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Multi-volume, multi-genre, multi-series author, M. L. Scholl introduces us to the fourth volume in the Nature Coast Calamities, “Pu’ka and the Pirates”: Bernie moved to the Nature Coast to be near family and to fish. The Irish roots of Citrus County welcomed him. So did the Gaelic Folklore which is so important to the Irish. Mostly, he just blinks and carries on, but when bodies turn up he has to get involved. Will he figure out if Pu'ka did it? (Who the heck is Pu'ka?) Will he have to protect his family? Did the Pirates get their just desserts? I enjoy cozy murders quite a bit. I don't need a lot of blood and gore to be entertained. I have read quite a few of the author’s books and have always enjoyed the reading. Old pirates never die they just steal away to make room for new pirates. There will always be pirates, too. I love the combination of old Irish mythologies combined with the modern-day scourge of piracy. I hope that Pu'ka and Bernie meet up again. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Puka-and-the-Pirates-M-L-Scholl https://www.goodreads.com/-puka-and-the-pirates You can connect with the author: https://twitter.com/MaryLScholl1 https://www.facebook.com/maryluschollauthor https://www.instagram.com/maryluscholl https://www.amazon.com/author/maryluscholl My review of the second volume in the Nature Coast Calamities, “Big Foot and The Bentley”: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/big-foot-and-the-bentley My review of the first book of the Trailer Park Travails series, “Camper Catastrophe” can be found here: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/camper-catastrophe-by-mary-lu-scholl My review of the second book of the Trailer Park Travails series, “Mobile Mayhem” can be found here: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/mobile-mayhem My review of the third book of the Trailer Park Travails series, “Birds, Bees and RVs” can be found here: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/birds-bees-and-rvs-by-mary-lu-scholl My review of the fourth book of the Trailer Park Travails series, “Trailer Trauma”: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/trailer-trauma-trailer-park-travails-book-4 My review of the ninth book of the Trailer Park Travails series, "Fatal Philandering": https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/fatal-philandering Tags: cozy, murder, mystery, Florida, pets, dog, cat, brother, pirates, neighbors, fiction, action, fishing, leprechaun, spirit, shape-shifter Copyright © Mark L. Schultz 2023 except for the author’s introduction
77 Comments
Mary L Scholl
9/18/2023 08:24:49 am
Thank you Mark! There are so many rich characters in mythology and folklore. I am already working on the next one. Just to complicate life, I'm also starting book ten of my other series...
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Mark
9/18/2023 10:45:24 am
You are welcome. That is certainly good news for your fans of both series.
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9/18/2023 11:47:31 am
Actually, there are. The capital of Citrus County is Inverness. That's just one example, but I have found that quite a number of people have congregated here. There is an American Irish club that meets regularly. St Patrick's Day, of course has made everyone just a little bit Irish, but it is especially big in Inverness. I couldn't resist the title to the book before this one, InverNessie.
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Mark
9/18/2023 12:32:32 pm
At one time, in our country, Irish were heavily discriminated against. The Irish are truly geniuses, with an official proclamation of St. Patrick's day everyone wants to be Irish. Poof! No more discrimination.
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9/18/2023 01:37:03 pm
I wanted a change. I wanted to see if I could write from a male point of view. I needed (wanted) to tie the two series together (security) and this was the relationship I came up with.
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Mark
9/18/2023 01:47:40 pm
You were motivated to expand your writing ability and expand the world of your characters. I did notice that some of them have appeared in both series. I love that sort of stuff.
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9/18/2023 04:55:12 pm
It was always Irish, Irish folklore is so rich in stories. My grandfather told stories for hours. I went to Ireland about ten years ago and lived it - and soaked up more stories... I thought the stories needed more of a common theme than just location. I suppose it could have been a hobby, like so many cozy mysteries, but I wanted Bernie to have diverse interests.
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Mark
9/18/2023 05:49:53 pm
People have lived in Ireland for a long time. Plenty of time for stories to grow. That must have been such special time for you to be in the land of your grandfather. Do you have family there still or did they all emigrate to somewhere else?
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9/18/2023 06:12:45 pm
Have to think about the trip to Ireland... Hmm... I'm sure there are relatives there somewhere but my mother has a serious antipathy towards past family so it's easier to let it go for now. Most did come over, however.
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Mark
9/18/2023 07:01:03 pm
Maybe Bernie and Ralph will get to meet some unknown relatives.
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9/18/2023 07:44:02 pm
That is so cool about the castle! I should have curtsied when I met her!
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Mark
9/18/2023 07:54:41 pm
Milady says all is forgiven. You can curtsy next time.
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9/18/2023 08:18:40 pm
Starting somewhere else in the story is a great idea. Citrus Writers is hosting a preparation for nanowrimo the end of October. I'll give you credit for that suggestion!
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Mark
9/19/2023 07:28:12 am
Rick Hall is a writer, guest blogger and a client. He wrote a great guest blog about non-linear writing. Here is the copy-and-paste link: http://www.wordrefiner.com/guest-blogs/non-linear-writing or you can search his name in the box below. I think he provided the initial idea for me.
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9/19/2023 08:37:05 am
Anyone who reads my books knows way too much about me! Nearly all of the interactions, conversations and even scrapes are from real life, mine!
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Mark
9/19/2023 11:34:03 am
That explains why your writing seems so real, you have lived all of it. Very nice.
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Mark
9/19/2023 05:47:08 pm
Love scenes are kind of awkward. The emotions are deeply felt and must be difficult to write well. The physical component is a poor substitute also but serves as a distraction from the deeper issues.
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9/19/2023 06:16:22 pm
Usually I get the best ideas about 20 minutes before I have to quit to do something else. Late afternoon is good. Conveniently, it's usually too hot to be doing yard work at that time.
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Mark
9/19/2023 07:10:16 pm
That is kind of funny but not surprising. The muse doesn't seem to show up when an author is in need, only when their mind is on something else.
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9/19/2023 08:16:49 pm
Hard, usually. Perversity.
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Mark
9/19/2023 08:56:05 pm
At times, many authors complain about how stingy their muse is beside appearing at odd times.
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9/20/2023 08:54:30 am
I almost hate to admit it, but the novels aren't written exactly FOR me. When I wrote the first one, it was. After that, the more people who told me they liked my characters, the more I wanted to supply them... So, I guess that IS for me, because I can never get enough of hearing people laugh or hearing them quote something I wrote. Hearing my own escapades retold - and knowing I actually lived through that - never gets old.
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Mark
9/20/2023 09:16:59 am
I am glad I asked that question. Your answer is delightfully honest. We are quite a bit alike. If I was a writer, I would be doing the same thing. I enjoy sharing smiles and helping people laugh. It improves the day of everyone withing earshot.
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9/20/2023 09:26:14 am
If I could convince people to leave book reviews I would be better known! Begging begets. Cookies contribute. Sad eyes sometimes suffice.
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Mark
9/20/2023 10:53:30 am
Almost every author wants more reviews! I certainly cannot fault them for that desire. More reviews usually lead to more sales. Word of mouth is the easiest way to sell books. The next most fruitful way to sell books is an in-person appeal. Meeting people out in the real world. I do recommend authors keep a box of books in their car and one in their backpack or purse.
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9/20/2023 01:18:16 pm
I have to admit, Amazon Ads is first. If I let my end- dates lapse, sales tank immediately. Personal appeal is next, either first person (including Facebook) or third person - your efforts. I seem to sell a few more each time there's a story in the newspaper, or the Peddler's Post. If I address a group, libraries, the county, that helps. You can't rest on your laurels, though...
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Mark
9/20/2023 02:05:57 pm
Some authors do well with Amazon ads others with Facebook ads. Both seem to require nearly constant adjusting for maximum sales. Still others shy away from those platforms and pursue other opportunities. Like so much of life, there is no one size fits all and there is always something new to learn. It's wise to not have all of your eggs in one basket or your books on only one platform.
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9/20/2023 04:38:21 pm
I am happy to share with anyone who trusted my answers! Where would I be if no one had shared with me (you included!)?
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Mark
9/20/2023 04:47:55 pm
Thanks for sharing those tips. I rely on authors, like yourself, to explain the nuts and bolts of ads. Let's talk more about ads.
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9/20/2023 06:42:14 pm
There are several decisions to make first. Do you want to write your own description or let Amazon use the cover copy? I do both. You need to decide if you're going to advertise all formats together? Keywords can vary between ebooks and print. You can gather or reap different words by searching by format as well as genre. 100 to 300 words. It is generally understood that their suggested cost-per-click is higher than necessary. The first book of a series requires less than a stand-alone, I bid .34 - .36 for Camper Catastrophe (first in series). You can let 'them' adjust your bid or hold them to it. I usually choose 'down only' so I don't get surprised. Most of my actual paid clicks are roughly 23c. I also put a max of 5.00 a day per ad and NEVER have hit it. I did a lot of deep breathing when I started. Now I only check once a week or so, when I make new ones. Stand-alone books, I usually go about 39c. I run 100-150 ads at a time, some are still performing after a couple of years. I weed out non-performing ads every month or so.
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Mark
9/20/2023 07:05:53 pm
Thank you for all of that. Quite fascinating. I didn't think about the exchange rate in foreign countries.
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9/20/2023 08:06:16 pm
Amazon Ads with Bryan Cohen. I freely admit I haven't finished all his videos, I'm still a small fish. However, they are there for when I'm ready, and his online forum of experts and other authors is awesome.
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Mark
9/21/2023 08:13:01 am
Thank you for that recommendation.
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9/21/2023 09:01:05 am
Trilogy of the Rings. Amazing work. I'm partial to this one so far...
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Mark
9/21/2023 09:48:23 am
Tolkien's Lord of the Rings trilogy is amazing! It is not only one of my favorite stories it was also my introduction to the fantasy genre. I was given a paperback set when I was in the 8th or 9th grade. I read the set three times before I graduated from high school. I also read The Hobbit once or twice in that time.
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9/21/2023 10:47:13 am
This too shall pass...
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Mark
9/21/2023 11:42:53 am
That is a good saying. Very few things are permanent in this life. Everything changes, even the weather.
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9/21/2023 03:30:03 pm
Citrus Writers is 'Writers helping writers'
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Mark
9/21/2023 04:50:31 pm
Citrus Writers are doing so well! I love all of that outreach and help. Someone somewhere needs a nudge to get back to writing.
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9/21/2023 08:07:06 pm
You're so 😋 sweet.
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Mark
9/21/2023 08:21:49 pm
Thank you. It is hard enough to write, publish and market books, without human interaction it can be even harder.
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9/21/2023 08:49:26 pm
You should believe you have added value to each of your clients! I know I have become a better writer in trying to keep your esteem. I think I've had fewer errors each time...
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Mark
9/22/2023 09:13:17 am
Thank you, I appreciate your encouraging words. You are doing better.
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9/22/2023 09:30:53 am
I used to. Mostly in school. Once as a senior prank I picked out five teachers, 2 I had classes with at that time, 2 more I had the previous semester, and 1i didn't even know. I decided a simple 5 line poem for each. The first line, for that instructor, was always the same. For example, "beware green-eyed teapots". They always rhymed and never made any sense. I then put them in their office mailboxes once a week for a month or so. One day my government teacher called me up to the front of the room before class. On his desk was a stack of my poems to him, and photocopies of all of them is sent to the others. He looked at me and said "Miss Garrison, never play poker".
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Mark
9/22/2023 05:47:54 pm
That is a fun prank, very creative! That teacher had a good sense of humor.
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9/22/2023 07:21:13 pm
I would like to write a longer novel, still mystery, though. My stories just seem to end! Some would argue that this series, Nature Coast Calamities, is already fantasy. Trailer Park Travails is already classified as paranormal to some because of the ghosts.
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Mark
9/22/2023 07:51:08 pm
You have written your books with a touch of paranormal, including this series. Every reader of this book reads it differently than the other readers. Each filters your book with their own needs and desires. I am not surprised that some readers get something different than others. For me, a mythological creature could be fantasy or supernatural or a combination of both. While Pu'ka plays a very serious role in the story he also has a softer side.
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9/23/2023 08:08:38 am
No, I haven't. When I could afford it I worked too much (sold my leave back every winter)
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Mark
9/23/2023 08:52:35 am
Selling leave back is something I did a lot also.
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9/23/2023 10:57:29 am
Definitely character driven. I hear questions in my head, but they are "What would Patty say next?" "What SHOULD she say?" and, lastly, "What's the most inappropriate response she could have?" Then I go with the last one.
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Mark
9/23/2023 11:03:50 am
Those three questions are very important! I love that you usually go with the last question. That explains a lot. Patty makes me laugh so much. I also love how self-aware she is and is slightly contrite about her actions, sometimes.
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9/23/2023 12:02:40 pm
Good questions!
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Mark
9/23/2023 01:20:35 pm
You crack me up, sometimes, Mary! Public speaking is the top fear many writers have. But not you, you embrace it and other things to avoid writing, tongue in cheek of course.
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9/23/2023 01:28:51 pm
I wasn't kidding when I said inspiration hits me when I only have a little time left! I might work for an hour on advertising and 'schmoozing' which for me is staying in contact with people. Then maybe a half hour actually writing. I do spend a lot of 'unproductive' time writing. As in thinking about how to get the story where I want it and what I can or can't do. I think reading other novels in my genre also counts as schmoozing because I learn. Right now I'm reading all my Agatha Christie books. In my dreams...
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Mark
9/23/2023 02:20:20 pm
The business of writing takes a lot of time away from writing. Completely true!
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9/23/2023 04:28:19 pm
Alas, it was a dark and stormy night and I embarked on a quest for the perfect website. I found several options that enticed me with colors and promises and clouds. My head was turned by their flattery and I accepted an offer. And another offer. At least one more offer.
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Mark
9/23/2023 05:13:14 pm
No, comrade, I am not disappointed at all. You sound quite human and normal to me. Social media is a struggle in more ways than one.
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9/23/2023 08:17:58 pm
This might seem a little weird, but the quote that comes to me most often was a general in Dune. He said a leader should give a few instructions as possible (they were setting up camp) because once he gives instructions on a matter, he will always have to do so. He has better things to do.
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Mark
9/23/2023 08:56:04 pm
I like that quote quite a bit. It makes sense to me. I also liked the books Herbert wrote, but the story went downhill after his son took over. The movies were fun but never as good as the picture that developed in my mind.
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9/24/2023 07:13:28 am
I do. The final showdown. Bernie, incongruous in his shorts, socks, boots and spurs, and knowing it. He's putting dignity aside and shouldering the responsibility of subverting justice. He both approves and disapproves of Pu'ka; understands him. But, he loves his brother, and he takes his fraternal obligation seriously. Then his careful and regretful preparations come to naught and his honesty and earnest intentions are his only weapons.
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Mark
9/24/2023 11:54:24 am
That was a powerful scene. It was just right.
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9/24/2023 02:52:46 pm
That's a pretty tough call. They all have their issues. Dr Catherine has to put up with JJ or I'd pick her. MaryAnn in the mobile home park might be a good call. Bernie - well, Bernie would be tempting.
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Mark
9/24/2023 03:30:06 pm
Bernie is a good choice. He is a nice guy and has a house with some land. Having a vegetable and flower garden is a great thing.
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Mark
9/24/2023 05:54:12 pm
That is a great choice! I didn't think of that one, but it makes perfect sense. You know the others all too well. They have no secrets from you.
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9/24/2023 08:12:04 pm
It is hard! I think of all the names I like, then throw out any who belong to my immediate circle of friends or family, because I prefer to have them speaking to me. I tend toward alliteration, which I know isn't particularly realistic, but to me they are pleasing to my mind's ear. Lately I have to recheck my earlier books and the lists of characters so I don't reuse them in a way that would be confusing.
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Mark
9/24/2023 08:59:37 pm
I admit to adoring alliteration almost always. It can get cumbersome at times. ;-)
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9/25/2023 03:50:27 am
I promptly looked up baby name sites, thank you!
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Mark
9/25/2023 09:12:03 am
You're welcome. As they say in the artillery, I aim to please.
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9/25/2023 12:20:49 pm
Lol, aim...
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Mark
9/25/2023 01:01:02 pm
Your writing is pretty smooth. The pacing is doing well also. The triple POV gave me a slight pause each time it changed, but nothing severely detrimental to the story.
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9/25/2023 02:29:31 pm
Thank you for the compliments!
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Mark
9/25/2023 05:12:14 pm
You are welcome.
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9/25/2023 05:45:21 pm
Asking for reimbursement never even occurred to me. Neither did following up. (Me, smacking myself up side the head.)
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Mark
9/25/2023 07:00:06 pm
Another item for your to-do list. Ask them how many of your books they sold.
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9/25/2023 08:49:31 pm
I have learned so many things both from you and to preserve the image of me you project! You've made me a better writer. Thank you - until next time!
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