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Multi-volume author, Elizabeth Jade introduces us to her two books, “Akea: The Power of Destiny” and “Akea: His Mother’s son”: This husky, wolf story is a new addition to the great animal fiction tradition of Jack London and Erin Hunter, where the story is told through the eyes of the animals. Elizabeth Jade has created a captivating coming of age story which also teaches children about friendship and loyalty, and that being different doesn’t mean you can’t belong. It is a captivating chapter book for 8-12-year-olds. Akea is born into a family of sled dogs and a life that follows a predictable path, but from the day she first sees the lone wolf, Kazakh, Akea knows her future lies beyond the safety of her home. Kazakh is well aware of Akea's destiny and the pack laws he will break to help her reach it. Regardless of the challenges ahead, he must make sure this young husky will be ready, even if it means his life. The heart-wrenching sequel to Akea - The Power of Destiny. Akea is no ordinary husky and taking her place as Wolf Queen was just the first step in the journey set out for her by the Great Wolf. Akea's world turns upside down when humans raid their home, scattering the pack and capturing her hybrid son. Salvador struggles to adjust to a life in captivity quickly realising not everyone approves of his mother's rise to Wolf Queen. When the Great Wolf sends him warning dreams, Salvador discovers his true purpose for being there. These are lovely books; they each have an exciting story well suited to the preteen and young teen age group. The author has created a believable world around the idea of families or packs of wolves. We know that wolves are very intelligent and coordinate their hunting activities. I thoroughly enjoyed both of these stories. They read well and show great creativity. The personalities and pack structure are well developed, including having a mythos and something akin to a religion. I found all of it very interesting. The line drawings are quite nice and help younger readers stay involved in the story. These are wonderful chapter books for intermediate readers and above. The scene setting was quite good and the use of the environment was exceptional. I enjoyed the dialogue and the activities of daily living for the wolves. The action sequences were well planned and executed. The violence was not very explicit to preserve the sensibilities of younger readers. I award these two books, “Akea: The Power of Destiny” and “Akea: His Mother’s Son” a score of 4.9 stars each. You can buy these books:
https://smile.amazon.com/Akea-Power-of-Destiny-Elizabeth-Jade-ebook https://smile.amazon.com/Akea-His-Mothers Son-Elizabeth-Jade-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-akea---the-power-of-destiny https://www.goodreads.com/-akea---his-mother-s-son https://www.amazon.co.uk/-akea-power-of-destiny https://www.amazon.co.uk/Akea-his-mothers-son-Elizabeth-Jade You can follow the author: https://twitter.com/AkeaWolfStories http://www.elizabethjade.org http://www.facebook.com/AkeaWolfStories http://www.instagram.com/akeawolfstories.author http://www.pinterest.com/AkeaWolfStories Tags: Children’s books, middle grade, MG, nature stories, nature fiction, wolf fiction, animal fiction, Copyright © 2020 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introductions
56 Comments
3/22/2020 11:38:39 am
Thanks for your encouraging reviews of my books. As someone who struggles against autism, depression and anxiety, I'm always convinced I can't do anything right. A nice review motivates me to keep writing.
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Mark
3/22/2020 02:25:55 pm
Certainly, Elizabeth. We all struggle against the inner liar, that voice that tells us we are nothing and our efforts are useless. We all fight against that inner critic. You are not alone.
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3/22/2020 07:48:55 pm
Well, I was homeschooled from the age of 7 because school was making me physically ill, and I was badly bullied. I've heard that girls with Aspergers are harder to spot and I think my teens in particular would have been smoother with an earlier diagnosis.
Mark
3/22/2020 08:21:56 pm
That was a rough start you endured as a child. Our son had serious allergies and had to be schooled at home because he was so allergic to the middle school. They sent a teacher to our house a couple times a week after her classes were done.
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3/23/2020 05:40:31 am
I liked home school. It started off quite structured and ended up more 'child led learning'. I enjoy researching things for my books now as well as anything else that takes my fancy. I've taken quite a shine to the speeches of Winston Churchill.
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Mark
3/23/2020 10:09:32 am
There are many aspects of homeschooling that I like, but it's not for every child. Some do well and some don't.
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Elizabeth Jade
3/23/2020 11:48:12 am
The inspiration for my first Akea story always amuses me. Like many with autism, too much information in a page can be overwhelming, so I prefer to have character profiles in picture form. This means I spend a lot of time roving the Internet, looking for an image that 'feels right' and work with that in front of me. I was searching for an image of a Dalmatian with a husky for a Dalmation story idea, but when I found the right picture, it felt like the husky was telling me her life story and I felt compelled to write it down. I hadn't planned to write for children, but that may be due to the fact I was only 14 when I wrote Akea - The Power of Destiny.
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Elizabeth Jade
3/23/2020 11:50:45 am
I forgot the cover question... Lol!
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Mark
3/23/2020 12:15:05 pm
That is interesting, the husky in the picture spoke to you; I love it. Inspiration can strike in unexpected ways at unexpected times. In one interview, the author told me she is visited by her muse almost every night at 2:30 AM. She learned a long time ago to keep a pad and pen beside her bed. Others have told me they get their best ideas while in the shower, I suggested a pad of waterproof paper and a Space pen, the pen can write underwater.
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Elizabeth Jade
3/23/2020 04:23:27 pm
I know many authors struggle with finding a title, but I knew I wanted to name the book after the main character. Originally, it was just Akea, but when I realised there would be a sequel, I came up with a subtitle to sum up the book - The Power of Destiny. The subtitle for the second book - His Mother's Son - was the rewrite of a phrase from a different story where the character was described as being 'His Father's Son', that is, just like his father.
Mark
3/23/2020 04:45:44 pm
I love how detailed you are with the names and titles. Titles are very important, it's the first or second thing a prospective buyer sees. The cover is very important also, I think you did well, the large picture of the dog or dogs carries well into a tiny picture.
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Elizabeth Jade
3/24/2020 07:12:55 am
I can't write to order. My stories come pre written in my head and come out when they please. I had a lot of help cutting a story down once, for enter a kids anthology competition. I got a certificate for being included in the anthology, but I don't remember anything else about it as it was so long ago. It's not an experience I'm likely to try again.
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Mark
3/24/2020 11:17:15 am
I have heard many authors describe the feeling of needing to write a story as it was screaming and clawing to get out of them. I have never had that feeling. I think I could write a story, I just don't have the feeling that I must write a story.
Elizabeth Jade
3/24/2020 11:58:59 am
I know I've missed out on some sales funds through Kindle unlimited, but I've also done a giveaway and donated copies to libraries. So, sometimes it's not about the earnings, but the recommendations, reviews and visibility gained.
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Mark
3/24/2020 12:54:14 pm
That is very true. A long term plan is required.
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Elizabeth Jade
3/24/2020 01:30:50 pm
I actually had an agent when I was 14. He had just gone from working with an agency to working freelance. He loved my first Akea story as he could imagine it as a film, and although he already had a lot of work, he took me on anyway.
Mark
3/24/2020 02:06:58 pm
LIfe has a way of throwing curve balls, no question. Our response makes the difference between success and failure. You have published three books, that is a good deal of success. Something you can be proud of.
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3/25/2020 07:54:21 am
I'm very fond of the Warrior Cats series by Erin Hunter and the Redwall series by Brian Jacques. I also love almost anything by Gene Roddenberry, and Roots by Alex Haley.
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Mark
3/25/2020 10:02:05 am
Roots was an amazing book, it came out in 1976, the year I got married. I read it shortly thereafter and was very impressed. The TV series was pretty good also. That story was one of the few exceptions I made to my rule of sci-fi and fantasy only. 3/25/2020 12:54:36 pm
If people wanted to read purely as an academic exercise, then they'd be reading textbooks and dictionaries or the basic books kids learn to read with. Readers need to connect with the characters, to feel for them through the challenges of the story, and to be relieved or happy for them when things turn out well.
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Mark
3/25/2020 01:03:52 pm
Well said. At the root, story tellers write to give us hope and show how we are all connected to each other. It's one way for us to overcome fear of strangers, also. Inside, we are far more alike than we are different.
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3/25/2020 08:44:02 pm
I think I've done both. I had a chapter running rather short in my first book, so I added an extra scene. And in my 2nd book, The first part of chapter one was all background information that I felt the reader would need to make sense of the book, but then I realized I could drip feed any important information into the first few chapters and cut the rest.
Mark
3/25/2020 09:23:57 pm
You made the proper choice for that chapter chock full of background information, it's a trap a lot of authors fall into. After many hours of research, it's normal inclination to want to show all that was gleaned. That turns a lot of readers off. Some editors will toss that chapter out when they see it. You did exactly the right thing.
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3/26/2020 09:11:36 am
To be honest, I don't always know what I'm writing until I've finished and read it back. It's as if the story makes its way to the front of my subconscious and demands to dictate itself. When it comes to reading, I prefer antagonists. They are complex characters who must have an incredible backstory that has steered them to this point in their lives and I like to think about what that may be.
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Mark
3/26/2020 09:54:33 am
That almost sounds like auto-dictation. You discover the story before everybody else. Just like every other author. 3/26/2020 03:57:03 pm
I'm definitely a muse follower. With my Akea series, I've written most of the 3rd book and bits of books 4, 5, 6 & 7 which I pick up and put down whenever the next bit comes to me. I've also written a snippet from a prequel and part of an adventure for one of the minor characters.
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Mark
3/26/2020 04:07:57 pm
I think that is a good idea, it helps to avoid the dreaded writer's block. One of my guest bloggers, Rick Hall, has written an interesting article on the same topic, Non-linear Writing. You might enjoy it. It doesn't sound like you will run out of story ideas for many years.
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3/26/2020 04:25:45 pm
I've been told that my personal journey is like the main character in Akea - The Power of Destiny.
Mark
3/26/2020 04:41:37 pm
Very good. Many of us feel like we don't belong and we are not always sure how to find that place. You have done well.
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3/27/2020 03:27:58 pm
My first thought in response to that question was 'I haven't a clue'. It's not something that I've done conciously. It may be because I started writing as a child and a lot of children's books involve animals. Or it may be because I have a natural rapport with animals, but struggle with people due to my Aspergers. I understand animals on an almost telepathic level. That's why Cats Protection charity nicknamed me The Cat Whisperer when I was volunteering there. I guess, I will never really know.
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Mark
3/27/2020 03:50:25 pm
It was a natural development for you. That is very nice. Sometimes authors struggle with finding the right project to pursue or the angle to approach it from.
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3/27/2020 06:06:12 pm
I can't type very well, and certainly not fast enough to get my thoughts down and rearrange them. Up until very recently, all my writing was done using pencil and paper, and typed up my very able sidekick - my mum! Although I am now getting to grips with using an electronic device to type on, which is handy for spellings and things, when I go back to the Akea series, I have to return to pencil and paper for continuity of thought - I'm not sure how it works, but it does.
Mark
3/27/2020 06:19:14 pm
Me too. My typing is so poor. I make a lot of mistakes, but I manage to catch most of them before hitting the send button.
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3/27/2020 09:13:05 pm
To begin with, I was able to keep it all in my head. Plot wise, I still can. I know the main feature of all my books, even the one's I've barely started. It's the little things like character eye colour that I'm struggling to remember from one book to the next, so I have recently spent some time writing character profiles to help with that.
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Mark
3/27/2020 09:25:36 pm
Many authors use character profiles, some look for photos on the internet that look like how the author pictures the characters in their mind, others draw pictures and add details such as clothing and accessories. 3/28/2020 01:18:50 pm
Since I don't plan any of my stories, that's a tough one to answer. Usually, my subconscious dictates and I write it down. However, I do remember an occasion when I thought I knew which way a sub plot was going, and then the next thing I wrote about it surprised me by going off in a different direction. Although I should admit that the sub plot started in one book and veered off in the next.
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Mark
3/28/2020 02:02:16 pm
Many authors report having that experience. It must be pretty common. Some authors are plotters. They have the story arc plotted out, character arcs also. Some even plot out each chapter and events in the chapter. There are many gradations between being a pantster, like you seem to be and a plotter.
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3/28/2020 04:20:47 pm
I'm a compulsive multitasker. I often watch YouTube videos on the tv, research on my ipad and write in my notebook at the same time. I still need to be on my own though.
Mark
3/28/2020 04:51:25 pm
I have heard that some people on the spectrum need more input than others. I am not surprised. I know of a guy whose son watches three different TVs at the same time, each on a different channel; while he is building or coloring in a book. He usually has music playing also. He can describe each show in detail.
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3/29/2020 03:30:27 pm
I don't think I find one of these any easier than the others. The hardest thing for me is being in the right mood to write. It used to be that I struggled to switch my mind off, but over the last 6 months or so, I've struggled to switch it on at all.
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Mark
3/29/2020 03:36:29 pm
It sounds like you might be going through a writing slump, which can be similar to writer's block. A lot of blogs have been written about that, I have links to some on my Highly Regarded Blogs page. Use the search box if you don't want to do a lot of scrolling.
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3/29/2020 04:45:05 pm
I can't get my head round marketing and I don't handle communication well, so I have a Personal Assistant - my mother. She organised bloggers to review my books, articles in local and county papers, and I've just had a 3 page article in the Writers and Readers Magazine. These are often based around my autism and mental health issues as a writer. She bills me as The Aspie Author. Somerset Life magazine are interested in running an article on me too.
Mark
3/29/2020 05:02:34 pm
Marketing is probably the hardest problem to solve for most writers. first because it means getting out, meeting people and selling your book. Writing the first draft is a most solitary endeavor, many writers are happy to be alone for extended periods of time. Second, marketing never ends, there is no finish unless you quit. There are so many different angles to marketing, so many different ways to get your book out there.
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3/29/2020 07:58:24 pm
I believe I came across you on Twitter, although I don't remember anymore than that. I had a look round your website, including book promotion, and I thought your package offered excellent value for money. And you were obviously popular as you couldn't fit me in for over 6 months.
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Mark
3/29/2020 08:10:56 pm
It's a pleasure to have you as a guest. Every interview is unique and I love that.
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3/30/2020 10:28:53 am
If I don't start writing when there's a story demanding to be written, it makes my head hurt. It's like having a blocked pipe - the pressure builds up behind it and causes problems. It doesn't matter if it's the middle of the night or just as dinner is ready - it just has to come out.
Mark
3/30/2020 11:09:59 am
It sounds like there is no lag from the time a story presents itself to when you start writing it down. That amazes me!
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3/30/2020 12:53:10 pm
Let me see... I pass the handwritten manuscript to my PA who types it up and we do the first edits as its being typed. Then we run it through the editing software. Book 1 then went to my agent who just asked me to add a paragraph he felt was needed to better explain an injury. Book 2 went to an editor who marked the corrections the software had missed. After each of these, the manuscript was sent to my publisher.
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Mark
3/30/2020 01:12:02 pm
You are very fortunate, many authors do at least six to eight drafts. Those that write large books, 120,000 words and up may do more than a dozen. As the number of characters, places and events grow so do the opportunities for errors to be missed. 3/30/2020 03:07:16 pm
For some reason, I had set myself a rule of so many pages of notebook per chapter. Maybe I didn't want them to be too long and put young readers off, I don't know. So, I wish I had known then not to limit myself.
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Mark
3/30/2020 04:12:31 pm
Short chapters are a good idea for young readers. Your instincts as a writer seem to be pretty good.
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3/30/2020 04:33:25 pm
We struggle with marketing, partly due to a medically complicated householder. Time and energy is not often on our side.
Mark
3/30/2020 04:47:28 pm
A fur baby can make a big difference in our outlook on life. I am not surprised you picked your dog.
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3/30/2020 05:14:35 pm
I read a lot as a child which I think has been helpful. It certainly left me with a vivid imagination. I have to be selective about what I read now or it will affect my writing style. Watching movies, especially ones with good villains, allows me to see what makes them the way they are which is handy. Listening to music helps me to relax and allows the writing to flow. I've had a break from writing for a while, so maybe some nice relaxing music will coax me to pick up my pen and finish my next Akea adventure.
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Mark
3/30/2020 05:31:16 pm
Reading has an impact on me also, I get very involved in the story. I have to choose wisely for my reading material also. 3/30/2020 07:06:06 pm
Thanks Mark. It's been an interesting and enjoyable week. Thank you so much for fitting me in. 😃
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