregon later in my life, as well!
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Mark
8/15/2018 02:49:55 pm
Thank you for all that insight into your past and your WIP. Some great stuff there. A Military Linguist, that sounds pretty interesting also. I seem to have a knack for languages myself. How many languages do you speak or understand, mostly?
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8/15/2018 04:16:54 pm
I studied French and Latin in high school, and for fun, studied some ancient Greek and modern Italian on my own. While in the military, I studied Korean and Russian, as well as a little bit of Spanish.
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Mark
8/15/2018 08:32:42 pm
I think you qualify as a polyglot. I love languages myself and would love to learn Spanish, Russian, and Japanese.
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8/15/2018 10:59:39 pm
I am a member of the Historical Novel Society, and I support Kristine Katherine Rusch's Business Musings blog as a patron, which encourages me to pay close attention to what she has to say. I also read the Journal of the American Revolution regularly, and have been listening to the Ben Franklin's World podcast.
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Mark
8/16/2018 10:44:16 am
Great answers, Lars! Some wonderful resources for those interested in early American history, thank you for sharing them.
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8/16/2018 01:36:09 pm
The fiction of the era is less accessible and relevant to my characters' lives than were its newspapers, and newspapers figure heavily in the plots of The Declaration (where a long-lost newspaper containing a document of the Revolution is rediscovered in a modern-day attic) and in the forthcoming novel The Tree, where my main character practices his new-found literacy on newspapers.
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Mark
8/16/2018 02:50:04 pm
Thanks, Lars, for helping me understand the historical fiction ethics thing. I had no idea, and I think you are spot on, after all, it's fiction!
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8/16/2018 06:50:30 pm
Scenes where characters suffer injuries or worse are typically pretty hard for me to write, but those where my characters are hurting others (as in the battle scene in The Freedman) bother me the most. Hurting another human being like that is pretty far from my experience -- and I'm perfectly comfortable with that remaining the case.
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Mark
8/16/2018 08:16:33 pm
Your sensitivity reminds me of myself, I get deep into the story and experience so many of the emotions, especially in first person POV. In Freedman, we viewed so much of the world through Calabar's eyes and other senses, I was quite touched by his determination and drive.
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8/16/2018 08:28:13 pm
I'm working with a producer on audiobooks right now, and he's *very* good at rendering my books as written... which has meant that I've found a number of typos and errors in the process. *sigh*
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Mark
8/16/2018 09:13:28 pm
That producer might be a hyper-speller like I am. I have never thought of Florida being involved in the Revolutionary War. That has got to be some great reading.
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8/17/2018 01:40:41 pm
I can get by on 5-6 hours per night, and when I'm actively writing, I often survive on less. I become less fun to be around then, though, and my coffee consumption shoots right up. Fortunately, my wife works at a coffee roaster, so she keeps me well supplied.
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Mark
8/17/2018 02:25:25 pm
Coffee and dragons! I love both also. How do you like to take your coffee? I cold brew mine, for over 30 years now. I use the Toddy cold brewing system, it makes a wonderful concentrate, I pour a little in a cup and add boiling water for a pleasing mellow cup of coffee.
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8/17/2018 03:33:54 pm
I usually take my coffee black, but I just use a normal drip coffee maker. I have access to a full espresso maker in my office, though, so I have been known to make myself a cappuccino to overcome the afternoon doldrums. And when I really need to power through a late-night session at the keyboard or telescope, I love a drink called a "Harley Davidson Kickstart," which has six shots (!!) of espresso, one shot of amaretto, one of hazelnut syrup, and frothed milk to fill. It's a legal alternative to cocaine... ;)
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Mark
8/17/2018 03:49:43 pm
That HD Kickstart sounds amazing. A little scary also, I am a pretty high energy person. I seldom have more than one cup of coffee in the morning.
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8/17/2018 04:18:43 pm
The most effective single thing I've ever done in my marketing was securing a listing in the BookBub email newsletter. It requires a pretty large up-front investment, and they are exceptionally selective, but I know very few authors who have lost money in the long run with them.
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Mark
8/17/2018 05:28:23 pm
I bet other authors will look into the Bookbub newsletter. That is good news to hear of something that works.
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8/17/2018 07:56:22 pm
I tweet just once a day, usually in the morning, but I may experiment with adding extra tweets to see if my engagement on Twitter rises. It's always a balancing act between reaching your audience and wearing them out. :)
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Mark
8/17/2018 08:40:24 pm
I bet your engagement will rise. I am on quite a bit, myself. Personally I don't think it would be a problem for most people if you tweeted the daily tweet every couple of hours. Other than going to your home page, I have never seen one of your tweets.
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8/19/2018 10:45:59 pm
As a publisher, I would want writers to know that indie publishers (like traditional publishers!) are not going to have a large promotional budget to spend on supporting their book launch. Unless you're already a household name, you're going to wind up doing a lot of your own marketing. I can offer ideas, and will do my level best to support your efforts, but your career is going to be in your own hands.
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Mark
8/19/2018 10:57:38 pm
I suspected part of that answer, the author is responsible for quite a bit. That makes sense the way you put it. Why force a square peg into a round hole?
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8/19/2018 11:23:24 pm
My writing process is both highly organized and highly chaotic. I approach my foundational research for a story very systematically, ensuring that I understand the context in which my story will take place well enough to just let my subconscious guide me through the interactions of historical fact with my fictional characters. (That's not to say that I don't verify those interactions as they arise, but I am more often able to simply confirm what I already had ingrained in my understanding.)
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Mark
8/19/2018 11:39:48 pm
That is a fascinating process, Lars, it mirrors how life operates, interestingly enough. We plan and control our life as much as possible, for the most part, but we are surprised by unexpected events quite frequently. Some of these are very serendipitous and some not so much, especially when we are trying to force a certain outcome.
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8/20/2018 01:09:40 pm
I have some science fiction stories that I've started on, but haven't yet finished. Someday, someday. At this time, though, time taken away from my family needs to be limited to work on my novels of the Revolution.
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Mark
8/20/2018 01:29:16 pm
Thank you for shedding light on a situation that made no sense to me! I had seen these listings and they made no sense whatsoever. I didn't realize it was a money laundering scheme.
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8/20/2018 03:19:02 pm
In addition to Kristine Katherine Rusch's "Business Musings," I have also followed Joanna Penn's "Creative Penn" blog; where Rusch focuses on issues pertaining to an author's career, Penn tends to get more into the nitty-gritty of marketing and promotion.
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Mark
8/20/2018 03:47:58 pm
Thank you for those blogs, I am always looking to learn more about this business from a different point of view.
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8/20/2018 04:36:55 pm
"A human being should be able to change a diaper, plan an invasion, butcher a hog, conn a ship, design a building, write a sonnet, balance accounts, build a wall, set a bone, comfort the dying, take orders, give orders, cooperate, act alone, solve equations, analyze a new problem, pitch manure, program a computer, cook a tasty meal, fight efficiently, die gallantly. Specialization is for insects." It's hard to add anything to Heinlein's description of the range of human capabilities which one ought to be prepared to exercise. :)
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Mark
8/20/2018 05:16:06 pm
I love that quote from Heinlein, he sounds like an adventurous boy scout, trying to find the limits of his existence.
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8/20/2018 05:32:05 pm
A genuine pleasure, Mark, and I too look forward to meeting you in person again soon.
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