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Multi-volume, multi-genre author, Melissa Rea introduces us to her steamy, historical-fiction tale about love and betrayal in old Venice, “Maestro”: Gabriella stands on a gallows one day before her 19th birthday in 1718. She tells her story to a young blacksmith, a surly milkmaid, and a mute dwarf who is much more than the muckraker he seems. The pampered daughter of a count, Gabriella's entire existence has been her music, until one afternoon's sensual exploration leads to the shame of two noble families and her exile to a convent school for orphan girls, the Ospedale della Pieta in Venice, Italy. Antonio Vivaldi, the school's Maestro of the Concerto, teaches the students and composes inspired by their talent and beauty. She tells of her friend, Veronica, a sublimely talented violinist whose cold eyes hide tragic secrets and of whose murder she now stands convicted. With tears in her eyes, she speaks of her love, Raphael, the handsome overseer whom she had planned to marry. The story of her desperate attempt to learn the truth of a terrible curse that took her own child's life, and save Veronica from a dark affair, holds the crowd's rapt attention. Now she must escape with the help of her friends, from the Ospedale, and perhaps those in the crowd assembled to watch her hang. I enjoyed the story so much. It is rich, like a wonderful dessert that requires time for each bite. This is an exciting and seductive story. The premise draws you in with a shot of sympathy for the woman who was facing being hanged that very day. But the executioner was absent. She faces a hostile crowd and begins to relate the story of her life that led to the charge of murder of which she proclaims her innocence. This story is so compelling, that it's hard to put it down. Descriptions are opulent without being overbearing, much of the dialogue is quite enticing and the action is plentiful. I found the balance of this three-legged stool to be very even and the story was very enjoyable for it. The author does a marvelous job of incorporating all of the senses. I will say no more to avoid spoilers. "Maestro" is a sensual feast and gets 4.8 stars from me. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Maestro-Melissa-Rea-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-maestro https://www.barnesandnoble.com/maestro-melissa-rea https://www.smashwords.com/maestro You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/author_rea http://www.melissareaauthor.com Copyright © 2022 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction.
53 Comments
Mark
7/10/2022 12:51:48 pm
Good afternoon. We got back from church a little bit ago. And welcome to the Word Refiner channel! We love to talk about books, writing and publishing. Let's get right to it.
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7/10/2022 01:21:52 pm
I have a day job.I have a solo dental practice that can be all consuming. Writing, like reading helps me escape. We read to go somewhere else. When I write, I go somewhere fantastic, be someone else and I am in control. Perfect.
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Mark
7/10/2022 01:36:20 pm
That does sound perfect. Being a dentist in a solo practice sounds pretty good. You are the boss and in control just like when you are writing.
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7/10/2022 03:46:56 pm
My work just gives me a reason to get away from it in my head. I love to read but writing gives me all the escape and control too.
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Mark
7/10/2022 04:24:35 pm
I recall listening to Vivaldi's Four Seasons a lot when I lived with my bio-dad and stepmom, in San Francisco, after graduating from high school. They had many albums of classical music; I liked that one in particular and dubbed it onto cassette tape.
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7/10/2022 05:57:38 pm
Glad you mentioned genre. I am not fond of the term or the concept. I write fiction. My stories are always about women going through their lives, growing up, falling in love, being hanged. Whatever the struggle, I like to create a character, let them take my hand and take me on their journey. People sometimes ask me about the fact that I often have detailed love scenes. I do that because it is part of the woman in my story's journey, it is part of her life. I go where she takes me and the details paint the picture and help us be there with her.
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Mark
7/10/2022 06:36:25 pm
Fiction is a many-splendored thing. I love fiction. You are not the first author to tell me that you depend on the characters to tell you how the story should go. Some authors try to plot out the story in advance, sometimes the characters are happy to cooperate other times not very much. As a non-writer, I find the idea that the characters can guide the story interesting. In either case, I am happy to read the story.
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7/10/2022 07:49:50 pm
My cover was designed by a designer at Melange, Caroline Andrus. She has done all my cover and is, in my opinion, a genius. The cover is simple and complex like baroque music. It has Gabrilella, her Raphael, the bridge of sighs which Gabriella actually crosses and the rope that overshadows the whole of the story. The soft colors set off the elements and add a richness I hope a reader finds between the pages.
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Mark
7/10/2022 08:57:49 pm
Caroline is good. The cover is beautiful. I am also glad I didn't miss anything this time.
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7/10/2022 09:27:23 pm
Nah, it was easy. Always have title first. Vivaldi's title at the Girl's school, the Ospedale, was Maestro of the Concerti. Though he was not the main character in the book, he was the reason I wrote it.
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Mark
7/11/2022 06:19:44 am
That was easy. More than I expected. Not all writers have a title first when they start a book. A few change the title at least once. Some authors enlist their fans to help them choose a title for a new book.
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7/11/2022 06:45:05 am
I started writing this novel on a sad day in America. Gabrielle Giffords was shot in the head during a campaign event. It didn't look at the time that she would make it. Her story touched me so, I named my main character after her simply adding an a to make it sound more 18th century. Everybody else, I just made up as I went along either googling old Italian names or using variations of people in my life.
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Mark
7/11/2022 12:27:54 pm
What a touching story. Yes, that was a sad day for the country.
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7/11/2022 02:55:12 pm
I love history and find ways to knit the modern with the historical. The first novel I had published was a moderm woman who brings Casanova from 18th century to today. Much fun ensues. My three book series has my main character time traveling to lots of fun places.
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Mark
7/11/2022 05:46:25 pm
Your first book is a mix of historical fiction and modern romance. I love a good time travel story, that does sound like fun.
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7/11/2022 07:40:27 pm
My series is called Nights of Alice. It is about a modern women who each evening finds clothes in her closet that once donned, take her to different places in time. Book one is called Rabbithole, and book two which comes out very soon is called Pool of tears.
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Mark
7/11/2022 08:35:38 pm
I like the concept, that is a very magical closet.
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7/12/2022 04:39:44 pm
I love contests and always enter with each new novel. I am proud to say each of my books has won awards. MAESTRO won silver, second place, in romance in the ReaderViews Reviewers Choice Awards and best in the Midwestern region same contest.
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Mark
7/12/2022 04:51:54 pm
Congratulations on the awards! That is wonderful and very validating. I have recommended to writers that writing contests, especially those that provide feedback from the judges, can help a writer a lot to improve their writing skills. I do have a warning, there are a lot of shady contests out there. Some want to extract as much as they can from your wallet, others want to steal your intellectual property. Here is a copy-and-paste link about those things: Beware Bogus Writing Contests! Look for These 8 Red Flags. https://annerallen.com/2019/05/beware-bogus-writing-contests. You can also use the search box below to find the link. There are other blogs I have links for on my Highly Regarded Blogs page.
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7/13/2022 07:40:49 am
I had an agent for a time who submitted my first ms with no success. I sent out hundred of queries. I had given up until I decided to submit to small presses who wanted something different and I found Melange. A wonderful publisher who really does appreciate different voices and unique writing.
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Mark
7/13/2022 07:59:12 am
Congratulations on finding a publisher that works well for you. Not all authors have a similar experience.
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7/13/2022 04:17:59 pm
The process is still extremely brutal. If the grant you the favor of a form rejection, feel lucky. My favorite rejection said:don't like your voice, can't get into your plot and don't care about your MC. HUH. A least they didn't criticize my font. Agents all say they want something different, but then when they get it, the say they can't figure out how to sell it.
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Mark
7/13/2022 04:30:38 pm
That is hilarious! And so frustrating! I think you are right; they don't know how to sell something very different.
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7/13/2022 06:27:45 pm
I am not sure if I ever need another rejection. In fact, not sure after my next book comes out, if I want to put anything out again. Four books that almost nobody reads is maybe enough. The amount of work it takes to produce a novel is unbelievable. I could collect aluminium cans and make more money.
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Mark
7/13/2022 06:40:27 pm
Nobody needs another rejection. It feels awful.
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7/13/2022 07:26:16 pm
I never wrote for the money, just for readers. I didn't choose my publisher, I sent queries out to publishers that accepted submissions directly from authors. Twenty rejections later, Melange answered with the nicest rejections ever. I could not believe it, no matter how many times I read the email, that said "we are offering you a contract."
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Mark
7/13/2022 07:56:41 pm
That makes sense, having people read your book means more to you than the royalties from selling your books. I think it does for a lot of authors also. However, unless you self-publish you are at the whim of the publisher for the length of the contract and the sales platform, Amazon in this case, have their requirements also.
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7/15/2022 01:14:33 pm
To me, the greatest difference between my publisher and a bigger one is distribution. The big publishers have distribution deals with bookstores, that smaller ones do not.
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Mark
7/15/2022 01:30:53 pm
That is a good point. Distribution is so important when it comes to physical books. Large publishers calculate how many books they think will sell from a print run and then they will print a few more if they're close to a savings cost per copy. They also probably factor in returns, because many bookstores won't take on a new SKU unless they get reimbursed for the returns. There are also secondary markets such as drug stores and grocery stores. There is another marketer, Big Bad Wolf, that buys book printing overruns and sells them in international sales events. I imagine they pay pennies on the dollar for the English language books. They sell millions of these books in foreign countries.
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7/15/2022 01:37:46 pm
The first adult novel I read at about 12 was Bram Stoker's Dracula. Little did he know he was creating a genre. I read it maybe once a year, skipping the pages where Lucy and Mina yak for pages. I always cry at the end when he gets staked.
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Mark
7/15/2022 02:01:23 pm
That was quite a book to read at age 12. Obviously, it impressed you a lot. There were some really slow passages in the story. I read it about 10 years ago and Frankenstein also. Abraham Stoker's book bored me for the most part.
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7/15/2022 04:19:28 pm
I was once told that you cannot put your heroine under too much stress. I get pretty invested or I stop reading and to me the very worst review is the cannot finish.
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Mark
7/15/2022 07:12:59 pm
"Cannot finish" is a pretty bad review. I can only recall two books I did not finish. The first was five to seven years ago. There were a dozen or more spelling errors on every page. The second one was only a couple of months ago. Quite a few spelling errors, though not nearly as much as the one I first mentioned. The subject matter was too far out there for me. It was religious porn, the author felt like he was glorifying God with his book. I stopped at 25%. It was way too weird. I don't read explicit porn at all. I wish I had stopped at 10%.
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7/15/2022 08:08:35 pm
I have not. I has never been convenient. It does sound fun and I may do it one of these days.
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Mark
7/15/2022 08:33:27 pm
I have not done it also, but then I am not a writer. It seems to be a big party for a lot of writers. They band together on Twitter or other social media platforms and give each other encouragement and support. Sometimes there are prizes for early finishers. It helps a lot of authors get 50,000 first-draft words written faster than usual.
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7/16/2022 12:48:11 pm
I way under write. I think my readers go with me and see what I see so why should they need description...duh. But I can flesh it out later.
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Mark
7/16/2022 12:57:23 pm
That is true. I think it's easier to add material rather than having to cut it out. Some authors wind up cutting sections, paragraphs and even chapters at times.
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7/16/2022 01:24:46 pm
My characters are smarter, thinner, younger, and much more interesting than me. All my friends know they may become a character in my books ar any time so they best behave.
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Mark
7/16/2022 02:00:57 pm
Funny answer! I have no doubt that your friends do behave.
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Mark
7/16/2022 03:37:09 pm
That is wise. Although, one author related a story to me about doing that same thing. The friend got upset because the character did something the friend felt was not in the friend's personal character. It took years for the author to smooth those ruffled feelings. He decided to always disguise the character so no one among family or friends could claim that the character was patterned after them. The best laid plans can often go awry.
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7/16/2022 09:51:54 pm
I write characters as they come to me. They do what they do on the page. I am happier writing protagonist because I can understand them. My antagonists surprise me.
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Mark
7/17/2022 03:53:50 pm
I am fascinated by your writing process. I have heard a few authors talk about how much they depend upon the characters telling them what happens next. That seems to be very true for you.
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7/17/2022 09:06:31 pm
I have never had them argue, but maybe next book. I hate that my protagonist is so full of self doubt, I love that my antagonist is so completely confident.
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Mark
7/18/2022 07:18:26 am
Thank you for clarifying that they never argue.
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7/18/2022 07:51:45 am
I am only concerned with pace, consciously. Usually I just write the story and fix pacing problems after the first draft.
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Mark
7/18/2022 08:35:52 am
Fixing pacing issues can improve the flow. That was a bit of a trick question, I think they are closely related.
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7/18/2022 12:34:12 pm
I have a 1,000 words a day limit. Whenever it takes to get them done.
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Mark
7/18/2022 12:42:16 pm
A thousand words a day is pretty good, all things considered. Some write more and some write less.
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Melissa Rea
7/18/2022 02:12:01 pm
There are mistakes as a very thorough reader pointed out. I would prefer none. MIstakes distract readers fron my story. I love Melange, but they depend on me too much to find the boo boos.
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Mark
7/18/2022 02:20:19 pm
While it varies from publisher to publisher, little to no proofreading is done. At best, publishers depend too much on spellcheckers. I know because I find spelling errors in almost every book I read. Once a year, I read a book free of spelling errors. That has been my experience for nearly 8 years. One book a year.
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7/18/2022 06:54:02 pm
To all the authors out there, NEVER give up! I had rejections half way to the moon from agents. I decided to go directly to small presses that accepted submissions directly from writers. Four books later! Someone needs to hear your words.
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