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(Plus One Book 2) by Amanda Nelson and Lisa-Marie PotterStudent Autumn Haze’s motto is: no men until she completes her bachelor of nursing degree. Years before, Autumn learned the hard way men are just a distraction she can’t afford until she’s established her career and what she wants. While moonlighting as a Plus One companion pays the bills, she struggles to follow her rules after meeting her newest contract. Pediatric Hospitalist Jensen Edwards is still recovering from a bad breakup that left him the talk of the hospital. Now he’s receiving a best doctor’s award, but after he hires Autumn as his plus one, Jensen is on edge. If word gets out that he hired a companion, rumors are bound to circulate, making work unbearable—again. Their chemistry as a fake couple is undeniable, but can a chance at a real relationship override their fear of commitment? What a fabulous story! This second volume in the series did not disappoint in any way. It was every bit as entertaining as the first book. The roles were flipped from the first book and that made it all the more fun to read! No spoilers from me, I promise, so that limits what I can say. I found the supporting cast to be as authentic as the main characters, even the nearly silent one! Read this book, you will enjoy it, make no mistake about that. 4.9 stars from me. I am picky about certain things! You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Just-What-Doctor-Hired-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/just-what-the-doctor-hired https://www.barnesandnoble.com/just-what-the-doctor-hired and many other fine online platforms I reviewed the first book in the Plus One series: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/men-in-books-arent-better You can connect with the authors: https://www.nelsonpotter.com https://x.com/ANelsonLMPotter https://www.instagram.com/anelson.lmpotter https://www.threads.com/@anelson.lmpotter https://www.tiktok.com/@nelsonpotterduo Copyright © 2025 Mark L. Schultz except for the authors’ introduction
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12/29/2025 01:23:16 pm
We are so excited for this opportunity! Thank you so much!
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Mark
12/29/2025 01:51:50 pm
You are welcome. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this book, the second in your Plus One series.
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12/29/2025 02:00:02 pm
We have three books planned for our Plus One series. We are drafting book three now.
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Mark
12/29/2025 03:18:14 pm
That will please the Plus Ones fans! Fin was a likable character and provided Molly with some stability. He was a little harsh at times, but he had Molly's best interests at heart.
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12/29/2025 05:38:10 pm
Not gonna lie, in the beginning, because we didn't know what we were doing, we needed the help of an agent and a publisher to get our books out into the world. And while we do have to pay for marketing being with a small publisher, the experience we've gained and the tutelage from our editor, Leanne Morgena, has been invaluable. I'm not sure we would have had the same experience if we self-published.
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Mark
12/29/2025 05:47:16 pm
That little thing, exposure. There are so many well-written and entertaining books published every month. Amazon publishes about two million books a year, now. It is a herculean task to rise above the crowd. Part of the issue is there are so many authors who seek to get their book noticed. There is no easy answer. You have great numbers for your books, and that bodes well for the future. The more books you write the more you will sell.
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12/29/2025 06:01:40 pm
Lisa-Marie doesn't believe in ghosts, but if she watches something scary, her house turns into Vegas with all the lights on-just to be sure. She also can't sleep with a closet or cupboard open in the room.
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Mark
12/29/2025 07:03:48 pm
I understand Lisa-Marie's feelings. I have done that in the past, but not recently. I have found that I don't enjoy horror films anymore, especially the gory ones. Splatter movies.
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12/30/2025 07:55:55 am
Pirating manuscripts is inexcusable in our opinion. Authors work hard on their manuscripts and to have someone reap benefits without permission is unbearable.
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Mark
12/30/2025 08:58:14 am
Piracy is illegal and terrible! It can take more than one form. If an author signs a contract with a shady publisher the author might lose control of their intellectual property for that book, and any other books in that series, forever. Every contract should be inspected by a lawyer experienced in entertainment law. Contests for short stories and books should be carefully checked also.
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12/30/2025 01:39:33 pm
For Lisa-Marie, Shivers by Maggie Stiefvater made her gasp, Red Dragon by Thomas Harris scared her so much, she had to put it down several times while reading it. And A Boy Called It broke her heart.
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Mark
12/30/2025 01:47:14 pm
I am sure those are some great books, but to be honest, I have only heard of The Fault in Our Stars and The Life of Pi.
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12/30/2025 02:04:57 pm
Lisa-Marie's favorite book as a child was Five Go to Mystery Moore by Enid Blyton. She loved how the author described the dog in the book and that the kids went on adventures. But even as a child, Lisa-Marie recognized how neglectful and absent the parents were in the story.
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Mark
12/30/2025 03:00:23 pm
As a boy, I read a series of books called The Happy Hollisters, by Jerry West. I loved those books about a large family of children that solved mysteries in their neighborhood and wherever they happened to be visiting. I met the author's grandson at a homeschooling convention. The author's real name was Andrew Svenson; he was part of a stable of writers and wrote parts of several popular children's series, including the Hardy Boys and Tom Swift mysteries. The grandson was reissuing the original books. A time-warping moment for me.
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12/30/2025 04:00:09 pm
Very cool that you got to meet his grandson! What a star struck moment!
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Mark
12/30/2025 04:23:15 pm
Most authors struggle with analyzing what they are reading. You are a couple of the lucky ones.
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12/30/2025 05:48:38 pm
I’m sure as a proofreader, you probably have that problem, too!
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Mark
12/31/2025 08:41:58 am
That is a great question! Authors and proofreaders like feedback.
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12/31/2025 11:58:14 am
We don’t know that we would call it a spiritual or healing component, but writing is an amazing escape for the both of us.
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Mark
12/31/2025 01:08:45 pm
Most authors have told me that even if they feel tired after a vigorous writing session, they feel good about it. Escape is a good word to explain how it feels because the real world isn't always pleasant or fun. That's adulting for you.
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12/31/2025 02:08:15 pm
We have a partnership agreement, but don’t have all the details spelled out exactly. It’s definitely something we plan to look into. But as best friends, we have discussed it and have a verbal agreement to split all royalties evenly between our families.
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Mark
12/31/2025 02:40:11 pm
You're ahead of the game compared to some writers. A number of writers hadn't considered planning for their estate, when I asked that question. I urge you to get that nailed down for everyone's peace of mind.
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12/31/2025 02:55:15 pm
We believe that the more genuinely a writer feels an emotion through their character, the more the reader will. Hence, writing takes imagination and empathy to see ourselves as the characters in order to emulate their emotions onto the page.
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Mark
12/31/2025 05:19:10 pm
That makes a lot of sense to me. If the author isn’t going to feel it, neither will the reader.
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12/31/2025 08:08:05 pm
While we may have watched some reality shows, neither of us would want to be on one. We already have enough drama in our lives and we wouldn’t want to be constantly under a microscope!
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Mark
12/31/2025 09:09:27 pm
That is a great answer! I cannot imagine being on one of those shows either. If I were qualified, I think Forged in Fire or Top Shot would be fun. I built a portable, propane-powered forge when I was a sheet metal apprentice. I wanted to make some armor and knives. I eventually sold the thing because I never made the time to do either.
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12/31/2025 09:17:57 pm
We are chronic underwriters. When we finish a draft, it’s usually around 20K too short. But we’re good at adding details and content.
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Mark
1/1/2026 09:35:29 am
You are good at adding details!
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1/1/2026 11:51:04 am
We definitely lack in the description parts during the drafting stage. Often it’s about surroundings. We tend to focus on dialogue and feelings before we describe locations.
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Mark
1/1/2026 12:20:57 pm
Dialogue and emotions are paramount; action and setting create the overall atmosphere the story exists in. First things first, another reason why you both make a great team.
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1/1/2026 01:53:23 pm
Hahaha, no, we’ve never used ourselves as a starting point! However, our characters are threaded with parts of us and experiences from our lives. All too often, some of our close friends and family can pick out traits or situations that belong to one of us.
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Mark
1/1/2026 02:43:42 pm
Only those closest to you would be able to do that. Pretty funny, nonetheless. One of the many writing mantras is to write what you know. In our hyper-connected world, wise judgment is called for about how much to share. I do not doubt that you are both careful in that regard.
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1/1/2026 03:25:15 pm
We’ve never used a family member or person as inspiration for a character, although we have used names of people we know-we tell them, of course. But all character personalities come from our imagination with maybe a few personal quirks thrown in.
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Mark
1/1/2026 04:18:28 pm
That's a smart move.
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1/1/2026 04:33:45 pm
Usually we will do character interviews to flesh out their details. We both take a main character each, then we develop our own background and family for that character. Lastly, we create visuals for each other on Pinterest so we can have a complete picture of each character.
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Mark
1/1/2026 06:04:59 pm
You two are quite organized as a writing team. That seems like a good system.
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1/1/2026 07:14:54 pm
Because we both write from a particular point of view- Lisa-Marie is the female main character, and Amanda is the male main character, we each are partial to our own characters.
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1/1/2026 07:16:19 pm
And we will have to look into that link! Thank you!
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Mark
1/1/2026 08:15:32 pm
That makes a lot of sense to me. Your preferences complement each other well. It could well be easier knowing which lead character you will be writing, even when drafting.
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1/2/2026 02:03:24 am
For us, we just write, and it’s the edit and beta reader stages where pick up on the loose ends that need more structure, like pacing and flow. Both are important for keeping a reader engaged.
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Mark
1/2/2026 09:07:42 am
It has been said that easy reading is very hard writing. That certainly is true. Word choice, pacing and flow all contribute to the reading experience.
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1/2/2026 12:32:28 pm
We try to keep regular office hours during the week for our writing. That way we, and our families, can view our writing as a full-time job. Because if we don’t take it seriously, no one will.
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Mark
1/2/2026 12:53:51 pm
You make a great point with taking your writing seriously! Family and friends respect you for that.
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1/2/2026 01:42:43 pm
We are fortunate that if one of us is stuck on a part, we can brainstorm with the other.
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Mark
1/2/2026 03:22:46 pm
I suspected that would be the case. You have each other to lean on when necessary.
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1/2/2026 04:24:12 pm
Prior to a book’s release, we make promo videos annd images, then try to blast social media about three months before the release date. We also advertised Book 2 at book signings for Book 1. But our publisher is the one who sets the release date, so once we know that information, we plan accordingly.
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Mark
1/2/2026 05:50:51 pm
That sounds like a good plan. So much of the promotion and marketing falls on the authors' shoulders, even for most traditionally published authors. You are doing some of these things mentioned in the following blog already. It never hurts to consider other ideas. One of my favorite blogs is about pursuing the local author angle. How to be a marketing star right where you live. A copy-and-paste link or search the title in the search box below: https://annerallen.com/2019/08/hometown-book-marketing/
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1/2/2026 05:58:06 pm
We have some information on international sales, mostly because we have friends in other countries that we know have purchased the books.
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Mark
1/2/2026 08:14:41 pm
That's good. Foreign sales can help boost the bottom line, especially if you can place your books in their markets. I know Amazon has pages for a number of countries. Many countries in the world teach English as a second language or English is the official language of education, business and government.
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1/2/2026 09:43:49 pm
We have done a few blog tours for our books, but mostly through promotional companies we’ve used. We’ve never put on together ourselves.
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Mark
1/3/2026 08:59:07 am
I have no idea how effective book blog tours are. No one can guarantee sales. Beware of anyone who promises that.
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1/3/2026 01:47:51 pm
This is a hard question for us to answer. Because we don’t see our numbers right away, we aren't sure what promotions work and don’t. We can say that we participated in a Goodreads giveaway and that got our book on over 4k “want to read” lists.
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Mark
1/3/2026 02:21:49 pm
Four thousand want-to-read listings seem like a huge success! Hopefully, at least 10% will leave a review.
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1/3/2026 03:19:11 pm
We chose to have only the point of view names at the start of each chapter because we wanted people to know whose chapter they were reading.
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Mark
1/3/2026 04:20:21 pm
That makes sense to me. I like chapter titles, personally.
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1/3/2026 06:43:03 pm
We want readers to feel as though our books are immersive and that they love our characters. Those are the two things we hope they will take away from our stories.
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Mark
1/3/2026 07:52:19 pm
Good choices! As the famous philosopher said to the crowd in the coliseum, "Are you not entertained!" Maybe that was not such a good choice. I'll stop while I am behind.
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1/4/2026 11:04:51 am
As far as a classical author we admire, Lisa-Marie would say Shakespeare, and Amanda would say Emily Brontë. Amanda first realized she was a romantic after reading Wuthering Heights in high school.
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Mark
1/4/2026 01:48:03 pm
Excellent choices, all around.
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1/4/2026 07:53:45 pm
We have been asked to beta read and for general writing advice, but nothing like teaching a class or being a mentor.
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Mark
1/4/2026 08:09:40 pm
Mentoring a person is a big responsibility. They have their voice, whether they know it or not, and a lot of suggestions can involve changing their voice into yours. That is one of the problems with AI, it will average the voice of a single author into the other authors it was trained on.
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1/5/2026 01:48:41 am
Lisa-Marie has notebooks where we put all kinds of details about each character. We also keep a file online that we can reference as well. This way, we always have a character’s details on hand while we’re writing.
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Mark
1/5/2026 10:19:10 am
Smart! Notebooks, spreadsheets, files and more are all good ways to keep details straight! More than once, when proofreading, I found that a character's appearance had changed in some way, eye color, hair color and such. Those kinds of mistakes jar a reader out of your magic.
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1/5/2026 11:10:17 am
Autumn’s dads were pretty easy to write. They came alive in our heads and we were completely in sync on how they would act and react throughout the book.
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Mark
1/5/2026 12:41:25 pm
Autumn's dads were in the first book.
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1/5/2026 02:17:12 pm
Because we are pantsers- we write by the seat of our pants- our stories can veer several times within a draft. Lisa-Marie generally takes the female main character point of view and writes a chapter, then, when she’s done, she sends it to me to write the male point of view in the next chapter. So while each of us may have thought the story was going one way, we won’t know until we get the other person’s chapter!
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Mark
1/5/2026 02:31:15 pm
I forgot your specific writing method. I think you are the first writing team I have had the pleasure of interviewing. That makes so much sense, the way you and Lisa-Marie write. You each get a break from writing when waiting for the next chapter to land in your email.
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1/5/2026 05:40:18 pm
Thank you for all your hard work in promoting Just What the Doctor Hired! We thoroughly enjoyed the interview process, the creative questions, and will continue to recommend your services. We also plan to hire you again in the future.
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