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Multi-volume author, Linda Lingle introduces us to her debut novel, Dear Heart: Deirdre Reid and Hartley Tate feel an immediate attraction when they meet at the office where they will work together and fall in love. There is only one problem: they are married to others and Lee has four daughters to whom he is devoted. For 15 months Deirdre and Lee carry on a passionate affair. Then Lee’s wife is offered a big promotion across the country. With his heart breaking, Lee leaves Deirdre in San Francisco and moves East with his family so his wife can advance her high-powered career. Soon, unforeseen circumstances have Deirdre second-guessing her insistence on a clean break. She resists every impulse to fly to Lee’s side, but on the first anniversary of their parting, Deirdre grows increasingly regretful and melancholy. Then she receives a surprising Christmas present, which sets in motion a 38-year ritual that, against all odds, keeps alive the love she shared with Lee. As their destiny unfolds, Deirdre and Lee dream about finding their way back to each other’s arms, and an unlikely guide emerges to light the path of their journey. I wasn’t sure what to think when I started to read this book about marital infidelity. It’s written in first person POV, which I greatly enjoy, when it’s done right. There is no danger of head hopping in this story. The more I read, the more I enjoyed this wistfully told tale. I lived in San Francisco and the bay area for a number of years and I felt right at home in the story. The scene-setting was delightful, action and dialogue were perfect. I laughed out loud more than once. My eyes got a little sweaty once or twice also. This story was such a wonderful pleasure to read. I give “Dear Heart” a score of 4.8 stars. You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/Dear-Heart-Linda-Lingle-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-dear-heart https://www.amazon.co.uk/Dear-Heart-Linda-Lingle-ebook You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/lindalinglebks https://www.lindalinglebooks.com https://www.facebook.com/LindaLingleBooks https://www.amazon.com/Linda-Lingle Here is a link to the review of the second book and interview: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/sweet-heart-by-linda-lingle Tags: romance, contemporary, historical Copyright © 2019 by Mark L. Schultz except for the author's introduction
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2/10/2019 01:18:04 pm
Mark, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed Dear Heart. I wasn't sure that Deirdre's story would appeal to both genders and would be interested to know more about the male point of view to this book.
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Mark
2/10/2019 05:06:54 pm
You are very welcome, Linda. I have come to enjoy good writing in almost every genre. I really enjoyed your book.
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2/10/2019 06:01:07 pm
To tell you the truth, I'm fairly ordinary, although I've accomplished some extraordinary things, like writing Dear Heart and getting it published. I've been married forever and live in Pennsylvania with my husband, Arthur, and my dog, Sam. I actually enjoy promoting my books on social media, which is perfect for me because I'm not as articulate in person. When I can carve out time to read, I'll pull out a Matt Helm spy thriller by Donald Hamilton, or a Nero Wolfe mystery by Rex Stout. I also enjoy books by Stephen King and John Grisham. My all-time favorite book is The Adverturers by Harold Robbins.
Mark
2/10/2019 06:39:55 pm
Writing and publishing a book, or books, is no easy task. You are extraordinary, by definition. So many people start a book and never finish.
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2/10/2019 08:31:34 pm
The Adventurers has it all: interesting and unique characters who are a little dangerous, and a fast-paced plot, packed with intrigue and glamour. I usually re-read it every year and each time I do, I think to myself, "boy, that man could write." And I find myself wishing I could write half as well. No other book has made me feel like that, which is why The Adventurer's in my favorite.
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2/10/2019 09:14:06 pm
The Adventurers sounds like a good book. It has had quite an impact on you. 2/10/2019 09:55:29 pm
Melissa Miller, the CEO of Solstice Publishing, is responsible for the cover. We're permitted to recommend five stock photographs from Shutterstock for the cover art, but Melissa makes the final decision.
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Mark
2/10/2019 11:10:58 pm
How nice, you and Melissa were on the same page. The cover is striking. It really stands out.
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2/11/2019 07:39:20 am
It took me two years of sending out queries every couple of weeks to find a publisher. I received a few encouraging personal rejections, but when I saw the email from Solstice, the morning after I submitted the manuscript, I was sure it was another rejection and almost didn't open it right away. And when I did, it took me a minute to realize that I had reached the Promised Land.
Mark
2/11/2019 11:24:45 am
Two years seems like a long time, but I realize that the business is getting harder and harder for publishers. Amazon has turned the apple cart over and kicked the fruit all over the street. I have read that publishers are looking real hard at the social media presence of an author as one important indicator, among others, of profitability for a book.
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2/11/2019 12:33:51 pm
Haven't done the bookstore tour yet, but it's on my list. And thanks for the suggestion about motels and B&B's, I think that has a lot of promise.
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2/11/2019 06:35:33 pm
Even restaurants might feature your book in a small countertop holder. Any business depending upon tourist trade is a likely possibility. Play up the "I am your local Author" angle. A small, local newspaper, the local cable access channel, both good possibilities for interviews. Also the local high school and junior college for a writing class. There are so many potential places to get your name and book out.
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2/11/2019 09:05:19 pm
I think it's essential for writers to tap into the emotions of their characters, otherwise they'll come across as one-dimensional to the reader. Here's a good example of that in a secondary Dear Heart character: when Deirdre implores Denise to find out how to exhume Bill's casket, Denise's husband, John, says: "What in the name of Christ is with that ring?" When I wrote that chapter, it was all about Deirdre's emotional response to losing the ring Lee gave her, but in that one sentence I think I captured John's emotional state as well. 2/11/2019 06:10:23 pm
I love Dear Heart, and thought your review gave it another dimension. Glad to see men are reading the book too.
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2/11/2019 09:09:38 pm
Just so everyone knows, Kathleen Anderson is one of Dear Heart's biggest fans. And she spends a lot of time promoting the book, often at the expense of promoting her own work. I didn't know Kathleen until she wrote a review for Dear Heart on Amazon, and over time we've become good friends. Thanks, Kathleen, for jumping into this conversation!
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Mark
2/11/2019 10:04:19 pm
Thank you, Kathleen, I have come to enjoy good writing in almost every genre. What do you write?
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2/19/2019 05:56:20 pm
Hi Mark. I've love reading many different genres too. I've written a family drama, memoir, and a few other genres in the works. Poems.
Mark
2/11/2019 10:12:31 pm
You ably proved the importance of creating Many times, emotions are mixed together also, letting the mixture be expressed must be more difficult.
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2/11/2019 10:33:02 pm
When I was younger, I was able to write with music playing in the background, but not anymore. I have to have absolute peace and quiet, which is why I generally don't sit down to write until after my husband and dog go to bed. If I try to write during the day, one or the other of them will find fifteen different ways to break my concentration.
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2/12/2019 11:04:21 am
I think I am like you. When I am proofreading I turn all sound off. Otherwise I have the radio playing or listening to my daughter's YouTube channel, sometimes both. 2/12/2019 03:56:32 pm
It's hard to say how many drafts I do before I consider a manuscript ready to query because of the nature of my process. I can re-work a chapter a dozen times before I move on to the next one, so by the time I've completed the book, it's generally fine-tuned. Then I'll walk away from it for a week before I go through it one last time before starting to query.
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Mark
2/12/2019 04:12:33 pm
You are not one of those writers that write just to get the first draft down on paper. Your muse stays with you during the polishing, that is really nice.
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2/12/2019 04:58:05 pm
Three of my close friends, Denise Lowey, Pat Miller and Jill Bender Schade, read Dear Heart before it was published, but I don't know if they'd qualify as Alpha-readers because I had already started to query the manuscript before they read it. Moreover, I didn't really ask them to read the manuscript for input. Denise knew I was writing Dear Heart and kept tabs on my progress during the two years I was writing it, so I wanted her to see the finished product. Pat and Jill asked if they could read it when I told them I had been sending Dear Heart out to publishers but, again, I wasn't really looking for input.
Mark
2/12/2019 05:21:04 pm
You have a different angle about your writing than many authors. I love that you wanted to tell the story, first and foremost. Many authors talk about how the story is screaming to get out of their head at times, it just wants to be written down.
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2/12/2019 05:43:17 pm
I don't belong to a critique group and probably never will. However, Solstice has a private Facebook page for it's authors to share tips and experiences and I'm active on that. I've learned a lot about promoting from my fellow authors and from Melissa Miller (CEO), Kathi Sprayberry (Editor in Chief) and KateMarie Collins (COO), and I'm very grateful for that.
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Mark
2/12/2019 07:11:58 pm
The Solstice group sounds a lot like a support group. It's good to share wisdom and gain from the experience of others. 2/12/2019 08:43:47 pm
Wow, these questions really made me stop and think. Three things that I wish I knew before I wrote Dear Heart: that I would ache from the pain of not working on it when it was finished, that the person I most wanted to like it, wouldn't, and that I would lose a cherished relationship because of it.
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Mark
2/13/2019 11:43:15 am
Losing a cherished relationship is a big price to pay. That is very sad. I can imagine there would be a bittersweet feeling when you were done writing it.
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2/13/2019 02:36:32 pm
Ironically, when I started writing Dear Heart, I had no plans to publish it. It was only after I was about a third of the way through it that I started thinking about finding an audience for it. Now that I've been published, I doubt that I'd write anything that I'd be content to let live in my file cabinets.
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Mark
2/13/2019 03:47:41 pm
Great! Then we will see everything you write. Some authors write things strictly for their personal pleasure.
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2/13/2019 04:47:38 pm
I think having a strong ego is a two-edged sword. Writing is largely a solitary endeavor, so a writer has to have self-confidence and believe in her abilities. However, if a writer begins to believe his/her own press and their belief in their importance and/or ability is misplaced, than a strong ego is a liability.
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Mark
2/13/2019 06:22:18 pm
I think you nailed the strong ego problem. It requires delicate balance. I guess that describes much of life, though.
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2/13/2019 08:32:41 pm
I can see reasons why one would use a pseudonym, but I'm not sure I'd consider them advantages. Stephen King used the pseudonym Richard Bauchman because he wanted to see if his success was due to talent or luck, and because his publisher was afraid that he'd over-saturate the market if he published too many books in one year under his own name. And I guess you'd use a pseudonym if you wanted anonymity for any one of a hundred reasons. As for me, I don't foresee any circumstance under which I'd use a pen name. My real name has a nice ring to it, and it's short and sweet and easy to remember. But, hey, never say never, right?
Mark
2/13/2019 10:21:45 pm
There are many reasons why authors use pen names. You are right. I have heard some multi-genre authors say their fans of one genre are not interested in crossing over to a new genre. So they keep publishing under the pen names. I have seen at least one newsletter that had different genres under different names to keep their fans happy and costs down. Personally, I like reading different stuff from a favorite author.
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2/13/2019 10:45:53 pm
I read for entertainment. And I don't want to have to work at it to remember too many complicated names or details.
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Mark
2/14/2019 11:41:05 am
I agree with you about movies helping to make one a better writer. The movies start out as a screenplay, words on paper, we see the visualization of those words, so angles, pacing, setting and every aspect of the story is laid out for us to see. 2/14/2019 04:32:23 pm
I didn't include a play list, per se, in Sweet Heart, but I did include a discography of all of the songs that were meaningful to Deirdre and Lee.
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2/14/2019 05:15:30 pm
I like your reading list. I have read many in those categories. I used to be hardcore sci-fi and fantasy only. Simply because there was so much to read. Now, I love good writing no matter where I find it, for the most part.
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2/14/2019 08:06:00 pm
Nah, I don't think a person has to suffer to be a good writer. I think a person has to have talent to be a good writer. And I don't think talent can be learned. It can be developed and enhanced and enriched but it has to be there in the first place.
Mark
2/14/2019 08:21:06 pm
You accomplished that quite well. Your muse really wanted that story told!
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2/14/2019 08:47:23 pm
OMG, you're going to think there's something wrong with me because I don't brainstorm with anyone about what I'm writing and I don't subscribe to any magazines, newsletters, blogs or podcasts to enhance my career. I do subscribe to a couple of newsletters to support fellow authors, and I subscribe to Jenna Moreci's podcast because I think she's a riot. I also belong to Solstice's writers Facebook Group, and I have found that to be invaluable for learning skills to promote my books. I trust my instincts with regard to my writing, but I need all the help I can get when it comes to promotion.
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Mark
2/14/2019 09:23:00 pm
You're not crazy, or anything like that. Every author has a different way of pursuing their art. You have answered quite well and have demonstrated that there are many ways to write. 2/15/2019 06:13:46 am
I think I was born with talent and finally chose to use it. Writing is hard work and not everyone with talent chooses to go down that rabbit hole. Plus, there are only so many hours in a day, and one does have to make a living.
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2/15/2019 12:17:51 pm
I think you are correct, not everyone is willing to put in the work. I lot of people never get past the thinking stage. Among those that do, many never finish the manuscript.
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2/15/2019 02:16:16 pm
There is no easy part about writing a book. That being said, I'll pass on this tip I picked up somewhere along the line. Never stop a writing session at the end of a paragraph or chapter. Always stop at the end of a sentence or, better yet, in the middle of a sentence. It'll be easier to pick up where you left off when you sit down to write again.
Mark
2/15/2019 02:21:43 pm
That is an interesting tip. It sounds like a very good one.
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2/15/2019 03:00:48 pm
I think of voice as the way a character talks, which is the primary indicator of their personality. It includes rhythm, cadence, sentence structure, tone, and use of language. In Dear Heart, Deirdre's voice is formal and wistful while Denise's voice is casual and crude. That was purposeful. Ironically, Deirdre's voice, which is nothing like mine, came easily, but it took me forever to nail Denise's voice, which is a lot like mine. Go figure.
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Mark
2/15/2019 03:31:15 pm
Thank you, that helps. I believe I was confusing character voice with the author's voice. The former is a part of the latter. Correct me if I am wrong. I think the author's voice is everything involved in bringing the plot and story to life. Including, but not limited to, rhythm, cadence, sentence structure, tone and use of language, your entire list; not just of characters but the entire book. 2/15/2019 03:50:47 pm
It's easy to confuse a character's voice with the author's voice as a writer. I think of the author's voice as "style", but I could be wrong.
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2/15/2019 08:34:26 pm
Style is a good substitute word.
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2/15/2019 08:48:35 pm
There are writers who can influence and change lives, but I'm probably not one of them. The most that I hope for is that my readers will be entertained.
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Mark
2/15/2019 10:07:40 pm
A well written story is entertaining.
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2/16/2019 12:09:09 am
The biggest myth about writing? That your job is done when you publish your book, which is absolutely not the case. Once you publish, the hard work of promoting begins. Actually, I misspoke. Promoting itself isn't hard; keeping yourself motivated to promote when you don't see an uptick in sales is the real challenge. And a writer's inability to do that has cut short many a promising career.
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2/16/2019 11:24:50 am
I agree. Promoting is not easy, especially if you don't see immediate results. I have come to believe it's a daily requirement, each day do something to promote your book. I have heard that scientific studies show that a person has to see something 7 times before they will act on it.
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2/16/2019 12:36:30 pm
I worried myself sick about writing male characters, but when I actually sat down to write them, it was surprisingly easy. Maybe that was because by the time they showed up in the book, I knew who they were.
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Mark
2/16/2019 02:03:57 pm
It's very easy to get tied into a job, feeling it must get done. In the long run, relationships are far more important and finding the balance is key to a long and happy life.
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2/16/2019 02:29:51 pm
There were beautifully written passages that had to go because they didn't advance the story. And of course I put off deleting them because I loved them so much. But when I did my final edit before querying Dear Heart I kept two criteria in mind: was the prose in keeping with the character and did it advance the story? If not, I deleted it.
Mark
2/16/2019 03:42:21 pm
That is good criteria for pruning the fluff out of the story. As wordsmiths, it's very easy to become attached to your creation in all its glory.
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2/16/2019 04:48:38 pm
I don't think I play it safe. I try to tell the story in the way it wants to be told and go where the story leads me. For example, Interoffice Romance is told entirely through emails, text messages and memos. That's not a conventional format, and there are challenges with telling a story in that way, but that's how I saw it unfold.
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Mark
2/16/2019 10:25:12 pm
Interoffice Romance is going to be interesting, I have a hunch. That is an unconventional format, yet oh so familiar to so many of us. I look forward to it.
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2/17/2019 08:24:18 am
I have no screenwriting experience, so it's been a struggle to write the screenplay for Dear Heart. The struggle hasn't been with the actual writing, because I can see the movie clearly in my mind. The struggle has been with the formatting, which is off-putting. There is a basic screenplay format on WORD, but hit one wrong key and pouf! you're in the weeds.
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Mark
2/17/2019 10:13:40 am
I have heard that screenwriting is a very rigid form. What kind of research have you done for that format? Have you done any screenwriting before? Have you presented the idea to any producers or filmmakers?
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2/17/2019 11:56:50 am
I did a bit of internet research about screenwriting and I found the format on WORD, which I'm slogging through. But I'm not a screenwriter, and I don't want to be a screenwriter because, as you pointed out, it is a very rigid format. So my plan is to get my vision for the movie down on paper, doing the best I can with the script-writing format. I won't query the screenplay, I'll pitch the books for movie consideration. If I land a producer, I'd just hand off my version of the screenplay for the producer to use as a jumping off point. I'm just starting to think about how best to query producers.
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2/17/2019 03:03:49 pm
You published with Solstice Publishing. Do they have the movie rights to your book or did you retain those rights to your intellectual property?
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2/17/2019 03:43:31 pm
Solstice allows its authors to retain the movie rights. I can't emphasize enough how supportive and nurturing Solstice is to its authors.
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Mark
2/17/2019 05:11:52 pm
That is a great recommendation for your publisher. I am sure they will appreciate it.
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2/17/2019 06:46:35 pm
Oh, you're going to love these answers. I don't know and I don't know. Ideally, I'll publish Interoffice Romance this year but I'm focusing on promoting Dear Heart and that doesn't leave a lot of time for writing.
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2/17/2019 08:32:01 pm
I believe you completely. Promoting can take a lot of time. It's really hard at first, as you try one thing and another, to see what will work. The bad news is, what worked one day may not work the next week. The target you are trying to hit moves constantly. Doing a little bit each day gets easier over time.
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2/18/2019 06:13:47 am
That depends on what you mean by difficult. If you mean, the-words-won't-come difficult, I walk away because first of all I'm probably on the wrong track and need to get some perspective and secondly, to me, there is no sense in beating a dead horse.
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2/18/2019 11:42:41 am
I have been an advocate of space as one of several ways to deal with writer's block. I also think a few weeks of space after completing the first draft is a good idea. How much time away from the WIP do you take, on average?
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2/18/2019 12:52:25 pm
When I'm blocked, I could stay away from a manuscript anywhere from a day to a month. It depends how long it takes for a solution to occur to me. Sometimes I'll turn to research, or work on my website or on another part of the book, but there have been times when I've walked away completely.
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2/18/2019 03:39:32 pm
Most of the time there is a nugget of truth in a negative remark. A positive change can result. That is excellent! Perspective and objectivity can make a big difference.
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2/18/2019 05:36:16 pm
I'm reading The Reckoning by John Grisham. I haven't read any books about writing for years, which is going to make some of your readers lose their minds, but that's the truth of it.
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Mark
2/18/2019 07:05:12 pm
Grisham has cranked out a lot of books. You are correct, some of my readers are scratching their heads about now.
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2/18/2019 08:15:42 pm
I have thought about doing an audio book, but only because I, personally, would like to hear the story narrated. But, at this stage of the game, it would do little to boost sales, and my promo budget is better spent elsewhere.
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2/18/2019 09:17:36 pm
I am really glad to hear the book trailers are working for you. Not all authors have had positive results.
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2/18/2019 09:30:44 pm
The pleasure has been all mine, Mark! Thank you so much for your wonderful review of Dear Heart and for your insightful interview, which made me stop and think on more than one occasion.
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