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by Mohsen Bahonar and Zahra Rahimnezhad Co-authors Mohsen Bahonar and Zahra Rahimnezhad introduce us to their debut novel a dark, fantasy story based on an ancient Japanese myth, “Kimon”: KIMON Death would not take him. When Takeshi was still a child, blood and fire spread beneath the shadow of the forbidden Kimon Gate. Priests called him cursed. The empire marked him for death. By dawn, his name had vanished from history. But something beyond the Kimon Gate answered him that night. Years later, Japan is collapsing beneath war, famine, and an unnatural darkness. Villages vanish into the mist. Yokai roam the mountains. Ancient spirits walk beside the living. Across the land, frightened whispers speak of a silver-eyed samurai riding through the fog on a black horse that leaves no tracks behind. Takeshi wants no throne. No glory. No legend. He wants only to survive with what remains of his humanity. But the Kimon Gate is beginning to open. As armies march and forgotten gods awaken, Takeshi is drawn into a war between the living and the dead. Monsters hunt him. His own shadow follows him. And a destiny older than the empire itself tightens around his life. Beside him walk: a shinobi woman carrying hidden scars, a half-burned warrior whose heartbeat sounds like war drums, a silent swordswoman bound to a sacred duty, and a wandering keeper of ancient rituals who knows what waits beyond the gate. Because the darkness beyond Kimon is no longer sleeping. And every soul it touches returns changed. Blending Japanese mythology, samurai warfare, yokai horror, and dark epic fantasy, KIMON is a haunting journey through a world of ash, blood, prophecy, and sacred terror. Perfect for readers who love atmospheric dark fantasy, mythic storytelling, and Japanese folklore woven into a brutal and emotional epic. Kimon is a most unusual story in content and form. The authors' writing style is very spare; they use few adjectives and very short sentences and paragraphs. The story is clear and the action is quick most of the time. I like it because there is a lot of room for my imagination. Every book is a collaboration between author and reader. The fullness and depth of the writing lead me to think the authors must have grown up steeped in Japanese culture. Thank you, Wikipedia, for explaining many of the Japanese terms. The story was all the richer for that information. Co-authors Zahra and Mohsen, wife and husband. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Kimon-Mohsen-Bahonar-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-kimon You can connect with the author: https://x.com/arash_bahonar https://www.facebook.com/arash.bahonar.2025 https://www.tiktok.com/@bahonarstudios Zahra has written a number of books for children. Here is a link to one of those books: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0GCWZL6RR Copyright © 2026 Mark L. Schultz, except for the authors’ introduction.
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9/7/2026 03:16:59 am
Hi Mark,
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Mark
9/7/2026 08:38:27 am
I am grateful for the opportunity to help promote your book. I enjoyed reading it and look forward to learning more about your book and your experiences writing and publishing as a team.
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9/7/2026 09:15:03 am
Thank you, Mark. I’d be happy to tell you a little more about us.
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Mark
9/7/2026 10:41:09 am
The artistic crafts you both pursue sound lovely. Iranian culture has been around for a long time. Being able to work in so many different mediums and styles is admirable.
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9/7/2026 11:16:56 am
Thank you, Mark. I think that to understand what makes Kimon different, it helps to first understand the meaning of its name. In traditional Japanese beliefs, “Kimon” means “Demon Gate” and refers to the northeast direction, which was traditionally regarded as a gateway through which evil forces, misfortune, and supernatural beings could enter the human world. In our story, we take this ancient concept and turn it into an actual gateway between the human world and another realm. When it opens, yokai, spirits, the dead, and beings that do not belong in the human world begin to cross over.
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Mark
9/7/2026 11:59:58 am
Yes, Kimon has many layers. I learned a great deal while reading.
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9/7/2026 12:51:41 pm
At its heart, the journey in Kimon is, for us, a story about real human life, only set in a distant time and told within a world of legends, mythology, and supernatural forces. Readers enter a world where temptation, power, betrayal, good and evil, and the moral choices people make all play important roles.
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Mark
9/7/2026 01:15:35 pm
We need fiction in our lives. It provides a framework for truth to be encountered and brought into our hearts. Sometimes truth seems hard because we are soft and weak. In those conditions, truth is all too easily rejected out of hand and sometimes beligerantly.
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9/7/2026 01:39:44 pm
We wanted Kimon to be like a house that readers could enter without us having to explain everything to them. We wanted them to see the house for themselves, feel its atmosphere, and complete some of its details through their own imagination. That is why we deliberately chose not to describe every scene, setting, and emotion down to the smallest detail.
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Mark
9/8/2026 08:16:24 am
Your writing plan worked well for me. I enjoyed filling in the details of the story I saw in my mind. Your plan for a second edition is interesting.
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9/8/2026 09:10:01 am
Yes, it will be published as a new and more complete edition of Kimon, not as a separate book. Kimon is actually the beginning of a much larger story, and we are planning it as a three-book series. Many significant events still lie ahead for the characters, and their lives, relationships, struggles, and destinies will undergo major changes as the story continues.
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Mark
9/8/2026 09:59:34 am
That sounds interesting. I like the sound of it.
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9/8/2026 10:34:18 am
Yes, absolutely. The expanded edition of the first volume will actually be the beginning of a larger and more expansive trilogy. The following volumes will introduce new locations, unique rituals and traditions, new characters and mythological beings, and events on a much greater scale. We also have some major surprises planned, but for now, we would rather not reveal them so readers can discover them at the right moment in the story.
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Mark
9/8/2026 11:48:17 am
Your vision for the expanded series is exciting. The special hardcover will be nice, especially in a three-volume set. Here is a copy-and-paste link about how a famous author did what you are dreaming about. https://kriswrites.com/2020/07/22/business-musings-the-kickstarted-game-changer-part-two/
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9/8/2026 12:15:53 pm
If we had to choose among our favorites, the three genres we enjoy reading most are science fiction, historical fiction, and mythology. Of course, our interests are not limited to those three. We also enjoy Marvel comics and romance. For us, what matters most is how engaging a story is, rather than whether it belongs to a particular genre.
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Mark
9/8/2026 01:11:58 pm
Science fiction, fantasy and historical fiction are my three favorite genres for personal reading. In my middle school years, I read a lot of mythology from different cultures. It was a small town with a small library and a limited selection of books.
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9/8/2026 01:55:12 pm
We have loved reading and creating things since childhood. We have always been fascinated by the idea that people can turn their thoughts and imagination into words and share a world that once existed only in their minds with others. We both wrote things here and there from an early age, and over the years that interest grew stronger and more serious until writing became an important part of our lives today.
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Mark
9/9/2026 08:56:04 am
Our lives on this earth are limited, no question about that. You are so right, writing is a wonderful legacy to leave for those who come after us.
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9/9/2026 09:29:20 am
Writing has made us pay closer attention to life and to the people around us. We might hear someone’s life story and simply move on, but when you write and use your imagination, you naturally begin to see that story from different perspectives. We find ourselves asking: What would have happened if that person had made a different decision? What if they had chosen another path at that particular moment? What would their life look like today? We have come to realize that the world is full of endless stories, and every one of them can teach us something. We believe this is one of the most important ways that writing and imagination have changed our lives.
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Mark
9/9/2026 10:18:30 am
I love that perspective. Every person makes choices that shape their life. Sometimes the lives of others are impacted also. Some consequences appear immediately; others are not felt for years. Everyone has a story, several stories, actually, depending on who they think is listening. I believe that the most important question a writer can ask is, 'What if?' That is the beginning of every story.
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9/9/2026 11:55:03 am
In the past, we believed that when someone wanted to write a book, they needed to know almost everything from the very beginning: where the story would start, what events would happen, what paths the characters would take, and exactly how the story would end. We thought writing meant first having a complete map in your mind and then putting it down on paper.
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Mark
9/9/2026 01:14:09 pm
There are many writers who write the same way. More than one has echoed your sentiment: "I write to see how the story turns out."
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9/9/2026 01:51:44 pm
The first volume of Kimon took approximately three months to write. Of course, as we mentioned earlier, this is only the beginning of a much larger series. As the story expands, much more time will be devoted to research, historical details, Japanese beliefs and mythology, and the further development of the characters.
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Mark
9/9/2026 05:19:58 pm
The videos are quite good! If you keep making these, you might wind up with enough to assemble into a movie. Here is an idea: an ebook with a nice cover locked to your books that would offer the reader the opportunity to play the video in the scene it is from.
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9/10/2026 03:50:10 am
If we had to name the first person who inspired us to write, it would undoubtedly be Ferdowsi, the great Persian poet and author of the Shahnameh. The Shahnameh is filled with epic stories, heroes, battles, mythology, and tales of ancient Iran. We became familiar with its stories as children, and reading them had a profound influence on our imaginations. Perhaps we could say that Ferdowsi, centuries after his lifetime, was one of the people who inspired in us the desire to someday write our own epic, historical, mythological, and imaginative stories and share them with others.
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9/10/2026 08:41:44 am
Stories are so important. They connect us to our ancestors and history at many levels. I think we need stories; we need connections with our past. Stories give us hope and courage. The stories in books carry far beyond the storyteller and are of paramount importance for that reason.
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9/10/2026 09:02:40 am
Yes, everyone in our family reads our writing and enjoys following the stories. In fact, sometimes they become so invested in the characters that they constantly ask us questions like, “What is going to happen to this character?” or “What will eventually happen to that character?”
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Mark
9/10/2026 10:31:36 am
How wonderful! Your family members are quite invested in your writing! I am not surprised. Most writers I have talked with use their family members as alpha readers. After a rewrite or two, they seek out beta readers for impartial criticism of the story and writing. Some members of a family struggle with giving anything but praise.
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9/10/2026 10:53:13 am
No, neither of us has ever had the experience of seeing a UFO or UAP. But we imagine that seeing something in the sky that you cannot clearly or logically explain must be an incredibly exciting and unforgettable experience. We think anyone lucky enough to experience something like that during their lifetime would probably never forget it. We have not had that chance yet, but we hope that someday something that strange and fascinating might happen to us.
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Mark
9/10/2026 11:25:40 am
Many of the authors I have talked with haven't seen a UFO either. My sisters claim we saw one as children, but I have no memory of that event. I am the oldest and find it curious that my memory is blank about a UFO. Many reports about UFOs expose nefarious intentions, so maybe not remembering is a good thing.
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9/10/2026 11:55:40 am
No, unfortunately, neither of us has ever seen such a creature or found any evidence of one, although we would truly love to have the chance to encounter something unknown like that someday. The thought that there may still be creatures somewhere in the unexplored corners of our world that science has yet to discover is fascinating to us.
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9/10/2026 01:08:49 pm
I grew up on a small farm in the southwest corner of the state of Washington. In the Pacific Northwest of the United States. There are rumours and legends about large, man-like, hairy apes called Bigfoot or Sasquatch. The creatures seem to be in many different places around the world with many different names. Neither my high school friends nor I ever saw one. But many of my friends knew someone who claimed to have seen one or found evidence of a Bigfoot. The reports were always third-hand at best. The creatures might well exist.
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9/10/2026 01:29:00 pm
No, neither of us has ever seen a ghost or had an experience that we could confidently describe as supernatural. However, we know someone who had a very strange and fascinating experience.
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Mark
9/10/2026 01:46:53 pm
That certainly has a spooky angle to it. Our brains are definitely amazing. We have a long way to go before we can fully understand the human brain and its inner workings.
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9/10/2026 02:16:23 pm
Before publication, Kimon went through three main drafts. We rewrote and revised the story three times before reaching the version that was eventually published.
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Mark
9/11/2026 08:13:23 am
For only three drafts, your book is quite polished! Many authors do more than three drafts, and their books don't fare as well as Kimon did when I read it. Congratulations on that.
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9/11/2026 08:31:58 am
Yes, we think one of the more unconventional aspects of our writing technique is the way we challenge our ideas and characters. Usually, a concept or idea first takes shape in our minds, and then we discuss it together. Sometimes we spend hours talking about a single idea and asking different questions about it. Interestingly, by the end of the conversation, we may completely abandon the original idea that started the discussion because the questions we asked along the way have led us somewhere very different and much better.
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Mark
9/11/2026 12:58:04 pm
A judicial event to prove their value! I think that is brilliant. There is a saying, 'be willing to kill your darlings, ' that I have seen floating around for years. It's not that different from your idea, but yours is more precise and gives the character or scene the opportunity to explain their worth.
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9/11/2026 01:27:10 pm
I designed the cover of Kimon myself, from beginning to end. From the very beginning, I wanted the cover to be more than simply a beautiful image. I wanted someone seeing it for the first time to feel something of the dark, historical, and mysterious atmosphere of the world of Kimon before reading even a single page.
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Mark
9/11/2026 02:03:45 pm
The cover is outstanding! The detail is exquisite, and the darkness of the story is displayed wonderfully on the cover.
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9/11/2026 02:20:47 pm
Choosing the title was not easy, and we spent a great deal of time thinking about it. We considered several different names, but eventually chose Kimon because we felt that this single word could represent much of the world and the central idea of the story.
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Mark
9/11/2026 02:42:35 pm
I love how particular you and Zahra are with every aspect of this story. It is a perfect title!
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9/11/2026 03:25:20 pm
Choosing the character names was one of the parts of the process that required a great deal of research. We did not want to simply choose names that sounded Japanese. Since the story takes place in the fourteenth century, we wanted the names to feel as consistent as possible with the historical and cultural atmosphere of the story.
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Mark
9/11/2026 04:42:08 pm
Based on your previous answers, I knew a great deal of thought and research would go into character names. You did well in that regard.
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9/12/2026 03:15:09 am
No, neither Zahra nor I sing, but music is an important part of our lives. Zahra plays the setar, a traditional Persian stringed instrument. We also have other musical members in our family. My sister plays the guitar, my uncle plays the ney, a traditional Persian wind instrument, and my maternal uncle plays the flute.
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Mark
9/12/2026 08:28:36 am
I agree with you about music being a universal language on Earth. It can bypass regular modes of communication and transmit important messages without using words. It can be beautiful or ugly depending on the heart and desires of the composer or musician.
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9/12/2026 08:52:39 am
If we had to choose one person, we would probably say Stephen Hawking. His death was sad and deeply affecting for us because he was not only a great scientist, but also a remarkable mind who spent his life exploring some of humanity’s biggest questions about the universe, space, time, and black holes.
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Mark
9/12/2026 09:32:22 am
Stephen Hawking left quite a legacy. He was excellent at posing questions. Not many can articulate questions as well as he did. So many just want to know why the microwave popcorn takes so long.
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9/12/2026 09:49:41 am
We think Stephen Hawking’s disability undoubtedly created enormous physical challenges and obstacles for him. Things that are simple and ordinary for most of us could be extremely difficult for him, and in his later years, even communicating with others required the assistance of technology.
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Mark
9/12/2026 11:05:11 am
I was thinking along the same lines, but you answered more eloquently.
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9/12/2026 11:44:27 am
No, we had not published any short stories before Kimon. However, before entering the world of Kimon, we had already been involved in other creative work, design, and writing.
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Mark
9/12/2026 12:37:34 pm
Given the quality of your writing, maybe writing short stories isn't as important for you and Zahra as it is for other writers.
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9/12/2026 12:55:27 pm
No, we had not done any specific advertising or marketing for Kimon before working with you. I first discovered you and Word Refiner through X. Before deciding to work with you, I did some research into your work and background and found your book review and promotional work to be very reputable and professional.
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Mark
9/12/2026 01:45:39 pm
I am honored to be the first to help you get exposure for Kimon. Exposure is all I, or anyone else, can promise. Be wary of anyone promising sales. Check them out thoroughly.
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9/13/2026 02:52:07 am
No, we do not have a negative view of artificial intelligence. On the contrary, we think AI is an extremely useful tool for research and finding information, and in many cases it can be faster and easier than traditional internet searches. For research, comparing information, and discovering new directions to explore, it can save a tremendous amount of time.
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Mark
9/13/2026 08:39:38 am
I am going to take the first word of your answer, "No", as the answer to the second question. Please correct me if I am wrong.
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9/13/2026 09:13:09 am
The first job I ever got paid for goes all the way back to when I was in the second grade. Even though I was still very young, I had already learned some traditional Iranian arts, and I loved making things by hand. After coming home from school and finishing my homework, I would spend part of my time creating these traditional handicrafts.
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Mark
9/13/2026 09:57:37 am
That is a wonderful story! Your talent was shining even then! An Atari is a great prize to work towards. You did well.
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9/13/2026 10:35:02 am
Yes, both of us have considerable experience speaking and teaching in front of groups. I previously worked as an art instructor and taught at art institutes and technical and vocational art schools, which are similar to high schools. Because of that, speaking in front of different groups is not unfamiliar to me. On some occasions, I have even spoken before audiences of around a thousand people.
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9/13/2026 11:50:29 am
You and Zahra are pros! So many authors avoid public speaking about their books partly because they don't realize people want to hear about the books from an expert. No one knows their books better than the author. The author is the expert. The nervous feeling can be transformed into passion about the books and everyone will enjoy the speech.
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9/13/2026 12:08:05 pm
No, we have not entered any writing contests so far, and naturally, we have not received any awards from writing contests. Our main focus has been on writing, research, and developing our stories and books.
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Mark
9/13/2026 12:57:38 pm
It is nice to get feedback about your writing. Every author is looking for feedback and reviews.
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9/13/2026 01:40:33 pm
No, there have not been any writers in either of our families before us, and currently, apart from the two of us, no one else in our families is actively pursuing writing. In a way, we are the first in our families to take writing seriously and publish our work.
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9/13/2026 02:15:28 pm
You and Zahra have carved a new path for your families. You have opened a door that was previously shut. I bet it won't be very long before some child in your families wants to pick up a pen too.
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9/13/2026 02:56:22 pm
Yes, there is actually one friend I can think of. After reading some of my writing, he became curious about writing and decided to pursue it more seriously himself. He is now writing while also studying and learning the principles of storytelling, including reading Leonard Bishop’s books on fiction writing.
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Mark
9/13/2026 06:25:42 pm
What a wonderful relationship that expanded into a shared interest! Sharing and mentoring became a regular part of the shared experience. The novel sounds interesting.
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9/14/2026 02:40:27 am
No, there was no particular reason why we did not put Kimon in Kindle Unlimited. The truth is that when we published the book, we did not know enough about the program or the potential benefits it could offer in helping the book reach more readers, so we did not enroll it.
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9/14/2026 08:03:51 am
You are welcome. I have learned a great deal from authors over the years. Take a look at the previous interview with Paula Braley. Her answer about Kindle Unlimited was thorough and might be useful for you.
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9/14/2026 08:27:47 am
Our favorite food is Iranian koobideh kebab served with rice and Shirazi salad, and our favorite drink to have with it is traditional Iranian doogh, a chilled yogurt-based drink. It is a combination we have loved for many years, and it is still one of our first choices.
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9/14/2026 09:09:24 am
We have a shared interest in trying new foods.
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9/14/2026 09:26:26 am
When it comes to food, there is no particular dish that we can say we truly dislike. As we mentioned, we enjoy trying different foods and flavors from around the world. However, we have always preferred fully cooked food and generally do not seek out raw dishes. Both of us simply have a stronger preference for cooked food, and that has remained largely unchanged since childhood.
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9/14/2026 10:49:16 am
I have several foods that I don't like from my childhood and I still don't like them. I can't eat cottage cheese unless it's in a recipe, and I can't taste it. Thinking about it makes my stomach clench a little. I am not fond of rutabagas, liver and eggplant unless it's in a recipe. I can eat those three, but I don't seek them out.
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9/14/2026 11:23:40 am
Yes, the print edition of Kimon has an ISBN, but we did not purchase it separately. When we published the book through Amazon KDP, we used the free ISBN that KDP provides for print editions.
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9/14/2026 11:48:33 am
Free is a very good price! Each version and format of your book must have a separate ISBN.
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9/14/2026 12:09:05 pm
Mark, thank you very much for everything you have done for Kimon and for the time and attention you devoted to this interview. Zahra and I truly enjoyed our conversation with you. Your questions gave us an opportunity not only to talk about our book, but also to share our experiences, thoughts, and journey as writers.
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