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Multi-volume, group author, Morgan R. R. Haze introduces us to book two in the Teragene Chronicles, “Alpha Convergence”: It was gone. Terra Prime – the cradle of humanity – was gone. One moment the center of the colonized universe, the next, a gaping emptiness that would come to be known only as The Void. Left without answers and without a tether to their shared humanity, mankind has continued. For hundreds of years, they have spread across the galaxies, colonizing planets, while the history of their home, the truth of Terra Prime, has fallen into myth and legend. But in every world, there are those who wander and search for more. There are those who long for a home beyond planets run by corrupt governments and flawed ideologies. There are those like Captain Singer and his crew aboard the Waylay, seeking a better life among the stars. With the Alliedcorp fleet behind them, Jason, Bree, and Mark are left reeling from their time in captivity with more questions than answers about those responsible. But while Bree struggles to process what was done to her during her capture, Ell’s recovery is taking longer than expected, leaving her family aboard the ship wondering if she’ll be able to find her way back to them. With unanswered questions and dangers mounting, the crew of the Waylay finds themselves facing an even greater threat than before with only the bond they’ve forged to protect them. But will it be enough this time? This is a very worthy sequel to “Alpha Dawn”! I love the short chapters and rotating point of view; each chapter is devoted to a single point of view. The story moves forward smoothly. I recommend reading the books in sequence, the story in this volume will be much richer if you do. It could also be fun to read this one first, I do like reading a book more than once, in quick order, the second reading reveals more details. The scene setting is pretty good, the action is even better, but it is the dialogue that really makes the difference. The characters are fully fleshed out and they are growing. Like so many others, the major characters want to live in peace, while there are others who cannot allow that. The classic contest of wills. I award 4.8 stars to “Alpha Convergence”. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Alpha-Convergence-Book-2-Teragene-Chronicles-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-alpha-convergence https://www.amazon.co.uk/Alpha-Convergence-Book-2-Teragene-Chronicles You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/Morgan_R_R_Haze https://www.instagram.com/morganrrhaze https://www.facebook.com/Morgan-RR-Haze You can find my review for the first book in the series, “Alpha Dawn” here: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/alpha-dawn Copyright © 2021 Mark L. Schultz, except for the author’s introduction
48 Comments
Morgan RR Haze
2/1/2021 04:45:29 pm
Thank you so much! So glad you enjoyed it!
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Mark
2/1/2021 05:09:27 pm
I enjoyed it a great deal. We will start at the beginning for now.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/2/2021 02:47:34 pm
We have used writing as a way to explore and work through issues we have faced. RR has a child on the autism spectrum and has cerebral palsy. Fortunately both are on the milder side, but it has required a lot of learning and sorting through emotions.
Mark
2/2/2021 02:55:05 pm
Loss is a part of the human experience. There is no getting around it. Those who are many years older than us usually die before us. Sometimes it is a contemporary or one younger. Death comes for us all. Each and every one of us has to cope and some cope better than others.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/2/2021 03:05:23 pm
Basically the 3 of us act as alpha readers for each other. As for betas, coworkers and friends who are readers, gaming friends, and some people from Twitter have all helped us. Mom and dad read as we get closer to finishing the story. Lots of ideas come from them asking questions. We have an awesome support group.
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Mark
2/2/2021 04:50:32 pm
Your writing support group is awesome! Many writers have a hard time finding beta readers. Every question needs an answer. That is what contributes to smooth reading.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/2/2021 05:02:05 pm
Usually use Google docs. However, mom likes paper copies so she can mark them up.
Mark
2/2/2021 06:00:09 pm
Quite a few authors use Google docs. That makes a lot of sense for collaboration!
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Morgan RR Haze
2/2/2021 06:53:51 pm
We ask general questions: Did the story make sense? Are there things you still want to know? Did the characters feel real? Do you have any favorite characters or scenes? If so, what did you like? We do tell them all feedback is welcome.
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Mark
2/2/2021 09:42:07 pm
Those are good questions, especially asking if the story made sense. An open-ended question like that gives the reader the freedom to speak their mind.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/2/2021 10:16:04 pm
We are pretty much our own writing group. Growing up we had lots of friends we would talk story with. Most have focused on other things in life, but many of the things we learned with them stuck. I know there are a bunch of groups out there, but since we live so far from each other, and have vastly different schedules, we haven't reached out to them.
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Mark
2/3/2021 09:47:09 am
Not every writer is in a group, although it is easier with the internet and many of us have learned to conference remotely in this pandemic age. As you say, you three are your own group. It certainly seems to work well in your writing.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/3/2021 02:59:04 pm
We did have assignments in poetry as early as third grade. But the power of story we instilled in us by mom reading to us. Specific words having power was slowly taught to us, starting with please and thank you. Later, we learned how wording the same basic idea can completely change how it is understood. A poorly worded complement can sound like an insult. Choosing our words is so important, especially when you are putting them down in writing.
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Mark
2/3/2021 03:47:44 pm
That sounds a lot like how I learned from my mother. I actually knew how to read before starting school in the first grade. A retired teacher lived behind us, she taught me how to read while I sat on the fence.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/3/2021 04:10:05 pm
I think the biggest thing is getting to know the process better. We are implementing more facets each time we do this. It is a continual learning process. Of course, we wish we knew ALL the best ways to edit, format and market our work. Fortunately, we had decent expectations for ourselves. Each of us is continuing to learn what we can. I guess, just confirmation that we will make mistakes, but we can learn from them. We just need to be willing to work at improving.
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Mark
2/3/2021 05:38:28 pm
That is the right perspective. each of us start at the same place, the beginning. It is unrealistic to not expect to have difficulty the first or second or third time a complicated process is engaged with. Especially if there are changes between the attempts to publish. That process is exacerbated by each platform having different requirements and methods to publish a book.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/3/2021 06:13:49 pm
Heroes? In real life, probably our parents. They have always been there for family and friends who needed them. They repeatedly opened their home, wallets and heart to others. It hasn't always ended well, but it hasn't stopped them from helping others.
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Mark
2/3/2021 08:20:10 pm
Your parents sound like lovely people.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/3/2021 09:01:07 pm
Some things actually get put on paper. RR and H write mostly short pieces on their phones or tablets. Z tends to write longer chunks on his computer. Much more gets added in revision.
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Mark
2/3/2021 09:50:23 pm
You each work a little bit differently, but the end result is marvelous.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/3/2021 10:22:35 pm
I think the biggest surprise was that we actually got to the point of holding a published book in my hands. Closely followed by the people who have been excited for book 2,
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Mark
2/4/2021 10:14:49 am
Holding that first book in your hands has got to be one of the best feelings in the world. Not as great as holding your own newborn child, but almost.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/4/2021 02:40:33 pm
New writer traps are varied: Thinking it has to be perfect before sharing. Using anything other than said. No accepting constructive criticism. Bombarding people who aren't into writing with your story. Telling instead of showing.
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Mark
2/4/2021 03:41:46 pm
Those are great traps for a new writer to avoid.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/4/2021 04:14:51 pm
Our ideal reader is into need culture, super heroes, spaceships, alternate worlds. We teasingly say that they would have ADD as well. Our short chapters and multiple POV characters irritate some people. Some have specifically told us to limit the POVs. Others have loved the quick changes, saying they don't get bored. It has also helped some who have to fit reading into small periods. They can reach a natural spot to stop, then do whatever is needed.
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Mark
2/4/2021 05:29:04 pm
You have those characteristics pretty well defined. Especially with the ADD thing. I have suspected for a long time I have a touch of that, I like the short chapters and rotating POV.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/4/2021 05:44:36 pm
Our biggest challenge has simply been time. Since we all have day jobs and family responsibilities, writing isn't always top of mind.
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Mark
2/4/2021 07:53:05 pm
I understand, family comes first, then earning money for the family. It's a battle every writer faces more or less.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/4/2021 08:09:39 pm
Writer's block attacks us all at some point. Most of the time it has to do with having no reserves left. Personal care can be a big motivator. Also, reading & watching other stories can spark inspiration again. Z will play video games. H will watch YouTube videos about space, writing, other cultures. RR listens to Podcasts and music.
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Mark
2/5/2021 10:16:33 am
So many writers do experience a block of the muse at one time or another. Most writers have developed different strategies for releasing the block. Some, like your siblings, seek inspiration in different venues, music is very inspirational for many. Other writers will seek to stimulate the muse by working on different writing projects, poetry, short stories and contests. Still other writers will work on a prequel or a side story related to the main work. Some engage in household or outdoor activities to get their mind off the work in progress.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/5/2021 03:40:54 pm
We so have ideas of other genres, specifically fantasy. But we have each tended to see a way to link them to the current series. Maybe after we are finished with this trilogy.
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Mark
2/5/2021 04:26:01 pm
Your fans will be glad to know that there might be many more branches off of the creative tree.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/6/2021 02:15:57 pm
The biggest issue is internal logic. Like fantasy, you need to set rules for how things work, and then stick with them. Several of the big sci-fi franchises have broken their own rules and the fans have noticed. It pulls people out of the story. Sci-fi requires a lot of suspension of disbelief. You need to do everything you can to avoid breaking that.
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Mark
2/6/2021 02:31:06 pm
That makes sense, the internal logic needs to be consistent all the way through.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/6/2021 03:42:08 pm
For the most part, our tastes haven't changed much. Mom used to get a Reader's Digest condensed book each month. We were exposed to many different genres. None of us care much for horror or tragedy. Too much of that in real life. For us stories are an escape.
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Mark
2/6/2021 04:42:57 pm
Reader's Digest Condensed Books. My mom got those too. I hadn't thought about that in a long time. I did read some of those stories. I was not big on horror or tragedy either, especially the gory and gruesome stuff. It has a negative impact on me.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/6/2021 05:07:33 pm
Yes we do read for pleasure. Sci-fi and fantasy are mostly our go to genres. Sometimes romance will make it in there.
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Mark
2/6/2021 05:37:34 pm
Sci-fi and fantasy are my top two favorite genres also. We have that in common.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/6/2021 10:24:38 pm
The 2 things that stick out are the books that didn't feel like the ending was satisfying and the traditionally published books with typos in them. Definitely gave of feeling of, "I could do that well, if not better."
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Mark
2/7/2021 10:03:47 am
I read quite a bit. 60 to 70 books a year. I find spelling errors in all of them, except one. For the last 6 years or so, I don't find any spelling errors with one read through, once a year. That includes traditionally published books.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/7/2021 06:12:17 pm
No, you don't have to suffer to write. You need imagination and empathy. Certainly, having experiences enriches your work, but you don't need to experience something to imagine it.
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Mark
2/7/2021 06:25:52 pm
A long time ago, the suffering writer was a common trope. If the writer didn't suffer he work was suspect.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/7/2021 07:24:47 pm
So far, the best money we have spent is having Vicky Brewster do an edit for us. We try to improve our process each time. Even though we only paid for line edits, she helped us learn so much.
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Mark
2/7/2021 08:24:40 pm
Good choice on hiring an editor. Covers are another essential expense, if you can't catch the reader's eye, they will never see the inside of the book.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/9/2021 01:41:43 am
We teasingly said that maybe Amazon might like it. Until we won't really think about that until this part of the story is finished.
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Mark
2/9/2021 10:34:39 am
Amazon might like it, very possible.
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Morgan RR Haze
2/9/2021 12:33:22 pm
As horrible as it sounds, we don't really use books for reference. We just go with what sounds right for grammar. As for writing, much has been learning from just reading. As mentioned, we do listen to and watch a lot of things that discuss story structure, tropes and cliches.
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Mark
2/9/2021 01:08:49 pm
Very interesting about Surry and Patrice! Thanks for sharing that peek behind the curtain.
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