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Multi-volume author, April E. Faulkner introduces us to her first novel in the Nature’s Fury series, “Darkness Falls”: As Nature tires of human destruction, two sisters must face a changing environment that stands between them and survival. When Quinn and Riley set out on a family vacation with their parents, the trip ends before it begins. Mother Nature interferes with their plans, setting off a sequence of events that thrusts the teens into a hostile landscape. Stranded, with limited supplies, struggling to figure out who they can trust along the way, they must determine how to survive Nature’s evolving fury. This is a really good story. The author really knows how to spin a tale. Writing in First Person point of view is something I really like. As long as the author avoids head-hopping, I hate head-hopping, everything gets so confused. This author does a very good job of maintaining the POV, nice and clean. Faulkner also balances the story so well with action and dialogue. The dialogue is so funny at times, I found myself laughing quite a bit. The characters are very believable, all of the major players are developed very well, they are real individuals, not cardboard cutouts. The scene-setting and action help the story to move along at a good pace, the flow is smooth and varies from scene to scene. Just like it should. “Darkness Falls” is quite well written and gets a score of 4.9 stars. You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/Darkness-Falls-Natures-Fury-Book-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-darkness-falls https://www.barnesandnoble.com/darkness-falls-a-e-faulkner You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/AuthAEFaulkner http://authoraefaulkner.com https://www.facebook.com/authaefaulkner https://www.instagram.com/authoraefaulkner I have also reviewed the third book in the series: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/devastation-erupts-natures-fury-book-3 Tags: Dystopian, fiction, coming of age, science fiction, YA, climate, catastrophe, family, relationship Copyright © 2020 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction
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4/5/2020 11:05:06 am
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing Darkness Falls! I am so glad you enjoyed it.
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Mark
4/5/2020 11:26:08 am
I enjoyed your book a great deal.
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4/5/2020 01:05:13 pm
Sure! My husband and I have two sons - one a full-fledged teenager and the other just beginning his teenage years. They like to help me name characters. Also, we have two cats. I am a complete cat nut - I would love to have a house full of them!! I work full-time in the healthcare marketing/communications field and write books in my free time. I would love to become a full-time writer some day.
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Mark
4/5/2020 01:40:25 pm
Very nice. That is wonderful that your kids help in the creative process.
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4/5/2020 02:09:02 pm
The experience I've gained from work has definitely improved my writing. I've spent the past 20+ years writing and editing, not quite the most interesting topics, but every bit of practice helps.
Mark
4/5/2020 02:27:04 pm
I think most writers would agree, any kind of writing and editing will improve your writing. A newsletter sounds like another good way to improve writing.
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4/5/2020 03:09:42 pm
I loved The Hunger Games movies. I know there were inconsistencies between them and the books, but I was just so captivated by seeing my favorite characters come to life on the screen that it doesn't bother me. Same with The Darkest Minds - I absolutely loved that movie because I enjoyed seeing the book come to life.
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Mark
4/6/2020 10:06:30 am
Your title, "Darkness Falls", is quite popular, there are many different books using that title. 4/6/2020 10:35:57 am
The main character names were pretty easy to choose. I absolutely love the name Quinn, and knew I wanted to make that my main character's name. I asked my sons what names they would suggest and my younger son was adamant that there should be an Aidan and a Jeff! Two characters are named for cats - Jasmine and Benny. Some others are based on friends and family names.
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Mark
4/6/2020 11:18:46 am
That's nice that your two-legged and four-legged kids helped come up with character names.
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4/6/2020 11:39:42 am
Thanks for that tip about verified contests! I'll check out that blog. If I do build up the nerve to enter one, I definitely want to avoid a scam!
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Mark
4/6/2020 04:13:44 pm
Glad to hear KU is working for you. Some authors make a lot of money there and many don't. One of the down sides is that an author is locked into the Amazon environment, they can't place their book elsewhere. There are a good number of people who don't shop on Amazon, they go to other platforms, Bookbub, Kobo, Barnes & Noble to name a few.
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4/6/2020 04:24:31 pm
I loved Beverly Cleary and Judy Blume books as a kid - I couldn't read those fast enough!
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Mark
4/7/2020 09:52:23 am
You have read a lot! That is excellent. Reading can bring such joy and excitement to our lives.
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4/7/2020 10:40:53 am
I think characters are more believable and relatable if you can understand what they are feeling. As a reader, if I can relate to the characters, I am more invested in their journey and want to continue on it with them for as long as possible.
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Mark
4/7/2020 11:09:47 am
That investment into the characters is very important. I tend to get very deep into a story, if it's well written. If the characters are shallow or weak, that undercuts the enjoyment of the story quite a bit.
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4/7/2020 01:00:26 pm
There are some scenes that do not make the final cut. Those are typically scenes that come to me randomly. I quickly add them to my manuscript when I think of them, and if I am able to work them in somewhere, I do. But if they just don't make sense anywhere in the story, I remove them and save them in a separate file so that I can refer to them for a future book if it would work to recycle what I've written.
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Mark
4/7/2020 02:12:18 pm
It sounds like you have some great beta readers. They have helped you quite a bit.
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4/7/2020 02:24:18 pm
Dialogue is my favorite part to write. It's the most fun! I do have to remind myself quite often to take a break from the dialogue!! Action scenes are fun too - but I find them more challenging because I try to balance "just enough" details/information without weighing down any drama. If I am trying to create suspense, I don't want to slow the reader down with mundane details. Yet I want to include enough details that the reader can picture him/herself right there, on the edge of their seat!
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Mark
4/7/2020 03:33:25 pm
I did enjoy a lot of the dialogue, i laughed quite a few times. Quinn and Riley had many snarky moments, but they cared deeply for each other.
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4/7/2020 04:21:02 pm
I have got to check out that character psychological profile generator - that sounds fascinating!!
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Mark
4/7/2020 06:47:23 pm
You and your niece must have had a lot of fun with the book.
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4/8/2020 08:03:42 am
That is awesome your granddaughter is writing a story! She is certainly lucky to have your help in editing!
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Mark
4/8/2020 09:49:42 am
Quinn and Jim are acting true to form. Almost every teenager makes bad decisions at one time or another. While Jim may not be a narcissist or a psychopath, he is very self-centered and narrow-focused. Every antagonist worth their salt thinks they are the hero in their own story.
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4/8/2020 10:58:51 am
I recently did a read-through of my first two books [both published] and there are things I would change if it would not cause a spiral effect on the story. But, I also feel that unless I give myself a hard stop on making changes, this circle of wanting to add and change details will continue forever! So, unless I find an error, I leave the stories as is and keep moving forward. It can be a struggle to avoid getting bogged down with all the "what if this happened?" or "what if that didn't happen?"
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Mark
4/8/2020 11:24:11 am
At some point, it's necessary to say enough. A few writers use the rewriting as an excuse to not publish and risk rejection. Good on you.
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I actually remember that commercial! I had forgotten all about it.
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Mark
4/8/2020 02:04:00 pm
Almost everything, including commercials, is on YouTube or Google.
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4/8/2020 03:54:19 pm
I've had some nice surprises where it felt like a character influenced a twist in the story. For the most part though, my characters let me stick to the outline I create of the major events that happen in the story.
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Mark
4/8/2020 04:46:29 pm
Many authors report being surprised by the characters they have created, so your experience matches that of many.
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4/9/2020 07:51:41 am
Yes, I've heard of Scrivener quite a bit, but it intimidates me! Software program with a steep learning curve, no thank you ;)
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Mark
4/9/2020 09:43:13 am
When working in your passion, it's hard to not do it. I am not surprised that it was hard to take a break.
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4/9/2020 11:01:44 am
I prefer to research topics as they arise in the story. I have a terrible memory, so I keep lots of notes. And research can be overwhelming - I often find myself falling down a rabbit hole of information. It's a constant struggle to weed out the information to include in the story versus what may become too tedious in details.
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Mark
4/9/2020 12:05:53 pm
I know what you mean about going down the rabbit hole. Growing up, quite isolated on a small non-working farm, I did a lot of reading. When ever I found a word I didn't know, I grabbed the dictionary. It was huge, about 5" thick. I could easily send an hour or more in the dictionary. If I had to grab the encyclopedia, more time was spent.
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4/9/2020 01:02:16 pm
Thank you!!
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Mark
4/9/2020 01:38:02 pm
You have a great beta reading crew! I have no doubt you will be hanging on to them. They have served you so well.
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4/9/2020 03:44:09 pm
Once I have my draft "final," I send a Word file of it to my beta readers. They add comments. In fact, I am working through their comments for book 3 in my series at this time! Just as an example, one beta reader had 74 comments in the file for me! I have worked through all but 5 at this point. It takes me a few weeks to review and decide what to do with their suggestions, but I am always glad that I did it.
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Mark
4/9/2020 05:22:33 pm
I use the commenting feature of MS Word also, for my proofreading. I don't like making changes to the actual document. I have some software I use as part of my proofreading that won't work if Track Changes is turned on in the document.
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4/9/2020 06:52:35 pm
Thanks, I am very lucky to have them in my corner!
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Mark
4/9/2020 11:02:08 pm
You certainly treat your beta readers well. That is a lovely way to say thanks.
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4/10/2020 10:05:19 am
Thank you for your kind words :)
Mark
4/10/2020 10:08:28 am
Everything gets easier with practice and experience. I have christened extreme self-doubt "The Inner Liar". TIL can be quite brutal at times, it would trap us into doing nothing to avoid the appearance of failure. One of the best way to defeat TIL is to remember past successes. We have succeeded so many times when learning a new skill or taking a chance.
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4/10/2020 10:44:16 am
I guess the closest "person" I would consider to be my hero is Katniss Everdeen in The Hunger Games. She is brave but vulnerable. Also, she is relatable as she works through challenges. She uses her intelligence when she is "pitted against" President Snow. She makes mistakes and doesn't always know the answer, but she doesn't give up.
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Mark
4/10/2020 11:40:47 am
Finding readers is probably the biggest challenge for the indie author. With a million or more books published each year, on Amazon, it's really hard to raise a book above the choppy foam of that massive ocean.
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4/10/2020 01:09:09 pm
When I sit down to write, I envision my reader as a high school student. That is probably because my main character is a high school junior, so I would think that age group could relate best to her and understand her motivations. However, I've heard from readers who loved the book and they are completely outside of that age group. I've heard from middle-aged and older readers and they loved the story, so that makes me very happy that really any reader can enjoy it!
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Mark
4/10/2020 01:33:39 pm
That such a wide-ranging age group enjoys your writing is quite nice and a testament to your writing skill.
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4/10/2020 03:43:41 pm
I do struggle with writer's block but that seems to happen less as time goes on. If I am stuck on a scene, I will leave it and skip to another part of the story. Then I come back to it after I've had sufficient time away from it. Eventually, I'll get that flow back and be able to tackle the scene.
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Mark
4/10/2020 11:20:05 pm
I think you have the right idea, move on and it will show up at some point. Some authors will work on a different project that the muse is bugging them about; a side story or maybe enter a short story contest. There are many different solutions to deal with writer's block. Personally, I got some of my best ideas when I was raking leaves or mowing the lawn.
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4/11/2020 10:17:58 am
I believe that when writing for this genre, you always have to have a "dark cloud" hanging over the storyline. What starts out as not good circumstances must continue to get worse as the story continues. I like to add small moments of humor or very small "victories" along the way, but I think the backbone of this type of story should be menace.
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Mark
4/11/2020 11:09:25 am
You are certainly on the right track, keeping the pressure on and giving the characters a breather every once and a while. It's a no-fail formula.
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4/11/2020 12:33:09 pm
Thanks for the ideas on the songlist! I could easily have that added to the back of the book!! And there are definitely some songs that take me right back to specific chapters.
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Mark
4/11/2020 01:41:45 pm
Nice about the vampire story. I had a similar experience not long ago. I proofed a story called Original Grace. It was extremely well written and a lot of fun. It was way out of the norm for the genre, in my opinion. I laughed quite a bit.
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4/11/2020 02:37:52 pm
I never considered shopping my story to a streaming service. I'm a bit behind in the times when it comes to the streaming market. I actually just checked out Netflix last night for the first time in at least six months, I'd say! You make a really good point though and it is definitely something I will check into. I really haven't given much thought to marketing my books other than directly to readers.
Mark
4/11/2020 02:40:29 pm
There are links to some great blogs on my Highly Regarded Blogs page about audio books, translating and going wide and foreign. Joanna Penn has covered a lot of these topics.
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4/11/2020 03:39:47 pm
I do not subscribe to any magazines, blogs, podcasts. I do subscribe to author newsletters, but that is mostly for fun and not learning. I guess I sort of "go rogue" in my efforts. I have signed up for webinars here and there to learn more, but nothing consistent. I'm going to blame time limitations for that. By the end of the work day, after dinner is made and cleaned up, I usually just want to settle in for the evening and write. And that would really be the time when I would be reviewing educational info to build my skills.It's such a balance - taking away time from writing to put on your business hat. And I am so not motivated to do that. I know I should. I keep thinking "maybe when the kids are older" but who knows ;)
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Mark
4/11/2020 04:13:15 pm
Reading those author newsletters, have they inspired you to start your own? A mailing list of a few thousand can go a long way with some publishers, that list represents guaranteed sales. Like every other part of the business, it takes away from writing time.
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4/11/2020 05:16:38 pm
Yes! I enjoyed other authors' newsletters so much that I have created my own! I have a sign-up form here: https://tinyurl.com/sbq7ezm
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Mark
4/12/2020 09:19:11 am
There is a trade-off between writing in third person and first person, for the author as well as the reader. Personally, I enjoy the intimacy of first person POV, as long as it moves the story forward and the author doesn't engage in head-hopping.
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4/12/2020 10:46:00 am
I'm rather boring in that I didn't really celebrate when I published my first book and I didn't really make any special purchase with my first royalty check. It was so small, I could have maybe splurged with a pizza ;) With the first book, I allowed myself to get too stressed out trying to get it out the door that when it was actually published, it didn't feel much like a celebration - it felt more like a struggle. I do regret that now. One of my friends wanted to hold a book launch party to celebrate when I published Darkness Falls but the introvert in me was not on board.
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Mark
4/12/2020 03:06:18 pm
More than one author has said they went to dinner or had a pizza.
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4/12/2020 03:40:03 pm
I have waaay too many favorite filler words! I tend to use "after" quite a bit. "While" is probably my second runner up. It's funny you ask that though - one of my beta readers told me I use the word "splay" too many times in book three, Devastation Erupts!! So that was a change I made just last week to that story - replacing some "splays!" :)
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Mark
4/12/2020 09:26:28 pm
After and while, that is good that you are now aware of that. Splay is an unusual word, maybe that is why you were attracted to it and used it so much.
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4/13/2020 07:55:35 am
Yes, I do believe a good book will sell itself. That is probably naive because readers first have to know it exists and find it, but I've received several book recommendations from friends - most of which I absolutely loved. So I do believe that word of mouth can have a large impact on a book finding the right readers. And I love that Amazon offers the option of previewing a book before you buy - I would much rather someone get a feel for my book before they invest in it.
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Mark
4/13/2020 10:35:35 am
That is the clinker, isn't it. Readers have to know the book is out there. Amazon has tried to expedite that with the review system.
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4/13/2020 11:33:21 am
Yes, books 1 and 2 in the series are already released, Darkness Falls and Anguish Unfolds. I'm wrapping up book 3 right now. That is a full-length novel and it's titled Devastation Erupts. I'm so excited that this one is almost done! It's scheduled to be released on May 31, 2020.
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Mark
4/13/2020 12:18:22 pm
I can tell you are very excited about the new book. Congratulations.
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4/13/2020 01:27:25 pm
I had actually planned to hold a launch party for book 3 at a local bookstore. The owner has read my first 2 books and offered to host it. I was very excited about that, but now I don't know if it will happen due to the pandemic. We shall see.
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Mark
4/13/2020 02:29:10 pm
A lot of parties have been canceled or postponed. Including the major book fairs all around the world.
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4/13/2020 03:39:03 pm
Yes, ideas seem to hit me when I am away from my laptop :) Most of the time they strike when I am outside walking. I've learned that being in nature helps me focus. The back of our house faces woods, so lately I've been taking the laptop and sitting outside on our deck, so that I can still enjoy nature but am able to write as inspiration strikes. It's been working out well!
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Mark
4/13/2020 04:11:45 pm
Being outside works well for you and your muse. I know one author that wakes up almost every night about 2:30 in the morning with her muse providing insights. She wishes her muse lived in the same time zone.
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4/13/2020 04:38:16 pm
HA! That is so funny how that author's muse wakes her in the middle of the night!!! I do not envy her. I have been thinking about researching noise-cancelling headphones! That could make me much more productive.
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Mark
4/13/2020 04:51:35 pm
I don't envy her either.
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4/13/2020 07:53:11 pm
Thanks again, Mark! I look forward to your future reviews!
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