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Multi-volume author, Erinn Price, introduces us to the second volume in her series, Fight of the Gnomes: The gnomes aren't out of the woods yet. Just when they think things are going well, the game AIs go and change everything. In a race against time, Yllo and her friends need to find all the races’ artifacts to safeguard their Kingdom. The stakes are higher in her real life and her virtual one. They make new friends and enemies, as they narrow in on the person behind the gnomes’ problems. I am a newbie or noob, this is the first book I have read in the RPG literature genre. I didn’t even know there was a type of book like this. I confess to never having played a role-playing game also. I remember when Dungeons and Dragons came out, it sounded interesting and complicated. I enjoyed reading this book, it gave me some insight into the world of role-playing games. The adventure was exciting, the plot kept me guessing. The settings, characterizations, and dialog all contributed to an excellent story. The mixture of sci-fi and fantasy was very appealing to me. The touch of steampunk was like icing on the cake. All in all, it was fun to read. I award 3.8 stars to Fight of the Gnomes. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/fight-of-the-gnomes https://www.goodreads.com/fight-of-the-gnomes-arcon-book-2-litrpg You can follow Erinn Price: https://twitter.com/ErinnPr33359311 https://www.facebook.com/ErinnPriceAuthor https://www.amazon.com/Erinn-Price https://erinnprice.com [email protected] Tags: YA, mature MG, AI Copyright © 2018 Mark L Schultz except for the author's introduction
40 Comments
8/26/2018 05:09:31 am
Thank you Mark for the review and for the basic proofread, it just showed me that I have to go for the full proofread when I can. Your eye for detail and your willingness to help is greatly appreciated. I am glad you enjoyed the book. As a relatively new genre not many people take a chance to see what it is all about.
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8/26/2018 09:38:49 am
You are very welcome, Erinn, I enjoyed the book. How long have you been playing role-playing games? Do you remember the first game you played? Who talked you into it? What is your favorite game to play now?
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8/26/2018 10:21:55 am
I have been playing rpg games for a very long time, first Dungeon and Dragons, Arcanum and Elder Scrolls. They were older games, but introduced me to rpg. Later of course we got WOW and the more multiplayer rpg games instead of single player. There are so many I will take up the whole page just on the different single player rpgs and the multiplayer rpgs. I came across the games accidentally when I was sick, from mumps I think it was ... was bored and tried it, and here we are. Currently I do not have a firm favorite, but various ones I play on and off.
Mark
8/26/2018 11:07:57 am
I can easily imagine that list would be very long. Thanks for sharing your background. My son tried to teach me how to play video game, I think it was Lego Star Wars. The actions proved to be very difficult for me. hitting two buttons just right was a problem. I realized I could master it if I invested a lot of time. I did not make that investment.
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8/26/2018 11:57:10 am
To start with I did no research, I just started writing and researched as things came up. From the first book I learnt to make glass. I learnt of the different stones, gems, rocks to get ones that fit my story. Second book less research but I just checked facts to ensure things I wrote were plausible, well as much as possible in a science fiction fantasy story. Third book has much more research into it because of the genre change. For it I needed to research myths, places and technology.
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8/26/2018 12:52:35 pm
That is some great advice. It sounds like it was a pretty steep learning curve for you. Thanks for being willing to share from your experience. 8/26/2018 01:27:15 pm
I have always loved reading and the fantasy world created by writers allowed me to escape and experience new worlds. My work is very rigid and no room for imagination, accounting. Reading was a great stress relief.
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8/26/2018 04:30:42 pm
I don't think you are weird or silly at all. I have had a few sequential dreams in my life, but not for many years. I am not a fan of horror also, the more graphic the less I like it. I think you have an interesting gift having the whole series laid out like that, I look forward to the rest of the books.
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8/26/2018 06:44:26 pm
The story is in four parts;
Mark
8/26/2018 11:06:02 pm
I think you did an admirable job. No spoilers there at all! It sounds very interesting to me. Thanks for giving me a peek into the future.
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8/27/2018 05:35:07 am
No, none of my characters are based on me, or acquaintances. Rather a mix match of personalities and types. I think you have to know your characters and understand them to be able to write. Sometimes they do things that you did not think off, but as your story progresses it fits them.
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8/27/2018 10:57:33 am
Very good. So, none of your characters are based solely on any one person. That is probably a good idea. Do you create some kind of character sheets or timelines? Do you consider yourself a plotter, pantster, or a hybrid of the two?
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8/27/2018 01:01:07 pm
I don't know, I think it depends on the person. Any character flaw and strength of an individual can be both a detriment and a saving grace. Some people have needed to develop a strong ego to survive, others develop the ability to go with the flow not let things bog them down too much. We all deal with life in a different manner and all of it; good,bad, strengths and weaknesses can help a person write. I do not thing it is necessary but depending on the person, their history, a strong ego can help them tell their story.
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8/27/2018 01:44:03 pm
A wise answer about the ego. We are each unique in our own way, just like everyone else. Quite a paradox, wouldn't you say?
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8/28/2018 03:47:11 am
I feel invigorated when I manage to write, so I would say strengthens me. Some days I don't write at all, my characters are too busy doing their own things and they don't want to do what I need them to do. So when I do finally manage to wrangle them into order and get some writing done it is great.
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Mark
8/28/2018 10:06:01 am
Many authors report feeling invigorated by writing also.
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8/28/2018 12:22:04 pm
I do get writer's block, but I also have a talent for procrastination. The later is more to blame for the stalling in my writing than writer's block. For writer's block I have found that writing something completely different, even starting a new story helps tremendously. For the procrastination I fear I still need to work on that.
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8/28/2018 12:33:55 pm
That's good, you have found a way around writer's block. Some authors purposely have multiple projects to switch to, when a block appears on a primary project. Content writing, short stories, and contests are some of the ways authors use to keep the creative energy flowing.
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8/29/2018 04:40:12 am
I think any experience whether it comes from first hand experience or through movies, books and music can help a writer. Books, movies and music can give you help with emotions, character personalities and just broaden what you can draw on for inspiration.
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8/29/2018 11:40:52 am
Great answers, Erinn. You are in agreement with most authors! Imagination and empathy are necessary for effective communication of any kind. I think both are equally important and inextricably linked together.
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8/29/2018 01:37:43 pm
That is a difficult question, I would say a combination of both. You have to want to write and have an imagination or reason to write, have a story to tell. You also need to have a basic background in how to write. I do not say you have to learn to write, but you do need the basics of sentence structure,grammar and spelling (Obviously I need to remember what I learnt in school, my grammar and sentence structuring goes on vacation sometimes). The rest you teach yourself, it is your story, your writing style. I think if you try to copy someone else's style that is when your writing may become stilted and you may suffer writer's block a lot. If it is not your own style then it will not be natural. As you write more and see what works for you, you are teaching yourself to become a better writer. Then you will always be growing and improving. If you base your writing on styles and techniques someone else has taught you, I think eventually you will reach a point where your writing stalls and you stop improving and learning.
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8/29/2018 02:23:50 pm
Great answer! You covered so much ground with your answer. I agree, if you have a burning desire to get a story out of your head, you will need some understanding of grammar, syntax and spelling. You don't have to be perfect, that is what editing is for.
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8/30/2018 03:40:05 am
I wish I had known more about marketing correctly. Writing a book does not end when the book is written, you still then need to ensure the book is marketed and promoted sufficiently or else no matter how good the book is, it will not sell. Knowing more about the best publishing platforms would have been better, but in a way now that I have had my books on several of them. I can see which ones work for me currently and which don't. This will likely change in the future when I write more books and gain more experience. I think knowing beforehand which publishing platforms to go for and concentrate on, can save a writer a lot of time and effort. Certain books sell better on certain platforms while some books sell reasonably on all platforms.
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8/30/2018 10:41:04 am
Some of those lessons sound like they were quite valuable. But I wouldn't be surprised if some of those aspects change, so it seems wise to place a book on multiple platforms.
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8/30/2018 10:46:11 am
New questions.
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8/30/2018 12:17:36 pm
I did nothing too exciting with my first royalty payment, just took family out for a nice lunch and bought my dog a new toy. If not for support from my family or comic relief supplied by my dog, I am not sure the first book would have happened. The rest I am keeping to add to the next checks to buy plane tickets for my folks to go visit my brother and his family, if health permits it.
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8/30/2018 01:25:47 pm
Personally, I enjoy first person POV a great deal! Unless there is head hopping, then it's so easy to get lost and the magic disappears. You did a good job of maintaining the focus of the POV in FOTG.
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8/30/2018 02:23:53 pm
I think it has its positives and negatives. I am always one to believe it is never good to have all ones eggs in one basket. But then having fewer publishing platforms makes it easier to keep track of sales and makes marketing easier. Unfortunately it also means that Amazon will have more power, especially where self-publishing authors are concerned. The fewer publishing platforms, mean if you don't like something or don't agree with something, it is not so easy to just leave and go somewhere else. In a way you are then forced to stay and accept whatever the few remaining platforms say. It means Amazon will have more power and control over the self publishing market. If their policies are fair and effective no problem, but if there are issues with the policies and their programs don't work it becomes an issue. I know they have been working on their accepting of amazon reviews, but am not sure if there have been any improvements to their KDP actual program where page counting and scamming is concerned. With the Createspace being consolidated into the KDP system I can just hope for the best as there is nothing I can do about it.
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8/30/2018 05:52:03 pm
I certainly agree with you. If the number of opportunities is reduced, there is a greater chance of abuse and price gouging. I wonder if it would make much of a difference if 1/3 of all indie authors pulled their books from Amazon. There are other pretty big platforms out there, Barnes and Noble, and Kobo comes to mind. Also, I believe I just heard that Walmart is getting into the book business. They are one of the only real competitors Amazon has, I think, because Walmart has the infrastructure already in place and they don't charge an annual fee for free shipping.
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8/31/2018 03:23:41 am
No, I do not have any subscriptions. If I see a magazine with articles in it that interest me I will buy it, same if a see a blog or podcast that interests me I will just read it or listen in.
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8/31/2018 11:00:24 am
Good answers! Thank you. I can recommend the guest blogs on my website. I have been inviting these people because they are writing some dynamite stuff about books and writing. I am a pretty linear person, so the blog about non-linear writing was an eye-opener for me.
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9/1/2018 03:04:37 am
You have to treat writing like a job and set times for it. Yes there will be times when you are on a role and write outside of those times, but for the most it can be managed like and job. You make the time and balance family and writing.
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9/1/2018 09:28:22 am
That makes sense to me. I do the same thing with my business, and I can take time off whenever I want. Yesterday, Mrs. Word Refiner and I took the two ten-year-old granddaughters to the local game arcade. After, we went out for frozen yogurt. It was a good day.
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9/2/2018 06:00:54 am
Well, you know I am writing a romance novel in between these books, my 'writer's block' cure. I am struggling with the main characters just really not liking each other, now it will seem a bit weird if they suddenly do. I tried to get them to be nicer, but they just did not want to play along. I know what I like, but it is difficult to write for someone completely different, different character, life upbringing what they will like. I somehow doubt want I find attractive they would to. I take my hat of to romance writers, it takes true talent to make an emotion like love real for the readers through the characters. I mean a fight scene or action book is easier, a head goes rolling here, a few blood splatters here and there and you set. (yes, yes a bit tongue in cheek and very simplistic but I am sure you get what I mean.) Action books are still difficult to write, any book is, but a book that depends on emotional connection for its readers to the emotion between characters is very difficult. Especially trying to make it seem natural and not something you just forced the characters to do for the book. If you have disparaged Romance writers in the past, I ask you just to read one book and try see what I am talking about. Having a true strong emotion like love be believable takes talent. Having finally realized this, I am thinking my book won't be a romance but a paranormal apocalypse book, well unless I find my main character has a twin brother who suits my female lead better. (maybe I should write soapies instead?)
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9/2/2018 09:45:34 am
Being a hardcore fan of action-based stories, sci-fi, fantasy, whodunits, and others were always my goto for a good read. I had not read a romance until I received a contract to review and promote that type of book. I was very surprised and pleasantly so at the quality of the writing. Since then, I have read historical romance, contemporary romance, regency romance, and not very long ago a collection of contemporary short stories that made my eyes sweat! There is some really good writing out there, and my respect for romance writers in general has increased a great deal. I don't look down on any genre any more at all. I have my favorites, but good writing is good writing and I have found it everywhere.
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9/2/2018 10:36:25 am
I haven't tried reading it out loud yet, will try it next time. Currently when I am at a difficult section in a WIP, I just leave it, stop writing and go do something completely different and unrelated. I found baking cookies is a good break in cases like this. Worst comes to worst, I have some delicious cookies to console myself with. But I find by leaving it and concentrating on something else, my sub-conscious sorts the problem out. I say my sub-conscious because it would sound strange if I say my characters go along and manage to sort themselves out. Sometimes going in a completely different direction to what I was trying to make them go.
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9/2/2018 04:33:52 pm
Baking cookies is genius! Switching from a cerebral activity to a physical activity is an excellent idea. I have read each activity engages a different part of the mind. You don't want your characters thinking they run the place, that's for sure. ;-)
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9/3/2018 02:47:24 am
No. No feedback that influenced the next story. Just that 1 star review which I agreed with and showed me how important getting a professional proofreader is.
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9/3/2018 12:36:27 pm
Very good, Erinn. You made me laugh out loud with your last comment. I shouldn't be too surprised, just as the characters come alive for me, a reader, they must be even more alive for you, the writer.
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9/3/2018 01:05:11 pm
Thanks Mark. I was nervous at the beginning but your interaction and questions helped relax me and to actually end up enjoying answering your questions. For a first interviewer I could not have chosen a better person to have it with. Your promotion of my books is also greatly appreciated and I look forward to continuing to work with you.
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