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Multi-genre, multi-volume author Paula Braley introduces us to her time-slip adventure, “The Painted Fan”: One fall. Two eras. No way back. Newly engaged Ruby Saunders is finally on the brink of the life she’s always wanted—law school, a prestigious internship at a downtown Tampa law firm, and a future that feels perfectly within reach. Until one storm changes everything. A misstep on a spiral staircase sends Ruby crashing into a world that shouldn’t exist—a dazzling 1940s gentlemen’s club alive with music, danger, and secrets. At first, she thinks it’s a dream. It isn’t. When Ruby overhears a chilling plot involving kidnapped women from Havana, she realizes the glamorous club is only a façade for a powerful Tampa crime syndicate. The deeper she digs, the more dangerous the truth becomes. The law is compromised. Loyalties are bought. And trust can be deadly. With time running out and danger closing in, Ruby must navigate a world of mafia corruption, hidden informants, and deadly secrets—where one wrong move could cost her everything. Because someone is watching her. And they know she doesn’t belong. Perfect for fans of time travel thrillers, historical suspense, 1940s crime fiction, noir mystery, mafia intrigue, and strong female protagonists. Step into a suspenseful time-slip mystery where the past is alive, the danger is real, and escape may be impossible. I love stories about involuntary time travel! When they are tied to historical events and real places, the story is so much better. Braley is an amazing author! She is so good at plotting and weaving the many threads into a cohesive and surprising whole! There are a lot of twists and turns in this story, enough to keep you turning the pages. I am committed to not giving any spoilers, so I can't say more; except read this book! You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Painted-Fan-P-J-Braley https://www.goodreads.com/-the-painted-fan https://www.barnesandnoble.com/the-painted-fan-p-j-braley You can connect with the author: https://x.com/PJBraley https://pjbraley.com/ www.instagram.com/pjbraley www.facebook.com/PJBraleyAuthor https://.pjbraley.bsky.social I have reviewed another book by the author: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-bookbinders-apprentice-by-pj-braley Copyright © 2026 Mark L. Schultz, except for the author’s introduction.
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Mark
9/1/2026 11:38:29 am
Tampa is a nice town. We were there a couple of weeks ago and felt right at home in the downtown area. It reminded us of downtown Portland, Oregon. My wife and I were from the Portland area before we moved to Florida.
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9/1/2026 12:48:11 pm
Unlike many kids, I didn't have a paying job. I am the oldest of six, so I guess you could say I had an ongoing "non-paying" job for most of my at-home years. My first paying job was the summer I graduated from high school as a clerk-typist for a company that made outdoor furniture and pool floats, which was appropriate since I grew up in Florida. About two years later, I moved to Tampa with some high school friends. It was an adventure.
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Mark
9/1/2026 03:45:03 pm
Many authors have told me that babysitting for a neighbor was their first paid job and it was the same for me. I took a Red Cross First Aid for Babysitters course when I was in the sixth grade, and watched the kids down the driveway.
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9/1/2026 06:10:53 pm
As the past president of the Citrus Writers of Florida, I conducted meetings, gave workshops and presentations to the membership, and spoke at several creative writing seminars for the Citrus County Libraries and the College of Central Florida. I have also participated in a podcast interview, which I found interesting; a microphone can be almost as intimidating as a full room of people. It’s never easy, of course, but I find that believing in what I am going to say is the best approach and the first step to speaking to one person or a crowd.
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Mark
9/1/2026 07:30:53 pm
You are right. It's not easy, and it doesn't come naturally for most of us. So many get that deer-caught-in-the-headlights look on their face, otherwise known as stage fright. The internal lockdown is real if you have no idea why you are on stage. The key, the secret for effective public speaking, is hidden in plain sight. Only speak in public about something you are very knowledgeable about. If you are a writer, no one knows your books better than you do. You are the expert. Book lovers flock to hear an author talk about their books. Many in the audience hope to get the author to autograph a copy. Some will buy a book on the spot.
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9/1/2026 09:28:36 pm
I entered contests early in my writing but never won any awards. I applied and earned a Writing Certificate from the Department of English at the University of Dayton based on my work. In fact, one piece in my application portfolio was a segment from a very early version of The Painted Fan in screenplay form. I haven't entered any contests for years. I was going to enter my collection of short stories, "The Bookbinder's Apprentice and Other Impossible Love Stories," to the Florida Writers Association annual awards, but the competition was canceled this year. Next year, I'll check again. One difficulty I have with contests is that I write something and then look for a contest that fits my story/essay/poem. However, I believe many writers do it the other way around: they pick a contest, write within the parameters of the contest rules, and then submit their work. I might try it that way next time.
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Mark
9/2/2026 08:42:16 am
Different authors have different reasons for entering contests. Fame and glamor are but two reasons for entering contests. I left 'fortune' out on purpose. Not many will earn an appreciable amount of money. I have recommended to writers that short-story writing contests, especially those that provide feedback from the judges, can help a writer improve their writing skills. I do have a warning: there are a lot of shady contests out there. Some want to extract as much as they can from your wallet; others want to steal your intellectual property. Here is a copy-and-paste link about those things: Beware Bogus Writing Contests! Look for These 8 Red Flags. https://annerallen.com/2019/05/beware-bogus-writing-contests. You can also use the search box below to find the link. There are other blogs I have links to on my Highly Regarded Blogs page.
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9/2/2026 10:24:37 am
I agree that many contests seem to be created just for the entry fee, but I also think it gives writers a chance to exercise their “writing muscles” and test the waters. I know that organizations have costs, and readers, especially knowledgeable readers, should be compensated for their time, so a small fee is not unreasonable. Another consideration is whether there is a cap on the number of entries to, let’s say, increase the odds of careful consideration. Lastly, even using a definable rubric, judging other writers’ work is still subjective, and judges rarely provide feedback on why entries were passed over. I think winning a contest would be quite exciting, but for those who do not win, there is little benefit for their time, effort, and cost. Writing and submitting their work is what writers do—it’s in our DNA—but with all the ways to reach the public through social media, books, articles, blogs, video, etc., that are essentially free and provide almost instant feedback, contests are just one way to shine a light on your work amid a dozen other spotlights.
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Mark
9/2/2026 12:23:40 pm
You are lucky to have family and friends who write. Many authors have told me they are the only one in their family or circle of friends who write.
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9/2/2026 05:32:57 pm
As lovely as it sounds to think I might inspire anyone to write, I’m not sure I’ve been writing long enough to inspire anyone. My first book, The Fire Slayers, was published in November 2020; my most recent novel, The Painted Fan, released August 18th, is only my fifth book. I think, though, if anyone were to be inspired, I’m not sure I want it to be for my writing; I would rather it be for my tenacity and/or my willingness to try different genres.
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Mary Lu
9/3/2026 11:11:34 am
Don't let her kid you, Mark. She is an inspiration to many of us.
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Mark
9/3/2026 11:22:07 am
I suspected that, Mary Lu. Thank you for providing confirmation. 9/3/2026 09:08:16 pm
You are very kind. I think the writers in our group inspire each other.
Mark
9/2/2026 06:26:30 pm
Thank you for explaining about the genres and how to gently bend boundaries without alienating the readers who love their genre. Finesse is required to do that well.
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9/2/2026 10:30:40 pm
Inspiration comes in many forms, but I cannot take any credit for this one. A long, long time ago, there was a building in downtown Tampa that once had (or may still have) a spiral staircase, and I remember thinking how pretty it was and how perfect it would be for a wedding. In my imagination, I could see a bride walking down the steps, and I’ve also worked in a couple of Tampa law offices, so it was less inspiration and more being hit over the head. The only parts I had to work out were who, why, when, and, oh, yes, the storyline.
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Mark
9/3/2026 10:14:49 am
That's a great story! I love how it changed and morphed into this fabulous story! It would still make a great screenplay and would be very entertaining.
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9/3/2026 02:32:23 pm
Although I have enjoyed urban fantasies – both books and movies – writing in this genre was new to me, but it fits The Painted Fan in the location, plot, and the supernatural elements that are inherent in any urban fantasy. The location is contemporary Tampa, Florida (decidedly urban), and the story takes place in a small downtown building surrounded by other, taller structures which lend a claustrophobic feel to the setting. The interior of the building is well-lit during the day and is not inherently evil, but one midsummer’s eve, when the sky turns dark and thunderclouds roll in, the innocence of the building’s interior seems to fade. The hard surfaces of the paneling and the metallic accents of the furniture combine with supernatural elements: a flash of lightning, a woman’s whisper, and the ticking of a vintage pocket watch, and although none of these things are transcendental on their own, when they come together within a summer storm, they provide the catalyst that sustains the other-worldly tension throughout the storyline.
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Mark
9/3/2026 03:34:30 pm
You wove many different elements into this story, with some direct and others not so much. The dangers Ruby faces are quite real despite her hope of waking up in her proper time and place, her expected life.
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9/3/2026 09:06:30 pm
I was extremely concerned about the Butterfly Effect (i.e., the concept in chaos theory where a tiny, initial change in a complex system can lead to large and unpredictable outcomes later [Wikipedia]), as was Ruby. Within the context of her time in 1948, she is confronted with the horror of perhaps hastening the death of one of the characters, and even with the knowledge that she may not be able to save the young women if she leaves, she prays to “wake up,” fearful of harming anyone else. When she returns, she finds a series of small but definable changes that affect her life and her future.
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Mark
9/4/2026 10:01:06 am
The butterfly effect underlies every time-travel story I have read or watched. It certainly seems like a legitimate concern to me. Some deep thinkers have postulated that there are paradoxes associated with time travel that indicate it is impossible. Time travel seems doubtful to me, but there isn't any concrete proof for either side of that discussion.
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9/4/2026 01:30:53 pm
Luckily, there is no scarcity of books about the Tampa Mafia, and I list several of my research sources at the beginning of The Painted Fan. They include:
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Mark
9/4/2026 03:20:31 pm
Such a fascinating topic. The Mafia, the Mob, whatever name is used, the organizations are real. They have existed in many forms in many parts of the world.
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9/4/2026 05:09:25 pm
Originally, I was so caught up in the stories about the Tampa Mafia that I just concentrated on the historical 1948 part. I was so deep into the research, sketching characters, dialogue, mapping the building, and renaming streets, that I thought it would become a historical fiction novel. Then I saw the staircase, and my thoughts on how to incorporate it spiraled around the story like a vine around a tree, and an urban fantasy began to take shape in my mind.
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Mark
9/4/2026 07:17:56 pm
I noticed the POV change when Ruby woke up. It was abrupt, but it fit her accident quite well. First-person point of view is intimate and limits what the character and the reader know. The different characters revealed their motivations in turn and it was effective in maintaining the tension of 1948 Tampa.
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9/4/2026 10:13:23 pm
I’ve actually been thinking about The Painted Fan since the 1980s. I thought it would be romantic and mysterious, have a spiral staircase, and I never planned on it being set in 1948 or in a building. More like late 19th-century Southern historical/gothic fiction in an aging antebellum house painted white that has weathered to the wood on the edges. Think William Faulkner meets Daphne du Maurier. Right around that same time, I discovered that Tampa once had a Mafia (who knew?), and I found that far more exciting than Spanish moss, moonlight, and magnolias, and so the story evolved.
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Mark
9/5/2026 09:26:15 am
That was a long time for the idea to germinate and grow. Sometimes a great idea needs to sit for quite a while.
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9/5/2026 02:04:18 pm
Yes! I moved to Tampa with some high school friends when I was 19 and stayed until I married my Tampa-born husband, and his job took us to North Miami. Over the years, because of our attachment to our friends and family, we had the joy of making trips back and forth on every possible occasion. It was one way we had of keeping in touch with Tampa’s news, changes, and growth. Jim loved Tampa and knew practically every square inch of it; it was our favorite topic of conversation.
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Mark
9/5/2026 04:23:04 pm
Your love for Tampa shines brightly in the story. Tampa is an important character also. It shapes the reality the characters encounter on a daily basis.
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9/5/2026 09:46:16 pm
At first, The Painted Fan was just the name of Remi’s gentlemen’s club. I needed a name that sounded both British (Remi was born in England) and southern. Then, as I began writing, I found that I was writing not to the object of the fan but to the purpose of the fan.
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Mark
9/6/2026 08:57:53 am
A painted fan can hide many things. But like a magician's sleight of hand, the fan is designed to distract an observer's attention. To keep something important from being noticed. The opulent facade of Remi's club worked ever so well until the anomaly of Shannon/Ruby's appearance.
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9/6/2026 06:20:25 pm
Genre-wise, I am all over the place right now.
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Mark
9/7/2026 08:30:28 am
Busy? Oh, yes! You are going to be busier than a long-tailed cat in a room full of active rocking chairs!
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9/7/2026 11:21:18 pm
For those who do not know, Kindle Unlimited is an exclusive e-book service provided by Amazon that charges patrons based on the number of pages they read of any given book on their list. There is a monthly fee ($11.99), and subscribers (estimated at 4.5–7 million globally) can read an unlimited number of books. The downside is that while authors are participating in this program, they cannot sell their e-books through any other e-book retailer such as Nook, Apple Books, Kobo, or even their own website. The upside is that KU readers have instant access to your book and may be willing to try writers that are new to them rather than investing in purchasing the entire book. Another thing, and this is the part I find useful, is that if someone reads your book and likes it, they may buy it for a friend or relative or share their experiences, which can encourage sales. If they don’t care for it and stop reading, the author still receives a royalty on the pages read. This service doesn’t affect print books, and authors can opt out after ninety days.
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Mark
9/8/2026 10:21:55 am
Thanks for explaining Kindle Unlimited so well. I do know that an author receives a fraction of a penny for each page read. Some authors place the first book in a series in KU and leave the others out.
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9/8/2026 11:34:25 am
Thank you for taking the time to talk with me about The Painted Fan. I’ve learned quite a bit about why this book was so important to me, and that sort of reflection does not always develop on its own. I’ve appreciated your responses and am very heartened that you enjoyed my book. It will always be one of my favorites.
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