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Multi-genre, multi-volume author Craig L Crawford introduces us to his horror short story, "Don't Mess With Bunnies": Avery is your average teenager with the usual teenage problems...until a seemingly mundane creature gets into her head. This meek and defenseless-looking animal reveals to her the startling cost for the abuse of its kind. Avery quickly learns that this mysterious animal means business, and that the punishment it metes out is no joke! "Don't Mess with Bunnies" is a Mannison Minibook by Mannison Press. Bunnies are so cute. I had a pet bunny when I was a boy. It got away from me and became food for a predator. I enjoyed this story. It had a cute beginning, but the tension started to rise almost immediately. I am committed to not spoiling a story for another person. I will say the ending is very dramatic with an unexpected twist. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Dont-Mess-With-Bunnies-Craig-Crawford https://www.goodreads.com/-don-t-mess-with-bunnies https://www.barnesandnoble.com/dont-mess-with-bunnies-craig-crawford You can connect with the author: https://x.com/CRAIGLCrawford https://www.facebook.com/CraigLCrawfordWriter https://craiglcrawfordbooks.com https://projectthreshold.com https://www.instagram.com/craiglcrawford_author I reviewed the first book in the Project Threshold series here: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/p-t-team-berger I reviewed the second book in the Project Threshold series here: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/p-t-team-talise I have reviewed the third book in the Project Threshold series: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/team-riker-by-craig-crawford I have reviewed the fourth book in the Project Threshold series: "Finale": https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/project-threshold-finale I have reviewed the fifth book in the Project Threshold series, Season Two, "Team Berger": www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/p-t-season-2-team-berger I have reviewed the sixth book in the Project Threshold series, Season Two, "Team Riker": https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/project-threshold-season-2-team-riker I reviewed the seventh book in the Project Threshold series, Season Two, "Team Talise": https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/project-threshold-s-2-team-talise I have reviewed the eighth book in the Project Threshold series, "Operation Rogue Weather": https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/operation-rogue-weather-by-craig-crawford I have reviewed the second season omnibus "Closing Dark Doors": https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/project-threshold-closing-dark-doors-series-ii-by-craig-crawford I have reviewed another book by the author: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-beginners-guide-to-being-evil-by-craig-crawford I have reviewed another book by the author: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/zombunny-by-craig-crawford Copyright © 2026 Mark L. Schultz, except for the author's introduction.
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1/12/2026 10:01:08 am
Hi Mark,
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Mark
1/12/2026 12:13:58 pm
I think that is a capital idea! It's great to be talking about your books and adventures as an independent author who is published by a small press instead of self-publishing.
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1/12/2026 12:56:09 pm
Hi Mark, even though we've chatted many times before, I always get new insights into my own processes and the how's and why's of my writing.
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Mark
1/12/2026 02:33:11 pm
I am happy that my efforts for your books have paid off. That's icing on the cake. The best part is chatting about your books and such.
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1/12/2026 05:04:07 pm
I agree. Lots of "impressions" and "views" does not equal sales. I have taken note of how I personally respond to ads I view in order to get a better idea of the marketing game. The thing I noticed really early is that I rarely respond to the first ad I see for anything. Unless it's the exact perfect thing, I never buy with one viewing. It takes multiple reminders, and I am extrapolating but I am guessing most other people react the same way.
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Mark
1/12/2026 07:02:15 pm
Very few leave reviews; every author frets about that. The situation might be worse than I thought. I asked X's Grok how many readers leave reviews online. Here is a portion of the answer:
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1/12/2026 09:22:57 pm
Yes, so why do we worry about reviews? Because people do pay attention. I shame Amazon, B&N and GoodReads on that front. They have the same statistics so they know reviews don't necessarily mean good books. For good or ill, they started that framework but it ought to be adjusted for books. People do seem to rate other products better than they rate books....not sure why.
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Mark
1/13/2026 10:45:38 am
Good thoughts about reviews. Around 8 years ago, Amazon was flooded with fake reviews, people on Fiverr were selling reviews and charging per star, in some cases. Authors were trading reviews also. I clarified the language on my website after Goodreads kicked me off their platform because someone accused me of selling reviews. I don't sell reviews, I sell promotion of books. I still had to start a new account on GoodReads. Review-gate must have been hurting Amazon because they removed a lot of accounts from their platform. People who were banned lost access to books on their Kindle, books and/or reviews were removed, and in some cases authors lost unpaid royalties. Any platform credits were lost also. It was a mess. Some authors were able to get reinstated. Amazon instituted a new rule that cut down on trolls. If you didn't buy at least $50.00 in product of any kind each year you could not review anything. I give Amazon props for that.
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1/13/2026 12:12:49 pm
Yes, I know reviews are a conundrum all to themselves. While I'd love to have everyone who reads my books review them, there is reality :) It's one of those things where I prod and encourage people to review without being too pushy.
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Mark
1/13/2026 03:26:49 pm
My favorite activity is reading. I engage completely with the story and shut out most of the world ever since my school days. Reading on a school bus filled with other children is good training to focus and a touch of ADD/ADHD doesn't hurt either. I think that is part of what makes me so good at proofreading.
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1/14/2026 09:08:50 am
Reading really does give you a breath away from the really real world and that's why it has endured.
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Mark
1/14/2026 12:54:09 pm
Form-free poetry has saved many a poet's bacon, I am sure. The Butterfly Man is a perfect example of how readers' perceptions color what they get out of a poem or story. Thanks for sharing that.
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1/14/2026 02:14:32 pm
Occasionally I do like writing prompts. It's more of a challenge to see if I can come up with something. I didn't get it published but Inky Bones Press put out a contest on Twitter. Robin put up a picture and said the top six would get a free book. I really loved the picture--creepy bulbous headed demon in almost a hospital gown and after about an hour, I came up with a story. Sad and dark, but it sparked my imagination and I ended up winning a book with "It Told Me It's Name is Mot."
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Mark
1/14/2026 03:45:56 pm
Congratulations on winning that book. Pretty sweet.
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1/14/2026 04:06:42 pm
It was pretty cool--I was more happy that I came up with a quick hit story that I thought had punch in less than 350 words. Usually I like a longer set up but this one just came to me.
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Mark
1/14/2026 05:23:58 pm
Short stories are fascinating to me. With practice, it gets easier, I think. Feel free to correct me if I am wrong, because I am not a writer. It reminds me of doing wheelies on a motorcycle. You have to do it fast and stay balanced. I do love short stories because they get to the heart of the story so quickly.
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1/14/2026 08:21:06 pm
Yes. I avoided writing short stories for a long time because I couldn't quite get the hang of it. You have to be really mindful of pacing and steering your story toward the end. It was about five years ago that I was listening to and reading lots of short stories in my main genre. I finally got curious about writing them again and started looking to see if there were presses out there taking shorts. :)
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Mark
1/15/2026 09:10:54 am
I hope the Nextdoor app proves useful. I use it to post funny and useful stuff several times a week, and I also post book reviews there. Maybe a writer could make a little money writing short stories.
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1/15/2026 11:40:43 am
I was looking at the link. I always thought it might be fun to writing greeting cards. I think I've got a sarcastic enough wit to come up with some smart-alecky cards...I should look into that as a side gig.
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Mark
1/15/2026 01:33:45 pm
You are welcome for both of those. I think you could teach well.
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1/15/2026 01:52:41 pm
Which is a great point you make all around. Read. If something doesn't click with you, then find something else to read. But read. It's a great way to happen upon great stories but also how to see how great stories unfold and the language behind them.
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Mark
1/15/2026 04:41:16 pm
Slice of life sounds interesting. I hope you write that sometime.
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1/15/2026 06:08:06 pm
I think my favorite part of writing is the psychology behind my characters. Why they think and act the way they do, and what motivates them or holds them back. I think it can work in any setting, but I always seem to prefer something creepy or fantastic going on in the background :)
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Mark
1/16/2026 11:20:34 am
Time is certainly a valuable commodity, perhaps the most precious because we don't know when the bell is going to ring.
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1/16/2026 12:50:17 pm
Yes, on the traditional publishers. And I get they're trying to be financially responsible. However, as with the movie industry and other artistic companies, they've forgotten that many times it's the random thing that goes viral, becomes the cult classic and the big money maker. It seems to me that the movie industry used to pick a few movies they were confident that could do well but then also made some less sure movies to throw out there, hoping one or more would catch on with the public.
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Mark
1/16/2026 06:10:10 pm
Hearing SK speak had to be interesting and an amazing opportunity. I recall that he is purported to have said that he doesn't like reading horror. It scares him. He knows the story he is writing is good when it scares him a lot.
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1/16/2026 07:37:11 pm
When I start writing on a new project, the plot always shows up first. Usually it's very vague. With Don't Mess With Bunnies, it was a theme for a press with 2 parameters: the rabbit must die, and number 2, someone else is next. That's it.
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Mark
1/17/2026 09:02:06 am
The real answer to the question is, are you a plot-driven writer or a character-driven writer is yes. If I recall correctly, most authors have replied that the plot comes first. I think nearly every novel comes from one question, "what if ..." everything after clarifies that original thought.
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1/17/2026 12:01:48 pm
The plot drives the story, but it's the characters who keep it running. I like to think I write a combination of both. Especially with my Project Threshold stories, the plot is what gets my characters out in the field, blending their own personal issues with the story.
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Mark
1/17/2026 01:53:24 pm
Maps, drawings, pictures, world files and character files all contribute to the richness a story can have. I love discovering a map in a book. Many times, I have found myself returning to the map to understand the actions and movements of characters or groups.
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1/17/2026 08:16:04 pm
Thanks for sharing that. I do like helping other writers and authors as they grow their craft.
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Mark
1/17/2026 08:29:05 pm
I bet you learned more than disciplined writing from that editor. That was an amazing opportunity.
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1/17/2026 10:33:46 pm
ADHD is a mixed bag. I am easily distractible and I am terrible at keeping factoids in my head...other than story related things. It's just something I've figured out how to cope with and use to the best of my ability.
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Mark
1/18/2026 09:30:32 am
I feel your pain, excitement, forgetfulness, difficulty with directions and all of it as you described. You sound like me, to a tee. I am so grateful for GPS and the map app on my phone. I use it almost all of the time. I use a lot of sticky notes and I have 3 separate steno pads for my business. Focus amplified by intense interest makes things more permanent in our brains.
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1/18/2026 12:09:26 pm
Thanks Mark. I will check into Weebly when I get ready. I'm sure I'll have to do some prep before transferring my Project Threshold website over--I do like the layout.
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Mark
1/18/2026 12:53:52 pm
Thinking and doing things differently is true, especially at home. My wife and I tried to share budgeting and checkbook duties when we got married in 1976. Debit cards were rare back then. Paper checks were the norm. I couldn't track how she was doing it and my method made no sense to her at all. After I forgot a payment or two, she took it over. Her way worked better than mine.
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1/18/2026 01:35:36 pm
Ironically, I keep the bills paid. While I've got my ADHD, I am very good at doing basic math in my head without a calculator. My wife was actually a math major and does financial things where she works, but I think she's content to let me do financial things for the home since I can do it. She doesn't look at how I do it--would probably drive her crazy, but I keep good records so I've still got a job ;) I just can't follow directions to save my soul...
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Mark
1/18/2026 03:54:35 pm
I am pretty good at mental math. I did a lot of it as a sheet metal worker. I discovered another talent while in construction, I was good at estimating the sizes of ductwork when it was in the air.
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1/18/2026 07:11:27 pm
I've been sitting here thinking over your question. Considering I write horror and stories where the characters really do have to struggle against extreme odds and some incredible situations, I'm not actually sure I'd like to trade places with any of them :)
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Mark
1/18/2026 07:58:25 pm
You are so right! I wouldn't want to be in the field either. I had a hunch your answer might be something like that.
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1/19/2026 01:55:31 am
The fantasy world I created, called Cy, tempted me for a bit but it's very feudal and can be rough. Lots of mercenary groups roving and hiring out to any and all kingdoms who will pay. I'm actually comfy staying right here and writing about all of those places.
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Mark
1/19/2026 09:27:59 am
That is a nice tour of characters from different series and books. Proteus sounds like a guy I would enjoy talking to as well.
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1/19/2026 11:59:36 am
That's a good question. To be honest, I hadn't thought about that aspect of things for those characters. Or really any of my characters to date. The ADHD prognosis, I didn't even officially get myself tested until a few years ago. I always knew I thought differently compared to "normal" people, but I just assumed it was my quirks and never even considered that I might be on that spectrum. It was only after reading a quiz at work on dyslexia (I do often invert letters and numbers when I'm writing, was actually a slow reader early on and have a few other quirky behaviors) that I decided to undergo formal testing.
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Mark
1/19/2026 12:41:20 pm
I just thought of that question today. I think I will add it to my list.
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1/19/2026 01:13:31 pm
I do take a small dosage of Strattera for mine and the best way I can describe it is that it takes the edge off from my mental flitting. I am better able to stay on task...or at least my brain doesn't wander quite as constantly.
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Mark
1/19/2026 03:21:08 pm
I think many new authors write similarly and that works well much of the time. Until the author decides the story must be written in order, that can lead to the dreaded writer's block sometimes. I advocate writing the easiest parts first and figuring out the order later. But every writer has to find their way, structurally.
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1/19/2026 05:09:38 pm
Squishy was just one of those "Aha!" moments as I was tossing around ideas for stories and I wanted a lighter hearted one after some of the rest of Talise's stories. Squishy fit the bill perfectly :)
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Mark
1/19/2026 05:57:47 pm
I am glad to hear you have notes for a third volume.
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1/19/2026 07:00:27 pm
Hahahha....I enjoy the Mark and Craig show too. Talking back and forth about this writing game is a favorite of mine. Thank you.
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