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Amazon debut author, Jan Anderegg, introduces us to her fantasy novel, “JULU”: There is a magical land just beyond our imaginations called Jirvania; where stories grow. Muse faeries gather ripened “story-pearls” and carry them to writers, musicians, and poets here in our world. In the heart of Jirvania stands The Great Library, where every story is collected by the library’s guardian, Karel. This library is a portal to other times and places where one can step into stories and experience them firsthand. Homework has never been such fun. When eleven-year-old Jack Lemoine finds an opal dragon egg in Mystic, Connecticut, he discovers the real world is not what he thought. Dragons, unicorns, faeries, centaurs, and countless others do exist. Unfortunately, so do witches, ogres, goblins, and monsters, and they want Jack dead, yesterday. It has been prophesied he will one day save Jirvania, with the help of a magical opal dragon, Julu, but evil disrupts time itself, leading to the annihilation of Jirvania, seven years before Jack comes of age. Imagination ceases to exist. Libraries, art galleries, concert halls, and theme parks vanish. Our lives become meaningless and empty. Jirvania's lone survivor, Karel receives a visitor from the stars, urging him to change the story. Meanwhile, back in Mystic, Jack and his friend, Mia are thrown into a fantastical adventure when Julu hatches and takes them back in time to protect them. Through her stories, they learn that family, friendship, and love are the threads that bind us together, no matter who or what we are and hope is often found in the most unexpected places. Can Karel change the story and save our imaginations? I love fantasy almost as much as science fiction and this delightful story incorporates both. The author has created a fully living world that sits in an adjacent dimension to ours, and we need it so bad. Jirvania is the source of all artistic inspiration in our world and it is under the direst of threats. I was so enthralled by Jan’s writing, I was reminded of one of my favorite stories, “The Lion, The Witch and The Wardrobe”. Jan’s writing is exceptional; her scene-setting is exquisite, every bit is so easy to imagine. The dialogue flows smoothly and the action leaves little to be desired. While this book is aimed at children, kids of all ages will love it, from nine to ninety. I award a score of 4.9 stars to “JULU”. You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/Julu-Jan-Anderegg https://www.goodreads.com/julu https://www.barnesandnoble.com/julu-jan-anderegg You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/Janilou https://www.julu.blog https://www.facebook.com/Janilou2018 https://www.facebook.com/JanLucy2017 Tags: sword and sorcery, magic, time travel, dragon, music, poetry, art Copyright © 2020 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction
85 Comments
3/14/2020 03:31:23 pm
Thank you so much for the wonderful review. Your reference to C. S. Lewis's classic story is high praise. He will always be one of my greatest inspirations. I'm delighted to hear how much you enjoyed this story.
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Mark
3/14/2020 03:48:34 pm
You are most welcome, I can't think of any other books I have said that about.
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3/14/2020 04:37:15 pm
More about me: I live in rural Iowa on a small acreage with my husband of twenty years. Our children (his, mine and ours) are all grown up, some of them with children of their own. I love being a grandma and we spend as much time as we can with our children and grandchildren. We raise gaited horses for a hobby. We have two dogs, (a cocker spaniel and a beagle) and quite a few farm cats.
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Mark
3/14/2020 04:49:12 pm
Wonderful, we have much in common, apart from horses. Gaited horses are quite interesting. They remind me of Olympic-style speed walking, which is something I have done in the recent past. I grew up on non-working farms, something I treasure. I have been to Europe several times, enjoy traveling immensely and returning home even more.
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Jan Anderegg
3/14/2020 06:19:47 pm
My work has inspired me to write some short pieces on the struggles faced by people with disabilities. Acceptance being one of the biggest issues. My experiences with these people certainly find their way into my stories.
Mark
3/14/2020 06:38:16 pm
I know one author who keeps paper and pen beside her bed, she is woken regularly at about 2:30 in the morning by her muse; it's when she gets most of her ideas.
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Jan Anderegg
3/14/2020 10:20:41 pm
My book cover was designed by Evelina Valieva. She will also be designing the cover for 'Jirvania,' the second book in the Julu series. Check out her Facebook page here:
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Mark
3/14/2020 10:38:19 pm
I love the cover, composition and color are quite pleasing to the eye, with much to see. Congratulations on being a finalist.
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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 08:25:13 am
Years ago, I wrote a romance suspense novel, titled, To Catch Pegasus. It was not published. Before that I wrote a short fictional story about caring for the elderly. This was published in The Australian Nurses Journal.
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Mark
3/15/2020 10:00:40 am
Congratulations! I suspected that you had been writing short stories, it's good practice for longer work. All that previous work has brought growth to your writing and maturity to your voice. There may come a time when you want to pick up that romance novel and polish it, that is a popular genre.
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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 10:30:41 am
A good question. I'm now looking into getting Julu added to Kindle Unlimited. Great idea.
Mark
3/15/2020 10:54:01 am
KU puts authors into a bit of a strait jacket, consider it carefully. It's a tough choice going wide or seeking possible increased reader base.
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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 03:40:49 pm
GateKeeper Press is an Indie Publisher. My reason for not going with a traditional publisher was more about my lack of knowledge in being able to prepare the book for submission to a publisher. Lucky for me, Gatekeeper Press helped me with that. Gatekeeper Press works with all of the major eBook and print distributors (including Amazon and Barnes & Noble) as well as library wholesalers.
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Mark
3/15/2020 04:30:20 pm
Gatekeeper sounds like they were very helpful for you.
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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 07:32:47 pm
Unethical practices in publishing - I'd have to say contracts that take over the rights to the author's work, forcing them to stay with that publisher.Also promising a quality product and then using inferior (cheap)materials to print the book.
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Mark
3/15/2020 08:18:35 pm
I agree, the theft of rights is right at the top of the list. Their is so much earning potential to be realized through the exercise of intellectual property right.
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Jan Anderegg
3/15/2020 11:21:23 pm
Definitely an over-writer. One of my favorite quotes is:
Mark
3/16/2020 10:35:36 am
I think over-writing is easy for many writers, because the thoughts are hard to organize in the first draft or the desire to share the results of research are so much fun to share, all of it. The first draft exists primarily to get the story out of your head, it's supposed to be a piece of crap.
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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 11:17:53 am
Do you prefer dialogue tags or action beats in your books?
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Mark
3/16/2020 11:50:03 am
I agree with you about action beats over dialogue tags, some authors go to extreme lengths to avoid repetition in dialogue tags. It can get awkward and allow many more adverbs into the story than are needed.
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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 01:58:31 pm
If you used a close friend or family member in a book, would you tell them or make sure that they wouldn't recognize themselves in the story?
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Mark
3/16/2020 02:17:58 pm
I never thought about letting family members pick their characters. I can see how that might be fun for all involved.
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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 05:12:02 pm
Right! Me too on the action movies. Now, to answer your questions:
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Mark
3/16/2020 05:43:02 pm
I am an early riser also, I like to get a certain amount done before the day gets going.
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Jan Anderegg
3/16/2020 07:21:22 pm
I will certainly check out that blog. Sounds very interesting.
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Mark
3/16/2020 08:05:47 pm
As you said, pace and flow are at the discretion of the author. That is very true. Just like the director controls out every shot and camera angle in a movie, so too does the author in the book.
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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 07:32:36 am
What else are you writing these days? Are you writing anything for yourself or only for readers?
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Mark
3/17/2020 10:46:38 am
Some authors write things only to please themselves, they don't publish those works. I like your point of view, if it pleases the author it will probably please the reader also.
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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 11:40:54 am
I will definitely check that blog link out. Always looking for more information about creativity in writing. The last time I suffered from writer's block, I cured it by writing a short humor piece about offering up my writers block for sale. Now to the questions:
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Mark
3/17/2020 12:35:25 pm
You are welcome. Those links cover many different topics pertinent to almost all authors at one time or another.
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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 03:02:08 pm
Yes, absolute truth. It amazes me how much they do miss, despite what they find. Human eyes are a must!
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Mark
3/17/2020 04:37:56 pm
When personal computer word processors first came on the market, spell check was an amazing thing. I thought it might put me out of a job. It didn't take too long before I realized I had nothing to worry about. Even with AI starting to write books and music, I am still not worried.
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Jan Anderegg
3/17/2020 05:59:46 pm
I agree with the need for human eyes. It amazes me how three different people can read a chapter, and find completely different edits needed. I'm very glad for your skills in proof-reading and editing.
Mark
3/17/2020 06:42:05 pm
Glad you enjoyed the questions.
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Jan Anderegg
3/18/2020 08:44:43 am
What a great idea. I will look into it.To answer your questions:
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Mark
3/18/2020 12:53:00 pm
You are doing many of the right things. I have lists of book bloggers and promotional services on my Twitter home page also. Perhaps you will find those useful also.
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Jan Anderegg
3/18/2020 04:45:53 pm
You are most welcome! I'm thrilled that I chose you to review Julu. Your review is now the top one to show up on Amazon's page for Julu.
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Mark
3/18/2020 04:56:06 pm
Some authors, particularly pantsters, don't always know the ending when they start writing; you are quite fortunate in that way.
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Jan Anderegg
3/18/2020 09:39:59 pm
All interesting questions!
Mark
3/18/2020 09:56:44 pm
Quite an honor, said no author ever. On the bright side, it is published and very clean.
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Jan Anderegg
3/19/2020 12:58:34 pm
Great thoughts on the editing process. I am determined to deliver the second book for publication in a much more polished state.
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Mark
3/19/2020 01:30:34 pm
That story about wolves sounds interesting. I am reviewing a book with wolves as the central characters of the story, next week.
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3/19/2020 02:33:33 pm
How exciting for your granddaughter! I have a feeling she will have a fabulous career ahead of her in writing.
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Mark
3/19/2020 02:47:06 pm
Thanks, I agree. She seems to have a good eye and pen.
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3/19/2020 08:57:22 pm
Thanks!
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Mark
3/19/2020 09:09:05 pm
No question, self-editing is very hard. The fresh eyes, or lack thereof, is a huge problem for many authors. They are too close to their book. Putting it away for weeks, or even months can be very helpful. Also, reading it aloud is a technique I recommend. Reading it backwards, a paragraph at a time can be useful. Even switching to a different font and using colored paper can be helpful to the self-editor. It takes a particular mental rigor, such as pretending it's not your book, works for some.
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3/19/2020 10:46:06 pm
Great ideas for self-editing!
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Mark
3/19/2020 11:04:30 pm
I have gleaned some of those ideas from other authors.
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3/20/2020 01:36:37 pm
I do use Scrivener and it does indeed have a steep learning curve. I'm certain I'm not using it to its full potential. I do like it. I hope to learn more about it as I use it.
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Mark
3/20/2020 02:06:51 pm
Enjoying your own writing seems like a good indicator that others will enjoy it also. I think you are onto something there.
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3/20/2020 06:09:28 pm
Thank you. :-) Now to answer your questions:
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Mark
3/20/2020 06:22:26 pm
I love that quote from Lewis. Appealing to so many groups is a wonderful thing. Your fan base is broad. Fantasy is a very popular genre. It's my second favorite, almost tied with sci-fi.
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3/20/2020 07:35:49 pm
That's great! Sounds like the perfect retirement!
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Mark
3/20/2020 08:02:53 pm
There is at least one author who writes in several genres, with a different pen name for each. She seems to be successful, she has landing pages for each genre that redirect to her main website where all the genres and pen names are gathered together. Fans can remain within their favorite genre or explore the others. I bet she is hoping for crossover.
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3/21/2020 10:08:43 am
All great ideas! To answer your questions:
Mark
3/21/2020 10:23:46 am
I like that point of view, immersing yourself in creativity of many kinds sounds like a great way to keep the muse happy.
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3/21/2020 12:01:07 pm
Thanks, Mark. :-) I do love well-written sci-fi books. To answer your questions:
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Mark
3/21/2020 12:14:14 pm
That is a great comment! Each book is like seeing writing through new eyes. That makes a lot of sense to me. 3/21/2020 01:55:11 pm
I love happy endings. In fact, when there is a terrible ending to a fiction book or a series, I won't read that author's work again. I often say if I wanted to read about a tragic, horrific ending where everyone dies, I will pick up the newspaper.
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Mark
3/21/2020 02:14:26 pm
I agree with you about happy endings. I usually read a book to the end, there has only been a couple of times in the last 10 years that I didn't finish a book. One was a psychological thriller that was depressing me, the other was a YA thriller that had a dozen or more errors on every age.
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3/21/2020 04:44:00 pm
Well, I appreciated it very much! I've answered your questions below, with a few of my own. :-)
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Mark
3/21/2020 05:17:32 pm
For all of those questions, start with your publisher. These are all separate rights that can be licensed. If you publisher is not equipped to handle these different formats, ask them if they know of someone who is.
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3/21/2020 06:31:00 pm
Awesome. Thank you. I will check those sources.
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Mark
3/21/2020 06:49:57 pm
I am glad you joined NaNoWriMo, I bet you will have fun with it.
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3/21/2020 07:38:58 pm
I can't wait to go take a look!
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Mark
3/21/2020 08:07:01 pm
I enjoy reading stories in first person also. There is definite sense of intimacy when you are seeing everything through another person's eyes.
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3/21/2020 10:18:23 pm
Yes, there is a greater sense of intimacy in 1st person POV. I will write a book in 1st person POV one day. It will be challenging and fun. I've never played golf, only mini-golf. That's fun even though I will never be a pro even at mini golf. I'm glad I chose writing and not golf.
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Mark
3/22/2020 11:11:38 am
Giving copies of your book to places where children will be is very nice. Especially hospitals and homeless shelters. I have no doubt you have touched the hearts of many and kept the flame of hope alive.
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3/22/2020 02:11:08 pm
What fun questions! Here goes:
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Mark
3/22/2020 02:32:44 pm
Hidden eggs are fun, it sounds like the are as much fun to weave into a story as learn about them. Well done.
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3/22/2020 08:08:14 pm
That is exactly right. Great questions!
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Mark
3/22/2020 08:31:38 pm
Before Amazon, I think it was possible for a good book to sell itself. It might start slow, but eventually it would pick up steam.
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3/22/2020 09:14:27 pm
Yes, that mighty Amazon river is hard to navigate!
Mark
3/22/2020 09:30:31 pm
Having a clear picture in your head is worth a lot.
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3/22/2020 10:37:04 pm
Great! I love the new questions. Here goes:
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Mark
3/22/2020 11:27:07 pm
How shocking, I held an electrical license also, low voltage for HVAC. Electricity is weird, you cannot see it, only its effects. You cannot measure voltage when it is flowing, only when it is not. You can measure current when it is flowing. I have never understood how AC and DC can flow in the same wire at the same time. 3/23/2020 08:54:46 am
Electricity is something I leave to my husband! LOL
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Mark
3/23/2020 09:58:35 am
I have recommended reading difficult sections aloud for a long time. It's one of many ways to detect errors and poorly worded phrases.
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3/23/2020 01:09:55 pm
She shows great potential! ❤️
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Mark
3/23/2020 01:49:07 pm
I think it must be easy to get attached to characters, it makes sense to me that killing one off might be hard. It impacts me as a reader, when that happens.
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3/23/2020 02:46:43 pm
Great point. I’m fairly certain there will be at least three books in the Julu series and it would be wonderful to have a boxed set sitting on a shelf!
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Mark
3/23/2020 03:25:20 pm
I know an author, a client, that regularly gets her best ideas at night, specifically at 2:30 am. She keeps a pad and a pen on her nightstand. She wishes her muse lived closer. Another author told me her muse meets her in the shower and she was so frustrated, not being able to write the ideas down. I told her to get a pad with waterproof paper and a Space pen, it writes underwater.
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3/23/2020 08:56:38 pm
Great advice. I'd much rather put the book aside for a few months, and come back to it, then have to be finding errors for months or years after publication.
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Mark
3/23/2020 09:08:06 pm
If an author is not self-publishing, then protection of Intellectual Property rights are paramount, as we have discussed already. There are so many of them to license. Action figures and bobble-heads are a couple more items that can be licensed.
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3/23/2020 09:51:51 pm
It’s been absolutely delightful. Lots of fun. I can’t wait for you to read Jirvania! Hoping the world will have won this war against the terrible Covid-19 corona virus by then. Stay safe! Leave a Reply. |
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