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Debut author, Amanda Gregory, introduces us to her novel, Fix: Tammy was only fifteen when she was introduced to the world of drugs. Five years later, she finds herself on the other side of the country in California. Life is different here compared to the small town she grew up in New Jersey, but Tammy is still up to her old tricks bumming at her polar-opposite, lifelong friend Alecia’s place. Her new beau, Randy, is anything but good with his cold, mysterious demeanor but how can she say no when he suggests a road trip to visit his relatives in Colorado? Along the way, they make a detour at the Bad Karma Club in Las Vegas where they meet an unruly group: Mark leads the group with his obnoxious personality, his sidekick Ty, Angel whose dark disposition makes her seem just out of reach, and Alpha whose mysterious, green eyes unravel feelings inside Tammy that she can’t understand. The moment she meets them she has this unnerving feeling like she has finally found where she belongs. Tammy’s adventure gets even more interesting when Randy goes out on a “business” trip the next day with Mark and Ty, leaving her to defend herself in an unfamiliar area with Angel who introduces Tammy to her crush Charlie. The all-around funny guy Charlie is a dream to be around except for the fact that he has his own entanglement in the drug ring among other things. The moment of bliss turns sour when the boys return from their trip as Tammy finds out who she can really rely on and is faced with crossroads ahead. She finally finds the “family” that she has always wanted but it comes with a price. Will she self-destruct just to belong somewhere, or will she find another way to have it all? At first glance, this Young Adult story seemed rather superficial, typical of so many who have no real aim in life other than survival and trying to feel good. However, it graphically shows how easy it is to become addicted to narcotics. Opioids are a serious issue in today's world. Navigating through the teen years into adulting is very difficult. Most of us decide to do it on our own, without seeking help from those who have been down that path already, the previous generation. I was surprised by the depth of the story and I was pleasantly shocked by the ending. This is quite a good story. The scene-setting was good, not too much or too little. The characters really shined for me; they came across as quite real, with depth. The dialogue, inner and outer, was the best part of the book. I was drawn into Tammy’s world effortlessly and empathetically. The first person POV made a huge difference, I really appreciate the intimacy it provides. The mark of good writing on my score card. There are a few steamy sections and many instances of drug use. I enjoyed the story a great deal. I award a score of 4.8 stars to “Fix”. You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/Fix-Amanda-Gregory-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/book/-fix https://www.amazon.co.uk/Fix-Amanda-Gregory-ebook You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/manderz19 https://amandagregoryauthor.com https://amandagregoryofficial.tumblr.com https://smile.amazon.com/Amanda-K-Gregory https://www.goodreads.com/author/Amanda_K_Gregory Tags: fiction, literary fiction, YA, road trip, addiction, romance Copyright © 2019 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction
55 Comments
10/19/2019 04:17:07 pm
Thank you Mark for the for the wonderful review! I am glad that you enjoyed reading Fix and taking a glance into Tammy's world. Also, thank you for taking the time to help me become aware of the handful of spelling errors. I really appreciate it.
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Mark
10/19/2019 06:11:39 pm
You are very welcome, I really enjoyed your book. Well done on the ending, It caught me by surprise. Thanks for agreeing to do the interview. I always learn something from authors and enjoy the chat a lot.
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10/19/2019 09:46:06 pm
Thank you, Mark! I'm sure throughout the interview we can talk about the ending without giving away too many spoilers. It was something that when I first thought of was instantly like 'this is how it has to be'. I'm really glad you enjoyed reading Fix and I can't wait to dive in deeper into the topic.
Mark
10/19/2019 10:02:32 pm
Thank you, Amanda. It sounds like you have a full life. Raising a teenager has many challenges, I bet you are doing well.
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10/20/2019 12:02:24 am
Thanks, Mark! I stay busy for sure. That is so nice of you and your wife to choose to be foster parents. It's an important role and unfortunately one that is needed desperately.
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Mark
10/20/2019 12:11:50 am
I think your book is very timely. You did portray the characters in a sympathetic way. I am glad to hear that a sequel is planned. 10/20/2019 11:42:14 am
Thank you, Mark I appreciate your kind words. I designed the book myself and used the book cover creator that Amazon provides when you go through their self publishing process. I thought that duct tape for the cover would be clever as duct tape "fixes everything" and the title Fix represents the root of addiction and the need to get your 'fix'. I also liked the simplicity of the cover too.
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Mark
10/20/2019 12:45:28 pm
I thought that might be the case. A clever play on words, I love it!
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10/20/2019 02:34:58 pm
Thank you! The characters themselves weren't too hard to develop. I took little pieces of people that I knew here and there and incorporated them into the characters. For example, the friendship between Tammy and Angel is based off of my friendships with some of my close friends. The good qualities in Alpha is based off of my girlfriend. Charlie was based off of how I feel Tammy deserved to be treated in a relationship but he had his own rabbit hole that he was stuck in too. Tammy was just a combination of things such as my perception of how I have seen other people think and act in addiction, general hopes and fears with life, and just wanting to be better. As Tammy's character development progressed I tried to get her line of thinking from just thinking in the moment and of herself to looking around at the people around her and thinking outside of herself a little more. I had a lot of fun exploring themes with Tammy such as wanting a place in this world to fit in but also wanting to be better person and not really knowing how to get out of the rabbit hole that she has created for herself. It was a really cool experience to be able to create people with different backgrounds, quirks, etc and feel like they're real people that I know. I am grateful for the whole experience.
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Mark
10/20/2019 02:50:15 pm
I think a lot of people do what you have done. Taken bits and pieces of themselves and people they know well to give their characters depth. Some authors use more than bits, they run the risk of the real person discovering themselves in a book. If it's a close friend or family member. I think it's a good idea to clear it with the real person ahead of time, if you are using a lot of one person for a major character. 10/20/2019 11:22:37 pm
Thank you for providing that information on contests! I know that the judges will be giving feedback to the contestants who didn't win at the end of the year so I am looking forward to hearing that so I can improve. I began reading a lot more than what I used to get a feel for different writing styles and I feel like that has helped a lot too.
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Mark
10/20/2019 11:43:21 pm
Traditional publishing isn't always what it's cracked up to be. A few decades ago, it was the only game in town. Amazon has changed that tremendously. Anyone can publish a book now, which has a well documented downside. However, when an author goes the traditional publishing route, they lose a lot of control over their book. A lot of publishing companies try to grab all the Intellectual Property rights they can, and there is a bunch. A book is just the beginning. There are also audio books, large-print, foreign language books, foreign language audio books, merchandising, plays, movies, tv series. Licensing IP is big business now. English language audio books are exploding around the world.
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10/21/2019 09:24:08 pm
Thank you for the advice. I will take all of that into consideration in the future.
Mark
10/21/2019 10:09:56 pm
I hope I didn't dump too much on you all at once. That is a lot to digest, my apologies.
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10/21/2019 10:32:56 pm
You're fine! I appreciate all the help that you have to offer me. Sorry, I didn't really have much to say back to it but I do appreciate it.
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Mark
10/21/2019 10:41:48 pm
Thanks. It occurred to me that between Guest Blogs and Highly Regarded Blogs, both pages on my website, there is a lot of useful information. I add to the HRB page every day. 10/21/2019 11:00:59 pm
Thank you! I am excited to check those pages out.
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Mark
10/22/2019 12:22:13 am
I think a lot of authors do that, bits and pieces of people they know or events they have heard of.
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10/22/2019 06:43:38 pm
Thank you for your compliments!
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Mark
10/22/2019 07:14:59 pm
Tammy's journey was pretty real, her changing desires were evident, especially towards the end. Mark and Randy fulfilled their roles well. 10/22/2019 07:39:04 pm
There really isn’t anything that I would change to Fix plot wise. Of course Fix isn’t going to be my best work as I continue to grow and change as a writer but I think it’s nice to be able to look back and see how far my writing has come. Even now I can see changes in my writing. The only thing I can really think of is I would try to make the book longer itself since it is so short.
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Mark
10/22/2019 08:06:54 pm
I think your book presents a realistic view of addiction and how it can be such a struggle to get and stay sober.
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10/22/2019 10:16:56 pm
I am currently working on an YA fantasy about a girl who has realized that she has died and with the help of her spirit guide she goes through her life revision exploring the good, bad, and discovering how she died. I also wrote a short poem book titled Split in the Middle that is about the highs and lows of a person struggling with bipolar and going through the manic and depressive episodes. The pages alternate between the two throughout the book. I am working on the illustrations for it right now.
Mark
10/22/2019 10:28:53 pm
Many authors use MS Word or Google Docs, not many have mentioned using both.
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10/22/2019 10:55:57 pm
Thank you I will look into that as well! I love learning this whole process and seeing what works with different writers.
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Mark
10/22/2019 11:06:52 pm
There is a lot to learn. In some ways, writing reminds me of golf, no matter how good you are, there is always room for improvement. 10/23/2019 10:01:07 pm
I like writing all three and I think which is easier depends on what the writing is about. If it’s about something interesting or if I’m in a flow then it’s easy but if it’s dry then it’s harder.
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Mark
10/23/2019 10:13:20 pm
A lot of writers say the visual sense is the easiest. I imagine because we are all so visually oriented.
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10/23/2019 10:34:23 pm
A fashion show sounds like fun and I’m glad you enjoyed it. I bet that would be nerve wracking doing that especially if you’re not used to doing that.
Mark
10/23/2019 11:23:03 pm
Thanks for those kind words, I might put those on my website as a testimonial.
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10/24/2019 10:25:48 pm
Thank you for your advice on marketing. I am going to have to look more into local papers and things like that I have not thought of.
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Mark
10/24/2019 11:15:38 pm
There are many other methods of promoting a book. They either take time or money.
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10/24/2019 11:25:56 pm
I have a couple of friends with English degrees that I asked them to beta read for me and luckily they agreed to. I also reached out on my personal Facebook account asking people if they were interested.
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Mark
10/25/2019 11:28:09 am
Using Google Docs in that manner seems to work well. I think that is pretty smart. I haven't used Docs much, I can do a little there. 10/25/2019 11:47:07 pm
For my new book I will probably use some of the same readers as before and add new ones as well. I think some people did really well and I appreciated their advice and I have a couple other new people that I know would help me. For Fix I didn’t really think of doing something special for my beta readers but this time around I am going to have an acknowledge page where I’m going to thank all the beta readers for helping me along with the new book.
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Mark
10/26/2019 12:13:58 am
An acknowledgement page would be nice. If you have some hard or soft cover books made, an autographed copy of that would be nice also.
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10/26/2019 01:02:05 am
I wish I knew how powerful reading was for writing. It’s not that I didn’t know that it wasn’t powerful but just really how influential it is. I also wish that I knew more about what I was getting into as far as marketing goes so then I could have planned ahead to try to promote my book more before I published it. I think another thing would be to do research on more writing styles. I agree with you on writing poems to hone in on your craft. I have written some short stories since writing Fix and they are nice for practice.
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Mark
10/26/2019 10:51:01 am
You are on a path that so many authors walk. They spent so much time and effort to write and publish their book, then they pop up out of their burrow like a prairie dog and wonder what is going on. However, you are interested in doing all you can to increase your knowledge and advance your writing skill. That is a good place to start from. You are on your way.
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10/26/2019 11:43:20 am
I think common traps for beginner writers is just not knowing how big the writing community really is. Even if you look on Twitter the writers community is enormous and like you said it does feel like you are a prairie dog coming out of your burrow for the first time. Luckily most people are very nice and supportive and there’s room for every kind of writer here.
Mark
10/26/2019 12:38:56 pm
There are a lot of wonderful and supportive people on Twitter, there are others also, of course. Many in the #WritingCommunity are more than happy to share ideas and give another writer a boost.
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10/26/2019 05:28:02 pm
I love seeing how much the #writerscommunity interacts with one another and how helpful everyone is.
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Mark
10/26/2019 06:12:27 pm
They are a helpful bunch of people. No doubt about that. 10/27/2019 12:22:14 pm
I struggle with writers block sometimes I think all writers do. I just have to push myself through writers block and even if the writing isn’t as good as what I think it should be then the next day I’ll go back over that chapter and fix it. I think writers block can be a big downfall for a writer and it can be hard to overcome it when you just draw a blank sometimes. I think that’s part of working on building a good work ethic with writing is learning to push through that.
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Mark
10/27/2019 12:42:39 pm
Writers block takes different forms for different writers. Some beginning writers struggle with the first draft because they edit as the write and it slows them and they lose touch with their muse.
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10/27/2019 02:36:13 pm
Thanks for your advice!
Mark
10/27/2019 04:08:18 pm
Besides different writing styles each genre has different writing expectations, rather the readers have expectations of the genre. For example, hard boiled detective stories treat women characters far different from reverse harem magic stories.
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10/27/2019 05:14:31 pm
I think the biggest hurdle with writing Fix is that it’s the first writing project that I’ve ever had. I just felt like I needed to write this and Fix came out so I had no prior knowledge on anything about writing a book. I didn’t even know how to format the pages and put in indents so my friend, who has a degree in this field, helped me with a lot with formatting and things like that. I didn’t really have any expectations with Fix other than I just wrote it for therapeutic purposes and then when I was done I tried to get it published with the support of my close friends and then from there I decided that this was worth pursuing. So I still have a lot of learning to go as I move forward. The only brainstorming that I have done so far has been non writers. I think it has gone well and as far as the consumer side you have to know what people want and look for. I think the best money I have spent so far for my writing career is spent on books learning how to hone this craft and I have spent money on advertising on Amazon.
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Mark
10/27/2019 05:44:05 pm
There is a lot to publishing a book. After several books, some writers feel so confident they open their own boutique publishing company. Formatting, book fronts and backs, copyrighting, there are a million details that need attention. It's no wonder to me that a lot of writers want to publish traditionally or independently, instead of self-publish. Every option has positive and negative aspects. But it all boils down to one thing, the more you can do yourself the more profit is yours. 10/27/2019 07:34:12 pm
I am not currently subscribed to any magazines, newsletters, or anything like that. I don’t have reference book for writing or grammar. Do you have any recommendations for me? I’ve read some informational books about writing like How to become a writer but that’s more of a teaching guide for setting good habits for writing. I wrote the first page of the first chapter as a whole only once but I’ve added little details like her brushing her teeth and stuff to add more detail for the readers. I’d say I’ve gone through it maybe ten times or more to the point where I got so tired of reading it.
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Mark
10/27/2019 07:46:43 pm
I own several reference guides, the one I use almost all the time is The Chicago Manual of Style. It's a beast, but it's very complete. It takes a little getting used to and it's not cheap. It would be more economical to get one that is a year or two behind the latest edition.
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10/28/2019 06:04:11 pm
I think a writing myth would be you either “have it” or you don’t. Writing is a learned skill and the more you do your research, read books, and practice writing the better you will be.
Mark
10/28/2019 06:18:08 pm
I agree, if a person has enough interest they can learn to write and write well. A little talent doesn't hurt also. However, determination and grit will outwork talent every day of the week.
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10/28/2019 08:40:05 pm
I haven’t given much thought to doing a book trailer. Maybe someday but I just am not that technologically advanced and I would want it to look good.
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Mark
10/28/2019 08:45:21 pm
Thank you, Amanda, I have really enjoyed our conversation. You have a fresh perspective. I look forward to your next books, as I am sure your other fans do. 10/28/2019 09:10:43 pm
Thank you Mark for your kind words and wonderful insight. I appreciate you taking the time to read Fix and writing a review for it. Thank you again for taking the time to come to me with the grammar errors in Fix and I look forward to utilizing the spell check that you offer for my future books. Until next time!
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