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Multi-volume, multi-genre author J. Dalton introduces us to his exciting science fiction novel, “Blood Suckers”: Born just minutes apart, Liam and Lysandra, (or Lyssie as she prefers to be called) are more like brother and sister than anything else. They live together with their parents, Krieg and Amanda, and Jessie and Patrick, on a moon in a distant galaxy, but the two seven-year-olds have been taken by the genetically altered ‘Ones’ as future blood slaves. Now, imprisoned onboard the One ship, they must use their cunning and determination to find a way to escape that horrible future. Can their parents catch up to the One ship? Do they even stand a chance against this former enemy? Any misstep could mean the end for them all. This author has written quite a few books, and I have enjoyed them all so far. Krieg's dialogue and unfamiliarity with technology bring a nice, humorous balance to action scenes and human desperation. Each story can stand alone, but starting with "The Planet of Diamonds" will improve your reading pleasure of this story. Five stars for the story, but four point six stars because I am picky about certain things. You can buy this book:
https://www.amazon.com/Blood-Suckers-J-Dalton-ebook https://www.goodreads.com/-blood-suckers-by-j-dalton See the statement below to learn how to get his book free. You can connect with the author: https://x.com/JDaltonAuthor https://www.facebook.com/j-dalton-author https://www.tiktok.com/@j.dalton.author I have reviewed other books by the author: www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-dead-ship-by-j-dalton https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/planet-of-diamonds https://www.wordrefiner.com/book-reviews/the-gates-to-the-galaxies In October of 2023, my wife was diagnosed with a very aggressive form of lung cancer that had spread to her bones. The doctors gave her three months to live. On Christmas Eve, she went in for a nap and when I went in to check on her, she was lying crossways on the bed and couldn't move or speak. She was rushed to the hospital, where they finally discovered the cancer had messed up her electrolytes. Three days later, the insurance company told the hospital they wouldn't continue to pay for her care if she wasn't getting treatment, and we had to take her home. There were no beds available in any nursing home or any nurses available for home care. So, for three days, my son, daughter and I took turns sleeping on the floor so she wouldn't fall if she tried to get out of bed. How do you, as an individual, take care of a terminally ill person who needs around the clock care? Then, we found Charlotte House, or rather through friends on Facebook, they found us. They came to our house and did an interview, then made arrangements with our doctors to transfer their care to them. They couldn't save my wife, but they saved our family. I can never re-pay the love and care they gave to us all, but I have dedicated all the royalties and signed-book fees I get for my books to support them and "Pay it Forward" for others in need. They have truly become part of my family. My Mafia, so to speak. Charlotte House is a comfort care home, located in Wyoming County, N.Y., for individuals who are diagnosed as terminal with less than (3) months to live. Residents at Charlotte House receive quality care and support from staff, family and trained volunteers. There is never a charge to a resident or their family for resident care thanks to the support of a wonderful community and generous donors. Charlotte House is completely supported by fundraisers, donations, grants, memorials and bequests. A large portion of care is provided by community members that donate their time. Without this support, Charlotte House could not exist. Interested people can also get free autographed copies when they make a donation to charity by emailing me: [email protected]. I will give them instructions on how they can make the donations. I pay postage anywhere inside the continental US. J Dalton Copyright © 2026 Mark L. Schultz, except for the author’s introduction and the charity statement.
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Mark
6/8/2026 06:17:35 pm
** A note to our visitors: this conversation started several books ago. We started chatting in the promotion for "The Dead Ship." The links to those promotions are above. **
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That's an interesting question, Mark. I'm not sure I'd call myself a "Full-time writer even now. After getting diagnosed with leukemia in 2016, I was forced to retire. I started writing in order to leave something for my grandkids to remember me by.
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Mark
6/8/2026 08:32:34 pm
Dream writer is an interesting title and it certainly fits. You are likely the only one. It will be fine until someone thinks you are about lucid dreaming. On second thought, considering your process, maybe you are lucid dreaming in a sense.
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No, I didn't remove anything, but I did tweak one scene where in my dream, Amanda stripped naked in order to fit in a tight space. I left her in her underwear in the story cause I didn't think it was necessary to go to that extreme.
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Mark
6/9/2026 12:02:12 pm
Your writing process is unique and interesting. I don't recall talking to any other author who writes as you do. I have more than 200 interviews on my website. Hints about a future story are fun! It must be comforting knowing there is more to write.
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Mark
6/9/2026 02:51:21 pm
Wow! You have a lot of musical talent! All I can play is the stereo. Some of those things are too complicated for me now. Do you give cowbell lessons? ;-)
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No. No favorite sites. I'm really pretty boring in real life, although I do love to lift up other authors on Facebook and x by re-posting or sharing their book promos.
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Mark
6/9/2026 04:47:55 pm
I understand that. I agree with you about sharing books by other authors. I believe that a rising tide floats all boats. As you have experienced, more exposure means more sales. There are so many ways to increase exposure. Even something as simple as placing a couple of copies in a little lending library can lead to online sales when you have written lots of books.
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Mark
6/9/2026 09:43:02 pm
I think I read some of those things also. I never had a job mucking out horse stalls.
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A lot of times, what I dream seems impossible to actually have happen, like transporting an entire spaceship and crew through the gates.
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Mark
6/10/2026 08:18:28 am
Many writers struggle with making the unknown believable, regardless of the genre. I mean that this problem is not limited to sci-fi but includes fantasy, historical fiction and probably others. Your idea about folding space is explained well in your books.
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My wife thought the first book, done for my grandkids Right after I was diagnosed with leukemia, with them as the characters was a good thing. Then, when I started writing for myself, she insisted I use my pen name, J. Dalton, in case my books sucked, she didn't want people to know she was married to me.
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Mark
6/10/2026 11:28:59 am
You have a very supportive family! How wonderful! Not every author gets so much support.
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I remember reading a writing tip that said don't let your readers catch their breath or you lose them.
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Mark
6/10/2026 12:44:09 pm
I have heard that advice also. As a reader, I like to catch my breath every once in a while. With several plot lines, I have found it easy to catch my breath in your books.
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At this point, I can't think of anything I haven't already given up that would be worth it.
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Mark
6/10/2026 02:05:47 pm
I encourage you to keep writing the way you are writing, dream writing. Your method isn't broken, so it is fine the way it is. Until it's not, then you can worry about it.
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"The Phoenix Experiment", which was written right after my wife passed, only took 31 days from start to finish. That included all the AI character art and the Cover. I was writing 14-16 hours /day. I think it was my mind's way of not having to constantly think about her passing.
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Mark
6/10/2026 05:08:54 pm
Writing The Phoenix Experiment barely left you time to breathe. I would have reacted much the same way if I were in your shoes.
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I had a friend give me a half finished book about a year ago. He got fed up with trying to market his murder mystery and gave up writing.
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Mark
6/10/2026 07:57:49 pm
It must be an interesting challenge to learn and mimic another author's voice. If the dreams quit you could start a sideline as a ghostwriter. Here is a copy-and-paste link about that very thing or hit the search box below: https://www.wordrefiner.com/guest-blogs/how-to-become-a-ghostwriter
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I've grown fond of almost all of them, even the villains!
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Mark
6/11/2026 10:03:01 am
Your characters come across as real; they have motivations and goals that fit well in their context. I understand how killing them would be difficult. It makes me wonder if the gates could be used to resurrect a dead person.
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First, in "The Saga of the Ones" I did use the gates to resurrect three characters I had killed off. This was based on my dislike of Star Trek's killing off off of away team members, when they had all their information in the ship's computer to re-materialize them at any point.
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Mark
6/11/2026 12:53:48 pm
I haven't read The Saga of the Ones yet. I will correct that before too long.
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That's a difficult question to answer.
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Mark
6/11/2026 03:35:23 pm
Chemo can do all kinds of things to a person. Each person tolerates the medicine differently, also. Causing you to write darker than normal doesn't surprise me at all.
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6/11/2026 07:57:25 pm
Usually, and especially now that my wife has passed, I write in silence.
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Mark
6/11/2026 08:14:57 pm
That is interesting about the music not knowing what the character is actually listening to. You have done well with it.
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Mark
6/12/2026 10:14:19 am
That is very true. However, many authors hide Easter eggs in their stories, jokes or bits that only family or close friends will recognize. You have mentioned previously that you do that with some of the character names. Moving right along.
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Since I write my stories based on my dreams, and everything is very vivid, including character's features and accents, along with the scenes, I guess the only "hard" thing for me to write would be fight scenes.
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Mark
6/12/2026 02:38:35 pm
You are not the only writer who struggles with fight scenes. Too much detail and the intense action gets lost in the verbiage. Too little detail and the reader can be left wondering how that happened. Short sentences seem to be best, keeping vivid description to a minimum. Nearly everyone has seen so many fights on screens of all sizes that verbose description is not necessary.
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I prefer reading print books, but since my wife passed, I realized my children have no interest in either one of our genres, and the books would probably just go into a dumpster after I'm gone.
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Mark
6/12/2026 07:30:52 pm
Another good idea to donate those precious books to the library. I bet many readers were tickled pink to find those books on sale.
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Right now, I'm not reading anything
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Mark
6/13/2026 08:35:43 am
Finishing your friend's story will be an interesting adventure. Trying to write in his voice rather than your own will stretch you as a writer. It will be a good stretch, I think.
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For me, the advantage was time, especially in the beginning when I was first diagnosed with leukemia in August, and told I probably wouldn't make it to Christmas.
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Mark
6/13/2026 12:10:10 pm
Those are excellent reasons! Each is important in its own right.
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Social media and vendor shows are my only marketing strategy.
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Mark
6/13/2026 03:09:43 pm
You have raised a lot of money for your charity! I am sure that they are very appreciative.
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Every night, I post a 2-4 minute video of an excerpt of my Sci-Fi trilogy, "The Tales of Mordratha!"
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Mark
6/13/2026 07:07:45 pm
You are doing well on TikTok! 8,000 followers are nothing to sneeze at! You are acheiving a different kind of success on that platform. Congratulations!
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I can't say much about bad reviews, as I haven't had any, so far, (Knock wood!) However, if the review lists something particular, I think they can be helpful to an author, letting them know what their readers didn't like.
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Mark
6/14/2026 12:53:09 pm
A bad review for a book among good reviews is not always a bad thing. I have told many authors that the bad review, especially if it is without a constructive purpose, validates the good reviews.
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I have often thought about turning my books into audiobooks, but since I give all my royalties to charity, the cost of production vs. return on investment just isn't there for me.
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Mark
6/14/2026 08:40:53 pm
Audiobooks have expanded a lot and are the primary way that some people "read" a book for any number of reasons. Audiobook production is expensive because it takes anywhere from 6 - 10 hours of production work to get 1 hour of narration. As you mentioned, it can be very expensive.
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I worked for my father for a while.
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Mark
6/15/2026 11:12:14 am
Your dad was a hard-working man. So is my stepfather. He survived a 6-month prognosis for prostate cancer more than 30 years ago.
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I would prefer to meet someone living. They usually carry on a much better conversation than the dead.
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Mark
6/15/2026 02:09:59 pm
Your first comment is pretty funny but true!
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