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Multi-volume, multi-genre author, Maurice Barkley introduces us to the first volume in the “Lost and Forgotten” series, “Discovery”: THE PAST IS NEVER DEAD, IT ONLY HIDES Where did it begin? Could it have been just days ago when a piece of advanced electronic equipment disappeared? Or was it in 1945 when a huge aircraft vanished, somewhere in Egypt? Or maybe the start was five thousand years ago when a great flood altered the future of an ancient society? Or possibly an event so far in the past that the only witness would have been something not quite man? And how do you pick up a trail not known to exist? Things do change quite a bit every thousand years or so. You may carefully mark a path through the deep woods, but if one of the marks disappears, as in time this surely must happen, you are in trouble. And how do you decide to set aside your daily affairs to follow you know not what to you know not where? A faint shadow that at any moment may dissolve and leave you alone in an extremely distant place. The FBI came looking, but the electronic device had vanished without a trace. Luckily someone high up remembered a man with unusual talents. Retired Army Ranger JIM CAGNEY feels stranded on the beach of retirement after his exciting career as an Army Ranger, but everything changes when two young FBI agents come looking for him. The memory and talents of this older man prove to be of great value in their search for the missing piece of sophisticated electronics. The will-o-the-wisp they chase is more the age of Mr. Cagney and is employing methods and devices of a bygone era to function and cover his tracks. For Jim it is simply a matter of perspective, experience and a penchant for puzzles. He did not hesitate and started a journey beyond his wildest dreams. I was unsure what to expect, it seemed like a time-travel story, my favorite sub-genre in science fiction. I looked forward to reading the story. I missed the hints about all of the cloak-and-dagger stuff because I was caught up in the time-travel aspects. I loved the story completely! I loved the thoughtful attitude of Jim Cagney, his words were few most of the time but very impactful. He had some decent jokes also. All of the main characters were pretty real and added a lot to my enjoyment. The foreign settings brought a nice texture to the story also. I can't say more without revealing any spoilers. I would love to see a series about Jim when he was still an Army Ranger. All in all a fun and exciting read. 4.8 stars from me! You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/LOST-FORGOTTEN-Book-One-Discovery-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-discovery-lost-and-forgotten https://www.barnesandnoble.com/lost-and-forgotten-discovery-maurice-barkley You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/MauriceBarkley https://www.facebook.com/Maurice Barkley The author has many other books in multiple series. My review of the second book in the series: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-secret-path My review of the third book: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/enigma My review of the fourth book: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/toward-the-unknown-region teleportation, galaxies, Nazis, aliens, quest, adventure, AI, artificial intelligence Copyright @ 2023 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction.
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Mark
5/15/2023 08:42:43 pm
Thanks for joining me in the interview, Maurice. I have a particular fondness for that name that goes back to when I took two years of French in high school. That was the name chosen for me by my French teacher to use in class.
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5/15/2023 09:57:51 pm
Small town New York State. Worked on a dairy farm before I had to shave. Drafted during the Korean emergency, but after basic was posted to Puerto Rico.
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Mark
5/16/2023 07:58:58 am
Very good! The treehouses sound amazing! Every kid's dream!
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5/16/2023 03:03:02 pm
I forgot to mention that I was named Maurice after a relative in the French Canadian branch of the family—up around Avonmore. I was there once long ago and I still remember the cucumber sandwiches.
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Mark
5/16/2023 04:58:47 pm
That is a great story! I love it.
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5/17/2023 04:06:08 pm
I recall my editor at Sterling Publishing telling me that I was a lyrical writer and I should consider writing a memoir. I did, and after some unsuccessful marketing, I self-published it with no success. I was discouraged—the reaction “bummed out” did not exist at that time. Fortunately Skyhorse Publishing came to me and requested a new tree house book. This made me feel better and occupied my time for a while. When finished I wanted to write something, but the big question was WHAT to write.
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Mark
5/17/2023 04:21:56 pm
I think writing a memoir is pretty hard unless you have already written a novel or two. An entertaining memoir needs to flow like a novel in my opinion, with situations that cause problems and requires creativity and grit to get through. Smooth sailing, while comfortable, can also be boring.
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5/19/2023 02:37:36 pm
Having started my serious writing rather late in life, my inventory is modest. (I say modest because I like the word and don’t have a chance to use it as often as I like.) Lost and Forgotten is my only effort other than a couple of very short stories. A while back I wrote a Star Trek episode using the original cast. I didn’t bother sending it anywhere. The four L&F books have become fairly real to me. At the end of the last one I left the reader, not a cliff hanger, but some possibilities (without committing to any).
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Mark
5/19/2023 05:43:38 pm
As a fairly recent author you have done well. You have a good list of books in multiple genres. Series are favored by a lot of readers, if they like the first book they want more.
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5/19/2023 07:47:50 pm
I’m tempted to tell a few fibs to make me look better, but this is not the place. There is a right and proper way to accomplish certain tasks (drafts) and then there is my way. I have tried to do it right and proper, but I can’t—the old brain is hard wired I guess. So, I edit as I write. It slows everything down. When finished I send the manuscript to my editor. When it’s returned I fix things and send it back. There are always a few final tweaks. A good editor is vital.
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Mark
5/19/2023 08:23:49 pm
You are not alone in editing while writing, quite a few authors do that. They keep massaging the same draft until it's good enough. I think every writer has to write in the way that works best for them. I do encourage newer writers to experiment with different styles of writing to broaden their experience.
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5/20/2023 02:16:28 pm
Ahh, the agony of the cover, it and the title were resolved after the manuscript was complete. At the beginning I searched on line for a good cover at a reasonable price, but I was searching before I knew the complete story. (I don’t plot --- pantser supreme) It was my editor who found the image and suggested it to me. It was a pre-made from bookcoversart.com. There are no hidden secrets there, just the Nazi connection and the train that is a significant part of the continuing story.
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Mark
5/20/2023 02:26:44 pm
That is a great story. Like so many other pansters, you write the story to learn how it will turn out. Leaving the title and over until the writing was done makes a lot of sense. I will admit to being a little surprised that you didn't design the cover yourself as a commercial artist. Perhaps I don't have a complete picture of what a commercial artist does.
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5/20/2023 08:58:45 pm
This is one thing I think I do rather well. I keep track and I have 83 names in this series—I can show you the list. Other than incidental persons, as I introduce a character I base her or him on someone I know, have known or know something about. (James Cagney) At times I will even us that person’s first name and rarely use the whole name. (James Cagney)
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Mark
5/21/2023 07:20:36 am
Those are a lot of names! You must use a spreadsheet or special writing software such as Scrivener to keep track of all of them. Maybe you have a character bible to avoid changing minor details such as eye color.
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5/21/2023 09:07:12 pm
Simple answer==no. I mentioned before that I am an introvert and am also shy. While not fast on my feet mentally I am an excellent day dreamer. When there is no pressure to perform my eloquence shines. For the same reason I am OK at the keyboard as there is no immediate audience waiting for my words. It’s interesting (to me) that most of my best friends past and present have been extroverts. Perhaps it’s because being a quiet introvert automatically makes me a good listener and extroverts like that.
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Mark
5/22/2023 07:42:35 am
I am an introvert also. I have little interest in sports and many other activities. Much of the time I would rather read a good book or watch TV.
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5/22/2023 04:07:57 pm
I don’t enter contests. Early on I checked several and found that they all wanted a fee to enter. My unsupported opinion is that their primary purpose is to make money. Based on my personal experience I think my best chance is with Lady Luck and word of mouth. I get my stories out there as much as possible via Twitter, etc. and this has proved positive in that two very influential women liked my Sherlock Holmes stories and with their likes my sales went up. My hope is that the right person at the right time reads the L&F book and reacts to my benefit. So far I am on good terms with Lady Luck.
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Mark
5/22/2023 04:30:03 pm
Many contests do have a fee. I guess that at least a portion of the fee goes to a prize or prizes for the winners. Some contests provide a critique of each entry thus helping authors improve their writing craft. Some contests provide increased exposure for authors. Other contests seek to extract as much money from your wallet as possible and some also seek to steal an author's intellectual property rights. It behooves an author to read every contract carefully before signing. If they don't understand, engaging a lawyer familiar with IP rights will be worthwhile.
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