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Multi-volume, multi-genre author John Dalton introduces us to “The Dead Ship” part of his series: The Gates to the Galaxies:” Traveling through the vast nothingness of space, Jessie never expected her ship to hit a dead body, let alone that of a giant. But, when it does, it sets in motion a series of events that Jessie, Patrick, Kreig and Amanda will never forget. The body bouncing off their ship’s shields is just the first clue to them finding an ancient wounded ship, floating aimlessly in space. It’s crew of giant beings, all dead for centuries. Everyone thinks it would be a good idea to bring the dead ship back to life. Everyone that is except Kreig. Kreig thinks bad things will happen if they mess with the dead. He may be right… This is such a fun story! I loved the variety of characters and species. One of my favorite characters was Kreig. His blatant honesty and deep feelings were a nice surprise! Proving that you can't judge a character by their looks or vocabulary. I don't give spoilers, but I will say that an innocent fender bender turns into something bigger than anyone would have thought. Get ready for an exciting trip with some nice twists for the readers, but not necessarily for the crews. I award four point five stars because I am picky about certain things. You can buy this book: https://www.amazon.com/Gates-Galaxies-Dead-Ship-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-the-gates-to-the-galaxies-the dead-ship You can connect with the author: https://x.com/JDaltonAuthor https://www.facebook.com/j-dalton-author In October of 2023, my wife was diagnosed with a very aggressive form of lung cancer that had spread to her bones. The doctors gave her three months to live.
On Christmas Eve, she went in for a nap and when I went in to check on her, she was lying crossways on the bed and couldn't move or speak. She was rushed to the hospital, where they finally discovered the cancer had messed up her electrolytes. Three days later, the insurance company told the hospital they wouldn't continue to pay for her care if she wasn't getting treatment, and we had to take her home. There were no beds available in any nursing home or any nurses available for home care. So, for three days, my son, daughter and I took turns sleeping on the floor so she wouldn't fall if she tried to get out of bed. How do you, as an individual, take care of a terminally ill person who needs around-the-clock care? Then, we found Charlotte House, or rather through friends on Facebook, they found us. They came to our house and did an interview, then made arrangements with our doctors to transfer their care to them. They couldn't save my wife, but they saved our family. I can never repay the love and care they gave to us all, but I have dedicated all the royalties and signed-book fees I get for my books to support them and "Pay it Forward" for others in need. They have truly become part of my family. My Mafia, so to speak. Charlotte House is a comfort care home, located in Wyoming County, N.Y., for individuals who are diagnosed as terminal with less than (3) months to live. Residents at Charlotte House receive quality care and support from staff, family and trained volunteers. There is never a charge to a resident or their family for resident care thanks to the support of a wonderful community and generous donors. Charlotte House is completely supported by fundraisers, donations, grants, memorials and bequests. A large portion of care is provided by community members that donate their time. Without this support, Charlotte House could not exist. Interested people can also get free autographed copies when they make a donation to charity by emailing me: [email protected]. I will give them instructions on how they can make the donations. I pay postage anywhere inside the continental US. J Dalton Copyright © 2026 Mark L. Schultz, except for the author’s introduction and the charity statement.
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J. Dalton
1/5/2026 10:05:47 am
Good morning Mark. Hope your day is going well.
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Mark
1/5/2026 10:28:40 am
Good morning to you, John. My day has started well.
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J. Dalton
1/5/2026 10:39:50 am
Good question Mark.
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J. Dalton
1/5/2026 12:30:53 pm
I do think I'm a decent person. After all, dogs, cats and most babies seem to like me when we first meet.
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Mark
1/5/2026 12:52:17 pm
There is no doubt in my mind about you being a good man! You most certainly are a good man!
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J. Dalton
1/5/2026 01:17:22 pm
After being diagnosed with Leukemia, I was forced to retire.
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Mark
1/5/2026 02:42:05 pm
I haven't heard the term "dream writer" before, but it makes a lot of sense in your case. Every writer has to develop their style of writing, including where or how they find inspiration for their stories. Your method works well for you.
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J. Dalton
1/5/2026 04:05:13 pm
I have three friends from a writing group I belong to that are new to writing, and I'm trying to help them as a beta reader, plot hole fixer and amateur editor.(Emphasis on amateur!)
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Mark
1/5/2026 04:51:05 pm
In my previous career in construction, I was a journeyman sheet metal worker and HVAC technician. I had apprentices with me most of the time. I enjoyed sharing my knowledge.
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Obviously, Science Fiction. Then murder mysteries. I grew up with horses, so I also like westerns.
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Mark
1/5/2026 07:14:17 pm
Science fiction was and is my first favorite genre. I discovered fantasy in high school, when I was given a paperback set of Tolkien's The Lord of the Rings. I read the set three times before graduating from high school. I read The Hobbit twice, I think. That cemented fantasy as my second favorite genre. Now, historical fiction is third and cozy mystery is fourth.
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When I was diagnosed with Leukemia in August of 2016, I was told I probably wouldn't make it to Christmas.
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Mark
1/5/2026 08:11:01 pm
Leukemia is dreadful! My wife had it in the 90s; we lived in Portland, Oregon, at the time. She qualified for a study of an experimental drug and came through it cured. A year or so later, Gleevic was announced as a cure for certain types of leukemia by Oregon Health Sciences University, in Portland. We couldn't find out if that was the drug in her study. But, when it walks like a duck and quacks like a duck....
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You ask how has writing changed my life?
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Mark
1/6/2026 08:57:10 am
Writing has benefitted you in multiple ways. Comic cons, book fairs and other events that foster personal contact are great fun! I love attending them to meet authors. I always enjoy talking about books.
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As an indie author, I thought once you published your book and a few people read it, it would sell itself. I NEVER realized how hard it is to market your work. It is a constant, every day job that at times seems like it will never work.
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Mark
1/6/2026 10:55:58 am
That reality is a shock for nearly every author! Whether self-published or traditionally published at some level. Unless you are one of the top authors in the world, like King, Rowling or Patterson, an author will be responsible for marketing and promoting their book. Traditional publishing has undergone years of industry-wide contraction. There are only five big publishers in America, where there used to be at least two dozen. So many publishers have closed or been bought by a competitor.
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I suppose this is a strange answer to your question, but my Oncologist inspired me to write the first story after she told me I would most likely not make it.
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Mark
1/6/2026 03:57:32 pm
A sentence of death approaching can be a great motivator. You were propelled into a new adventure. Your fans are grateful you answered the call and that you beat the cancer.
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I love Sci-Fi because my mind can make up things that aren't real yet, and I don't have to do a lot of research to determine if it's possible.
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Mark
1/6/2026 05:27:43 pm
That Hannigan book sounds like it was fun to write.
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Cryptids are not something I have seen in real life, although I do create them in my stories like my Sci-Fi trilogy, "The Tales of Mordratha!". Mordratha is the Queen of the Rakshesha, the eaters of man. She was once a cute little 8-year old girl who was exposed to alien spores and she and her mother changed. They are now similar to a flying ant, but human size. They continue to show up in my follow up stories.
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Mark
1/7/2026 09:09:43 am
Many have seen ghosts. I have seen figures in windows, but I don't know if anyone was in the building or not.
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That's a hard question to answer.
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Mark
1/7/2026 09:45:12 am
That is a somewhat unique way to write a book. Many authors go through multiple drafts with beta readers, some use editors, and some use proofreaders, also. Having the computer read the story to you is a good way to smooth the story out, making it easier to read. The process works for you quite well.
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I designed the cover myself.
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Mark
1/7/2026 11:21:43 am
You have talent in more than one area. Congratulations. I like your covers.
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Mark
1/7/2026 02:02:22 pm
You are quite lucky. Sometimes authors sweat a lot to come up with an appropriate title. Titles are very important, don't get me wrong. They are the first or second thing to catch the eye of a prospective buyer. The best titles are being recycled, it seems. Sometimes, multiple books with the same title are listed in search results. Sometimes that can be avoided, but it isn't always easy.
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Mark
1/7/2026 02:48:23 pm
Thank you for dropping in and leaving a comment. I love chatting with authors.
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Oh, that's an easy question to answer. They already have their names in my dreams. I know them from the moment they appear.
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Mark
1/7/2026 05:55:32 pm
Only 30 days! That is amazing! You did put all your energy into the book, and that makes a lot of sense to me. That is a nice way to honor those people.
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No, I haven't entered any short story contests for just that reason.
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Mark
1/7/2026 07:04:51 pm
Being careful is so important. Anytime it sounds too good to be true, it probably is. In the marketing and promotion business, beware of anyone guaranteeing sales. Investigate them thoroughly. That is one good use for AI. I wish I could guarantee sales but honestly, I can only guarantee exposure.
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When I first started writing in 2016,, I joined Twitter, (now X) and managed to get a few hundred followers.
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Mark
1/7/2026 08:25:04 pm
Your son is pretty smart.
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I do keep copies of all my books in my car. I've sold (given them away free in exchange for donations to charity) in the parking lot of our local grocery store and several other places in town.
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Mark
1/8/2026 09:15:01 am
You are doing the right things to be a local-author celebrity! Keep it up. I hope that blog will be useful for you down the road.
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I've been very fortunate regarding trolls.
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Mark
1/8/2026 10:52:18 am
Trolls seem to be so random. Sometimes they leave a one-star rating without a comment. When they do leave a comment, it's uninformed, meaning they didn't read the book, and downright silly. Most prospective buyers can easily recognize the facts and ignore the troll. The one thing a troll craves is recognition. They get off when someone gets angry. The best advice is don't feed the troll, don't interact with them in any way. I hope you never have to deal with one.
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Ha, ha...
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Mark
1/8/2026 01:16:52 pm
My earliest paid job was babysitting for a neighbor 1/4 mile down our gravel road. In the sixth grade, I took a Red Cross course designed for young babysitters. At 12 or 13, I picked strawberries and beans for local growing operations during the summer.
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I was a three time distinguished President of our local Kiwanis club, and hosted several events as the MC.
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Mark
1/8/2026 04:12:03 pm
You know the secret to public speaking! Wonderful! For our visitors, the secret to public speaking is to know your topic better than anyone else in the room. Who knows more about a book than the author? Nobody knows more about a book than the author. When you know your book, you are still going to be nervous in front of people. If you remember that they know you are the expert and they want to hear what you have to say, then the nervous feeling gives you passion about your book as you talk with newfound friends about your book. Chatting with friends is fun.
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No awards.
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Mark
1/8/2026 05:56:45 pm
Many authors have said they are the only one in their family who writes.
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I have been reading short (2-4 minute) excerpts from my trilogy, "The Tales of Mordratha!" on Tik Tok every night.
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Mark
1/9/2026 09:04:48 am
That's good advice. Telling them to show their first draft to a knowledgeable person, such as a librarian. There are a lot of people who sit down to write a book with no idea of what is involved. Most of them don't even finish a first draft.
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Kindle Unlimited is a strange thing.
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Mark
1/9/2026 01:13:40 pm
I think you are well-positioned with your books on KU. Are they all on there? When people find an author they like, they want to read everything the author has written. I have heard that some people are reluctant to read a book if it isn't part of a series or the author hasn't written other books. I don't know how true it is, but it seems possible.
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Mark
1/9/2026 04:50:02 pm
Some are easy, and some are not.
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Least favorite food?
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Mark
1/9/2026 06:37:43 pm
Not boring. Like you, I gave up soda around 20 years ago, maybe longer. I have avoided artificial sweeteners for much longer than that. I drink mostly water now. Sometimes I will have fruit juice. I am fond of the watermelon limeade at Chipotle.
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Mark
1/10/2026 08:39:53 am
If you wanted to sell your books on another platform or a physical bookstore, your books would need an ISBN. I am a firm believer in the don't put all your eggs in one basket maxim.
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I never even considered going the traditional route.
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Mark
1/10/2026 10:51:46 am
You make excellent points about the downside of using a traditional publisher. The traditional publisher can also require you to rewrite any portion of your book or even the entire book. A past client was asked to do exactly that, rewrite the book to remove it from the series she had been writing. When she requested further information from the publisher, there was no response, so she gave up on that idea and kept control of her intellectual property.
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I may be biased, but I think my work is on par with most major publishers.
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Mark
1/10/2026 07:00:00 pm
I find spelling errors in 95% of published books, whether published traditionally or independently. They are not bothered by a few spelling errors. Your book measures quite well against what the big guys publish.
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Thanks Mark.
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Mark
1/10/2026 08:41:28 pm
I understand about not reading a book more than once. I can also relate to your readers who have read your series more than once. In school and in college, I did read books more than once, but only my most favorite books. They are comfortable like a favorite sweater. You know it's going to fit and feel good. Now, I have too many books in my TBR pile, so favorite books are no longer in play.
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I really enjoy Terry Mixon's Sci-Fi books. Reading both he and M. R. Forbes have taught me a lot about writing Sci-Fi and making it exciting for my readers.
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Mark
1/11/2026 08:52:25 am
As long as the reader gets a chance to catch their breath, it's okay. I have caught myself holding my breath more than once. It's a good thing I can read pretty fast. I do like exciting stories.
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My mother bought me a subscription to a western series. I can't recall the name, or remember the particular stories other than getting excited when the next one came. I do remember they were more like a serialized comic book but the characters were basically the same, you just followed them through their adventures in the west.
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Mark
1/11/2026 02:40:37 pm
Stories will never stop entertaining us. That is an interesting epiphany you shared with us. I do mean US because we have had lots of visitors.
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Mark
1/11/2026 04:24:02 pm
That's a good question and so is the follow-up. Most authors want to know if the reader enjoyed the story. It's a common human desire for validation of efforts.
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I don't know if I would describe it as any of those feelings.
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Mark
1/11/2026 08:09:01 pm
Your unusual answer doesn't surprise me because you are an unusual writer. Your answer makes perfect sense in the context of your writing method.
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Mark
1/12/2026 02:15:16 pm
I am glad your family will be taking care of your intellectual property. It's not unheard of for someone to want to use a property 30 or 40 years after it had been written. That could produce a nice windfall for your heirs.
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You are telling a story.
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Mark
1/12/2026 04:40:48 pm
You really nailed that question, John! That is one of the most succinct and complete answers to that question.
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