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Multi-genre, multi-volume author, Maggie Plummer introduces us to her wonderful story about living like a hippie in the 70s, “Bell-Bottom Gypsy: A Jessie Morgan Novel”: A wild 1970s ride – an adventurous coming of age journey along America’s back roads. At twenty, Jessie Morgan is fed up with just about everything. It’s September 1971 -- time to drop out, tune in, and turn on. She leaves college and Detroit in the rearview mirror, hitting the road in her 1965 yellow Volkswagen convertible. Wandering byways from Kentucky to Key West to Montana, Jessie is out to experience everything. She didn't count on meeting a man like Twisty. WARNING: BELL-BOTTOM GYPSY is New Adult Fiction recommended for mature readers due to 1970s-era sex, drugs, and cussing. This story is a lot of fun. I really enjoyed it. I graduated from high school in 1971. Growing up on a small farm in a small town, I didn’t do anything wild. I moved to San Francisco shortly after. I met a lot of hippies and other counterculture types. This story rings with a great deal of truth on many levels. Many young people were abandoning the traditions of their families in various ways and were looking for something to anchor their life to. The scene-setting is marvelous, I could see everything in my mind, the dialogue was quite good also. Action left nothing to be desired. The writing is excellent! This book gives a great snapshot of the journey, one young woman travels, in an interesting period of American history. I award a score of 4.9 stars to “Bell-Bottom Gypsy”. You can buy this book:
https://smile.amazon.com/bell-bottom-gypsy-by-maggie-plummer https://www.goodreads.com/-bell-bottom-gypsy https://www.amazon.co.uk/Bell-Bottom-Gypsy-Jessie-Morgan-Novel-ebook You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/authormaggiep https://maggieplummerauthor.weebly.com https://www.facebook.com/authormaggieplummer Tags: coming of age, women’s adventure, women’s action, fishing, traveling, rock and roll, drugs, alcohol Copyright © 2019 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction
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9/21/2019 09:18:43 pm
Thanks so much, Mark. This looks great, and I am happy that you enjoyed the book. Write on! (as they say, LOL)
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Mark
9/21/2019 09:46:18 pm
I did enjoy your book a great deal.
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9/21/2019 11:24:39 pm
OK. Let's see. I am a retired journalist, and I love staying home with my sweet black lab Peaches, whom I rescued from our local animal shelter here in Polson, Montana. She is my fifth dog and my first female dog. I honestly like animals better than I like most people. My worst peeve is animal suffering. I cannot stand that.
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Mark
9/21/2019 11:29:44 pm
Very good. Journalism must have taught you a lot about observing people and events. I would imagine writing concisely was important most of the time.
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9/21/2019 11:51:38 pm
Yes, I think some of our best novelists have had newspaper backgrounds. You're right: Concise writing is the most valuable skill I learned from being a journalist. (I certainly hope that was a concise sentence! ha!)
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Mark
9/22/2019 12:02:20 am
Quite succinct. Thank you.
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9/29/2019 08:25:02 pm
Hi there, Jan,
Mark
9/29/2019 09:15:16 pm
Nice to see you Jan. We will be having our own conversation next June. I am looking forward to it. 9/22/2019 12:47:00 pm
I designed the novel's cover myself, with designs and images provided by KDP (Kindle Direct Publishing). I've been able to do that for all three of my novels. I enjoy working on the covers. Sometimes, when I feel stuck in my writing, I go to the KDP site and fiddle around with the cover. It helps me visualize the novel coming together.
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9/22/2019 12:51:45 pm
One more thing: I chose the book cover fonts to reflect the novel's relatively modern, informal style.
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Mark
9/22/2019 12:54:14 pm
I like the simplicity of the cover. That seems like a good way to deal with writer's block.
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9/22/2019 01:25:39 pm
Coming up with this title was quite a process. For years, imagining a book based on my early 70s travels, I wanted it entitled "Tales of a Volkswagen Gypsy." As I began writing this novel, various friends told me that "tales" made it sound like short stories. I thought, OK, "Volkswagen Gypsy." Then I found out that the VW Corporation is extremely uptight about use of their name and/or brand. I tried again and again to contact them, to work something out, but never heard back from them. (plus everything was in German! LOL) It was back to the proverbial drawing board for a title. It wasn't easy letting go of "VW" in the title. For some reason, I had become very attached to that. I came up with various 70s-era things to add to the word "gypsy," and "bell-bottom" won. I'm happy with it.
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Mark
9/22/2019 02:29:24 pm
Many companies are very jealous of their brand. They have a legion of lawyers to protect their IP. I think you made a wise choice to change the title of your book.
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9/22/2019 03:17:37 pm
My first novel, Spirited Away – A Novel of the Stolen Irish, was a 2013 finalist in The Kindle Book Review's Best Indie Book Awards as well as a quarter-finalist in the 2014 Amazon Breakthrough Novel Awards.
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Mark
9/22/2019 04:25:34 pm
That is really nice to be a finalist for these awards. That must have been a big boost of confidence. There are a lot of shady contests. Here is a blog by one of my favorite bloggers about contests bad and good. Beware Bogus Writing Contests! Look for These 8 Red Flags. https://annerallen.com/2019/05/beware-bogus-writing-contests/ via @annerallen You will have to copy and paste the link.
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9/22/2019 08:59:47 pm
Thanks for the blog link. That looks helpful. I'll check it out.
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Mark
9/22/2019 10:38:51 pm
I have heard similar stories from many authors. Amazon turned the publishing world upside down and shook it out! Many publishers have gone out of business. Those that remain struggle.
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9/23/2019 04:31:35 am
Thanks, Mark. I have been fortunate when it comes to getting Amazon book reviews, largely thanks to the early success of my first novel, SPIRITED AWAY - A Novel of the Stolen Irish. That one has 228 reviews. It came out in 2012 and made a slight splash online because readers had never heard of "Irish slavery" and were eager to check it out. Most of the time, however, an author doesn't have the advantage of a unique slice of forgotten history. It's important to note that the "lots of reviews" territory comes with horrifying one-star reviews that are often libelous. Authors beware: thick skin required. But I digress...
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Mark
9/23/2019 10:57:14 am
That was fortunate for you to write about an unknown topic.
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9/23/2019 11:34:07 am
Thanks for that link, too, Mark. Much appreciated.
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Mark
9/23/2019 12:17:35 pm
You are welcome for the link. There are a number of blogs on my website in Guest blogs and Highly Regarded Blogs that you might find interesting.
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9/23/2019 05:05:37 pm
I think I'm both, but tending toward under-writing. When the first draft is finished, there are patches that need to be fleshed out, and other patches or scenes that must be cut or tightened up.
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Mark
9/23/2019 05:52:38 pm
Very good. It sounds like you are writing the first draft just to have it on paper. That is the reason for a first draft, it's supposed to be a POS. I do not believe there has ever been a perfect first draft. Considering that I find spelling errors in almost every book I read, there are few perfect final drafts also.
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9/23/2019 06:26:53 pm
I still cannot believe I spelled pixie that way. GRRRR LOL
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Mark
9/23/2019 06:39:39 pm
Lightning is a word that trips up so many authors, they write "lightening", so frequently.
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9/23/2019 08:44:02 pm
Well, I certainly hope you and Grizz get to be in that book!
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Mark
9/23/2019 09:09:59 pm
I have heard that about antagonists from many authors.
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9/24/2019 09:45:10 am
I try to write my novels in a straight line, plowing through difficult scenes as they occur. That way the whole thing gets finished and I don't have dangling, incomplete chunks in the story. Sometimes it changes, though. If I'm really stuck, I'll jump forward in the story and write a scene I'm enthused about. That seems to get me un-stuck.
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Mark
9/24/2019 09:53:47 am
You discovered what I think is a good idea for beating writer's block. There is a guest blog elsewhere on my website about non-linear writing.
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9/24/2019 10:20:54 am
Where in San Francisco did you live? In 1972 I moved there, and lived in the lower Haight neighborhood because the rents were relatively inexpensive there. I'm glad I'm not trying to live in that city now!
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Mark
9/24/2019 10:37:40 am
I lived on the south side of Mt. Davidson, until I moved out on my own. Then I lived all over town, the Avenues, Mission District, Glen Park to name a few. I won't return to San Francisico until the supervisors straighten things out. Chaos and lawlessness reigns now.
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9/24/2019 11:07:29 am
I admire Harper Lee for her incredible storytelling in my favorite novel of all time, TO KILL A MOCKINGBIRD. I really must read that novel again soon.
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Mark
9/24/2019 11:49:30 am
Very good. I should read TKAM also. If nothing else to see what the hullabaloo is about. I read nothing but science fiction and fantasy for my pleasure, for a long time. I missed many of the classics.
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9/24/2019 12:06:36 pm
I can't stand science fiction and fantasy. I used to like fantasy, to some extent. In the 70s, I loved Tolkien's LORD OF THE RINGS books. But my tastes have changed. When I went to see the "Lord of the Rings" movie, I fell asleep. LOL
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Mark
9/24/2019 12:46:55 pm
The LOTR was my introduction to fantasy, and it knocked me out! I read the series three times before graduating from high school.
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9/24/2019 01:20:33 pm
I keep track of characters and events with a scene list, which is a rough outline. But as I write, I don't always stick to the list. I do try to update my list.
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Mark
9/24/2019 03:37:33 pm
You do sound like a plotter.
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9/25/2019 02:25:46 am
My scene list is sparse, just brief summaries of each scene. I try to include anything important to moving the story forward.
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Mark
9/25/2019 10:59:55 am
A lot of authors use Word. It seems to have the widest base of usage for writing among authors.
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9/25/2019 06:10:03 pm
I have a home office area, but I write on my laptop in my living room recliner. True confessions! It's not the best for my neck, and I probably should change my ways, but so far I'm still doing it. I love being able to put my feet up if I feel like it.
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Mark
9/25/2019 06:28:57 pm
There are so many ways to create the environment most conducive for your muse. If that works for you, bully!
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9/25/2019 07:15:08 pm
I enjoy writing dialogue. I'd say that's the easiest for me to write.
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Mark
9/25/2019 07:29:40 pm
You had a lot of dialogue in your book, I enjoyed it a great deal.
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9/25/2019 09:05:10 pm
Ah, marketing. (instant headache! LOL)
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Mark
9/25/2019 09:23:03 pm
@LaloLafleur and I go back quite a ways. We both like Chihuahuas and books, so we have a lot in common.
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9/26/2019 12:31:06 am
Do you know of ways for me to learn how to better track what's going on with my books, and which types of marketing are effective? I wonder if there's a course... I need to improve in this area... but I don't know how to do that. (pant, pant. I would rather write!)
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Mark
9/26/2019 09:39:12 am
We have never been on those threads. Your questions about tracking your books would likely get a large response. You might also want to go through the interview I had with Rick Hall when I promoted his YA book, "Gnosis" He is a big numbers guy. I really enjoyed that chat.
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9/26/2019 01:37:33 pm
It depends on the book.
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Mark
9/26/2019 02:08:36 pm
Every book and genre have unique needs. It makes a lot of sense what you went through to get the stories published. Historical novels do require a tremendous amount of research.
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9/26/2019 02:40:04 pm
I don't recall doing creative writing as a kid, except perhaps a few poems. I began keeping a journal as a teenager, pouring my considerable angst onto the pages.
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Mark
9/26/2019 03:14:38 pm
The love to read is strong within me, my children and my grandchildren. One of my granddaughters is writing her first fan-fiction in the Hogwarts world.
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9/26/2019 04:53:00 pm
We're both lucky to love reading so much. Can you imagine not loving reading? Yikes.
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Mark
9/26/2019 05:11:37 pm
Most writers report depending heavily on their beta readers, some don't have critique partners also, to their regret. Fresh eyes are so important! I cannot emphasize that enough to new writers. I know one writer that wouldn't show his book to anyone for fear of someone stealing the idea. There are no new ideas, just unique ways of telling the story, that varies with each writer.
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9/26/2019 06:04:08 pm
I bring readers in at various stages. My good friend, who is a writer, is an alpha reader. As we write our books, we bring each other chapters... hard copies. We mark 'em up like crazy. Our chapter exchange also helps us get our books written, providing important deadline pressure here and there. Sometimes I'll have another reader look at a hard copy of a chapter I feel needs "extra eyes" on it.
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9/26/2019 07:45:18 pm
You really have a good system. All those readers are so helpful, it's no surprise to me that I found only two spelling errors.
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9/26/2019 08:59:26 pm
I'm happy with my beta readers, so I will probably work with the same ones. Many of them are writer friends, so I reciprocate the beta reading. That works beautifully. I make sure to give each beta reader a complimentary signed hard copy, and they're always in the acknowledgements.
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Mark
9/26/2019 09:18:11 pm
That sounds like a nice way to thank your readers. Returning the favor is a wonderful idea, of course. You have done well building up this group of writer friends. It's wonderful to help and be helped in turn.
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9/26/2019 09:44:54 pm
Let's see. The most important thing I learned from publishing BELL-BOTTOM GYPSY is that putting autobiographical fiction out there is fun.
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Mark
9/26/2019 10:43:00 pm
Right on the lake. How nice. I do enjoy spending time on waterfronts a lot, especially the ocean. Lakes are quite nice also. Larger lakes have their own weather. A point you brought out well in your book.
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9/27/2019 11:57:19 am
Those are tough questions, Mark.
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Mark
9/27/2019 12:13:17 pm
Glad I could make you think.
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9/27/2019 06:48:11 pm
At this point, no, I'm not writing anything strictly for my own pleasure. I'm focused on publishing more books. However, the Jessie Morgan Series is, in a way, for my own pleasure. I've been meaning to get my stories written down for years and years. I'm happy to finally be doing it, even though it's not easy. (It's really, really not easy.)
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Mark
9/27/2019 07:17:40 pm
Don't sugar coat it, tell me how you really feel. Just kidding.
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9/28/2019 12:40:58 am
I think it takes a healthy ego to write at all, so a strong ego is an asset for a writer. But if a writer's ego gets too big, it's a liability. Some of my favorite writers produced their best work early in their careers, before they experienced huge success. Why is that? I'm thinking it's probably the ego factor.
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Mark
9/28/2019 10:33:24 am
I think you might be right. The readers who become your fans will very likely have an adventurous spirit and enjoy traveling.
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9/28/2019 12:15:25 pm
No writing lucky charm. Maybe I'll put finding one on my list of things to do. Ha!
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9/28/2019 01:12:20 pm
That makes sense, sometimes we don't have a choice to take a break. A lot of energy can be expended in creative pursuits. I hope you're eating well and exercising.
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9/28/2019 02:29:53 pm
Sometimes I struggle with writer's block. I try to overcome it by tackling a different part of the book or a scene I'm enthused about writing.
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Mark
9/28/2019 03:34:11 pm
There are many reasons to use a pseudonym, probably almost as many as authors who use a pen name. Some authors use a different name for each genre they write in. I saw one author bring all her books and pen names together under one website. A separate section for the fan loyal to only one genre. I bet she was hoping for crossover also.
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9/28/2019 04:22:01 pm
I have never written a memoir, so I am not familiar with that genre. I thought about writing this novel as a memoir, but decided that my memory is not reliable enough.
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9/28/2019 05:11:51 pm
Thank you for correcting me. Not memoir, semi-autobiographical fiction. Now, I am curious. Why is it semi-autobiographical fiction, instead of autobiographical fiction? I am not seeing a difference on the surface.
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9/28/2019 05:49:22 pm
I think it's semi-autobiographical fiction because autobiographical fiction stays close to what really happened. The events are things that happened in the author's life. The way I understand it, semi-autobiographical fiction is inspired by and informed by real events.
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Mark
9/28/2019 06:01:33 pm
Thanks for deciphering that for me. I learn something new from so many authors. It's one of the reasons I enjoy the interview so much.
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9/28/2019 07:22:44 pm
My favorite guilty pleasure reading is trashy romance, erotic romance, even kinky romance. They're a "no-brainer" break from everything. But I wouldn't want to read that stuff all the time.
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9/28/2019 11:22:07 pm
That must be a pretty good book. I haven't read it, nor have I seen the movie. I find most book adaptations to be disappointing. The only adaptation I was remotely pleased with was LOTR and The Hobbit.
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9/29/2019 02:05:06 pm
I cannot imagine being a writer who does NOT read books. For me, It's all about language, and love of language. I suppose it's possible to be a writer who doesn't read, but... why? The more I write, the more differently I read books. I'm more critical, but also I learn a ton from other writers' work.
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9/29/2019 02:39:41 pm
I agree with you about writing and reading. It's essential to read and learn.
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9/29/2019 07:00:17 pm
I hope you're right, about the people in my town being wise. Sometimes a writer, or anyone, must cast her fate to the wind!
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Mark
9/29/2019 07:13:39 pm
That was very profound. Balance is very important, I have told my kids a very similar thing, about how important moderation is to live a full life.
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9/29/2019 07:43:34 pm
Sometimes I brainstorm with non-writers, but only in very specific ways. It's effective because I kept it specific. I was writing a scene recently, and Jessie was going through something I'd never experienced. A friend of mine went through the same thing in 1970... which is pretty close to 1973, when I have Jess going through it. (all this trouble to avoid spoilers, hehe!) In situatons like that, I think brainstorming with non-writers is fine. I wouldn't to brainstorm with a non-writer about, say, point of view or verb tense or "show don't tell."
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9/29/2019 07:51:03 pm
Oh, no! I found a TYPO in my answer up there! First paragraph, should be "situation" not "situaton," LOL. Just had to be sure that YOU know I saw it FIRST, Mr. Proofreader Mark!
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Mark
9/29/2019 08:23:52 pm
I am not wearing you out. I am helping you to see better. Your skill as a proofreader is getting an upgrade.
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9/30/2019 06:08:19 pm
Ah, the Fighting Ducks. I'll always love them, especially the track teams. When I lived in Eugene, I could not believe the turnouts for the track meets. It was fantastic.
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Mark
9/30/2019 06:16:49 pm
You are hardcore! That character served his purpose and was out the door, feet first.
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9/30/2019 06:31:43 pm
Sometimes it helps to put a story aside and come back to it much later, with fresh eyes. I've been known to wait years before revisiting a story. Sometimes that's what it takes to figure it out.
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9/30/2019 06:41:24 pm
I am not a writer, but I do understand the need for a situation to percolate under the surface. I like to let my subconscious sort through a problem until the solution is clear.
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9/30/2019 07:30:05 pm
I think third person POV is more fun to write, and allows an author more freedom. All three of my novels are third person, multiple viewpoint. In third person, the narrative feels more immediate. I like to imagine the narrator as a movie camera, zooming in and out. In fact, when I make my scene list I visualize scenes as movie scenes. It's fun! In the first person POV, the narrator and viewpoint character are the same; in third person POV, they're separate. That allows a writer to do a lot more in a scene.
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9/30/2019 07:42:30 pm
I had sentence diagramming in the eighth grade also. I can't remember any of that to save my life.
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9/30/2019 08:26:01 pm
I kissed my first royalty check a few times, stared at it, deposited it, and treated myself to some kind of dark chocolate concoction.
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Mark
9/30/2019 08:39:24 pm
Dark chocolate sounds good to me! I especially like the dark chocolate with chilis made by Moonstruck Chocolates, here in Oregon. The gift that keeps on giving. Beer sounds good also.
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9/30/2019 08:52:13 pm
I'm not a tribal member, but I did work at the tribal newspaper for quite a few years. That's how the elder profile features came about.
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Mark
9/30/2019 09:14:20 pm
Maybe I should record him. Good idea.
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9/30/2019 10:22:04 pm
I hang out with friends late in the day, if possible. That way I can write in the morning, my most productive time. Most people are happy to work around my writing schedule, as a way of being supportive.
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9/30/2019 10:35:31 pm
I didn't know about those websites. They sound pretty handy. There are so many different ways to promote a book. If you live in an area with a thriving tourist industry, you may be able to place your books in B&Bs, restaurants, gift shops, museums, and other places with the angle of being a local author. You can also try donating books to local libraries, there is a blog on my Highly Regarded Blogs page about how to get into libraries around the country. You can do signings at book stores or libraries also, sometimes. Local TV and radio stations are frequently happy to feature a local author, and don't forget the stations in local colleges, even high schools sometimes, as well as local cable access.
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10/1/2019 11:58:30 am
Thanks, Mark, especially for the great review and the amazing interview. It's been a real pleasure chatting with you, too.
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