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Multi-genre, multi-volume author Sandra Sperling introduces us to “Control”: Sonny's husband dies shortly after inheriting his wealthy grandmother's large farmhouse and entire estate, so she, in turn, gets it. The young widow now has the means to support herself while she launches her career as a watercolor artist. Besides the hours she spends painting, she begins to make some changes in the peculiarly decorated house, searches for a key to open a locked door in the basement, and hires a ruggedly handsome man, Clark, to repair some damages on the building. She meets her two nearest neighbors---Justine, a cheerful middle-aged woman and Rolf, a handsome author who requires solitude in which to write. In spite of a few nasty glitches, Sonny's life is moving peacefully along, with romance possible in the near future. A mile away, however, is a top-secret laboratory, located on three lower levels of an old, underground mine, where microbiologists are putting the final touches on a malignant virus they call CONTROL, which they plan to first release on two European countries, eventually infecting the population of the entire world. This dangerous information becomes known to the four acquaintances and puts their lives in jeopardy in this contemporary tale of romance and suspense, lightened up with humor. Reading this story was a lot of fun! It had some thrills and a few scary moments. I particularly enjoyed getting to know the characters and they came across as quite real. I laughed quite a few times and was surprised by more than one plot twist. No spoilers from me so I can't say more, except read this book! You will love it. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/CONTROL-Sandra-Sperling-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-control I have reviewed other books by the author: https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-stash https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/elisabets-will You can follow the author: Twitter: @sandysperling3 https://www.facebook.com/sisuforever http://sandrasperling.com @sandysperling3.bsky.social Copyright © 2024 Mark L. Schultz, except for the author’s introduction.
38 Comments
12/3/2024 08:14:50 pm
I look forward to doing business with you again. I always learn something helpful and enjoy reading the comments the canine reviewer makes.
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12/4/2024 08:34:51 am
Welcome back to the Word Refiner channel. It has been a little more than two years since I promoted "The Stash". A very funny book. "Control" is quite funny also! It is full of humorous events and witty dialogue in contrast to the darker aspects of the story. I am honored to partner with you again to promote your books.
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12/4/2024 09:50:05 am
The story is driven by increasing greed, starting with the death of Samsonetta's husband and continuing with the insatiable appetites of five wealthy men. What a small group of everyday people do to stop them from gaining control of all humanity shows that it can be done, giving a hopeful ending to this tale.
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Mark
12/4/2024 01:01:48 pm
I forgot to mention that we are continuing the interview from where we left off two years ago.
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12/4/2024 01:21:51 pm
No, unless the cover features something utterly different from any that have ever been created.
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Mark
12/4/2024 03:55:06 pm
The cover is quite important as is the title. There is barely a second to catch a reader's attention when they are browsing. Some authors put a new cover up every six months or so. That is feasible if you make your own covers. Otherwise, not so much.
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12/4/2024 05:50:30 pm
Good marketing can help sell a less than sterling novel, but it won't build much of a readership. I recently bought a book with a superior cover and marvelous promotion, but at page 87 I tossed the adjective-clogged story and won't buy another by that author.
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12/4/2024 07:49:09 pm
Since my books are at least partly set in northern Minnesota, I donate copies of my books to libraries in that region. I was surprised at how many people liked my writing enough to buy other books I'd written after reading one!
Mark
12/4/2024 08:03:34 pm
Some authors love their adjectives, no question. Some genres seem to require adjective-laden prose. So it may not be only the fault of the authors.
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12/5/2024 10:17:24 am
Other than using Facebook, Blue Sky, and some X, I found an outlet near the actual underground mine in Minnesota--where the story was set--that may prove fruitful. Also, there is a resort in that region willing to stock some books in the summer, along with a second-hand bookstore, which also sells books set in Minnesota.
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Mark
12/5/2024 12:36:57 pm
You are doing many of the right things now. The only thing that comes to mind is getting your books on more platforms than you are using now. More formats also, audiobooks are very popular. AI is shaking up the audiobook industry. Some narrators will profit from riding the wave and others will stay on the beach and slowly wither away.
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12/5/2024 01:49:32 pm
Authors rarely make a huge amount of money by writing a novel, so don't write with that idea as your main focus. I write because I need something challenging to keep me occupied, and writing is just that. People often ask me what I plan to buy with all the money I make selling books, and I answer, "I have just about enough saved to buy a small cottage so I'm able to spend summers on Lake Michigan, but the one I can now afford doesn't have indoor plumbing. In fact, it's a lawnmower shed."
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Mark
12/5/2024 04:27:51 pm
You make an excellent point. Most self-published authors sell less than 400 copies of a book in their lifetime. It is a never-get-rich scheme.
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12/5/2024 06:12:19 pm
I used to use the library, bought numerous books on subjects such as crime and mental health, and mined my own experiences. If there was nothing available from those sources, I just made it up. Now I do most of my research online, buy only a few books on subjects such as animal attacks, and mine my own experiences. All the rest I still just make up.
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Mark
12/5/2024 07:58:14 pm
I am pleased to know that you have updated your research methods in part. Making stuff up should never change. That is why the good Lord gave us imaginations. Writers need an imagination just as readers do also. If you have lived a good number of years as you and I have then we have lots of experience to mine from.
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12/6/2024 09:14:47 am
I use a combination of both, sometimes totally creating them. It depends on what works best for the story. Most often, I use an individual's physical looks and gestures to create a character, changing the facts, names, locations, etc . Their voices sound the same--as do their dialects, pauses and speech glitches. I've often wondered if many people recall the voices of people who've been long gone.
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Mark
12/6/2024 09:28:34 am
It can be safer to create the book characters than using a family member or a close friend as a pattern. I heard about one author that used family members as patterns for his book with their permission. An aunt got upset during one of his story updates to the family. The character patterned after her did something she disapproved of and that caused a familial rift for several years.
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12/6/2024 01:32:02 pm
One other thing I do, is use the old Briggs/Myers 16 personality types to keep a character's actions reasonably consistent with their type. I generally follow the traits mentioned but add one opposite of what is expected. Such as; a minister who pockets the pen every time he has to sign his name.
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12/6/2024 01:24:13 pm
I created personality charts six pages long to fill out for the main characters of my novels. It lists the usual name, d.o.b., etc. It goes much deeper, with things like birth order, greatest fear, and something unpleasant about the character. Each one has a secret, which I don't always reveal in the story. A little mystery never hurts.
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Mark
12/6/2024 04:07:08 pm
You are using good tools there. I like your character profile and Briggs/Meyer is pretty comprehensive.
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12/6/2024 06:13:44 pm
I have 8 uncles and 2 aunts, three brothers and 1 sister, 5 brothers-in-law and 1 sister-in-law. All lived in the country, so I spent lots of time with men, mastered the art of throwing a tomahawk, ate rhubarb sprinkled with salt, and learned swear words in both Finnish and English. I find it more enjoyable writing humor for male characters than I do females. I don't think I write men as if they're women with hairy chests.
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Mark
12/6/2024 08:59:29 pm
Country folk know a lot about living, especially if they are farmers. I will grant you that you know a lot about men because you have lived in close proximity to so many. I don't doubt that men have provided you with a lot of humorous fodder. Men tend to look at life a little bit differently than women.
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12/7/2024 10:48:00 am
My best two times for writing are between one and three pm and between six and eight pm. I stop for emergencies like when my husband cut his thumb nearly halfway off and when there was a snake in the house. We searched for the snake for days, not finding it, but we bought several tubes of caulking and sealed every opening larger than a spider's--ah--ear hole. Anyway, those four hours and often the early morning hour when I scribble down ideas--belong to me.
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Mark
12/7/2024 01:35:44 pm
You found a decent chunk of time to write, congratulations.
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12/7/2024 02:18:24 pm
I generally do more writing in the early afternoon, with promotion/ business combined with writing later in the day.
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Mark
12/7/2024 03:37:54 pm
That is a good plan. Being an indie author also means that you are building your own business at the same time. It's important to make time for business activities such as promotion and marketing every week.
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12/7/2024 05:46:12 pm
Yes, I did remove two chapters. They went into more detail about Lee than the story needed. The first chapter told about the relationship of Lee and Marty, leading to the reasons of their eventual breakup. Two sentences in later chapters told the reader all they needed to know about that. The second one related their early wedding preparations. It didn't add to the story, so I deleted it.
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Mark
12/7/2024 07:47:28 pm
It sure doesn't hurt to write more than needed. You did well.
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12/8/2024 11:57:18 am
If I weren't writing, I'd probably pick up my brushes and paint in the drybrush watercolor style again. And, I would create some more costumes (circa 1884) for the French dolls that I enjoy dressing.
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Mark
12/8/2024 02:24:36 pm
Watercolor painting is so nice. I love looking at that kind of art. Costume making for dolls sounds good also. That is a very specific period also.
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12/8/2024 05:53:11 pm
I check Dean Koontz and Nevada Barr sites regularly. Ken Follett now and then. My favorite writers, all of them.
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Mark
12/8/2024 06:54:34 pm
I do enjoy first-person POV when it's done without any head hopping. It offers more intimacy with each character.
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12/8/2024 08:15:41 pm
The Saturdays by Elisabet Enright was my favorite--so much so that a couple of years ago I bought a copy to see what had inspired it to be so. Wow! That lady could write!
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Mark
12/8/2024 08:55:03 pm
She must be a good writer!
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12/9/2024 10:02:21 am
I never announced it, I just wrote early in the morning and at night when everything was done. Through the years, after the kids left, I claimed the afternoon and evening as my time by simply spending it at my keyboard rather than painting.
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Mark
12/9/2024 11:20:11 am
It's wonderful to have a supportive family.
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12/9/2024 01:43:41 pm
I used to get bored in the middle of the book I was writing, so I'd give the character a nasty problem to solve--one that stayed with her/him until the end of the book. It adds tension to the story.
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Mark
12/9/2024 03:08:17 pm
Maybe that book has increased in value!
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