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Multi-volume, multi-genre author, Priscilla B. Shuler introduces us to her story, “Kuimba” set in the American South a little over 100 years ago: South Carolina, 1914. Ophelia Smith’s life changed completely when she heard his beautiful singing. After hours of hard labor, the first-time mother feels blessed when the blue-eyed baby comes out of the womb making sweet music instead of cries. Naming him Kuimba for his enthralling voice, she proudly shares him with others who become enamored with the newborn… unaware of an older boy whose eyes are filled with hate. Over the years, Ophelia watches in awe as her child grows up healing people through his touch and being visited by holy beings. But she struggles to protect him from the brutal attacks of a savagely jealous young man whenever he’s out of her sight. And when angels warn her that God has one more task for the youth before calling him back to Heaven, she fears the looming fate that threatens to take him away forever. Will Ophelia’s magnificent son achieve his destiny and bring light into the world? KUIMBA is a spellbinding standalone historical fiction novel. If you like captivating characters, spiritual wonders, and divine fate, then you’ll love Priscilla B Shuler’s religious southern tale. This story is set in the American South 1900s and I enjoyed it quite a bit. The title character is most unusual because he sings throughout the book. That is far from the most unusual thing about Kuimba. Much of the dialogue is heavily accented and that worked well for me because I have heard many southern accents. There is a lot of regional flavors, descriptions of the times, and mores of people who lived then. The other characters play very important parts also. I like the level-headed attitude that so many of them have. I also like how many of them experience drastic changes for the better as a direct result of knowing Kuimba. I award 4.8 stars to "Kuimba"! You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/Kuimba-Priscilla-Shuler-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-kuimba https://www.barnesandnoble.com/kuimba-priscilla-b-shuler You can follow the author: twitter.com/ShulerPriscilla https://priscillabshulerartistauthor.com https://www.amazon.com/Priscilla-B.-Shuler www.facebook.com/priscilla.shuler.33 I have reviewed another book by Priscilla that I enjoyed quite a bit: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/favored Copyright © 2021 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction
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11/7/2021 01:01:36 pm
Thank you SO much for your wonderful review of Kuimba. I feel certain your efforts will enhance the sale of this little novel.
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Mark
11/7/2021 01:40:28 pm
You are welcome, Priscilla. I was blessed and encouraged by your book.
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11/7/2021 02:04:27 pm
Am presently residing in a lovely ‘retirement village’ - Springfield Place, in South Carolina. My husband (of 70 years) is 92 and yet is ambulatory… albeit very slowly. We continue to enjoy the sweet interaction with our fellow ‘inmates’. I do think this fellowship helps keep us alert and viable.
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Mark
11/7/2021 02:20:40 pm
Married for 70 years is quite an accomplishment. Social interaction is an important factor in living a vibrant life.
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11/8/2021 12:28:16 pm
I didn’t even think of writing seriously until after I was 75. Up until that time, I was busy with my family of children and grandchildren and helping in the ‘hands-on’ construction of our initial retirement house… partially begun before my husband left us for his tour of duty to Vietnam. Somehow, at 75 I began to slow down and begin to breathe and considered trying to write.
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Mark
11/8/2021 11:11:40 am
It sounds like you have had an exciting and varied life. Plus, you have fully activated several artistic and crafty skills.
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11/10/2021 11:20:44 am
Honestly, I don’t believe i, myself, would ever have come up with the basic idea of KUIMBA. I must credit my (very artistic) son, Victor, with the idea of an angelic blue-eyed black baby. Vic suggested I end the book with his death at the hands of his nemesis… R.Ed. I could not abide such an ending, so I held that climax about mid way, and entered the world of his murderer. I simply prefer happy endings for all my books. I believe hope lives in love and happiness.
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Mark
11/10/2021 11:36:37 am
I am glad you did what you did with the death of Kuimba. I very much prefer a happy ending also. Surveying the lasting effects of Kuimba on the people around him was a great idea. It does offer hope to many.
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11/10/2021 11:53:33 am
Need I say that Victor designed and executed the cover for the book. In fact he made most of the covers of the novels, except one-FAVORED. He was recovering from an injury and unable to do that one, so I painted the image used in oils on canvas. My editor/formatter used it for that cover.
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Mark
11/10/2021 12:21:51 pm
Victor is quite talented. When I first saw the cover, I thought Kuimba was standing in front of a window with drapes on both sides. A second look clarified that there was a large wing on Kuimba's left. Later, I realized the wing was attached to an angel.
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11/10/2021 01:49:24 pm
Ah… one of the things I enjoy most about writing is attempting to ‘fit’ my characters with names to portray them. When I realized Ophelia was a tall, rather big-boned woman imbued with great strength, Olympia came to mind, but Ophelia suited her better. Marvin, her husband, is a milder individual and I felt his name showed his temperament. I’m probably all wet in these assumptions, but I suppose we writers must start somewhere in our attempt to portray our characters’ strengths and weaknesses any way possible… names are important to me.
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Mark
11/10/2021 01:55:11 pm
Names are very important to authors for a variety of reasons. There are websites that post popular boy and girl names by year or decade that can go back for over a hundred years. That can be very important for writers of historical fiction. I don't think Bambi would be suitable for a Regency Romance. You are doing great with your character names.
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11/10/2021 02:57:30 pm
You know… I THINK I did enter some some sort of writers contest once… as well as I recall, I paid some amount to enter in order to accumulate enough to award to the winner. I cannot recall ever hearing any more about it. Then there was a writers publication containing the word: Train in the title.. (now closed) that had monthly awards for entries. I sent a short story and copped Honorable Mention. That thrilled me no end!
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Mark
11/10/2021 03:33:03 pm
There are a lot of contests out there, many different types and not all of them are on the up and up. Here is one cut-and-paste link to learn more: https://annerallen.com/2019/05/beware-bogus-writing-contests Anne is one of my favorite bloggers, I have links to many of her blogs on my Highly Regarded Blogs page, elsewhere on my website.
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11/10/2021 03:40:31 pm
I was advised to install all my books into KU. I THINK they are all offered via that venue. I do not know IF that helps or not since I know very little on how it’s promoted or used.
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Mark
11/10/2021 04:20:22 pm
Kindle Unlimited is an interesting beast. It offers readers books to read for a monthly subscription price. Authors are paid a fraction of a penny for each page that is read by each reader. If the reader decides to stop reading that book, the author doesn't earn any more from that reader. Amazon used to demand an exclusive multi-month contract to have the book in KU. Therefore, the book could not be placed on other sales platforms for that length of time. Hopefully, you have received monthly deposits from Amazon/KU for all the pages read.
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11/10/2021 04:56:12 pm
On my first book… Two Can Play, I sought out an agent and he was SO kind in working with me trying to correct everything that was wrong. He was finally satisfied and informed me that he would contact me IF he was able to snag a publisher. Meantime I found an editor that I’ve been with for years and she led me to the cheapest route; that of self-publishing through Create Space (now KDP) with Amazon. At some point in time I asked the agent to release back to me Two Can Play - which he did, and then I had Rachel install it into KDP also.
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11/10/2021 05:41:39 pm
FYI You are free to use a video trailer of Kuimba published by Words of Hope and Optimism. It can be accessed via my website.
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Mark
11/11/2021 08:15:36 am
That is a nice video. I would suggest that you replace the YouTube link with the original video file, if that is possible. That way people will stay on your website longer instead of being tempted away by YouTube.
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11/11/2021 05:55:16 pm
From everything I can fathom, KDP is on par with any publisher as far as clarity of print, cover stability, and size. I do know that if it weren’t for the availability of self publishing My novels would never see the light of day simply from the fact I cannot afford the costs attendant upon being published by the big publishing houses. That is, if they even chose to accept my books.
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Mark
11/11/2021 06:10:19 pm
KDP does a good job.
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11/11/2021 06:39:53 pm
There are many books that have ‘stayed with me’ through the years but one in particular seems to surface In my mind ahead of the rest. Vagrant Viking by Peter Freuken (probably spelling his name incorrectly) impressed me through many years. I love all the classics like Magnificent Obsession for one. My favorite author of all time is John Grisham. I’ve read everything he’s written. Was a ‘Mike Hammer’ fan for a while. I love Nicholas Sparks. When it comes to push and shove I think I simply enjoy books as a whole.
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Mark
11/11/2021 07:51:39 pm
I have never heard of that book, of course. What is funny is I am reading a book about vikings right now. Thorfinn and the Witch's Curse by Jay Batista. Set in the British Isles in the 9th century. I am enjoying it. Historical fiction is one of my top 5 genres to read.
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11/11/2021 08:27:11 pm
That’s a difficult concept to wrap my head around. Being a deeply Spiritual woman to begin with, I must believe every endeavor I undertake feeds something inside my psyche. Everything I write is flavored by my connection with my Religious Beliefs.
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Mark
11/12/2021 06:40:50 am
There are a lot of writers like you that suffer from sleep deprivation caused by their muse. Some try to write a few succinct notes, hoping they can understand what their muse was saying in the morning. I know one author that hears from her muse almost every night at 2:30. She keeps a notepad and pen beside her bed.
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11/12/2021 10:31:47 am
I know absolutely nothing about the NaNoWriMo you speak of. Should I be interested?
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Mark
11/12/2021 03:03:09 pm
You did some research and emailed me your thoughts. I agree that it is not a practical experience for you.
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11/12/2021 07:49:25 pm
Not ever having been educated into the different procedures to produce a novel, I cannot declare whether I’m an under-writer or over-writer. Thus far it has taken only one word or thought to prompt my mind toward writing an entire novel. And once I begin with a scene or two, I find sometimes that I must back up to incorporate important points. Once that’s done I’ll ‘catch up’ to where I was and continue.
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Mark
11/12/2021 09:31:05 pm
You have found your way to write and it works for you quite well. Some authors do extreme editing as they write and frequently lose contact with their muse. Their effort to write a perfect first draft is self-defeating.
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11/12/2021 10:49:17 pm
Never used myself particularly in a story, but yes, I definitely used other people as characters... either fully or partially. If authors attempt to write ‘what we know’ how can we not help but write the characteristics of acquaintances into our novels. And as well, incorporate our own selves into our stories by sheer coincidence.
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Mark
11/13/2021 06:49:31 am
You are right. To respond to the suggestion, 'to write what you know' includes all aspects of your environs as you know it. A writer can do little else. I find that writers are good observers of human nature and usually very discreet. People react in different ways to the idea of unknowingly providing a small bit of inspiration for a character and not always in pleasant ways.
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11/13/2021 09:42:00 am
I suppose I ought to take this present novel -KUIMBA, into consideration in attempting to answer this one. Getting into the heart/mind of Kuimba was easy. I loved his innocence. His love for all things and everyone… His recognition of Lucy’s abject love/worship for him.
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Mark
11/13/2021 12:13:02 pm
R.Ed. was a great, despicable character. As you say, his hatred ran deep. He seemed to be afraid of the goodness shining from Kuimba. I think R.Ed. recognized the intrinsic holiness in Kuimba and R.Ed.'s evil nature couldn't stand it.
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11/13/2021 01:12:36 pm
Since I really don’t know the difference between ‘pace’ and ‘flow’, I can’t see how I could control it. My writing comes simply from my thoughts in whatever randomness accumulates to force my hand to record them. I am aware that every so often a thought will be entered that interrupts the meaning of where I’d hoped to go, and I call that phenomenon a ‘snag’ which either needs rewriting or deleting.
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Mark
11/13/2021 01:34:48 pm
Pace has to do with how fast a person reads the story. Short words are good in scenes with a lot of action. Long words will slow the reader down.
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11/13/2021 04:14:04 pm
Routine? This makes me laugh. The only routine my husband and I have is making sure we make it to the ‘Independent Dining Room’ at noon, if we want to eat.
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Mark
11/13/2021 05:19:45 pm
I love that, a life of interruptions! Except the interruptions are important and unplanned. I think we all live a similar life. After I retired we were busier than before. I understand a little bit. I do a lot of things for my wife that she cannot do for herself.
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11/13/2021 07:49:33 pm
The changes to Kuimba that I’ve often thought of was the omission of Richard and Vivienne’s wedding. I really thought deeply about it before I closed it out, but finally concluded such an event might tend to draw one away from the ever-presence of Kuimba. I wanted to keep him ‘alive’.
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Mark
11/14/2021 07:28:49 am
The wedding was quite an affair. It opened the eyes of Richard's father also. If I recall correctly.
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11/14/2021 10:20:25 am
LOLOL. FYI I omitted the wedding Richard because I did not want to interrupt the readers thoughts to that end. I wanted to maintain Kuimba as a vital/vibrant entity.
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Mark
11/14/2021 05:08:59 pm
Obviously, I am thinking of a different event in the book, not the wedding, that wasn't there. I have read three books since reading yours and proofreading.
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11/14/2021 07:10:59 pm
WOW! You are multi faceted! And have a mind that is capable of cataloging multiple themes at one time. How you can do that is amazing. I can barely stay put on doing one thing at a time. In any event. You are very intelligent.
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Mark
11/14/2021 09:51:38 pm
I have been absorbing a lot of this stuff for years. It's nice to let some of it rattle out every once and a while.
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11/14/2021 10:44:46 pm
I use the office 365 Word installed in my Dell computer. It helps greatly because I can write a scene in several different ways and not lose anything. I doubt if I could outwrite Word’s ability to hold any manuscript. I like my ability to write thoughts out to the side so I can come back later and flesh out the ideas to insert where needed.
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Mark
11/15/2021 07:13:08 am
Almost every author uses Word. I use Word also for proofreading. I use the commenting feature for proofreading suggestions. I don't like to make changes to a manuscript beyond adding or subtracting spaces and that only with the author's permission.
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11/15/2021 10:33:13 am
I don’t know if there’s something wrong with my mental processes or not, but really, I never know where I’m headed until I begin to actually write. I have a vague idea that springs from a single word or thought which brings me to begin writing. The word: ‘scrabbling’ was spoken when someone used it to describe playing that particular board game. The word hit my brain like a description of rats playing a game of Scrabble. From there I saw a filthy alley way where there were vermin, feral cats and emaciated dogs scrabbling for food as well as the ragged orphan boy. Hence… RAT. I don’t really know what direction a book will take… except with KUIMBA. I hesitated writing this suggested book because I knew my hero would be murdered. I began without any freedom to follow my mind’s leading. Only until after the murder, was I free to conjure any path my mind found worthy.
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Mark
11/15/2021 12:25:57 pm
Your mental processes are just fine. I think a lot of pantsters write just like you do. Their numbers are legion. You have lots of company and didn't know it.
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11/15/2021 12:58:16 pm
Silence please. Which is ever in short supply in our apartment. Bubba is in an adjacent room with the TV on, or playing games nearby on his computer with their attendant sounds invading my mind. I’ve found the prime time for my writing to be in the ‘dead of night’ (now those words just conjured up a new book awaiting… ).
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Mark
11/15/2021 03:24:11 pm
I think a lot of authors need quiet when writing. Most want to have their own office, many don't. A few have told me they need music playing in the background some say that certain music inspires them for writing certain scenes.
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