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JULU by Jan Anderegg

3/14/2020

85 Comments

 
Amazon debut author, Jan Anderegg, introduces us to her fantasy novel, “JULU”:
There is a magical land just beyond our imaginations called Jirvania; where stories grow. Muse faeries gather ripened “story-pearls” and carry them to writers, musicians, and poets here in our world. In the heart of Jirvania stands The Great Library, where every story is collected by the library’s guardian, Karel. This library is a portal to other times and places where one can step into stories and experience them firsthand. Homework has never been such fun.
When eleven-year-old Jack Lemoine finds an opal dragon egg in Mystic, Connecticut, he discovers the real world is not what he thought.
Dragons, unicorns, faeries, centaurs, and countless others do exist. Unfortunately, so do witches, ogres, goblins, and monsters, and they want Jack dead, yesterday.
It has been prophesied he will one day save Jirvania, with the help of a magical opal dragon, Julu, but evil disrupts time itself, leading to the annihilation of Jirvania, seven years before Jack comes of age. Imagination ceases to exist. Libraries, art galleries, concert halls, and theme parks vanish. Our lives become meaningless and empty.
Jirvania's lone survivor, Karel receives a visitor from the stars, urging him to change the story.
Meanwhile, back in Mystic, Jack and his friend, Mia are thrown into a fantastical adventure when Julu hatches and takes them back in time to protect them.
Through her stories, they learn that family, friendship, and love are the threads that bind us together, no matter who or what we are and hope is often found in the most unexpected places.

Can Karel change the story and save our imaginations?
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I love fantasy almost as much as science fiction and this delightful story incorporates both.
The author has created a fully living world that sits in an adjacent dimension to ours, and we need it so bad. Jirvania is the source of all artistic inspiration in our world and it is under the direst of threats.
I was so enthralled by Jan’s writing, I was reminded of one of my favorite stories, “The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe”.
Jan’s writing is exceptional; her scene-setting is exquisite, every bit is so easy to imagine. The dialogue flows smoothly and the action leaves little to be desired.
While this book is aimed at children, kids of all ages will love it, from nine to ninety.
​I award a score of 4.9 stars to “JULU”. 
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You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/Julu-Jan-Anderegg 
https://www.goodreads.com/julu 
https://www.barnesandnoble.com/julu-jan-anderegg 
 
You can follow the author:
https://twitter.com/Janilou 
https://www.julu.blog 
https://www.facebook.com/Janilou2018 
https://www.facebook.com/JanLucy2017 
 
Tags: sword and sorcery, magic, time travel, dragon, music, poetry, art
 
Copyright © 2020 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction
85 Comments
Jan Anderegg link
3/14/2020 03:31:23 pm

Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Your reference to C. S. Lewis's classic story is high praise. He will always be one of my greatest inspirations. I'm delighted to hear how much you enjoyed this story.
Jan

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Mark
3/14/2020 03:48:34 pm

You are most welcome, I can't think of any other books I have said that about.
First question.
Please, tell us more about yourself. Perhaps something a little bit beyond your bio.

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Jan Anderegg link
3/14/2020 04:37:15 pm

More about me: I live in rural Iowa on a small acreage with my husband of twenty years. Our children (his, mine and ours) are all grown up, some of them with children of their own. I love being a grandma and we spend as much time as we can with our children and grandchildren. We raise gaited horses for a hobby. We have two dogs, (a cocker spaniel and a beagle) and quite a few farm cats.
I was born in New York; I lived in the United States, then England, Spain and Australia before returning to the United States in 1995. I think traveling to other countries is a wonderful experience everyone should have if possible. Good people are the same everywhere.
I work full time with people who have mental and/or physical disabilities, which I enjoy, but writing is my dream job. I love to read. C.S. Lewis will always be one of my greatest inspirations, but I enjoy many other authors' work.
I'm a big kid at heart, which is proven every time I vacation at Walt Disney World. There I can soak in the fantasy and act my 'real' age which is around nine or ten. :-)
My favorite quote is - "No act of kindness, no matter how small, is ever wasted," by Aesop (620 BC.- 564 BC)

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Mark
3/14/2020 04:49:12 pm

Wonderful, we have much in common, apart from horses. Gaited horses are quite interesting. They remind me of Olympic-style speed walking, which is something I have done in the recent past. I grew up on non-working farms, something I treasure. I have been to Europe several times, enjoy traveling immensely and returning home even more.
We returned from Disneyland last Monday late, it was so much fun!
New questions.
Does your work have any influence on your writing?
What inspired you to write this book?
Why did you choose this genre, or do you feel the genre chose you?

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Jan Anderegg
3/14/2020 06:19:47 pm

My work has inspired me to write some short pieces on the struggles faced by people with disabilities. Acceptance being one of the biggest issues. My experiences with these people certainly find their way into my stories.

The inspiration for this book came to me in the middle of the night. I woke up with the words, "Julu, write her story," ringing in my head. It was such a powerful moment, I got up, scribbled down the word, 'Julu' on a piece of scrap paper, and went back to sleep. I recall thinking, "Who is Julu?" Within a few days, I began to write. To my amazement, the story was far more intricate than I could have imagined. For me, it's like watching a movie in my head. I write what I see. If I get it wrong, my characters are quick to point out my errors. It keeps me humble. :-)

Which brings me to the answer to your third question. This genre chose me. It never felt like a choice, but I embraced it with enthusiasm. When readers of Julu tell me they want to live in Jirvania, the magical land in the book, I say, "Me too! I'll meet you in The Great Library for a hot cocoa!"
Like you, I love reading fantasy and science fiction and delight in immersing myself in those worlds through reading great stories from many authors. Best of all, I can visit all of them right from my own book.

Mark
3/14/2020 06:38:16 pm

I know one author who keeps paper and pen beside her bed, she is woken regularly at about 2:30 in the morning by her muse; it's when she gets most of her ideas.
Your fans are very glad you accepted the assignment with enthusiasm, I think you have other genres within you also. I would love to visit The Great Library also.
New questions.
Who designed the cover of your book? Feel free to drop a link if appropriate.
What do the elements on the cover represent?
Were the character names difficult to develop?
How did you choose them?

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Jan Anderegg
3/14/2020 10:20:41 pm

My book cover was designed by Evelina Valieva. She will also be designing the cover for 'Jirvania,' the second book in the Julu series. Check out her Facebook page here:

https://www.facebook.com/AngelBiker7

The cover showcases some of Jirvania's beautiful lands, including the lighthouse that shines over the western shore.
Jack and Mia are seen riding the opal dragon, Julu.
Lulana, the star lady holds the precious gift of hope in the form of the dragon, Julu's egg.
A muse faery hovers over them all, carrying a 'story-pearl' she has harvested and is taking to her writer.
Evelina did a wonderful job bringing my story to life on the cover. The cover was recently nominated for AllAuthor's Cover of the Month contest, and made it all the way through to the final round.

One of my pet peeves with reading some fantasy novels is when the character's names are so difficult to pronounce, it detracts from my enjoyment of the story.

I was careful to be aware of this when choosing names for my characters.

I spend a lot of time looking through lists of names on the internet, paying attention to the meaning behind a name.

Sometimes characters would enter my mind, as if introducing themselves. I would write down the name, and wonder who they were?

One such character was Angelique Isabella Carita. I had no idea what her role was at first, but she soon revealed herself to be a major character.

I also had a lot of fun 'interviewing' some of the main characters on my blog - julu.blog. It's amazing what you can learn about a character by interviewing them.

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Mark
3/14/2020 10:38:19 pm

I love the cover, composition and color are quite pleasing to the eye, with much to see. Congratulations on being a finalist.
Names that are hard to pronounce can be a problem, I just make it up as I go along, as necessary.
That is very cute, how you meet the characters, appearing out of nowhere implies you have a strong connection to Jirvania. The interviews sound like fun.
New questions.
This is your first book on Amazon. Have you written others, that are published elsewhere or unpublished?
Have you entered any writing contests?
Have you won awards of any kind for your writing?

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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 08:25:13 am

Years ago, I wrote a romance suspense novel, titled, To Catch Pegasus. It was not published. Before that I wrote a short fictional story about caring for the elderly. This was published in The Australian Nurses Journal.

About 10 years ago, I joined an online writing community called “FanStory” and wrote regular short stories on that site. I won ‘Short Works Author of the Year’ twice on that site, where my user name is ‘Janilou’.

I have won two ‘Seal of Quality’ awards for my writing, and multiple writing contests on the FanStory site. One of my personal favorites, ‘All Dressed in White’ is available on my blog with a posting date of April 5th, 2019.

I’m also working on a science-fiction/fantasy novel, Silverback. Early chapters are showcased on my blog.i had to put Silverback aside to finish Jirvania, as it was too difficult juggling both sets of characters and very different worlds in my head at the same time. :-)

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Mark
3/15/2020 10:00:40 am

Congratulations! I suspected that you had been writing short stories, it's good practice for longer work. All that previous work has brought growth to your writing and maturity to your voice. There may come a time when you want to pick up that romance novel and polish it, that is a popular genre.
Silverback sounds interesting to me, as those are my favorite genres.
New questions.
JULU is not in Kindle Unlimited, why is that?
Have you ever gone through the query process, seeking an agent or submitting directly to publishers or did you go straight to indie publishing, and why?
How did you pick your publisher or did they pick you?

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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 10:30:41 am

A good question. I'm now looking into getting Julu added to Kindle Unlimited. Great idea.

When I finished To Catch Pegasus in 1998, I did attempt to find an agent. What I found instead were a few con artists, who made a lot of empty promises. Personal issues arose preventing me from pursuing further efforts at that time. The manuscript did win first place at our local country fair.

When I finished Julu last year, I'd decided to self-publish. I researched several Indie publishers and finally settled on GateKeeper Press.

Reviews from other authors were very positive. I've had an excellent on-going experience with them. They provided an excellent quality service and I retained all rights to my work. This was very important to me.

Going forward, I'm open to the options of seeking out a publisher or agent for my future work.

Mark
3/15/2020 10:54:01 am

KU puts authors into a bit of a strait jacket, consider it carefully. It's a tough choice going wide or seeking possible increased reader base.
There are a lot of scammers seeking to lighten the wallet and purse of as many writers as they can. I just posted a link to one of my favorite blogs, Writer Beware, about another scammy publisher.
As far as I am concerned keeping your rights is critical to future earnings and stability. You have many different rights to exercise, including plays, graphic novels, movies, large print, TV series, streaming series, and audio books (which are exploding world wide). These can also be exercised in foreign countries as well, because many different countries use English as the language of government and commerce, or as a second language taught in schools. You chose wisely.
New questions.
What, if anything, is your publisher doing to market your book?
Why did you have your book traditionally published instead of self-publishing?
How do you think your book compares to a book published by a major publisher?

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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 03:40:49 pm

GateKeeper Press is an Indie Publisher. My reason for not going with a traditional publisher was more about my lack of knowledge in being able to prepare the book for submission to a publisher. Lucky for me, Gatekeeper Press helped me with that. Gatekeeper Press works with all of the major eBook and print distributors (including Amazon and Barnes & Noble) as well as library wholesalers.

Most of the marketing is left up to me as the author. I recently read that even traditionally published authors are expected to do a lot of the marketing for their book.

I'm very happy with the physical appearance and quality of the book. Gatekeeper Press uses quality paper which gives a polished appearance to the end product. I was able to choose between glossy and matte finish for the cover. When I didn't care for the matte finish from their printer, they were able to change it to a different print company used by Amazon. The end result was great.

The most challenging part of self-publishing has been editing. I'm determined to provide a polished product. When errors are found, I alert the publisher and they correct them, sending me updated pdf, epub, and mobi files to check over. The corrections are then submitted and the book is updated.

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Mark
3/15/2020 04:30:20 pm

Gatekeeper sounds like they were very helpful for you.
Unless your name is King, Rowling or one of several dozen other top authors, you are mostly on your own for getting the word about your book out. With a million books being published annually, on Amazon, that is quite a tide to fight against, to get noticed. Many blogs have been written about marketing, I have links to some good ones on my Highly Regarded Blogs page; there are also some good guest blogs on my website.
One thing I suggest to authors is pursue the local author angle, whenever possible. Seek out the local media, where you live. Local newspaper publishers, cable access TV, college and high school media programs sometimes offer TV or radio access. Don't forget about approaching tourist spots in your town. Get some fold-flat, cardboard, counter holders for your book keep a few in your car with a box of books. Place a picture of the cover inside the holder so you can be contacted when they sell out. Places like restaurants, museums, flea markets, B&Bs are good places to begin. Ask the person in charge if they know any other places that might buy or place your book on consignment. Have a wholesale price in mind for these institutions. Your book would do well in public or school libraries also.
Self-editing requires a particular kind of mental rigor, I recommend techniques such as reading aloud, reading in reverse, paragraph by paragraph, putting the manuscript away for several weeks or a couple of months, fresh eyes are so useful.
New questions.
There are many unethical practices in publishing, which one is the most unbearable in your mind?
Why is it important for writers to tap into the emotions of the characters?
Have you ever done NaNoWriMo?
What kind of preparation do you do before NaNoWriMo starts?

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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 07:32:47 pm

Unethical practices in publishing - I'd have to say contracts that take over the rights to the author's work, forcing them to stay with that publisher.Also promising a quality product and then using inferior (cheap)materials to print the book.

The emotions of the characters bring them to life for me. How can you write about them, understand them if you're not tapped into their emotions? I heard P.L. Travers once told someone she did not create Mary Poppins. Mary Poppins just arrived.

As human beings we are all connected by our emotions and I want my readers to feel connected to the characters in my story the same way.

I had not heard of NaNoWriMo until today. I am now a member and look forward to interacting with other writers there and exploring all the site offers.

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Mark
3/15/2020 08:18:35 pm

I agree, the theft of rights is right at the top of the list. Their is so much earning potential to be realized through the exercise of intellectual property right.
I already mentioned audio books, and you already have JULU in an audio book. Now, getting international distribution is the next challenge for you, because a large percentage of people in the world speak English and look for audio books in English.
Like so many countries in Africa, Nigeria uses English as the official language of business and commerce. With well over forty million people online in that country, most people use their phone for that access. Audio books are very popular.
That is a great line about Travers. Mary Poppins is so much fun. I also like the movie, "Saving Mr. Banks". The movie was well written and acted.
I am glad I could introduce you to NaNoWriMo.
New questions.
Are you an under-writer or an over-writer? When the first draft is done, do you need to add more to flesh it out or do you have to cut material because there is too much?
Are you talking about sentences, paragraphs or a chapter that didn't survive the final cut?
Did you cut mostly descriptions, action, dialogue or whole chapters?
Do you save the parts that didn't make it into the final version?

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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 11:21:23 pm

Definitely an over-writer. One of my favorite quotes is:

"There's no such thing as good writing, only good re-writing,"
Robert Graves.

I'm inspired daily by that quote.:-)

When I wrote the original manuscript of Julu, it was about 20K words longer. I went through it looking for paragraphs or sentences where I'd repeated myself and tried hard to thin out anything that didn't seem to flow well, or was unnecessary to move the story forward.

So I cut words, sentences, and sometimes an entire page. I don't think I've ever cut an entire chapter.

I didn't save the parts that didn't make it after completing the manuscript. I wish I had because now I've forgotten what they were. I find myself wondering if I could have used them in the second book.

The edits were mostly repetitive description or dialogue.

Mark
3/16/2020 10:35:36 am

I think over-writing is easy for many writers, because the thoughts are hard to organize in the first draft or the desire to share the results of research are so much fun to share, all of it. The first draft exists primarily to get the story out of your head, it's supposed to be a piece of crap.
It seems to me you made every word earn its place on the page, everything should move the story forward. Most readers don't have the patience to follow a story that meanders and is unsure where it's going.
New questions.
Do you prefer dialogue tags or action beats in your books?
What do you do to flesh out the characters for your stories?
Have you ever used yourself or other acquaintances as a character for a starting point in a story?
Would they recognize you or themselves in the story?

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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 11:17:53 am

Do you prefer dialogue tags or action beats in your books?

I prefer action beats. I like to see what the character is doing and let their action explain their feelings/emotions. I do use dialogue tags, but the "show, don't tell" works best for me.



What do you do to flesh out the characters for your stories?

The more I write about them, the more apparent their character strength and flaws become. This is another reason I love to sit down and interview my characters on paper. It's amazing what you can learn about them.

Some characters continue to surprise me. For example, in the sequel to Julu, I never expected a particular character to turn to the "dark side" and possibly betray everyone she loves.

When I wrote Julu, she made a comment that gave me an inkling there might be more to her than I realized - kind of like "Oh, no, she wouldn't." I refused to believe it. I was wrong.

Have you ever used yourself or other acquaintances as a character for a starting point in a story?

The character, Emma, is based on a young friend of mine, by the same name.


Would they recognize you or themselves in the story?

Several of my grandchildren have requested to be added to the story. I asked them who they wanted to be?

A mermaid, a mermen and a dragon entered the story as a result.


I've had family members ask me if a particular characters is based on them? That surprised me, but apparently they recognize themselves there.

They have also asked me if I am a particular character in the story. No, but we have shared some of the same experiences.

I'm happy to go visit Jirvania as Jan, the author. I know they'd welcome me. :-)

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Mark
3/16/2020 11:50:03 am

I agree with you about action beats over dialogue tags, some authors go to extreme lengths to avoid repetition in dialogue tags. It can get awkward and allow many more adverbs into the story than are needed.
I love the idea of interviewing the characters. Even the bad girls and guys are the hero in their own story.
I think many people worry about being in a book, when they know an author. Especially, if the character is less than savory.
I don't think it's possible to develop a character completely separate from the author, because the characters are an extension of the author's imagination.
New questions.
If you used a close friend or family member in a book, would you tell them or make sure that they wouldn't recognize themselves in the story?
Which is more fun to write, the protagonist or the antagonist, and why?
What is one thing you hate about your protagonist and one thing you love about the antagonist?

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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 01:58:31 pm

If you used a close friend or family member in a book, would you tell them or make sure that they wouldn't recognize themselves in the story?

The family members who make appearances in this story already know who they are and chose their character. Part of the fun of writing fantasy fiction!

Confession - there is a character in the book based on someone I once knew. A very unpleasant character in the book and in real life. Only two people know who the character is. I have no contact with that person, but would never tell them.


Which is more fun to write, the protagonist or the antagonist, and why?

I have trouble with antagonists. I'm the person who leaves the movie theater if a preview comes on with violence/horror ...anything gruesome.

So I have to shut my eyes when I write scenes where my antagonists are being cruel, wicked or evil. ;-)

I find it much more fun writing about my protagonist.

What is one thing you hate about your protagonist and one thing you love about the antagonist?

Difficult question to answer. Truthfully, my protagonist is a child and I don't hate anything about children. I'm far from perfect, and I don't expect him to be either. It's actually encouraging to watch him develop as a person and learn about life.

What do I love the antagonist?

His narcissistic personality and arrogance. I love the fact he thinks he knows everything and is above everyone else in the universe. Because, in the end, it will be his undoing, which means imagination everywhere will be saved!

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Mark
3/16/2020 02:17:58 pm

I never thought about letting family members pick their characters. I can see how that might be fun for all involved.
I am not a fan of horror or extreme violence. I do like a good action movie, most of the time the violence is somewhat sanitized.
Your antagonist is very full of himself, no doubt. That makes him more fun to follow and his fall more enjoyable. We all love a story where good triumphs over evil.
New questions.
What is your writing routine when you sit down to write?
Do you write in a straight line or do you write whatever the muse provides for you at a given moment?

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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 05:12:02 pm

Right! Me too on the action movies. Now, to answer your questions:

What is your writing routine when you sit down to write?

I become totally immersed in the action going on when I start to write.

Often I will have a scene playing in my head, and I know I need to go start writing it down. I have a writing room I can retreat to and an understanding husband.

But I usually try to write when I have 'alone time' to avoid feeling as if I'm not participating in family life. That can be challenging. I'm more likely to get up early in the morning and write before the sun rises.

I avoid writing when I'm tired. I make enough editing errors when I'm wide awake.

Do you write in a straight line or do you write whatever the muse provides for you at a given moment?

Most of the time I write in a straight line. But, there are times when another part of the story keeps bugging me, and I do have a couple of chapters written that haven't yet been slotted into my latest manuscript.I realized recently one of them may actually belong to Book 3.

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Mark
3/16/2020 05:43:02 pm

I am an early riser also, I like to get a certain amount done before the day gets going.
I don't do any proofreading in the last hour of my day, I reserve that for reading books.
You might enjoy a guest blog elsewhere on my website, written by Rick Hall, it's called non-linear writing. I think it's pretty useful.
New questions.
Which is more important to a story pace or flow? How do you control it?
Now that your book is published, is there anything about it you would like to change?
How do you think your book relates to the world we live in today?

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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 07:21:22 pm

I will certainly check out that blog. Sounds very interesting.
Now to answer your questions:

Which is more important to a story pace or flow? How do you control it?

The pacing of the story is important. I read through my chapters and imagine being a first time reader of the story. I try to keep in mind how I've felt when reading different books where I found the pace too slow.

Of course, so is the flow and again, I think of books I've read and how this affected my reading enjoyment. I keep a lot of notes about different scenes and events involving characters and the plot itself.

Now that your book is published, is there anything about it you would like to change?

I have made changes since the book was published, adding the foreword at the beginning, and character list at the end. It's also been edited quite a few times to correct errors. I want a polished story.

Apart from that, I'm happy with the book and the story it tells. Every time a reviewer or reader says they're eagerly awaiting the publication of the second book, Jirvania, I feel even happier with Julu.

How do you think your book relates to the world we live in today?

Interesting question. I believe we human beings haven't changed as much as we think over the ages. Researching quotes to use at the beginning of each chapter gave me the sense that the qualities of kindness, understanding, compassion, and our struggles to find purpose in our lives are ageless. A piece of advice given in 400 BC can be just as relevant today as it was back then.

I believe the messages in Julu do relate to people of all ages today, although I do believe, at the moment, I'd really rather live in Jirvania, than here, in The World Beyond. :-)

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Mark
3/16/2020 08:05:47 pm

As you said, pace and flow are at the discretion of the author. That is very true. Just like the director controls out every shot and camera angle in a movie, so too does the author in the book.
You are right, humans are much the same as we were thousands of years ago. We have the the same or similar desires as our ancestors.
New questions.
What else are you writing these days? Are you writing anything for yourself or only for readers?
Do you have a classical author or poet, you admire?
What popular modern authors have influenced you?

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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 07:32:36 am

What else are you writing these days? Are you writing anything for yourself or only for readers?

I've been writing the last chapters of the sequel to Julu. I have another novel, Silverback, waiting for me to finish Jirvania.

I'm not sure there's a distinction in my mind between writing for myself and writing for readers. Whatever I write, I'm always writing first for myself, but always hoping other readers will enjoy the work too.

Interesting question though, because it was suggested on social media yesterday that people begin keeping a journal of their experiences of the current Covid-19 epidemic. That sounded like a great idea and I think I will do it. That writing would be for myself. :-)


Do you have a classical author or poet, you admire?

I loved Classical Studies and English in high-school (a few decades ago lol) and read Homer, F..Scott Fitzgerald, Jane Eyre and Ernest Hemingway. I also loved books by Jack London, and of course C.S. Lewis. I admire them all!


What popular modern authors have influenced you?

One of my favorite modern authors is Karen Lynch. Her "Relentless" series books are a great read.
I happily admit to being a fan of Harry Potter and J.K. Rowling, as well as John Green's books and Diana Gabaldon's Outlander series.

There are so many authors whose work I love to read. In a way, they all influence me, giving me inspiration. I feel a sense of camaraderie with other authors. We can never have too many books, too many stories. There's room for them all at The Great Library.

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Mark
3/17/2020 10:46:38 am

Some authors write things only to please themselves, they don't publish those works. I like your point of view, if it pleases the author it will probably please the reader also.
Yesterday, I posted a blog link about how journaling can help creativity keep flowing, break through writer's block, in other words. There are some good ideas there.
In high school, I only had interest in sci-fi and fantasy. I read through the LOTR three times, before graduating.
New questions.
What software do you use to write and publish your books, and why do you use those?
How do you keep track of all the characters and events in your books?
Are you a plotter, a pantster, or a hybrid?

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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 11:40:54 am

I will definitely check that blog link out. Always looking for more information about creativity in writing. The last time I suffered from writer's block, I cured it by writing a short humor piece about offering up my writers block for sale. Now to the questions:

What software do you use to write and publish your books, and why do you use those?

Although I can use a computer quite well, I don't know how to format or prepare a manuscript. For Julu, once I had completed the book, I used a word-processing program (Open Office) to submit the manuscript to the publisher. They took it from there and turned it into a pdf file etc.

Since starting the second book, I discovered two sites I really like. The first one is Hemingway.com and the second is ProWritingAid.com

With each chapter, I start with Hemingway, make corrections, then copy into ProWritingAid. Apart from catching the usual spelling errors or grammar issues, that program has a comprehensive analysis section I utilize to find over-used words, sticky sentences, glue words, pacing, sentence structure etc.

I also post each chapter on FanStory.com to receive feedback from Beta readers. My reasoning is that no matter how 'polished' each chapter might be, unless readers enjoy and can immerse themselves in the story. I'm wasting my efforts. So far, the beta readers are loving it.

How do you keep track of all the characters and events in your books?

For each story I write I have several huge pieces of white poster board. One is for the family trees of characters and how they relate to each other.

The other is for different plot ideas and how they relate or flow into each other.

I also keep a list of characters names, relatives, dates of birth, marriage etc


Are you a plotter, a pantster, or a hybrid?


A hybrid.

I like to think I'm more of a plotter, but my characters would disagree. They have a way of taking the story and running in a completely different direction than the one I plotted or planned.

I'm like, "Wait, I thought..."

They're quick to inform me that they have it all under control, so don't argue, just write what I 'see' happening in my mind's eye.

I keep notebooks and write out different plot ideas as they come to me. This gives me a general idea of where the story is going.

But it's kind of fun to be surprised by the twists and turns!


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Mark
3/17/2020 12:35:25 pm

You are welcome. Those links cover many different topics pertinent to almost all authors at one time or another.
You have a good system, Hemingway and Prowriting have helped you polish your manuscript. But they are not replacements for a good editor or proofreader, as you know. They are good to use before using a human, but the human will find things they miss.
The white boards are good ideas.Having those visuals available certainly helps to keep things straight.
I would be a plotter, if I wrote. I think your flexibility has served the story well.
New questions.
Do you listen to music or have the TV on when writing, or do you need quiet?
Action, dialogue, or narration; which is easiest to write?
Of the five senses which is the easiest to write and which is the hardest?

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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 03:02:08 pm

Yes, absolute truth. It amazes me how much they do miss, despite what they find. Human eyes are a must!
To answer your questions:

Do you listen to music or have the TV on when writing, or do you need quiet?

I need quiet. Not absolute quiet as in it doesn't bother me if I can hear distant noise through the closed door of my writing room. But I find music (as much as I love listening to music other times) distracts me. So it's me and the sound of my fingers tapping the keyboard. LOL


Action, dialogue, or narration; which is easiest to write?

Great question. I had to sit back and really think about it. Action is the easiest for me, followed by dialogue.

Narration is challenging. Trying to find the balance between relaying story information but not boring the reader. Wondering if I need to narrate, or whether I should be using dialogue or action to move that part of the story along?

Of the five senses which is the easiest to write and which is the hardest?

Sight and smell are the easiest for me. Sound isn't too difficult either.
Which leaves taste and touch, right?

When I think about it, it's more about remembering to give them all a place in the story. Being aware of all the senses of a character as they move through a scene. Using them without overdoing it. It's a balancing act for sure.

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Mark
3/17/2020 04:37:56 pm

When personal computer word processors first came on the market, spell check was an amazing thing. I thought it might put me out of a job. It didn't take too long before I realized I had nothing to worry about. Even with AI starting to write books and music, I am still not worried.
I can read almost anywhere. Proofreading requires a fair amount of quiet, although I do listen to our daughter's YouTube videos for hours at a time. Sometimes our granddaughters are in the videos and I enjoy it as background.
You are so right about the balance of narration, it is crucial; and invisible to the reader when done well.
The more senses an author can bring into the story the easier it is for the readers to engage with the story.
New questions.
Have you ever done any theater, written a play or any screenwriting?
Do you think your experience, if any, in theater has helped you as a writer?

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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 05:59:46 pm

I agree with the need for human eyes. It amazes me how three different people can read a chapter, and find completely different edits needed. I'm very glad for your skills in proof-reading and editing.

Grandchildren are the delight of my life, along with my husband and my adult children. :-)

Have you ever done any theater, written a play or any screenwriting?

Not since high school (1970's) but I loved it. Being in plays and also writing plays which I did for our senior class.

Do you think your experience, if any, in theater has helped you as a writer?

Even my limited experience was a benefit. I've never forgotten the audience's delighted reaction (and it was a tough crowd being high school peers) to our presentation. It taught me a lot about immersing yourself into the role you are playing, and for me, that relates to writing as well.

Those were easy questions. :-)

Mark
3/17/2020 06:42:05 pm

Glad you enjoyed the questions.
I have recommended to authors to take a course in screen writing or play writing, to gain a different angle on the process of writing a book, to emphasize the visual aspects.
When I read a well-written book, such as yours, I am totally immersed. I can read anywhere, blocking out all of my environment influences.
New questions.
What kind of marketing are you doing or planning on doing for your book?
What kind of marketing has worked the best and the least for you for this book?
Speaking of marketing, why did you pick me to help promote your book?

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Jan Anderegg
3/18/2020 08:44:43 am

What a great idea. I will look into it.To answer your questions:

What kind of marketing are you doing or planning on doing for your book?

I have tried various methods of promoting my book. I took copies to all my local libraries. I have left copies in airports, hotels etc. I paid for reviewing services. I have approached local businesses about carrying my book.
I started a blog, and paid for online promotions.

What kind of marketing has worked the best and the least for you for this book?

After trying several paid services who guarantee reviews (and let me be clear - this service does not guarantee positive reviews) over time, I have found the most effective ones were Online Book Club, and Booktasters.

I love this service of review and promotion you are offering and consider it to be the best value for money I've spent so far.

Reviews are so important. They are also the most difficult thing to get. I continue to look at different promotional services.


Speaking of marketing, why did you pick me to help promote your book?

I read good things about your promotion and I really needed someone who has the skills you do with proof-reading and editing.


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Mark
3/18/2020 12:53:00 pm

You are doing many of the right things. I have lists of book bloggers and promotional services on my Twitter home page also. Perhaps you will find those useful also.
Reviews are so hard to get for every indie author. So many readers do not leave a review.
Thanks for choosing me.
New questions.
How did you know when your book was finished?
How long does the research process take before you start to write a book or do you do the research as you write the book?
How long did it take you to write the first draft?

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Jan Anderegg
3/18/2020 04:45:53 pm

You are most welcome! I'm thrilled that I chose you to review Julu. Your review is now the top one to show up on Amazon's page for Julu.
To answer your questions:

How did you know when your book was finished?

I had a very clear idea where I wanted this first book in the series to end. While I was writing the final few chapters though I kept thinking of additional information that I felt needed to be included. As a result I had to split the two final chapters into four chapters.


How long does the research process take before you start to write a book or do you do the research as you write the book?

Research is one of my favorite parts. I did research before starting. I looked all over the United States for a small-town feeling place to have Jack and Mia start their adventure. I finally settled on Mystic, Connecticut. Not only was the name perfect, the town felt right. I could see the people of Mystic being open and accepting of their celebrity neighbors, the Lemoine and Silverwater families.

Even though the story left Mystic quickly, I feel a connection to that seaside town, and look forward to visiting them one day.

The majority of the research was done while writing the book. Whether I was writing about fictional characters known to readers from other writers, or historical figures, I wanted to be as accurate as possible. I found it fascinating to delve into the lives of Benjamin and Mary Anne Disraeli and how they were viewed. I was fascinated by Benjamin Disraeli's books and their take on life and love.

Funnily enough, I stumbled upon them by complete accident (or was it fate?) one day while researching Queen Victoria's time for information about what children wore in that era.

They quickly became a very important part of the story, and Jack's personal development. They didn't reappear in book two, Jirvania, except for a brief mention.

But I have a feeling they may still have some part to play in 'Journey' (working title for book three) and I hope they do.

I find historical research fascinating, which might come from being the daughter of a history professor. :-)



How long did it take you to write the first draft?

About a year from start to finish. Book two, Jirvania, is at about eight months and counting!


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Mark
3/18/2020 04:56:06 pm

Some authors, particularly pantsters, don't always know the ending when they start writing; you are quite fortunate in that way.
If I were to write fiction, I think I would write the last chapter first, so I could have plenty of foreshadowing and hints included along the way.
Very interesting how you learned about the Disraelis and how important a role they had in JULU.
New questions.
How many drafts did you go through to have a ready-to-publish manuscript?
Do you belong to any writing groups?
Are there any writing groups for the genre you write in?

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Jan Anderegg
3/18/2020 09:39:59 pm

All interesting questions!

How many drafts did you go through to have a ready-to-publish manuscript?

The latest version of the Julu pdf is #17
It was published after the third draft, but each time editing errors or other issues were found, I had the manuscript updated. I believe I have the dubious honor of having the most edited manuscript at GateKeeper Press post publication. LOL

Do you belong to any writing groups?

I wish I did. My day job keeps me so busy, I don't have enough time to be in any right now.

Are there any writing groups for the genre you write in?

I'm sure there are. Fantasy and Science Fiction Fantasy are my main genres.

Mark
3/18/2020 09:56:44 pm

Quite an honor, said no author ever. On the bright side, it is published and very clean.
For many authors, the size of the manuscript partially dictates how many drafts are needed. I know a couple of authors that use their spouse as an alpha reader, for the third draft, then another draft or two provides something for the beta readers. The more the merrier. If the author is in a critique group that can count as a draft. Then to an editor. A couple more rewrites then the omega reader gets it, such as me, the polishing proofreader. With good planning, each draft gets to sit for a few weeks, before the author does any self-editing. But it doesn't always work that way for new authors. Your results and mileage may vary. A really long book, well over 150 k words may require more drafts and more time. In many ways, more time is really important, because our brains lie to us when we have been reading the same thing dozens of times, it doesn't show the simple errors like missing words, multiple words and common misspellings that are missed by a spell checker. The weeks away from the manuscript lets the memory fade and the author can bring fresh eyes to the book.
A virtual critique group might be in order for you, such as a few author friends on your favorite social media platform. You all could trade chapters around.
New questions.
How early was it that you realized how powerful words can be?
A lot of new authors struggle with finding beta readers. Because, after the first draft is done, fresh eyes and feedback become very important.
Do you have alpha-readers and/or beta-readers to help you smooth out a lot of wrinkles before publishing? If you don’t, why?

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Jan Anderegg
3/19/2020 12:58:34 pm

Great thoughts on the editing process. I am determined to deliver the second book for publication in a much more polished state.


How early was it that you realized how powerful words can be?

I was one of the lucky ones. My parents read to me from the time I was a very young child. I grew up loving to read. I was ten when I wrote my first chapter book about a wolf pack. Sadly, that 'original' was lost in one of our moves. I don't remember much about it except that there was a complex list of different wolf characters. LOL

I continued to read all through my teenage years and adulthood. Books of all kinds, except horror.

When I began writing as an adult, I was thrilled to see how much my work could inspire and entertain.

A lot of new authors struggle with finding beta readers. Because, after the first draft is done, fresh eyes and feedback become very important.
Do you have alpha-readers and/or beta-readers to help you smooth out a lot of wrinkles before publishing? If you don’t, why?

I do. I'm lucky that my immediate family members and a few close friends are willing to be brutally honest alpha members. Knowing they really do care about the final product helps a lot. My teenage daughter has helped me a great deal with understanding today's teen culture when writing my sci-fi fantasy, Silverback. Would you believe the internet isn't always correct when it comes to how teens talk, think and act in the 2020's? :-)

Beta readers - yes. I have a few friends who are willing to read chapter by chapter. I also use the online site FanStory.com to post chapters. This does attract some "fluff" reviews which are worthless in the sense of improving my writing, It also brings some very dedicated people who will tell you what works, what doesn't, and also find errors I missed.

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Mark
3/19/2020 01:30:34 pm

That story about wolves sounds interesting. I am reviewing a book with wolves as the central characters of the story, next week.
I was very fortunate like you, my mom read to me a lot as a child, I learned to read before entering the first grade and relatives sent me books as gifts for many years.
You're quite lucky in regard to alpha and beta readers. So many authors have trouble connecting with the readers they need. For those that are not so lucky, I have lists on my Twitter home page, one of those lists is for people who will do beta reading.
One of my granddaughters is 11 and 3/4, she is writing a fan fiction book in the Harry Potter world. Her writing is quite good, we have been copy editing it, as she reads it to me.
New questions.
At what stage in your writing process do you bring in the readers?
Do you give them an e-version like a PDF or a hard copy you printed?
What kind of questions did you ask them to get the feedback you wanted or do you let them provide feedback without particular questions?
Do you reward the alpha/beta readers in any way particular?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/19/2020 02:33:33 pm

How exciting for your granddaughter! I have a feeling she will have a fabulous career ahead of her in writing.

At what stage in your writing process do you bring in the readers?

As I've written more novels, it's become earlier and earlier. I had alpha readers for Jirvania and Silverback from chapter one.
It really depends on the preference of the alpha or beta reader. Some prefer to wait until they can read multiple chapters. Others prefer to read chapter by chapter.


Do you give them an e-version like a PDF or a hard copy you printed?

Again, I let them choose. Some prefer hard copies, others are happy with pdf files.

What kind of questions did you ask them to get the feedback you wanted or do you let them provide feedback without particular questions?

I do ask questions. How does it flow? Does the conversation sound natural? Do you think this person/character would have reacted like that? Or like this?

Does it drag in any places? Is it boring? Is it exciting?

I'm happy to receive voluntary feedback too.

One beta reader explained to me the difference in the way two men might interact in a conversation compared to the way two women might interact. Not surprisingly, being female myself, I had my male character responding like a woman might respond.
With his advice, I changed the conversation, and it worked so much better! Much more realistic.

Do you reward the alpha/beta readers in any way particular?

With warm hugs and grateful smiles - at least that is what I give my family members.

My writing website group FanStory.com - I usually try to return the favor and make sure I go to their work, and review it for them.

I have given signed copies of my book to those who helped me out also.

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Mark
3/19/2020 02:47:06 pm

Thanks, I agree. She seems to have a good eye and pen.
Those are good questions, your readers are serving you well.
A signed copy of the book is a nice gift also.
Kudos for you returning the favor on Fan Story, also.
New questions.
Do you have other writers you connect with, as in a critique group or support group?
What is the most important thing you learned from publishing your latest book?
What are three things, that you wish you knew before you wrote your first book?
Do you have a hero, real or fictional?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/19/2020 08:57:22 pm

Thanks!

Do you have other writers you connect with, as in a critique group or support group?

I would love to be involved in a local writer's group, be it critique or support group. Perhaps after this Covid -19 crisis is over, I will have to look a little harder around my local area and find one.
For now, the FanStory people, and also #WritingCommunity on Twitter are my go-to supports!

What is the most important thing you learned from publishing your latest book?

Self-editing doesn't work.

What are three things, that you wish you knew before you wrote your first book?

Self-editing doesn't work.

Promotion (lots of hard work on the author's part) is crucial to getting your book out there in front of readers.

Reviews are like gold and harder than hens teeth to acquire.

Do you have a hero, real or fictional?

Wow. That's a tough question. I have quite a few.

Real - People who are kind to others even when nobody is looking.

Oskar Schindler

Abraham Lincoln

C.S. Lewis

Walt Disney

I could go on and on. :-)

Fictional -

Atticus Finch

Sara Grey and Jordan Shaw - both female characters in Karen Lynch's Relentless series - one of the best Y.A. series I have ever read.

Emily of New Moon

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Mark
3/19/2020 09:09:05 pm

No question, self-editing is very hard. The fresh eyes, or lack thereof, is a huge problem for many authors. They are too close to their book. Putting it away for weeks, or even months can be very helpful. Also, reading it aloud is a technique I recommend. Reading it backwards, a paragraph at a time can be useful. Even switching to a different font and using colored paper can be helpful to the self-editor. It takes a particular mental rigor, such as pretending it's not your book, works for some.
Good list of heroes. I especially like the first one.
New questions.
Do you write notes by hand or on the computer?
What is the hardest part about writing books for children?
What is the most valuable piece of advice you have ever received from another writer?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/19/2020 10:46:06 pm

Great ideas for self-editing!

Do you write notes by hand or on the computer?

I do write a lot of notes by hand. Mainly because when ideas come to me, I'm not usually sitting at my laptop. Then the trick becomes trying to make sure I transfer them to my Scrivener program where I keep a long list of notes for future chapters.

What is the hardest part about writing books for children?

It's not hard really. What's important? Being real. Even more than adults, kids know when you're not being real. Write at their level, but don't write "down" to them, if that makes sense. Being age appropriate is very important of course. I don't use swear words in my writing. I don't like them anyway and I don't think they prove anything.


What is the most valuable piece of advice you have ever received from another writer?

Write what you know. Research what you don't.
If you get stuck, write ten words.

It works. :-)


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Mark
3/19/2020 11:04:30 pm

I have gleaned some of those ideas from other authors.
I didn't know you use Scrivener. I have heard it has a steep learning curve.
Life experiences can provide a lot of background material as well as some unique ideas.
Writer's block plagues many. For some new authors, I think they get distracted trying to produce a clean and wonderful first draft that the muse or inspiration gets lost in the shuffle.
Writing anything can be all it takes to start the flow again. Even if it's nonsense.
New questions.
You have published a number of books. You are writing more. Are you writing anything strictly for your own pleasure, not necessarily planning to publish it?
What are common traps for beginning writers?
Do you think a strong ego is an asset or liability for a writer and why?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/20/2020 01:36:37 pm

I do use Scrivener and it does indeed have a steep learning curve. I'm certain I'm not using it to its full potential. I do like it. I hope to learn more about it as I use it.

Now to your questions:

You have published a number of books. You are writing more. Are you writing anything strictly for your own pleasure, not necessarily planning to publish it?

I don't think I can separate the two. I love writing. I love creating stories. If I enjoy it, chances are other people would also enjoy it, and it seems shallow to write just for my own pleasure. And perhaps that's it exactly. The bulk of the 'pleasure' I gain from my writing comes from seeing or hearing of its positive effect on other people. That feedback is what brings the true joy of writing. In a way I feel as if I'm paying forward the enjoyment I've had over the years reading other author's stories.

What are common traps for beginning writers?

Not listening to constructive critique. Not realizing that no matter how much you think you know about writing, there is a lot more to know.

Becoming discouraged by the above.

Don't be discouraged. Keep working on polishing your work. Keep writing.

Do you think a strong ego is an asset or liability for a writer and why?

I don't have one, so I'm not sure. LOL What I do have (or so I've been told) is a strong will, and I think that's important. That's what keeps me determined to keep going, even in the face of negative feedback. Not to say I can't learn from negative feedback, as long as it's constructive. Some is not, and it's important to learn the difference.

One of the most encouraging articles I ever read was about famous authors who were told they couldn't write and famous best-selling books that received terrible reviews.


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Mark
3/20/2020 02:06:51 pm

Enjoying your own writing seems like a good indicator that others will enjoy it also. I think you are onto something there.
The book that everyone loves has not been written. Every book has an audience, those who love it; by extension, every book has a non-audience also. You are right, the negative review can contain useful information. I tell authors to celebrate the first real negative review, skip the trolls, because that review validates all the good reviews. Now people know those good reviews are not written just by your mom and her cats.
I think your strong will is an aspect of a strong ego, an author has to be prepared for a lot of rejection, especially if the author is seeking traditional publishing. With your strong will wonderful and unique stories will get written.
New questions.
Can you describe the demographic of your ideal reader? Who is the person most likely to buy your book?
Do you have anything you consider to be your writing lucky charm?
What is the biggest obstacle you face in writing?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/20/2020 06:09:28 pm

Thank you. :-) Now to answer your questions:

Can you describe the demographic of your ideal reader? Who is the person most likely to buy your book?

I'm lumping these two questions together. :-) This is a tough one. I have a "fan-base" of ten-to-twelve year olds, another one of young adults, more readers in their forties, fifties and sixties and a few in their eighties.

Older teenagers seem to be the most un-likely readers, but that doesn't worry me. I think of what C.S. Lewis said.

“Some day you will be old enough to start reading fairy tales again.”
― C.S. Lewis

I write what I would have loved to read when I was growing up. It seems to appeal to kids age 9 to 90. :-)

Do you have anything you consider to be your writing lucky charm?

In my writing room, I have a set of shelves. Those shelves hold knickknacks or keepsakes of days, times or vacations I have spent with my precious family and friends.

Every time I look at those shelves, I am reminded of wonderful times spend in good company. It's inspiring. So I guess I would consider those items my good luck charms. :-)

What is the biggest obstacle you face in writing?

TIME

If I could clone myself, I'd be doing a lot better. I work at my day job 60 to 75 hours a week.

Some days I get up early to write. Other days, I write in my breaks at work, like right now.

Days off are my golden opportunity to write, if real life doesn't get in the way.

I think I need to move to Jirvania.

Then I could write to my heart's content! :-)

When I'm not busy exploring other books that is, or chatting to other authors from different centuries, or visiting the story fields to see how the latest story-pearls are developing, or playing chess with a water spirit, or watching the diamond fireflies or ...

On second thoughts, I'd better stay here.

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Mark
3/20/2020 06:22:26 pm

I love that quote from Lewis. Appealing to so many groups is a wonderful thing. Your fan base is broad. Fantasy is a very popular genre. It's my second favorite, almost tied with sci-fi.
Your souvenir shelf is a nice inspiration.
So many of us struggle with time. Even retired, I am extremely busy doing what I love, reading and proofreading.
New questions.
Do you struggle with writer's block, if so, how do you overcome it?
Do you see an advantage of writing under a pseudonym, why or why not?
If you branch out into a different genre, will you use a pen name, why or why not?
Are there any issues that are peculiar to writing this genre that might not apply to other genres?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/20/2020 07:35:49 pm

That's great! Sounds like the perfect retirement!

To answer your questions:

Do you struggle with writer's block,

Not often, and never for very long.

if so, how do you overcome it?

I sit down and start writing about anything. It works every time.

Do you see an advantage of writing under a pseudonym, why or why not?

I do see the advantage of writing under a pseudonym - if your intended reader audience is very different than what you've written in the past.

If you branch out into a different genre, will you use a pen name, why or why not?

I might. It's something I've considered. :-) Why? For the reason I gave above. Plus it would be kind of interesting to see if people's responses were different not knowing who you were.


Are there any issues that are peculiar to writing this genre that might not apply to other genres?

I am very aware of not using certain words or language in the Y.A. fantasy genre. I'm also very careful not to be too graphic in descriptions of violent events. Interestingly, I was listening to the audio book of "Prince Caspian" today by C.S. Lewis. He writes vivid descriptions of battles and even of deaths but does not become gruesome. I like that.

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Mark
3/20/2020 08:02:53 pm

There is at least one author who writes in several genres, with a different pen name for each. She seems to be successful, she has landing pages for each genre that redirect to her main website where all the genres and pen names are gathered together. Fans can remain within their favorite genre or explore the others. I bet she is hoping for crossover.
I think hitting the keyboard is a good way to overcome writer's block. For others, a simple mindless task is in order, such as folding clothes or raking leaves. I know at least one author that swears by taking a shower, another that jumps on a bicycle for a long ride. There are many causes and cures for a missing muse.
Good writing is not always gruesome, like you, I shy away from gruesome horror.
New questions.
Are there any writing styles or genres that you disliked at first but soon came to like?
Do you think reading, watching movies or listening to music help you be a better writer?
At this time, do you read books for entertainment or just research homework?
What type of book is your favorite guilty pleasure to read or listen to for fun?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/21/2020 10:08:43 am

All great ideas! To answer your questions:

Are there any writing styles or genres that you disliked at first but soon came to like?

I've always read many different genres, and writing styles. Never met a good book I didn't like. ;-)

Do you think reading, watching movies or listening to music help you be a better writer?

Yes, without a doubt. I love reading, watching movies, listening to music and listening to audiobooks. I feel like I'm being immersed in creativity.

At this time, do you read books for entertainment or just research homework?

I read for entertainment. Even when I'm researching, I enjoy it. But I read because I love reading stories and being immersed in other worlds and realities.

What type of book is your favorite guilty pleasure to read or listen to for fun?

Great children's stories! I think its because my mental age is around nine or ten. LOL

Mark
3/21/2020 10:23:46 am

I like that point of view, immersing yourself in creativity of many kinds sounds like a great way to keep the muse happy.
We both love reading. Sci-fi is my favorite genre, but a well written book is a pleasure to read regardless of the genre.
I think there is a part of us that never grows up. The inner child always lives and you make sure she is happy. Well done.
New questions.
Have you ever read a book that changed the way you look at writing?
Do you think that a writer needs to read books, why or why not?
What hurdle did you face in writing this book and how did you overcome it?
Would you agree or disagree with the statement: suffering is a requirement to be a good writer, and why?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/21/2020 12:01:07 pm

Thanks, Mark. :-) I do love well-written sci-fi books. To answer your questions:


Have you ever read a book that changed the way you look at writing?

Just one? Every time I read a new author; or a new book by an author I've read before, I feel as though I'm seeing writing through new eyes.

Do you think that a writer needs to read books, why or why not?

Yes, absolutely. The Catch-22 (another great book) is that if you don't love to read, writing well is going to be far more difficult. Being told you need to read probably won't work in that case.


What hurdle did you face in writing this book and how did you overcome it?

Finding a good indie publisher was one hurdle. Research and reading reviews was the way I overcame it with good results.

Actually finishing the book. Wrote until it was done.

Editing, editing, editing. I'll let you know when I overcome that hurdle.;-)

Would you agree or disagree with the statement: suffering is a requirement to be a good writer, and why?

Is there a human being alive who hasn't suffered in some way? It's a side-effect of life. I don't completely agree we should only write what we know, especially in the fantasy and sci-fi genres, but our experiences help bring our writing to life.

Suffering is inevitable. What we do with it, and how we move on is what really matters.

If my writing brings happiness, joy and love to others, then my life experiences have been worth it.

I believe I am a better writer for the experiences I've gone through. I'm not sure everyone has to suffer to be a good writer. But I'd be willing to bet most good writers have.

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Mark
3/21/2020 12:14:14 pm

That is a great comment! Each book is like seeing writing through new eyes. That makes a lot of sense to me.
Finishing the book is a tremendous achievement. There are so many people who think about writing a book at some point. Not many actually make the attempt. Of those, many don't get past writing a few pages, perhaps a couple of chapters. Not very many of those actually complete a first draft, then they don't know what to do next, they know it is terrible and it gets shuffled into a drawer or file and forgotten. Doing all the editing and rewriting is accomplished by a small percentage of those in the first group.
Suffering is a fact of human life. That common bond and how our characters prevail are a major part of what makes a great story. We want to have a happy ending, it gives us hope.
New questions.
What were your intentions or your goals when you wrote this book?
Do you feel you were successful in getting that message across to the reader?
Do you ever brainstorm with non-writers and if so, is it effective?
What was the best money you ever spent as a writer to enhance your career?

Jan Anderegg link
3/21/2020 01:55:11 pm

I love happy endings. In fact, when there is a terrible ending to a fiction book or a series, I won't read that author's work again. I often say if I wanted to read about a tragic, horrific ending where everyone dies, I will pick up the newspaper.

So, to answer your questions:

What were your intentions or your goals when you wrote this book?

I wanted to write a book children (and adults) would love to read. A book where they could escape the real world for a while and enjoy being somewhere else. I wanted the reader to feel as if they were right there, participating if you will, in the story.

I also wanted to open people's eyes to the vast amount of amazing and incredible stories and books out there. That's one of the reasons for the quotes at the beginning of each chapter.

We aren't so different these days as we think we are. Read people's thoughts from hundreds, or thousands of years ago and discover that their trials, their thoughts, their ideals etc are the same as we have today. There is so much wisdom to be found in the reflections of people who lived long ago.

I wanted to encourage people to look for opportunities to be kind, to be open-minded and caring. To understand we are all human beings and that kindness, unconditional love and hope are the glue that holds us together.

Hand-in-hand with that goal, my intention is to write well enough, and sell enough books to be able to write full time for a living. The more people my stories can reach, the more people who get to enjoy them, the more opportunities I will have to do good on a larger and larger scale.

Do you feel you were successful in getting that message across to the reader?

It would appear so, reading the majority of reviews that Julu receives.

Do you ever brainstorm with non-writers and if so, is it effective?

Yes, with fellow human beings! They are a precious asset to any writer.
After all, it's not just the writers who will be reading the book. Very effective getting people's ideas and thoughts about the story. One of my clients has suggested ideas or characters to improve the story. As a result I have included some of them. Which is great, because now when I read that part, I think of that person's input and smile with gratitude.

What was the best money you ever spent as a writer to enhance your career?

Paying for your editing and promotional service, closely followed by the Online Book Club review service.
Also, paying the extra money to have the cover of Julu drawn by a professional artist.

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Mark
3/21/2020 02:14:26 pm

I agree with you about happy endings. I usually read a book to the end, there has only been a couple of times in the last 10 years that I didn't finish a book. One was a psychological thriller that was depressing me, the other was a YA thriller that had a dozen or more errors on every age.
True, people are the same now as hundreds, even thousands of years ago. Our activities have changed, but not our basic desires.
I like how the feedback from a non-writer was helpful for you.
Finding those mistakes was free, they just interrupted the smooth flow of the story for me. I am only one small part of marketing that an author must pursue if they want to get their book in front of lots of people.
Having a great cover can make a big difference. People do judge a book by it's title, cover and blurb. Those things are critical to getting sales.
New questions.
With the explosion of different streaming services, these companies are scrambling for content. Writers are going to be sitting on the top of the heap soon, because they are content providers. Have you considered shopping your content to these companies?
An ebook is only one form that writing can be consumed in. Have you considered licensing large print, graphic books, plays? Good on you for having an audio book available!
Have you looked into foreign markets? Many different countries use English as an official language or a second language. Big Bad Wolf is a company that sells English language books all over the world in the millions.

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Jan Anderegg link
3/21/2020 04:44:00 pm

Well, I appreciated it very much! I've answered your questions below, with a few of my own. :-)

With the explosion of different streaming services, these companies are scrambling for content. Writers are going to be sitting on the top of the heap soon, because they are content providers. Have you considered shopping your content to these companies?

I have not. I probably should! Do you have any more information? Which companies?


An ebook is only one form that writing can be consumed in. Have you considered licensing large print, graphic books, plays? Good on you for having an audio book available!

Julu is available in paperback and hardcover, as well as ebook and audio book. I will certainly look into the other formats because I'd love to make it available to more readers. How do you license large print, graphic books and plays?


Have you looked into foreign markets? Many different countries use English as an official language or a second language. Big Bad Wolf is a company that sells English language books all over the world in the millions.

Another fabulous suggestion.I haven't yet, but will look into this also. I did notice recently I have a couple of reviews on Amazon in India, but they read the English language book. Again, I want to make Julu available to as many readers as possible. Thank you!

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Mark
3/21/2020 05:17:32 pm

For all of those questions, start with your publisher. These are all separate rights that can be licensed. If you publisher is not equipped to handle these different formats, ask them if they know of someone who is.
If that is a total strikeout, search the blogs on my Highly Regarded Blogs page, all of these issues are addressed by different bloggers in different ways.
Two reviews from India is great! I didn't even mention translating your book into foreign languages. Right now it's fairly expensive, AI is going to make it cheaper in a relatively short period of time. A human will still be necessary for polishing in that language.
Each language has its own set of licensing possibilities also. Getting wide distribution is critical.
New questions.
Do you subscribe to any magazines, newsletters, blogs or podcasts that enhance your writing career? Feel free to share as many as you would like.
What are your favorite reference books or websites for grammar and writing?
Have you ever created a throw-away character that developed into a major player?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/21/2020 06:31:00 pm

Awesome. Thank you. I will check those sources.

To answer your questions:

Do you subscribe to any magazines, newsletters, blogs or podcasts that enhance your writing career? Feel free to share as many as you would like.

I just joined NaNoWriMo. I continue to love the FanStory.com community, where there's the opportunity to post work for review, and lots of different chats and discussions going on.
I enjoy the Twitter writing community.

What are your favorite reference books or websites for grammar and writing?

I tend to look for everything I need online. ProWriter, Grammarly, Hemingway, are all great sites I use.

Have you ever created a throw-away character that developed into a major player?

Oh, yes. Helgi was the first one. I had no idea she would be anything but a two scene character. As you are aware from reading Julu, her role became crucial to the story. That was quite the shock.

Another one was Isabella. Or to refer to her correctly, Queen Angelique Isabella Carita of Frösön, Sweden. I had no idea of her role when I first penciled her into the story.

That is one of my favorite parts of writing. When the characters take the story and run with it. Some days it's a challenge trying to keep up! :-)

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Mark
3/21/2020 06:49:57 pm

I am glad you joined NaNoWriMo, I bet you will have fun with it.
Helgi and Isabella are both important characters in JULU. I am guessing they will be back in Jirvania, but perhaps smaller roles. I love hearing about the characters that sneak in and grab center stage!
My main reference book is The Chicago Manual of Style, 17th edition. It is a monster, but it covers so much ground; if you can find what you are looking for. I have four book marks in the book now. It's so very useful for a person doing what I do.
New questions.
Do you ever put a story aside and come back to it at a later date; if so, how long before you return to it?
Why do most authors write in 3rd person POV instead of first and second POV?
Do you think you were born to write or did you have to learn the craft?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/21/2020 07:38:58 pm

I can't wait to go take a look!

Do you ever put a story aside and come back to it at a later date; if so, how long before you return to it?

Oh, I do, but I hate it. Right now, I had to put my "Silverback" manuscript aside (eighteen chapters in) to focus on finishing "Jirvania" and it's driving me to distraction. The problem was that they are very different stories and it was too difficult to focus on both storylines at once. My characters tend to pop into my mind with suggestions, comments and ideas. You can imagine how confusing that can be in two different worlds!

Why do most authors write in 3rd person POV instead of first and second POV?

Great question. I have written in 1st person POV but found it challenging but fun. I love reading stories in 1st person POV especially The Relentless Series by Karen Lynch. I think it's also fun because you can tell the same story more than once from another character's POV and get a completely different perspective.

2nd person POV is fun in books like the "Choose Your Own Adventure" books. Yes, I admit it. I've read some of them and had a great time choosing! LOL

Which leaves 3rd person POV. Why? Perhaps it's easier, for the writer? Less challenging for the reader? I really don't know the answer.

Do you think you were born to write or did you have to learn the craft?

Both. I've been writing since I was a child, and wrote my first "book" when I was eleven. I love writing as much as life. And I've certainly had to learn and I'm still learning how to write. :-)

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Mark
3/21/2020 08:07:01 pm

I enjoy reading stories in first person also. There is definite sense of intimacy when you are seeing everything through another person's eyes.
Head hopping can be a real problem with that POV. One book I read a few years back devoted each chapter to a different character's POV. Alternating the chapters between two characters moved the story along quite well.
I have heard that golf is the game you can never win, only get better with work. Writing is much the same way, it seems to me.
New questions.
What did you buy with your first royalty check?
How did you celebrate when you published your first book?
How many times did you rewrite the first page, the first chapter of this book?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/21/2020 10:18:23 pm

Yes, there is a greater sense of intimacy in 1st person POV. I will write a book in 1st person POV one day. It will be challenging and fun. I've never played golf, only mini-golf. That's fun even though I will never be a pro even at mini golf. I'm glad I chose writing and not golf.
Now, to your questions:

What did you buy with your first royalty check?

I spent it buying more copies of Julu to give to libraries and other places like children's hospitals and a couple of homeless shelters. Truth. I like to leave copies in airports, amusement parks and restaurants too. Not at the moment of course.


How did you celebrate when you published your first book?

I don't recall doing anything in particular, but I will never forget the feeling of holding that first published copy in my hand.

How many times did you rewrite the first page, the first chapter of this book?

So many times. I know as a reader how crucial it is to pull the reader into the story as soon as possible. I wasn't happy with it at first. Then I added the prologue and suddenly it worked. I probably re-wrote it at least ten times.

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Mark
3/22/2020 11:11:38 am

Giving copies of your book to places where children will be is very nice. Especially hospitals and homeless shelters. I have no doubt you have touched the hearts of many and kept the flame of hope alive.
Holding the first copy of your book has to be an amazing feeling. I can only imagine it's close but not equal to holding your first child.
I have heard of editors trashing the first chapter or two of a book, so it starts with real action and grabs the reader.
New questions.
Do you have a “favorite” filler word or two that you have to keep taking out of a story, like “just” or like “like”? 😉
What was the earliest experience that made you realize that you could influence and change lives with the power of writing?
Do you have any Easter eggs hidden in your stories that only close friends or family members would recognize?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/22/2020 02:11:08 pm

What fun questions! Here goes:

New questions.
Do you have a “favorite” filler word or two that you have to keep taking out of a story, like “just” or like “like”? 😉

Just "just" mainly. LOL
It's just amazing how many times I have to pluck that word out of my writing! ;-)

What was the earliest experience that made you realize that you could influence and change lives with the power of writing?

I was a student nurse in Australia back in the late 1970's. I spent some of my summer time working in a nursing home and didn't like the way some nurses treated elderly residents. I wrote a short story about it, and submitted it to the Australian Nurses Journal. They published it, and people spoke to me about the positive effect it had on them.

Do you have any Easter eggs hidden in your stories that only close friends or family members would recognize?

Oh, yes, I do. I have a dear friend who has a famous father. He and his wife are in the story, as well as my friend and her family members. She chose the names for the characters. Her father has not yet read the book. He's in for a surprise. LOL

Some of the comments Beau's parents make are based on some very dear friends of mine. They alone would recognize the reference. At one point Mia makes a comment that would bring a smile to their faces from a memory of long ago.

Then there are also those few moments only people who are very familiar with a particular author might recognize, such as the evening a troubled Karel goes through a door into a book in The Great Library, to talk to and gain advice from someone he admires greatly. There are some clues in the room's setting. I don't allow Karel to mention his real name, but the character says, "Call me Jack, all my friends do..."

Even though these references, especially the personal ones, might not mean anything to 'outsiders', they don't detract in any way from the story. To me, Easter Egg hunts were always so magical and fun! :-)

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Mark
3/22/2020 02:32:44 pm

Hidden eggs are fun, it sounds like the are as much fun to weave into a story as learn about them. Well done.
One of the criticisms about modern medicine is the impersonal nature of it. Medical professionals are taught to keep some emotional distance, stay objective. Some people carry that too far.
New questions.
Do you believe that a good book will sell itself?
Do you think good marketing can overcome the limitations of a mediocre book?
What is the biggest myth about writing that would help aspiring authors?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/22/2020 08:08:14 pm

That is exactly right. Great questions!

Do you believe that a good book will sell itself?

I used to believe that. Sadly, I learned that it doesn't appear to be true. I'm not only talking about my book. I've read other absolutely fantastic books that are having trouble getting sales.
If a book doesn't get enough reviews, it's sales are limited, unless the author is able to do other marketing or knows someone famous who promotes the book.

Do you think good marketing can overcome the limitations of a mediocre book?

A mediocre book will remain a mediocre book, even if good marketing results in amazing sales. I started reading a series by an author who appears to either not exist, or who is completely secretive about her identity. There was so much filler in the stories, they quickly became boring. Yet, they sell, sell, sell. Go figure!

What is the biggest myth about writing that would help aspiring authors?

When you publish your book, be prepared to spend money, and a lot of time marketing your own book. Even if you have a great story or a good non-fiction book, you are the one who needs to do the work. It's actually almost more work than writing the book itself. But it can be fun!

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Mark
3/22/2020 08:31:38 pm

Before Amazon, I think it was possible for a good book to sell itself. It might start slow, but eventually it would pick up steam.
So much filler in a book, it's really hard to understand.
The myth about marketing is very true, even with a traditional publisher. Many won't even talk to an author unless they have a mailing list numbering in the thousands. That represents guaranteed sales to the publisher. Honestly, they run on such narrow margins now, the competition is so tight; many of the large publishers are gone. Another effect of the Amazon apocalypse.
So many authors struggle with marketing, it's the opposite of writing a book, the first draft is a solitary project. Marketing requires getting out in public, literally and virtually, to sell a book.
I agree, marketing can be fun. I have always enjoyed it, I like to help people. That is how I look at it.
New questions.
Some authors go to great lengths to get inside the heads of their characters. Some create a biography, find photos that match the picture in their head, fill out psychological profiles. What do you do in that regard, if anything?
Where would your work be if you didn't have real people to base characters in your writing?
Do you have any problems when writing about characters of the opposite sex, why or why not?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/22/2020 09:14:27 pm

Yes, that mighty Amazon river is hard to navigate!
To answer your questions:

Some authors go to great lengths to get inside the heads of their characters. Some create a biography, find photos that match the picture in their head, fill out psychological profiles. What do you do in that regard, if anything?

I do not fill out psychological profiles or find photos, although I do have a clear image on them in my head. I do have a note book page for each character with physical characteristics, important facts and family connections. I find that helps as the story progresses, especially with more minor characters. It would never do for them to have brown eyes in one chapter and green eyes in the next!

Where would your work be if you didn't have real people to base characters in your writing?

Very few of my characters are based on real people, although many of them are a combinations of people I have known. Even the ones who are based on real people tend to take on their own personalities in the story.
Most of them are themselves, if that makes any sense.

If I didn't know any real people, I probably never would have started writing.

Do you have any problems when writing about characters of the opposite sex, why or why not?

Not really. I'm lucky to have had friends who can guide me in different aspects of characters of the opposite sex. It's been educational for sure!

Mark
3/22/2020 09:30:31 pm

Having a clear picture in your head is worth a lot.
I love how your characters become their own self. As long as you start with a mashup of characteristics you will be fine, no one will be offended that you made their "character" do something they didn't like.
Besides the cultural differences between the sexes, there are some less than obvious physical differences. Male brains have less connection between the two hemispheres than female brains. This partial severing occurs during gestation, certain male hormones are responsible this. It allows men to have a greater amount of focus on one thing, to the exclusion of all else. Like so much of life, this is a double-edged sword.
New questions.
How do you balance the demands on your time as a writer with personal relationships?
Do you have any other passions or creative outlets to pursue if you didn't write?
Is there a cause you are passionate about?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/22/2020 10:37:04 pm

Great! I love the new questions. Here goes:
How do you balance the demands on your time as a writer with personal relationships?

It's challenging, even when you have an understanding husband as I do.
I allocate time to write, and time to spend time with my husband. We both work long days, so sometimes this can be difficult. He is self-employed as an electrical contractor. If I'm home I will often go on his service calls with him. In fact, we just returned from a local call for a farm family who had no water.
So when do I have a chance to write? Usually either late at night or early in the morning. If I do have a day off and don't go along to work with hubby, I can sometimes get a few good hours of writing done.

I do believe it's important to balance your time.

Do you have any other passions or creative outlets to pursue if you didn't write?

Oh, yes. I love to sew. I love making jewelry - in fact, I made quite a few 'Julu' charm bracelets after Julu was released that are a replica of Mia's bracelet in the book. The children and grandchildren, and their friends love them.
I love to read and listen to audio books. I spend time each day meditating - this is something I only discovered in the past year. Now I wonder why I never did it before.
My husband and I raise gaited horses, and ride. We have taken our horses to South Dakota and Colorado to go riding, as well as riding around our local area and adjoining states.
We also love to travel and visit museums and historic sites.
I also happen to have a love of chickens and raised them for years. I quit about three years ago, but I've really missed them. Just yesterday, hubby brought home some hatching eggs. Time to fire up the incubator and hatch us some new baby chicks.
As you can tell, life is never dull around here. LOL

Is there a cause you are passionate about?

Yes. Paying it forward. I'm a huge believer in giving back to humanity. I donate money to different causes, but my biggest passion is sponsoring children through Compassion International.

I sponsor five children.

Laura lives in Brazil. Ablam and Kibayou live in different parts of Africa. Dulce and Atziri live in Mexico.

I love the quote:

“A hundred years from now it will not matter what my bank account was, the sort of house I lived in, or the kind of car I drove... but the world may be different because I was important in the life of a child.”
Forest E. Witcraft (Teacher, Scholar)

It's a wonderful feeling to know you are making a difference.


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Mark
3/22/2020 11:27:07 pm

How shocking, I held an electrical license also, low voltage for HVAC. Electricity is weird, you cannot see it, only its effects. You cannot measure voltage when it is flowing, only when it is not. You can measure current when it is flowing. I have never understood how AC and DC can flow in the same wire at the same time.
Sorry about my mini-rant.
I have trouble with audio books. They are so slow, I lose focus. If I can speed them up, then it's okay. I do love them though.
My wife and children all give back, now the oldest granddaughters are doing the same at 11 years old. Very proud of them.
I love that quote, it is very true! So many are keeping score of the wrong things.
New questions.
What type of scenes do you find hard to write and why?
What did your family say when you announced your desire to be a writer?
What do they think now?

Jan Anderegg link
3/23/2020 08:54:46 am

Electricity is something I leave to my husband! LOL
Great to hear how your children and grandchildren give back. Especially your 11 year-old granddaughter. She will know great joy in life as a result I am certain.

To answer your questions:

What type of scenes do you find hard to write and why?

I had to think about this one. Writing never really seems hard. The ones I have to give the most thought to are probably the scenes where I feel they are crucial to the story, but not action-packed. I don't want to bore the reader. I often go through and read a chapter out loud after I've written it to see how it flows, or how it feels to listen to.

What did your family say when you announced your desire to be a writer?

They were supportive. My dad who is in his eighties is one of my biggest fans! LOL He is a retired History and English professor who has degrees from Oxford and Harvard Universities. When I was growing up he would often critique my work and believe me, that wasn't easy going. He pulled no punches. LOL. So I was a little nervous (understatement) when I first sent him a copy of Julu to read. He loved it and actually said it reminded him of Hemingway's writing. He has since put a lot of effort into promoting Julu in Australia where he lives with my step-mother (my mother died in 2004). He still teaches part time working with young adults who need tutoring. He recently gave Julu to a young lady who "hates" reading after convincing her to read just the back cover blurb. She is now reading it and loves it.


What do they think now?

I think I already answered that. LOL My husband also tells everyone about my writing, and has continued to promote 'Julu' whenever he can.
Even my adult children love it.

My granddaughter (12 years old) regularly contacts me for more copies. I think she has half her school reading it. :-) She makes a great promoter!

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Mark
3/23/2020 09:58:35 am

I have recommended reading difficult sections aloud for a long time. It's one of many ways to detect errors and poorly worded phrases.
It's not hard to imagine you were quaking in your boots when you sent the book to your dad. That is quite a compliment to be compared to Hemingway. That was a great trick your father used, just read the blurb. I love it.
Your granddaughter is very persuasive, she will make a good saleswoman. No matter what career she pursues, there are always customers.
New questions.
Have you ever killed off a character unwillingly because it fit the plot?
With sequels, how do you handle the wishes of readers compared to your original ideas?
What will you do differently with this next book, in terms of publishing, if anything?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/23/2020 01:09:55 pm

She shows great potential! ❤️
To answer your questions:

Have you ever killed off a character unwillingly because it fit the plot?

Not yet. It may be happening in ‘Jirvania’ and I don’t like it at all.
With sequels, how do you handle the wishes of readers compared to your original ideas?

I always listen to readers and their ideas. Quite often their wishes can be written in. Not always but I try!

What will you do differently with this next book, in terms of publishing, if anything?

The next book is going to GateKeeper Press. I’m considering releasing my other novel ‘Silverback’ , the sci-fi fiction fantasy directly through KDP. I haven’t quite made up my mind yet. Lol

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Mark
3/23/2020 01:49:07 pm

I think it must be easy to get attached to characters, it makes sense to me that killing one off might be hard. It impacts me as a reader, when that happens.
Continuity for your fantasy series is important. I think it will serve you well to finish the series with the same publisher. A boxed set always looks so nice sitting on the shelf.
New questions.
Is there any particular time of the day that ideas usually hit you?
Is it hard or easy to connect with your muse, why do you think it is that way?
Do you proofread and edit your own books or use a professional?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/23/2020 02:46:43 pm

Great point. I’m fairly certain there will be at least three books in the Julu series and it would be wonderful to have a boxed set sitting on a shelf!
Now, to answer your questions:
Is there any particular time of the day that ideas usually hit you?

Not really. I’ve had ideas come to me at all times of the day and night. Even when I’m sleeping!

Is it hard or easy to connect with your muse, why do you think it is that way?

Easy! She’s great. Her namesake appears in the book actually as someone else’s muse, even though I’m not that character by any stretch of the imagination. Lol
Of course, she spends a lot of time in Jirvania harvesting story pearls for me, so it’s like having someone on the inside. ;-)

Do you proofread and edit your own books or use a professional?

I did with Julu. Never again or at least never again without also adding some professional editing as well.
It seems near impossible to edit your own work. Not sure why but it’s probably something to do with the way our brains work. :-)

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Mark
3/23/2020 03:25:20 pm

I know an author, a client, that regularly gets her best ideas at night, specifically at 2:30 am. She keeps a pad and a pen on her nightstand. She wishes her muse lived closer. Another author told me her muse meets her in the shower and she was so frustrated, not being able to write the ideas down. I told her to get a pad with waterproof paper and a Space pen, it writes underwater.
A steady supply of story pearls must be wonderful.
It's good for an author to do as much self-editing as they can. There is a limit for most authors, effective editing requires fresh eyes. Many authors don't want to put their book away for two or three months at a time. That is also why having a number of beta readers and critique partners can be so valuable.
Last questions.
What are the three most important considerations for an independent author to be certain of when self-publishing?
How do you convince readers to write a book review?
What are your thoughts on bad book reviews?

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Jan Anderegg link
3/23/2020 08:56:38 pm

Great advice. I'd much rather put the book aside for a few months, and come back to it, then have to be finding errors for months or years after publication.
Hard to believe I'm about to answer the last questions. It's been a great week. I've really enjoyed it.

What are the three most important considerations for an independent author to be certain of when self-publishing?

That you are using a publishing company that will provide you with a quality end product and allow you to retain your rights to your work.

That you have a book that's ready to be published. Some of the work I've seen from other indie authors was not ready.

How do you convince readers to write a book review?

Let me get back to you! LOL I wish I had the answer to that golden question! I have paid for honest reviews, I have given away books asking for reviews. Many promise. So few follow through.
I have written some short blog pieces on how crucial it is to leave reviews for books you read.
I also review other author's books as much as I can. Because I believe in Karma!


What are your thoughts on bad book reviews?

This is what I tell myself.

Some of the people are not going to like your book. Some will have genuine reasons for giving a bad review. And some people are mean-spirited and unkind.

I read the bad reviews and look for things I can improve on if they exist. Sometimes they don't make a lot of sense. One reviewer spoke of things they didn't like in my story that weren't even in the story. Sigh.
Once I received a two star review. The comment said the book is wonderful and everyone should read it! Go figure!

Don't let bad reviews discourage you. You cannot possibly please everyone.

Thanks, again, Mark. This has been a blast! Can't wait to do it again with my next book, Jirvania!
Jan

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Mark
3/23/2020 09:08:06 pm

If an author is not self-publishing, then protection of Intellectual Property rights are paramount, as we have discussed already. There are so many of them to license. Action figures and bobble-heads are a couple more items that can be licensed.
Your experience with reviews, or the lack of reviews mirrors that of so many others. A very small percentage actually leave a review.
You are so wise about many aspects of the writing business.
I have thoroughly enjoyed catting about your writing and publishing journey. I love your book and look forward to reading Jirvania.
Thanks again for spending so much time with me these last few days.

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Jan Anderegg link
3/23/2020 09:51:51 pm

It’s been absolutely delightful. Lots of fun. I can’t wait for you to read Jirvania! Hoping the world will have won this war against the terrible Covid-19 corona virus by then. Stay safe!




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