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Debut Amazon author, Stephen Chalmers, introduces us to his first novel in the Wyatt Scott series, Scott’s Tulsa: In post-war Tulsa, prostitute murders, blackmailer murders, and a murky communist conspiracy embroil a cynical PI in noir plots and Cold War intrigues. His investigation intertwines with his ruined baseball career, his WWII code-breaking service in Alaska, and his obsession with a suspicious death there. Hired to solve a prostitute’s murder, Wyatt Scott navigates all sections of town, from the infamous May Rooms brothel to the Tulsa Club elite. More murders follow his work, leading him in different directions, while his past intrudes on his life, thoughts, and beliefs. Major historical events, including the 1934 Babe Ruth barnstorming tour of Japan and the CIA VENONA file on Soviet spying, weave their way into Scott’s life, the characters, and the narratives. The actions of SCOTT’S TULSA take place in June 1948 amid the specter of real communist threats and the beginnings of postwar social change. Many events and the entire backdrop inhabit the times and places stated. The buildings, businesses, politicians, laws, and institutions described were authentic in 1948 Tulsa. These historical realities blend with Scott and his fictional cohorts to present a story that could have easily unfolded like the tale told. Scott's Tulsa is a great example of wonderful writing in the noir thriller category! I loved this story! It was gritty enough that it made me squirm and shift in my chair at times! Almost too descriptive for me in a few places, others will love it. The characters were drawn so well, the scenes fit the mood and the action perfectly. I am committed to not giving any spoilers, so I can't say much more, except buy this book and read it. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Scotts-Tulsa-S-L-Chalmers-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-scott-s-tulsa You can connect with the author: https://x.com/WyattScott1948 https://substack.com/@wyattscott1948 https://slchalmers.com Copyright © 2025 Mark L. Schultz, except for the author’s introduction.
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Mark
12/8/2025 03:59:34 pm
You made it. The first time is always the hardest.
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S L Chalmers
12/8/2025 04:12:17 pm
My life has been conventional, which is likely boring to most folks. Happily married for some time now. Most of my wildness was in college where I was a hippie. Even in that role, I only partially fit because I was writing and making student films that kept me broke.
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Mark
12/8/2025 04:22:27 pm
Not just writing, but you were also making films! Either way alone is enough to keep a person broke.
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12/8/2025 04:26:20 pm
Full-time, at least as much as my wife and two dogs allow.
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Mark
12/8/2025 04:33:36 pm
You are the envy of so many writers. Writers who are younger than us and still doing the 9-5 grind. So many have mentioned to me that they would prefer to write full-time but the bills must get paid.
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12/8/2025 06:49:43 pm
I enjoy mysteries (hard-boiled more than cozies). Raymond Chandler's work is so fine that I sometimes want to live in 1930s L.A.
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Mark
12/8/2025 05:20:32 pm
My soul has gotten tenderer with age. I enjoy cozy mysteries a little more than hardboiled these days. I also enjoy laughing quite a bit, and I find more opportunities for laughter in cozy mysteries than the other. I read Catch-22 twice in college. I also read Pirsig's "Zen and the Art of Motorcycle Maintenance." I wasn't ready for that story, there wasn't much about maintenance in the story. It was interesting all the same.
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12/8/2025 05:35:17 pm
I do not journal. If I had to write every thought down, I would not have time for much else.
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Mark
12/8/2025 06:15:37 pm
Some writers journal and some don't. Like so much in the writing business, there is not often only one right way to do something.
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12/8/2025 06:29:30 pm
I don't think writing has made material changes in my life. I wrote off and on the entire time.
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Mark
12/9/2025 09:44:43 am
Your last statement that "No jobs, people, or events from working have made their way into my writing." is interesting to me because so many authors have made comments about finding inspiration at work, home or elsewhere for a character or a scene in their WIP. Not that those moments are captured exactly as they occurred, but inspiration made something fit well in the story being written. Sometimes it is a bit of conversation or something the observed person did.
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12/9/2025 10:07:22 am
On the previous question, my uncle was stationed in Alaska in WWII, intercepting and decoding Soviet transmissions. While not from my work, he did inspire Wyatt Scott serving there and the consequences from that.
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Mark
12/9/2025 12:21:59 pm
I like the film comparison. Very appropriate.
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12/9/2025 03:32:18 pm
Terry was a great friend. Thanks for your kind words.
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Mark
12/9/2025 04:35:52 pm
You're welcome. There is no set limit for mourning.
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12/9/2025 05:03:57 pm
There are three more Scott’s Tulsa novels to complete the arc from the summer of 1948, which are written. Beyond those, I have a prequel in rough draft, and a very genre-specific work set in the 1890s.
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Mark
12/10/2025 08:41:34 am
Your fans will welcome more books in this series. Some fans don't always like it when a favorite author writes in a different genre. I am not part of that group. I like good writing regardless of the genre, most of the time.
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12/10/2025 09:53:16 am
Cryptids, huh. [chuckles]
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Mark
12/10/2025 11:03:54 am
As strange as that critter is, I wouldn't count that as a cryptid.
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12/10/2025 11:43:27 am
I sometimes record scenes. Those with a lot of dialogue.
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Mark
12/10/2025 03:33:48 pm
Recording certain scenes seems like it might be a good idea. Then you can hear it, engaging another of the senses. That is similar to the ideas about how to proofread your own writing. I wrote a blog about that on my "Words for Thought" page.
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12/10/2025 03:53:32 pm
Tatianna and I communicated through email before the start. I searched high and low for the LaSalle. She brought the red color, which was necessary from the novel’s many scenes with Scott’s red LaSalle.
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Mark
12/10/2025 05:27:35 pm
She is talented, no doubt about that. One draft is amazing! From the responses I have had to this question, most covers have three to four iterations.
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12/10/2025 11:42:16 pm
Somewhat. Had it been a single book rather than a quartet, I would’ve used a more genre specific title. I thought of several and had others suggested to me. Since Scott is the focal character and 1948 Tulsa is the background and a silent character, it seemed to fit best. I may well use subtitles for the three following books—Scott’s Tulsa II, Ballplayers and Spies is possible.
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Mark
12/11/2025 09:51:51 am
Thank you for sharing that process. I am always intrigued by how a title is formed. Some authors start with a title and write from that thought. Others start with the what-if thought and find a title later.
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12/11/2025 10:05:53 am
Not really. I believe a name should elicit some image of a character in the readers’ minds, so I ran through a few before hitting on each. I wanted every name to have the proper connotation and sound to match the character’s nature. A few minor characters had name changes to avoid confusion with others that sounded close. “Bugler” came after I developed his backstory.
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Mark
12/11/2025 11:10:39 am
Names are very important. The sweetest sound to any person is to hear their name with respect. In some cultures, at different times, names are changed to represent a specific event in a person's life.
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12/11/2025 11:22:04 am
The answer is yes and no. I wrote a few short stories through the years in my writers' group but never sent them to mags. Most were stylized, cryptic, or a bit O. Henry like.
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Mark
12/11/2025 12:55:39 pm
O Henry's stories have been pretty popular in the past. A lot of people like that type of story: when a common person, through luck or persistence, solves a serious problem in their life. Humor and an upbeat spirit goes a long way. I love those kind of stories also.
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12/11/2025 01:03:22 pm
It is really too early to tell. Being new to the wild world of Amazon and self-pub, I have dipped my toe into Amazon ads, a short bit with Crave Books, my own tries on X, and this sharp guy named Mark that runs campaigns.
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Mark
12/11/2025 03:53:10 pm
Unfortunately, marketing and promoting books is far more complicated than it was a decade ago. Not that it was easy then, but partly because Amazon allows nearly everyone to publish a book. Amazon now publishes around two million books a year. That flood is hard to rise above and get noticed. Amazon changes the algorithms regarding exposure and visibility frequently. So what worked a month ago can easily flop this month. Facebook the same. One thing for sure, the sales platforms will always make a profit.
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12/11/2025 06:29:10 pm
I have watched Chesson videos, read his articles, and I have KDP Rocket. He seems to know his stuff, but the huge market space is still an ocean even with a compass.
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Mark
12/12/2025 09:05:40 am
Ghostwriting is an interesting form of writing. I presume that it's important for the writer to understand and preserve the "author's" voice. I would expect that to take several hours of chatting to grasp. I could be wrong about that easily.
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12/12/2025 09:38:49 am
NO! While I consider it a tool that could help mankind, I consider it copy-and-paste cheating when it comes to creating a story. If a work did not come from my imagination or experience, I would have none of that positive feeling of creation.
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Mark
12/12/2025 01:06:04 pm
I consider that AI has some uses also in several fields, including medicine. Scanning thousands and maybe tens of thousands of images AI seems very efficient at finding anomalous readings. It doesn't get eyestrain or stop for lunch.
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12/12/2025 02:41:44 pm
No.
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Mark
12/12/2025 04:39:31 pm
Ignoring a troll is the best idea. They thrive on causing others sorrow and anguish. I used to tell authors that a bad review validates the good reviews. Much of the time it is obvious to other readers that the troll didn't read the book.
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12/12/2025 06:04:37 pm
At ten, I started sweeping up for my grandfather, who was a plasterer. By twelve, I mixed the hod and carried it from the street into the room being plastered. At fourteen, I started doing the rough-in plastering. When I was eighteen, I left for college, and my 77-year-old grandpa finally retired. Summer jobs.
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Mark
12/12/2025 07:35:39 pm
That is a wonderful skill you learned. I was a sheet metal worker for 10 years, then I got another journeyman card as an HVAC technician. That included getting licensed as a low-voltage electrician.
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12/12/2025 08:47:24 pm
Many, many years ago, I performed in a comedic debate that I wrote for a few hundred former classmates at a high school reunion.
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Mark
12/13/2025 09:34:02 am
I bet that was well received. Injecting humor into a situation is a surefire method for success in public speaking. There is a secret to public speaking that many authors don't know. The first secret is to only speak about a topic that the speaker knows intimately, such as their book. Many authors shudder at the thought of speaking in public, and I did also until I learned that secret.
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12/13/2025 09:53:09 am
I entered a few with past short stories. I think I made four or five tries with no wins. Having read dozens of winners and runners up, I think my subjects are different than what often wins.
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Mark
12/13/2025 11:47:55 am
I agree with you. A longer form allows for more development of the plot and characters.
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12/13/2025 12:01:25 pm
No family members wrote, but there were story tellers. I have several friends who are authors. Some from my old writers' group. They tend to write mystery or thriller books.
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Mark
12/13/2025 01:26:38 pm
My grandkids call me Grampy, also.
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12/13/2025 03:57:17 pm
I see some views on KU, but I expected more. The paperback is actually selling well. Perhaps Christmas present sales are more than the "I want to read it on KU" currently.
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S L Chalmers
12/13/2025 04:01:33 pm
I meant to add - Congratulations on being a "Grampy!" I made great uncle, but no grandkids.
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Mark
12/13/2025 04:44:23 pm
KU is an interesting beast. An author gets paid a small fraction of a penny for each page read. KU pays royalties to authors monthly for the pages read. In October, the global payout was 61.2 million dollars. Some authors do quite well, and others make enough to pay a utility bill or two. Authors with multiple books and series seem to do the best. When a reader finds an author they like, it seems they read everything by the author. Like the stock market, it's a long-term game plan. One downside to putting a book in KU is that Amazon requires a 90-day exclusive contract for an e-book. Books printed on paper are allowed to be published on other platforms.
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12/13/2025 05:19:05 pm
Goodness. Favorite, singular, is just too limiting. Also, I am a seasonal eater (much to the chagrin of my wife) in that I like ice cream, burgers, and beer in summer, but cake, roast, and whisky (yes, no "e" because I mean scotch) in the winter.
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Mark
12/13/2025 06:26:23 pm
I think you are the first seasonal eater I have met. Very cool.
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12/13/2025 06:44:55 pm
Oh, I love craft beer. When I said, "beer," I envisioned several of those.
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Mark
12/13/2025 08:11:32 pm
Brussels sprouts are your least favorite. My least favorite food is very popular with a lot of people. Cottage cheese makes me want to hurl if I try to put it into my mouth. I can tolerate it if it is an ingredient of a dish that will be cooked. That is it, for me. Eggplant and rutabagas are on my list of things I don't like much, also.
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12/13/2025 08:26:33 pm
Yes. I did not want to be tied to Amazon or Barnes and Noble or IngramSpark. Because I have plans for multiple books in ebook form, printed form, and audio, I "invested" in 100 ISBNs from Bowker. The price for 100 was only twice the price of 10.
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Ashis Kumar Sarka
12/13/2025 09:03:22 pm
Thanks for sharing the link. ❤️🥰💐
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Mark
12/14/2025 07:46:39 am
You are welcome, Ashis. We have shared quite a few links. Which one are you referring to?
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Mark
12/14/2025 07:53:44 am
You made a wise choice. It's never a good idea to put all of your eggs into one basket. It is smart to use as many platforms to sell your books as possible. If Amazon decided they weren't making enough money selling books, they would shut it down. However, I don't think it's likely.
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12/14/2025 10:33:04 am
I did query agents. I have QueryTracker and investigated dozens. The legacy publishing industry seems focused on the book-of-the-moment in cultural fads or the equivalent of film blockbusters (Patterson or such).
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Mark
12/14/2025 01:55:29 pm
Your experience, as sad as it was, bolsters the idea that most traditional publishers and agents are on the way out. They will never disappear completely, mind you. So many chase after that goal of being traditionally published. The industry, as a whole, has suffered severe contractions and will continue to shrink. There are only 4 or 5 big publishers left in America. They all struggle to keep the doors open. The profit margin is so thin that they cannot afford to gamble on an unknown name or a less-than-highly popular genre that they know well. Publishers and agents don't get paid until after the book is published, when people are actually buying the book. These publishers insist that consumers buy a printed copy by pricing the ebook the same as the printed book. As you mentioned, groupthink reigns.
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12/14/2025 02:18:01 pm
I created American Action Publishing as an LLC for my books, but I have some friends that are interested in wider publishing, so it might see other's work eventually.
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Mark
12/14/2025 03:58:42 pm
Creating an imprint is brilliant! I have recommended that to many authors over the years. While not as big as some other publishers, it still provides a veneer of respectability, and I think it's a smart move. Congratulations.
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12/14/2025 04:55:25 pm
I am loath to compare due to my prejudice. I have a friend and another acquaintance who read the book. Both are older and have read thousands of books.
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Mark
12/14/2025 06:11:36 pm
Those opinions sound like they are well-informed and well-deserved. Congratulations.
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S L Chalmers
12/14/2025 06:54:20 pm
The AP is not headquartered in Tulsa. It is worldwide with meetings in NY every year and others in London. More than the 300 registered members attend and are included. The fellow about whom I was talking affiliated with them for 40 years or so before his name made it into the top 300 to be listed. I am far from an expert on it, but there are some very famous folks in entertainment and sports that attend the meetings and wish to become one of the 300.
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Mark
12/14/2025 08:06:52 pm
Thank you for clarifying the 300 members of Afghanistan Perceivers. A meeting would be an interesting event to attend.
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S L Chalmers
12/14/2025 09:04:09 pm
Strong emotions...hmmm...
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Mark
12/15/2025 08:14:18 am
I read Catch-22 at least twice, maybe three times. It was odd, funny and cynical in turn. I haven't read any of the others that you mentioned because I was focused on sci-fi, fantasy and humor.
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12/15/2025 10:52:13 am
Yes, Catch-22 is funny, cynical, and cleverly written.
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Mark
12/15/2025 11:02:37 am
My mother loved to read. I am certain she read to me and my two younger sisters. I have few memories of my early years because my parents divorced when I was five or six. She made sure I had lots of books.
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S L Chalmers
12/15/2025 11:20:14 am
Writing gives me joy! I do get physically tired and need to escape any and all keyboards at times. As almost all of us think, I wish I had more 'hours in the day.'
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Mark
12/15/2025 12:01:11 pm
Many writers have given a similar answer to that question. It makes a lot of sense to me. Doing things we love can be tiring. I think it's a hidden blessing that we cannot conjure more hours in a day.
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S L Chalmers
12/15/2025 12:25:26 pm
So early in the process that I have no plans. I will consider leaving the rights and royalties to my great-nephews and great-nieces since we have no grandchildren and their parents, and our daughter will not need the money.
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Mark
12/15/2025 12:56:02 pm
It certainly is something to prepare for.
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