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Multi-genre, multi-volume co-authors Krall and Barton introduce us to their collection of tales for the fall season: Travel the world and enjoy a collection of luxurious short stories with a paranormal edge from the writing desks of Bibiana Krall and Veronica Cline Barton. This 'spirited' anthology is guaranteed to give you the shivers and keep you reading late into the night with heady doses of mystery, haunted imagery and psychological suspense. Catch up and read Hearth Fires (Book #1) and get ready for an intense ride to places unknown. HVISKE (Norway) Here in the fjordic crags, each of us can be the victim of ourselves, the frozen death within waiting to be unleashed. I hear their silent whispers cry… ‘meg, meg, meg’. Most I choose to ignore, letting karma’s destiny of actions unfold. For those I extricate, the journey into the Northern Light or depth of darkness is swift. Choose wisely, hviske within. WIDOW’S WALK (Falmouth) After inheriting a historic mansion on the shores of Cape Cod. Abigail is consumed by grief for the loss of an incredible woman, and tormented by a childhood ghost that does everything possible to scare her out of her wits. When the troubling entity makes physical contact, it’s clear that Abby is in danger. Does the mysterious phantom want her dead? SCULPTURE OF THE DEAD (Aspen) I touch the cold, Colorado marble with my hands, running my fingers over the veins. I know when the stone matches the traits of the departed. Sculptural portraits, masks of the dead, fragments of limbs…the living think they want to remember their dearly departed with my creations. Sometimes it’s better to forget. SPIRIT ISLAND (Jasper) Seychelle is a free spirit, taking one day at a time and doing her best to help her family. When she accepts a creative assignment and experiences something, haunting and otherworldly in the wilderness… will it help her understand her own life better or carry her down a crooked and violent path she cannot return from? The past is alive. MODE de VEUVE NOIRE (Quebec City) Selfie, pose, look at me, I’m the fashion influencer you want to be. Follow, buy, so yesterday, darling--opinions, trends my ultimate worth. When wannabe, legend in her own mind Monique hits the streets of Quebec with an antique camera once owned by the famed Madame Coco, the photos she takes provide a stroke of famed acclaim, or dismal despair to those she hoped to install in her style hall of shame. The camera never lies, Madame. Click. Click. Click. RAGNO DAZANTE (Italy) Itsy, bitsy spider, dance, twirl and spin that tangled web. What waits for us on the other end of the cosmic red string? Aurelia has it all, a lush life in Italy, and fierce looks to match, yet she uses her power to dominate, mistreat and humiliate another woman. When Pietra finally embraces her dark birthright, the wicked game is afoot. Hoo, boy! I love these stories! I can’t decide which is my favorite. but I do know which one creeped me out the most. Spirit Island takes that top slot, followed closely by Ragno Dazante. RD thoroughly surprised me with the ending. I didn’t see that coming. Mode de Veuve Noir had an unexpected climax also. Hviske was quite surprising as well. I guess my favorite is between Widow’s Walk and Sculpture of the Dead. Anything that makes me laugh as much as those two stories did lands at the top of my list for humor. This is a perfect offering for the fall season we are in now. What is left unsaid is almost as important as the writing. Extrapolation is a mark of good writing! 5 stars from me! You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Tangled-Webs-Haunted-Book-2-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-tangled-webs https://www.barnesandnoble.com/tangled-webs Here is the review of Hearth Fires, book 1 in the series: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/hearth-fires-the-haunted-book-1-by-bibiana-krall-and-veronica-cline-barton Here is the review of Wicked Mist, book 3 in the series: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/wicked-mist You can follow the authors: https://www.twitter.com/Bibiana1Krall https://www.bibianakrall.com https://www.amazon.com/author/bibianakrall https://www.youtube.com/channel/bookem channel https://twitter.com/VClinebarton https://www.veronicaclinebarton.com https://myamericanalmostroyalcousinseries.com https://www.facebook.com/myamericanalmostroyalcousinseries https://www.amazon.com/Veronica-Cline-Barton https://www.goodreads.com/author/Veronica_Cline_Barton https://www.youtube.com/channel/#Bookem Copyright © 2021 Mark L. Schultz except for the authors’ introduction
74 Comments
10/10/2021 02:25:22 pm
Thank you Mark, for the excellent review of Tangled Webs! These stories kind of came from out of nowhere for me, especially Spirit Island, as it was a photograph and then a smidge of folklore about a lake in Canada then I was knee deep in it. Veronica’s story Sculpture of the Dead makes me laugh every time I read it. Grace in many ways has become a mischievous sidekick and a character who certainly stands out for me. It’s so much fun to be here with both of you and many thanks to everyone reading and reposting. I’m looking forward to spending the week talking about these stories. I adore Halloween and spooky tales. 🎃🍁🎃
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Mark
10/10/2021 02:31:13 pm
It's pleasure to have you and Veronica back on my website. The last interview was great fun and we are going to pickup from where we last left off.
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Marketing during a pandemic is a whole new beast IMHO. I think the whole dynamic has changed because the world has gone through such a dramatic event. One of the 'experts' I follow said it best--many people are going through tough financial and personal times...there may not be funds to buy books...People may have put reading on the back burner to deal with other life changes.
Thank you for the awesome book review for Tangled Webs, Mark--we truly appreciate it! This collection was so fun to write with Bibiana. Our second year of lockdowns and the pandemic had our scary minds reeling, lol--there was loads of inspiration to choose from.
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Thank you both for your kind comments.
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Mark
10/11/2021 09:31:10 am
Marketing and promoting books is a serious issue. It is so hard to get noticed. You both are taking so many of the right steps according to conventional wisdom. It will be interesting to see how it all pans out. All of the results depends so much on the readers, of course. They have to see your book, but you are taking the right actions. So there should be a payoff.
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Bibiana
10/11/2021 01:14:43 pm
It is tough to get noticed considering there are more than five million titles on Amazon, it’s way hard.
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I haven't developed playlists for my books to date. There is one YouTube video of the Trans-Siberian Orchestra' Christmas Canon that I've told readers to have playing when reading Chapter 20 of Mistletoe and Mayhem: Yuletide at Castlewood Manor. It fits the scenes so well and to this day, makes me tear up. There is power in matching certain scenes to music, no doubt!
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Bibiana
10/11/2021 03:18:50 pm
I remember that now! It was totally perfect for that wonderful holiday story!
Mark
10/11/2021 02:21:31 pm
Getting noticed is the hardest thing. You have a good backlist and reminding people about that will help. Some people like to read a series, others like only one book from an author at a time. You have to throwing stuff out there and some will stick and some won't. A few months later everything changes. There is no set it and forget it. Constant attention is required.
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Bibiana
10/11/2021 07:11:19 pm
That’s the truth. It’s a constant challenge to stay in the game and to connect the way we need to, especially since travel and face to face readings etc are at a minimal and probably won’t ever be the way they used to be again.
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I'm pretty much a plotter when it comes to my tales. Writing a series has enforced that discipline. If I don't write things down, I forget it, LOL--a big no-no in the series world.
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Mark
10/12/2021 06:44:45 am
Writing short stories are great exercise for an author. Most genres require that the story move along at a good clip. If the reader is bored too long they might close the book. This is especially critical for books in Kindle Unlimited because the author is paid a fraction of a penny for each page read.
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bibiana
10/12/2021 07:07:13 am
"Knowing when to say finis is important." Yes, it truly is. There can be moments of self-doubt or even discombobulation in a story where you have to take a step back and consider whether or not the writing accomplished what you had intended. If not, it's time to let it rest and do something else for a while. If you come back and feel the same way that means something.
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I think getting the inspiration/idea for a new story that 'sticks' is key for me. There's always thousands of 'what ifs' floating around but when 'the one' keeps playing in your head, that's when I know it's time to start building on the concept and do the research.
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Bibiana Krall
10/12/2021 08:15:28 am
I remember the first time you shared the plot of this particular story. Laughter is the best medicine and this one, dare I say it? Tickled my funny bone. Our creative sessions are so free-flow and helpful to work though what will help and what won’t. I’m super grateful for this collaboration and a place to talk about it with Mark’s blog as well. This is really fun! 🍃☕️📚
Mark
10/12/2021 08:26:09 am
Research is very important. It can lead to all sorts of interesting things. As seasoned writers, you both have learned to avoid sharing all of the delightful tidbits gleaned. Including only what is pertinent to the story avoids the dreaded information dump. Many readers will close a book when they are bored.
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Bibiana
10/12/2021 01:21:45 pm
We do make a great team! The second Tangled Webs was in the hands of our editor, the spirits were speaking.
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Mark
10/12/2021 05:51:58 pm
Cadence in language can be a beautiful aspect of words. It's not easy to quantify, for me, but I recognize the beauty of it when I hear it.
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Bibiana
10/13/2021 06:47:26 am
I have not had the pleasure of hearing Gregorian chants in person. There is a cathedral in Savannah that used to host that on Sunday nights, but with all the changes in the world, I don't know if they still do? I would love that! As far as the BBC show, I am a fan just from that! I am never that witty in repartee, but I would like to be! LOL.
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I do have beta-readers and am one myself! It definitely adds value to the process and makes for a stronger story. I release my tales to them after the professional editing has been completed. I don't expect the readers to take on that role.
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I love that Bibiana and I have been able to work together on The Haunted Series. I know I've learned a ton from the experience and the laughs we've shared the past 2 years have been priceless!
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bibiana
10/13/2021 06:25:12 am
Thank you so much Veronica! Same here! I needed a positive and creative outlet and this series came along at the right time.
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Mark
10/13/2021 08:45:01 am
Well put. Alpha and beta readers are an important part of the process for the indie writer. Asking pointed questions of the beta readers is something that a lot of authors do. Others ask general questions or even none at all.
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Bibiana Krall
10/13/2021 10:06:37 am
I send them a signed book and sometimes something more personal, like a candle or something gourmet. It means the world to me that someone used their precious time to support my passion this way. I don’t have a vault, but I do enjoy making my thank you’s personal. Let’s face it the majority of the mail headed our way is not fun, so I try to make them feel special and brighten their day somehow. If I’m lean on the money aspect, I try to comment on their blogs, listen to their podcasts and offer something supportive to help them be seen if they are small business owners or creatives. Community is never one-sided and it’s important to give back, authentically.
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I always send the beta readers a signed print copy of the book when it releases. I have been known to raid the Cherrywood Hall vault to send a bit of bling as well, LOL. It's a big deal for me that someone takes time out of their busy schedules to read my tales and I very much appreciate it.
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Mark
10/13/2021 10:31:58 am
The book gift is greatly appreciated I am certain. We do love books or we wouldn't be involved as deeply as we are. Those little extras are quite meaningful to the recipient also.
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Bibiana
10/13/2021 02:35:53 pm
I learned that fear and heartache can be writing fuel. It can cripple us or as creatives, we can use it. The past year and a half has been so epic.
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I think the main thing I learned is how special it is to collaborate with someone on a collection. Bibiana and I were lucky, I guess to have our match work out so well--many collaborations don't. We have similar work ethics and complementary skills and personalities. If you're considering a joint collection or anthology with other authors, make sure your goals and writing visions are in synch for best results.
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Mark
10/13/2021 05:05:19 pm
You are both so correct! Identifying your non-audience is just as important as identifying your audience. It is sad when family and friends can't provide some support. We all have limits.
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Bibiana
10/14/2021 05:04:35 am
The family and friends who support and understand what’s important to us are solid gold.
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I think my heroes for the past 2 years have been the people who have risen above the troubled times and did their jobs. First responders, healthcare workers, grocery clerks, delivery drivers, creatives who continued to create, teachers, fire fighters...and many more. They kept the world afloat when so many were seemingly trying to take it down (Politicians, Governments, Celebrities, I'm talkin' to you!?).
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Mark
10/14/2021 09:45:20 am
There are many types of heroes, no question about that. Yes, they are too numerous to mention but I do like that short list, Veronica. Most of those heroes keep going to their jobs and serving the public as allowed.
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Bibiana Krall
10/14/2021 02:04:11 pm
I scribble on anything handy. I also send myself strange text messages and emails. It depends on where and when an idea comes. My handwriting is awful, so I tend to type anything I want to be able to decipher and still they can be rather cryptic as they aren’t always a full-fledged idea at that point.
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The majority of my work is on my laptops--I have one upstairs and downstairs to work on. Most of my files are in the cloud, so I can work them from just about any device. I send myself texts (usually at night--a bit of a problem deciphering them the next morning, LOL). I also take loads of pictures to remind me of settings, fashions, food/drinks for a scene. The visuals really help me set the mood. I'm glad to work in a digital world, now I don't have to worry about my horrid handwriting!😬
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Mark
10/14/2021 02:25:18 pm
I know what you mean by inscrutable, midnight texts. They can be so hard to decipher. I don't even bother anymore. But I am not a writer also. Several years ago, an author who told me she hears from her muse at 2:30am almost every morning. She wishes her muse would move to a time zone not so far away.
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Most of the material I write is for the books I publish. I now have three series: My American Almost Royal Cousin Series; Rikkhe St. Claire Hygge & Bisous Holiday Mysteries; and The Haunted Series with Bibiana which includes Tangled Webs. The goal is to write and publish a book in each series per year. That keeps me pretty busy!
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Bibiana Krall
10/14/2021 03:00:51 pm
I always write for pleasure even if I’m publishing, but there are private poems I draft that I probably won’t ever share. They are ironic, and personal.
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Mark
10/14/2021 04:10:43 pm
If you don't love what you are doing, even in uncomfortable moments, then it is just a job. To love whatever you are doing is priceless!
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Bibiana
10/15/2021 04:16:41 am
Ego versus confidence is the way I look at being a writer or successful at anything that involves sharing your insight in public spaces. Ego can be a problem when it gets in the way of receiving feedback or halting process in other types of relationships, but confidence is needed to draft, to believe and to move forward.
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A strong ego is fine if it pushes you to do your best in your writing journey. You need to believe in yourself, have faith and keep on keepin' on! You are your biggest cheerleader, remember that.
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Mark
10/15/2021 09:42:40 am
You are right. Prides goes before a fall. The fall is inevitable.
Mark
10/15/2021 08:17:56 am
Attitude is a major factor in so much of our lives. Humility is a very important characteristic for a mature person to have at any age. You nailed that about believing in yourself. Self-confidence is critical to success at every level. If a writer doesn't have that then they will never write and publish. Strength, self-confidence and vision is necessary to achieve goals.
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I do have a 'few' lucky writing charms scattered around the house...crowns, ornaments and prints that remind me of scenes in my books. I love looking at them and I'm inspired to see where the next tales take me, LOL.
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Bibiana
10/15/2021 12:36:23 pm
I never thought about it that way. A bold infant would be something, I think that might segue into the terrible threes? Lol. ☕️
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Mark
10/16/2021 09:10:15 am
Keeping it fresh, keeping the inspiration going and the muse happy is hard at this time, with all of the restrictions we have had to endure in the last year and a half.
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Bibiana Krall
10/16/2021 10:28:18 am
I’ve looked at those platforms, especially Vella as it’s the new kid on the block. I’m not sure if it works for what I’m trying to do and I have to put my energy into what makes sense for the time I have. It seems to tilt in favor of YA more than any other genre, but I have seen some mystery writers and time-travel serials do quite well. I am always open to trying new things, so I’m contemplating it but it would be at least next year for me if I dive in. Never say never, say perhaps…
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I haven't published on other platforms to date. I am interested in Kindle Vella for potential spin-off ideas I have for my cozy series. I need to learn a bit more about it--selling a book one chapter at a time could be interesting...
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Mark
10/16/2021 10:53:57 am
What I have heard about those episode platforms is that a writer should have a complete set already written before beginning to post the story pieces. Readers stick with writers they like if a new bit is posted weekly. They seem to like the regularity. It is an interesting concept.
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I think if you want to maintain your privacy or try a completely new genre outside of what you usually write a pseudonym could be helpful. The problem in today's digital world is the writer behind the pseudonym is usually found out. Could be a good marketing ploy to get air time explaining why you used a pseudonym--any press is good press, right?
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10/16/2021 02:36:59 pm
I discovered a NY Times bestselling author this summer who wrote four, connected novellas and I devoured them. It was obvious to me that she had planned it out 100% before anything was published. It was seamless.
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Mark
10/16/2021 02:49:16 pm
Yes, Veronica, any press is good press, as long as they spell your name right.
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Bibiana Krall
10/16/2021 03:37:04 pm
I would say in the paranormal genre it’s important to add a dash of realism to coincide with the surreal or fantastic.
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For me, writing paranormal mystery is different from my cozy tales in that you take the more 'unbelievable' spectral aspects of the story to the edge. As an example, I feature a ghost in my cozy series--an ancestral aunt that roams the halls of Cherrywood Hall...or does she? She 'shows up' often, via shifting logs in the fireplace to make her opinion known...or is it really just a log dropping? Part of the fun of this character in the cozy tale is sometimes the characters don't quite know how to take her and question if she's real or not. It's a mystery...
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Mark
10/16/2021 04:13:20 pm
We have much in common, I have always loved reading books. I have much reading pleasure in almost every genre. I avoid reading extremely graphic horror, gore and sex. For me, less is more. My imagination can conjure up the best scenes from a couple of hints.
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For me, definitely all the above. I read at least one new book a week and regularly watch films and listen to music. Educating yourself and learning from what you listen to, watch and read makes for a stronger writer IMHO. A tune can trigger a memory in a character, or a setting you see or read about could have a place in your story. The more you know about and are exposed to, the bigger the portfolio you have to pull from when writing. You want your characters to be multi-dimensional.
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Bibiana
10/16/2021 07:05:56 pm
It will probably sound a little loony, but when writing of the invisible world, be it real or imagined sometimes there’s a tension in the air and I notice things. If you believe, you might say writing about the paranormal gets you noticed.
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Mark
10/17/2021 09:28:13 am
That is a good way of putting it, Veronica. The more you take in the more can come out and be useful. As I like to think of it, the more tools you have in your toolbox.
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Bibiana Krall
10/17/2021 10:11:34 am
My guilty pleasure is often a book to escape or take a wild ride. I’m reading The Wild Girls right now and it’s a thriller that vacillates between London and Botswana. It has tons of mystery, suspense and an exotic location. Extra credit for relationship issues between a close group of women, who perhaps were once similar but they grew up and changed.
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Veronica
10/17/2021 10:17:11 am
I so agree, Bibiana, Cathy's Savannah at Midnight is an awesome read, perfect for Halloween. You felt as if you were transported to Savannah, walking it's haunting streets, listening for the strokes of midnight--#spooktacular!
My guilty pleasure read is cozy mystery, I just love the tales of this genre. The mystery and danger are tempered with a hot cup of tea or glass of sherry as the tale evolves and clues are uncovered. I love the village life, manor houses, eccentric characters and the human nature observations. Who wouldn't want to visit the towns in Midsomer Murders---note I said visit, the inhabitants tend to be a bit homicidal...😲Life in a microscopic, mystery bubble perhaps, but it's the cozy life for me!
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Bibiana Krall
10/17/2021 12:28:18 pm
I’ve learned a lot about cozy mystery from you!🥰 so many real life scenarios can be used in this genre, i for one love Gemma, Aunt Pippa and Figgy! The use of humor is my favorite part. It doesn’t hurt that there are always great cocktails to get over the nerves… what’s next and did that just happen? It’s so much fun!
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Mark
10/17/2021 11:39:58 am
Those are some great recommendations! I want to read them all. With my reading schedule I don't know when.
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Bibiana Krall
10/17/2021 12:37:12 pm
I’m not sure suffering has to be a requirement. Life seems to add that on its own. As a creative it can certainly be fuel to help inform a character’s journey and growth. I do think that there are messages in not always getting what you want in the creative process. Mile markers than can be used to touch emotions and create a bridge between people. I have learned more from the challenges than the triumphs. Everything goes in the blender and that’s what makes literature so powerful.
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I think all human experiences are necessary for writing so that a character's traits, actions and personality can be accurately portrayed and explained. Suffering is one experience. We have all experienced it to varying degrees. My perspective will be different from yours.
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Mark
10/17/2021 08:21:03 pm
We all struggle with disappointment and failure in our lives. The hype from Madison Avenue provides unrealistic expectations for us, if we are not very good at that ourselves. I majored in that core in the school of hard knocks. ;-)
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Bibiana
10/18/2021 07:11:20 am
That's the same school I went to! No wonder!
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By far the best investments I've made to enhance my writing career are to bring in the professionals for editing/proofing; cover design; and technical support for website and seller platform services. It has made the world of difference for my book quality and appeal; infrastructure to support marketing/promos; and ensuring my works are available and stand out on the seller platforms. You will reap the benefits over and over again!
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Bibiana Krall
10/18/2021 08:51:11 am
This has been a wonderful and insightful interview. Many thanks to Mark, my co-writer Veronica and all the readers for spending time with us and for celebrating the spooky season with Tangled Webs. Take care out there and have a safe and happy Halloween! ❤️🔥🎃🍁📚
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Mark
10/18/2021 09:39:59 am
Those are great resources, some explicitly for writers and some not so obvious. I haven't seen Success magazine in a long time. I need to look at that again.
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I think once I get the story idea formed, the dialogue becomes the fun part for me. In my cozy series, I've gotten to know my characters through the years and know their reactions, quirks and personalities. Old and new characters still surprise me, you never know what's going to come out of their mouths in certain situations, LOL. #UhOh
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Bibiana
10/18/2021 01:15:03 pm
Thank you! Yes, Success magazine is fantastic. When they almost stopped print copies last year, I was totally bummed.
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Mark
10/19/2021 08:05:41 am
Thank you both so much for being not just fabulous guests on the word refiner channel but also for being wonderful writers and sharing your gift with the world.
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Veronica
10/19/2021 09:05:29 am
Thank you so much, Mark! Wishing everyone a #spooktacular Halloween and a very Happy Holidays! 💖👑
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