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Multi-volume author, Stewart Hoffman, introduces us to the first volume in his MG series The Bug Boys: Who would have thought that eating a peanut butter sandwich and an apple would change your life? Let alone get you mixed up with an old alien research project, and transform you into the superheroes your village never needed. For two young South Yorkshire lads, Alex Adams and Ian Harris, it was a geeky comic book dream come true, but it wasn’t everything it was cracked up to be in the real world. They discover there are many layers between good and evil, and with great power, comes an embarrassing amount of gas! This wildly funny and wonderful story has a deceptive appearance. The colorful cover is full of insects! The Title is The Bug Boys! It made me think it was going to be about bugs, like a field guide for kids. So not true! Believe me about this. This is a middle-grade story about two pre-teen boys in a small town in England sitting atop a coal mine. How they are tormented by a local bully and what they do about it. Actually, there is a much larger cast of characters and they are all drawn out for us in a marvelous fashion. The author has captured the boys’ point of view so well, in this tale and every other character, human or not, with surprising depth. I love the scene-setting and the action is vivid! The dialogue leaves nothing to be desired and descriptions are quite rich. The information about insects and how they communicate is quite good also. This is an exciting story full of splendorous flatulation, captivating POVs, fantastic adventures! I award The Bug Boys 4.9 stars! You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Bug-Boys-Stewart-Hoffman-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/40215418-the-bug-boys https://www.amazon.co.uk/Bug-Boys-Stewart-Hoffman-ebook You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/stewartfhoffman http://www.talkiegazette.com/books https://www.facebook.com/StewartFHoffman https://www.goodreads.com/author/show/15583189.Stewart_Hoffman Tags: science fiction, sci-fi, MG, insects, entomology I have reviewed the second book in this series, here is the link: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-bug-boys-vs-professor-blake-blackhart-by-stewart-hoffman Copyright © 2018 Mark L Schultz except for the author's introduction
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“Splendorous flatulation,” I love it! I think that’s going to be the name of my next band.
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Mark
12/22/2018 12:43:32 am
That would make a good name for a band!
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Well, as you know, I grew up in the UK, but now I reside in sunny Southern California. I’m a web developer by day, storyteller by night. Authors who inspire me are Terry Pratchett, Douglas Adams, John Scalzi, and Harry Harrison. I watch a lot of movies (I shoot for 52 new films a year), which I review for my blog.
Mark
12/22/2018 11:19:34 am
That is a lot of movies! All for the sake of a blog, you must really suffer! ;-) You read quite a bit also.
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My father got a job opportunity in the US, and since he was born in America, he was able to transport his family with him, and they would be able to get Green cards and work here legally. I figured, ‘why not?’ It’s not every day you get an opportunity like that, so after I finished art school in the UK, I came over. Nineteen years later, I’m still here.
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Mark
12/22/2018 02:15:11 pm
Great story! From art school to web developer! On the surface, those two things might seem to be opposites. In my mind they are closely linked because both require a lot of creativity. I bet your art school education is very useful for you in web design.
Rhani D'Chae
12/30/2018 05:48:48 pm
Hi, Stewart. I noticed earlier that you're a movie buff. I am too. Movies often give me great inspiration for books, so watching is kind of a two-for. Lol
I chose this genre. I knew this project was going to be a challenge for me, so I wanted to keep this story in my wheelhouse (or, in my lane), as it were. Many of the characters are based on live people. My two young heroes are exaggerations of my personality. One is the dreamer and idea guy, the other a little more conservative and likes to take notes.
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Mark
12/22/2018 05:32:17 pm
Maybe that's why your characters come across so real. You captured pieces that lend wonderful texture to your story.
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It’s funny, there are a couple of guys in the UK who are promoting insects as an alternative food, and they call themselves The Bug Boys. I found this out after I had finished my book and I was looking to secure a Facebook community page for the series. I did manage to claim TheBugBoys.com domain, however, which now forwards to my blog.
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Mark
12/22/2018 07:54:16 pm
That is pretty interesting. Good job grabbing that domain name. They will have to take a .net or something else like that.
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Yes, my critique group are all talented writers, and can be super critical, which really helps!
Mark
12/23/2018 02:16:28 pm
That is interesting about iUniverse. It sounds like you learned a lot in that experience. Who is going to be your next publisher?
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I think the only thing I would change is chapter two. I tried to be clever and did the chapter from the point of view of the plastic soldiers to foreshadow Alex’s solution at the end of the book. It was, I feel, a little ambiguous and if I ever rewrite it, I’ll switch the POV to Alex’s.
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Mark
12/23/2018 10:13:29 pm
A lot of author use Amazon for a variety of reasons. Even though they are the big dog now, they have their limitations. Some authors have said it's very hard to break into other markets with Amazon.
I use Microsoft Word to write my stories, mainly because it has a better grammar checker that Open Office. I recently purchased Grammarly too, which has helped me catch errors Word misses. I also use Natural Reader and have my computer read back what I wrote.
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Mark
12/23/2018 11:29:46 pm
A lot of authors use MS Word. There seem to be a number that are using Scrivener. I have heard it has a bit of a learning curve.
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Yes, you have to be careful with Grammarly. It’s not going to replace the need for a copy editor or a proofreader, but it does catch more than MS Word alone, and it occasionally makes suggestions that are valid.
Rhani D'Chae
12/31/2018 11:43:36 pm
I am a hybrid, but not by choice. I WANT to be, I TRY to be a plotter, but my characters always do whatever they want, so I have to jump into pantster mode. Lol Best laid plans and so on.
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Mark
1/1/2019 02:52:30 pm
Thanks for sharing, Rhani, I have heard more than one author talk about being a hybrid. I think it's perfectly okay to jump back and forth between pantsing and plotting! The important thing is writing the book. I like your writing! So, keep doing what you are doing!
Mark
12/24/2018 10:17:23 am
The real fun is in the creating. We are creative creatures, by nature. That can extend to all areas of life.
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I have yet to write anything that needed a lot of research. So, as and when I need to, I research as I go.
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Mark
12/24/2018 11:37:57 am
That is a pretty thorough process. Hiring the British proofreader is a good idea. Did you know you can set MS Word for many different styles of English, including British English, African English, and more?
When I first came to America, I had notions of being a screenwriter and wrote a couple of really bad scripts! At school, creative writing was one of my favorite subjects.
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Mark
12/24/2018 01:16:35 pm
Do you still have those scripts? There might be a gold nugget in there somewhere.
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Actually, one of those old scripts became the starting point for my latest novel. It’s a speculative fiction piece dealing with the rehabilitation of an alcoholic, after his death.
Mark
12/24/2018 04:46:28 pm
How did I know that? Very nice, an old piece has provided the inspiration for a new project!
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I’m going to research and find around twenty agents who are looking for speculative fiction, and see if they’re interested in my project. If someone does want to work with me, I’d love to see a publisher like Tor take on my book.
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Mark
12/25/2018 12:53:36 am
I do have a short list of agents on my twitter home page, you might find that useful.
I'll check out that list of agents, thanks.
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Mark
12/26/2018 12:09:56 pm
Donating your book is a good idea. Are you asking schools and libraries only in your area of southern California or are you also checking in the namesake town in England?
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I don’t get writer’s block. I just can’t sit down at my computer and force myself to write. A certain amount of planning has to be done before I put fingers to keys.
Mark
12/26/2018 05:41:39 pm
You are one of the fortunate few, So many writers complain about writer's block.
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I thought about using a pen name for the project I’m working on now. Because my first two books were middle-grade science fiction, and this project is adult speculative fiction. Ultimately, I’ve decided to keep using my full name. It wouldn’t feel right to me to adopt a pen name.
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Mark
12/26/2018 08:34:03 pm
I think the pen name decision is one every author has to consider at one time or another.
I would say it was essential for a writer to read. How else are you going to learn anything and grow as an author?
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Mark
12/27/2018 11:19:27 am
I agree, reading is important to learn what is good and bad about writing.
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Hurdle? More like hurdles. When I started this book, I thought I knew something about writing. Next thing I know people are throwing terms at me like “head hopping,” and “third-person omniscient,” so yeah, there was a learning curve to be sure.
Mark
12/27/2018 07:11:19 pm
There is a lot of jargon specific to writing and more for publishing. Not to mention that grammar is so convoluted and only two out of three editors can agree on one thing much of the time. This is a learning curve that never really ends, I think.
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I’ve talked about my projects with non-writers, and it has been useful. Aren’t we all storytellers though?
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Mark
12/28/2018 11:28:54 am
You make a good point with the “Time is money“ idea. However, I was thinking more along the lines of a writers retreat, a weekend conference, or maybe an online course you took.
Oh, I see. I was thinking about attending the Southern California Writer’s Conference in San Diego in 2019. But now I don’t want to spend the money. They have another conference near the end of the year in Irvine, which is closer and won’t require a hotel room.
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Mark
12/28/2018 05:09:27 pm
Congratulations on that honorable mention. That is very nice. I’m sure you made good use of that $50 credit also.
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I have a couple of bit part characters in the first book, that I’m bringing back in the third Bug Boys book. Mrs. Pratchett and Darren’s sister, Jane, will have big parts to play in the trilogy concluding adventure!
Mark
12/28/2018 07:12:04 pm
BB3 sounds like it will be fun.
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I’m not sure I was born to write, but I have consistently returned to it over the years. I’m a creative person, be that with a paint brush, camera, or a word processor.
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Mark
12/29/2018 03:17:21 pm
I think we are all born with a creative instinct. As children we explore the idea of creativity without even thinking about it. We do it for fun, for the sake of being creative all by itself. Hopefully, our parents encouraged the creative impulse.
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I don’t sweat the first line, paragraph, or page. But usually, it takes a couple of attempts to get something good happening.
Mark
12/29/2018 11:41:52 pm
I have heard many author talk about how important the first paragraph, first page and first chapter is. The prevailing wisdom seems to be if you can't hook the reader by that time you probably won't keep them. For myself, it's the blurb that gets me into the book, then I have a lot of patience to see how the story develops.
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I like to have a few things ready before I write a book — a premise, characters, plot, and theme. The theme in the first Bug Boys story is not to judge a book by its cover. The robots are tiny, but they have great power, and the village bully isn’t all he appears to be. The second Bug Boys looks at what it means to be a hero, and that heroes occasionally fail. The third book will have an environmental message and talks about accepting change.
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Mark
12/30/2018 12:52:40 pm
Not judging a book by its cover is a good one. It is so true that things are frequently not what they seem.
I’m not attached at the moment, so I don’t have a problem finding time to write. I also only aim to write five to seven pages every two weeks, so it’s not like I need a lot of time for my projects anyway.
Mark
12/31/2018 09:35:57 pm
That sounds like realistic amount of writing. Is that first draft or does it include editing?
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Biggest myth? That reaching a big audience for your book is easy. For self-published authors, I’d say, keep your expectations in check in regards to sales. Unless you already have a huge following, it’s hard to market and advertise your books especially if you don’t have a lot of money to throw into your ad campaigns.
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Mark
1/1/2019 01:46:15 pm
I have heard from more than one author that publishers expect an author to have a large social media presence and a hefty mailing list. That's something that takes a great deal of work to achieve. Leave a Reply. |
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