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Multi-volume, multi-genre author Grim introduces us to the second volume in the Now Comes Grim series, “Whispers of Power”: Before war consumes the galaxy, before the battlefield is drenched in blood, there are the whispers—of power, of betrayal, of men willing to sacrifice everything to shape the future. In the shadow of military empires, two rising forces—Marcus Hound and Johnny Dorsea—begin their journey, not as warriors, but as boys bound by fate. Raised in a world where strategy is survival and leadership is instinct, they learn the rules of war before they ever step onto the battlefield. But war is not just fought with weapons. Behind every mission, every victory, lurk those who pull the strings—politicians, spies, and unseen forces manipulating the galaxy’s fate. When a covert directive threatens everything they believe in, Marcus and Johnny must navigate a treacherous web of loyalty and deception, where the real enemy isn’t always the one holding a gun. As battle lines blur and alliances fracture, the choices they make will define not just their future, but the fate of entire worlds. Because in war, power isn’t seized—it’s whispered into existence. A wonderful story by itself! Even better as a prequel to Now Comes Grim. Marcus Hound is so smart! He is playing chess like a Vulcan when others are learning checkers. I found myself rooting for Marcus and Johnny over and over. I had to remind myself they are bad guys more than once. I am committed to not giving spoilers, so the writing is quite good. The characters are very human with good and bad traits. The plot is full of twists and turns. I read this so fast, maybe I should reread it. I will certainly enjoy it again. 4.9 stars because I am picky about certain things. You will love this story if you like a military angle, a little bit of spy craft, lots of sci-fi and human nature on display. Humans are so predictable most of the time. You can buy this book: https://www.amazon.com/Whispers-of-Power-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-whispers-of-power-by-grim You can connect with the author: https://twitter.com/GrimCalebWilcox https://twitter.com/grimbooksllc https://www.instagram.com/grimbooksllc I have reviewed the first book in the series, Now Comes Grim here: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/now-comes-grim tags: warriors, military, action, planets, space travel, war, terrorists, spies, intelligence, traitors, Copyright © 2025 Mark L. Schultz except for the author’s introduction
70 Comments
Grim
4/28/2025 08:00:36 am
Thank you for that honest assessment of this second book.
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Mark
4/28/2025 08:53:42 am
You are most welcome. I loved the story.
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Grim
4/28/2025 09:02:27 am
As a child I was in the Drama Club in school. Helped with productions of my children’s theatrical performances.
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Mark
4/28/2025 12:17:09 pm
I think nearly everyone has tried drama at one time or another. Young children have no issues playing with dolls and action figures. When I was a young child action figures didn't exist. All I had to play with was little, green, army men and cowboys and indians.
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Grim
4/28/2025 01:22:28 pm
Marketing…
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Mark
4/28/2025 02:45:12 pm
A commission basis is a good idea for those who guarantee sales. It separates the wheat from the chaff. Unfortunately, it sounds like all you have found is chaff, so far. Truthfully, I am not surprised that is the case. Talk is cheap. There are many marketing scammers on X. They follow me daily and I kick them off of my follower list daily. I guarantee exposure, nothing more.
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Grim
4/28/2025 03:38:55 pm
Oh dear… musical groups.
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Mark
4/28/2025 07:05:15 pm
That is an interesting bunch of music. I have heard similar thoughts from other writers. Many use music to help get in the mood for certain scenes. Mongolian throat singers? I have never heard of that. I love the singing in Chant, by Gregorian monks. I might like the Mongolian sound also.
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Grim
4/28/2025 07:26:17 pm
Oh boy… that is a big question that many fresh authors have asked many times in the threads and on other sites.
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Mark
4/29/2025 09:00:24 am
I have been recommending that method of writing for years. One of my guest-blog clients wrote a post about that very thing. Here is the copy-and-paste link or hit the search box below: http://www.wordrefiner.com/guest-blogs/non-linear-writing
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Grim
4/29/2025 11:10:47 am
My writing is not an organic stretch that I sit back and allow the characters to take it in a different direction.
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Mark
4/29/2025 11:23:15 am
That is interesting. Real people, real dialogue and real events in a sci-fi setting. I don't know how many authors do that. It certainly seems easier to write that way. I think most authors use fictional characters that are sometimes based on real people in one fashion or another. They usually make sure no real person will recognize themselves or another person in the story. With your setting and events, I doubt anyone the characters are based on will know they provided the inspiration.
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Grim
4/29/2025 11:35:07 am
The biggest research for my book(s) was the exoplanets that are in the Goldilocks Zone and try to basically get the planet correct as best I could to make the inhabitants match what should be there. Of course I failed completely when new scopes can break down what type of planet it is (water, hot, cold, etc.).
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Mark
4/29/2025 01:25:30 pm
Research is proceeding faster than many of us can digest it. That is a certainty.
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Grim
4/29/2025 02:59:25 pm
That is a loaded question that not many like to hear the real answer to…
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Mark
4/29/2025 04:35:08 pm
That is certainly an unusual writing method. Most of us need hours of sleep every night. Many authors make anywhere from five drafts to nine or ten if it is a big book. Your writing rations are not all that uncommon; many authors have a favorite snack or beverage. I think that will make a good question to add to my list of interview questions.
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Grim
4/29/2025 05:12:16 pm
I kind of remember a question like this from our first interview, but here goes:
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Mark
4/30/2025 09:07:22 am
There may well be a similar question earlier on my list of questions. This question came from page nine.
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Grim
4/30/2025 09:14:51 am
My father taught me very young how powerful words are.
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Mark
4/30/2025 12:10:58 pm
Your father was a smart man.
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Grim
4/30/2025 12:19:45 pm
I have a guy that actually went through checking for edits needed. That is the only person that read Whispers before I sent it to you.
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Mark
4/30/2025 02:29:51 pm
I knew your answer would differ from many other authors because your writing process is quite different.
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Grim
4/30/2025 02:49:12 pm
I usually bring in my person (singular solitary figure usually) when I am stuck articulating a scene. I also call my compatriots that were there at a scene to ensure authentic and real scenes and conversations.
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Mark
4/30/2025 04:53:31 pm
That sounds pretty easy. Cut and dried.
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Grim
4/30/2025 05:04:22 pm
I reward my sole reader the only way I can…
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Mark
4/30/2025 07:17:14 pm
That is a nice reward. Many authors do something very similar.
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Grim
4/30/2025 07:24:08 pm
Simple answer… no.
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Mark
5/1/2025 09:07:49 am
That is probably a wise choice. Some critique groups work well and some don't.
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Grim
5/1/2025 09:14:29 am
Lessons learned this time are that we don’t need and shouldn’t have paid for the original company we used. They ripped us off and didn’t provide all they promised.
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Mark
5/1/2025 11:22:01 am
The old adage remains truer than ever. If the promise seems too good to be true, it probably is. The scammers keep changing their pitches and tactics. We must remain skeptical and vigilant.
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Grim
5/1/2025 11:40:01 am
Three things before the first book…
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Mark
5/1/2025 02:34:23 pm
Almost a quarter-million words? Wow! My thumbs are tired just thinking about it. I use a full-size, wireless keyboard for my laptop. My laptop doesn't have a separate number pad, but it fits in my backpack better. I have another wireless keyboard that I use with my phone when I have a lot of typing to do.
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Grim
5/1/2025 05:12:31 pm
That one is easy…
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Mark
5/1/2025 06:23:55 pm
That is wonderful. Many authors have replied similarly.
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Grim
5/1/2025 07:47:44 pm
That is a tricky question.
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Mark
5/2/2025 08:43:29 am
I think you are the first author to admit they don't like writing. Every other author has said they felt like they were born to write or they must write to quiet the voices in their head. Sure, they all bemoan the different problems inherent in the writing, publishing and marketing process but in the end, they love to write. That makes you an unusual writer, unique.
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Grim
5/2/2025 09:36:59 am
Getting a book into the Library of Congress (LOC) typically happens through one of the following paths:
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Mark
5/2/2025 12:33:24 pm
Thank you for providing that information. It will be important for many authors.
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Grim
5/2/2025 05:04:25 pm
The raw truth is…
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Mark
5/2/2025 07:30:48 pm
That makes sense. You are a brave man for writing an autobiography. But then, I am not a writer.
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Grim
5/2/2025 08:49:40 pm
The best advice I ever got is:
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Mark
5/3/2025 08:14:49 am
That is good advice, very succinct.
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Grim
5/3/2025 08:28:31 am
This may not surprise you…
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Mark
5/3/2025 10:37:47 am
Correct you are. I am not surprised. I have read all of my life. I was reding before the first grade. Anymore, I would prefer to read a good book than watch a movie or TV show.
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Grim
5/3/2025 11:24:31 am
That is the easiest question so far…
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Mark
5/3/2025 03:54:54 pm
That is a reality check! Better than a bucket full of ice water.
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Grim
5/3/2025 05:45:27 pm
Well…
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Mark
5/3/2025 05:53:40 pm
Good separation there. An author needs enough ego to persevere when the desired results are not forthcoming. Understanding that results are not handed out on a silver plate is acknowledging that more education and effort are needed.
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Grim
5/3/2025 06:15:29 pm
Christopher Nolan.
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Grim
5/3/2025 06:22:43 pm
I was asked to elaborate as to why…
Mark
5/3/2025 07:15:56 pm
Good choices. Be sure to get a good entertainment intellectual property lawyer when they offer a contract. More than one author has gotten roped into endless rewrites for little or nothing.
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Grim
5/3/2025 07:19:30 pm
The demographic I have in mind is mainly military or ex-military.
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Mark
5/4/2025 07:40:31 am
That makes a lot of sense. Especially the last part.
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Grim
5/4/2025 07:43:30 am
The biggest routine is staying awake until it is written in whole.
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Mark
5/4/2025 09:07:15 am
Those are simple. Though you are the only person who can write a book in one inspired swoop that I know of.
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Grim
5/4/2025 09:24:29 am
The biggest obstacle for me is I feel I suck at writing in general. I have to rely upon my personal experiences to develop story lines and dialogue.
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Mark
5/4/2025 02:48:18 pm
Thank you for the candid answer. In more than one way, we are a lot alike. It would take me a great deal of work to write a book out of thin air. I certainly don't feel one trying to claw its way out of me. There are only a dozen or so plots, depending on who you talk to, the rest is window dressing and the author's voice. Like you, I am amazed at the stories people come up with sometimes.
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Grim
5/4/2025 03:32:32 pm
I have never had a session of writers block.
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Mark
5/4/2025 04:58:28 pm
For most writers, an inspiration block is a serious problem. Some take a break and do an enjoyable activity, or something routine and useful, not requiring much thought. I have recommended starting another project and work on it until the inspiration for WIP one returns.
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Grim
5/4/2025 05:03:09 pm
Interesting question.
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Mark
5/4/2025 06:01:24 pm
The proximity of one planet to others is important whether they can go faster than light or not. There is a necessary amount of equality and balance of weapons and tactics between factions, or one side annihilates the other and much tension is lost. Stories thrive on tension at all levels. It is a most important ingredient.
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Grim
5/4/2025 06:52:24 pm
Short answer…
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Mark
5/5/2025 08:10:31 am
Before I started on X, I read sci-fi and fantasy only, my favorite genres. Since I have been promoting books, I have read many other genres. Hist-fic and cozy mysteries are my 3rd and 4th favorite genres. I like others also but haven't decided on my fifth favorite genre. I now enjoy nearly anything that is written well.
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Grim
5/5/2025 08:54:19 am
Being a non-traditional author I use all the above.
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Mark
5/5/2025 10:50:00 am
I think it's important for a writer to be a reader also. A writer needs to be aware of what is happening in their genre because tropes and other things are always changing. Writers need to read outside their genre also to learn how other genres are written for new ideas and angles.
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Grim
5/5/2025 11:29:45 am
Game of Thrones.
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Mark
5/5/2025 01:42:47 pm
I saw some of that show. I should read the book one of these days. I was sure shocked when one of the good guys was executed.
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Grim
5/5/2025 02:05:48 pm
I do have an unfortunate response for this one…
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Mark
5/5/2025 02:42:27 pm
Your writing process is unique in my mind. I have not met anyone who writes as you do.
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Grim
5/5/2025 03:13:13 pm
Hired you???
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